作文高分卷的特点

作文高分卷的特点,根据高考最新考纲、书面表达的评分标准以及高考后的阅卷情况，可以看出书面表达高分卷应具备以下特点：外在美：第一印象很重要！书写清楚，字母匀称，词、行间距适当，卷面整洁。结构美：有合理的段落层次，多为3段式，条理清晰；每段有每段的主题。,词汇美：词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。likeBefondof,beaddictedto/helpdosbafavor句式美：运用得当的高级句式结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。衔接美：使用恰当的连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、条理清晰。,对比观点作文(1)要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。1.有一些人认为。2.另一些人认为。3.我的看法。Thetopicof-(主题)isbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently.Therearetwosidesofopinionsaboutit.SomepeoplesayAistheirfavorite.Theyholdtheirviewforthereasonof-(支持A的理由一)Whatismore,-理由二).Moreover,-(理由三).WhileothersthinkthatBisabetterchoiceinthefollowingthreereasons.Firstly,-(支持B的理由一).Secondly(besides),-(理由二).Thirdly(finally),-(理由三).Frommypointofview,Ithink-(我的观点).Thereasonisthat-(原因).Asamatteroffact,therearesomeotherreasonstoexplainmychoice.Forme,theformerissurelyawisechoice.,解决方法题型要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径1.问题现状2.怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)Inrecentdays,wehavetofaceIproblem-A,whichisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.First,-(说明A的现状).Second,-(举例进一步说明现状)ConfrontedwithA,weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestocopewiththesituation.Foronething,-(解决方法一).Foranother-(解决方法二).Finally,-(解决方法三).Personally,Ibelievethat-(我的解决方法).Consequently,Imconfidentthatabrightfutureisawaitingusbecause-(带来的好处).a,说明利弊题型这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)1.说明事物现状2.事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)3.你对现状(或前景)的看法NowadaysmanypeoplepreferAbecauseithasasignificantroleinourdailylife.Generally,itsadvantagescanbeseenasfollows.First-(A的优点之一).Besides-(A的优点之二).Buteverycoinhastwosides.Thenegativeaspectsarealsoapparent.Oneoftheimportantdisadvantagesisthat-(A的第一个缺点).Tomakemattersworse,-(A的第二个缺点).Throughtheaboveanalysis,Ibelievethatthepositiveaspectsoverweighthenegativeones.Therefore,Iwouldliketo-(我的看法).FromthecomparisonbetweenthesepositiveandnegativeeffectsofA,weshouldtakeitreasonablyanddoitaccordingtothecircumstanceswearein.Onlybythisway,-(对前景的预测).),议论文的框架(1)不同观点列举型(选择型)Thereisawidespreadconcernovertheissuethat_作文题目_.Butitiswellknownthattheopinionconcerningthishottopicvariesfrompersontoperson.Amajorityofpeoplethinkthat_观点一_.Intheirviewsthereare2factorscontributingtothisattitudeasfollows:inthefirstplace,_原因一_.Furthermore,inthesecondplace,_原因二_.Soitgoeswithoutsayingthat_观点一_.People,however,differintheiropinionsonthismatter.Somepeopleholdtheideathat_观点二_.Intheirpointofview,ontheonehand，_原因一_.Ontheotherhand,_原因二_.Therefore,thereisnodoubtthat_观点二_.AsfarasIamconcerned,Ifirmlysupporttheviewthat_观点一或二_.Itisnotonlybecause_,butalsobecause_.Themore_,themore_.,(2)利弊型的议论文Nowadays,thereisawidespreadconcernover(theissuethat)_作文题目_.Infact,therearebothadvantagesanddisadvantagesin_题目议题_.Generallyspeaking,itiswidelybelievedthereareseveralpositiveaspectsasfollows.Firstly,_优点一_.Andsecondly_优点二_.JustAsapopularsayinggoes,everycoinhastwosides,_讨论议题_isnoexception,andinanotherword,itstillhasnegativeaspects.Tobeginwith,_缺点一_.Inaddition,_缺点二_.Tosumup,weshouldtrytobringtheadvantagesof_讨论议题_intofullplay,andreducethedisadvantagestotheminimumatthesametime.Inthatcase,wewilldefinitelymakeabetteruseofthe_讨论议题_.,在表达准确、保持连贯的基础上,尽量使用较复杂的语法结构和较高级的词汇;,Tips,Thebadhabitofbeingwastefulwillhaveabadeffectontheirowncharacter.Itaddsfinancialburdentotheirparents.Theworldslimitednaturalresourceswillbeusedup.,Inthefirstplace,thebadhabitofbeingwastefulwillhaveabadeffectontheirowncharacter.Secondly,itaddsfinancialburdentotheirparents.Lastbutnotleast,theworldslimitednaturalresources,suchaswaterandelectricity,willbeusedupsoon.,FirstofallFirstly,Tobeginwith,Inaddition,Besides,Moreover,Whatsmore,Finally,Whatsworse,在表达准确、保持连贯的基础上,尽量使用较复杂的语法结构和较高级的词汇;恰当使用过渡词或过渡句,使文章结构紧凑;,Tips,AsfarasIamconcerned,Ithinkonlywhenallofusarefullyawareofitsseriousnesscanthesituationbeimproved.Ontheonehand,itisnecessaryforschoolstoeducateeverystudentnottowasteanythinginanyformandontheotherhandeveryoneofusshouldstartwithourselvestofightagainstwaste.Itisnotuntilallofusareinvolvedintheactivitythatwecanbringthesituationundercontrol.,在表达准确、保持连贯的基础上,尽量使用较复杂的语法结构和较高级的词汇;恰当使用过渡词或过渡句,使文章结构紧凑;适当地变换句型结构和所用词汇,尽量避免重复和单调。,Tips,高考优秀作文赏析,暑假即将来临。你班同学讨论了假期计划，提出不同看法。请根据提示写一篇有关讨论的英语短文，并谈谈你的看法。,待在家中,外出旅游,优点,缺点,花费少，舒适方便,增长见识，开阔眼界,不能亲身了解外界,花费多，旅途不便,注意：1、短文必须写在答题卡的规定区域，词数80120（不包含已写好部分）。2、短文必须包括表中所列要点，可根据内容分段表达。3、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。4、参考词汇：眼界horizon(或view)Thesummerholidayiscoming.Ourclasshavehadadiscussionaboutwhattododuringtheholiday.,Thesummerholidayiscoming.Ourclasshaveadiscussionaboutwhattoduringtheholiday.Somestudentsareinfavorofstayingathome.Theythinkitsbothconvenientandcomfortable.Whatsmore,theycansavemoneyforotherpurposes.Buttheywilllosethechanceofgettingtoknowtheoutsideworld.However,othersprefertogooutfortravelingitcanincreasetheirknowledgeandbroadentheirhorizons.Buttheywillspendmoremoneyandmeetsomedifficultieswhiletraveling.Inmyopinion,itwouldbemuchbettertostayathome,forIcandowhatIlike,suchasreadingbooks,watchingTV,andhelpingmyparentswithhousework.,Onepossibleversion:,2020/5/23,学生英语作文中10种常见错误剖析,1、汉语式思维Seethefilmwilltookmemuchtime.Hehappenedanaccidentyesterday.,2、谓语缺失Hetoldmethatallmyclassmatessittingintheclassroom.Sheintheclassroomyesterday.,3、Therebe句型出错Therearefivestudentsplaybasketballontheplayground.Therearesomeworkersareworkinginthefield.,(Anaccidenthappenedtohimyesterday.),2020/5/23,6、非谓语动词出错Beingseriouslyill,hisclass-matessenthimtohospital.Seeingfromthespace,theearthlookslikeaball.,学生英语作文中10种常见错误剖析,4、谓语动词用法出错Hedressedinanewcoat.Greatchangeshavebeentakenplace.WhenIarrivedHongKong,mymotherwastherewaitingforme.Hedidntnoticetheteachertocomeintotheclassroom.,5、词性混用SheenjoysstudyEnglish.Ifanyoneagainsttheplan,pleaseletmeknow.,2020/5/23,学生英语作文中10种常见错误剖析,7、分数与百分数作主语Inourclass,20%studentsaregirls,butthreefifthsstudentsareboys.,8、定语从句错误Thetwoboysarereadingaremybrothers.ThebookIboughtitislost.Illneverforgetthedayswhenwespentinthevillagetogether.,9、连词出错Althoughhetried,buthestillcouldntkeepupwiththeothers.Mysuggestioniswetryforasecondtime.,10、形容词、副词混用Thepatientappearednervouslywhenhetalkedtothedoctor.Theartistworkedhardlytofinishhisdrawingsontime.,2020/5/23,DearSue,ImLiHua,isoneofyourstudentsinChina.Itsalmostamonthsinceyouleftus.Weallverymissyouandareverygratefulforyoudidforus.Wearebusyasusually.WehadanEnglishspeechcontesttheotherday.Iwonthefirstprize.Thisagainremindsmeofallyourkindhelp.Doyoustillrememberthetreesweplantedthemtogetheronthehillbehindtheschool?Yesterday,wewentthereandwaterthem.Thetreeyouplantedyourselfisgrowinggood,andthewholeclassdecidedtonameitSueWood.WillyoucomebackseeSueWood?Howiseverythingwithyoulately?WehopetoknowmoreaboutyouwithyourAmeicanstudents.Hopetokeepinclosetouch.Allthebest,LiHua,作文修改,2020/5/23,实例写作,(2010全国)假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter曾表示希望来中国教书。你校现需招聘外教，请给他写封信，告诉招聘信息。内容主要包括：1教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等2授课对象：高中生（至少三年英语基础）3工作量：每周12学时，任选三门课担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问（advisor）注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头语已为你写好，请将完整的回信写出来。DearPeter,IrememberyoutoldmeyouwereinterestedinteachinginChina._Best,Lihua,2020/5/23,写作技巧点拨,1、提纲式作文为半开放型写作。,2、要点均为45个（多为4+1个要点），要点提示比较简洁，考生111有发散思维的空间；,3、英语作文多为三段式：1para.Topicsentence(mainidea,writersattitude)2ndpara.Body(differentpoints)3rdpara.Ending(writersownidea),4、尽量避免第一印象词汇出现,5、好的连词与表达法的使用。,2020/5/23,范文,DearPeter,IrememberyoutoldmeyouwereinterestedinteachinginChina.Ourschoolislookingforanative-speakertoteachsomecoursestoseniorhighstudents.Ifyoudliketocome,youcanchoosethreeofthefollowingfourcourses:Speaking,Writing,BritainTodayandAmericaToday,andteach12periodsaweek.ThestudentswhoaregoingtotakethesecourseshaveatleastthreeyearsofEnglishlearningexperiences.Besidesteaching,youwillalsoworkasanadvisorforourstudentsEnglishcluborourschoolsEnglishnewspaper.Pleaseletmeknowifyouareinterestedandifyouhaveanyotherdecisions.Best,Lihua,养成良好的写作习惯一、书写规范，卷面整洁；二、审清题目，提炼要点；三、组词造句，组句成篇；四、仔细检查，认真修改。,书面表达各档次的给分范围和要求,第五档（21-25分）完全完成了试题规定的任务。准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容，要点无遗漏应用了较多的语法结构和词汇语法结构和词汇有少许错误，但为尽可能使用较复杂表达方式所致；具备较强的语言应用能力有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑完全达到了预期的写作目的。,第四档（16-20分）完成了