2020届高考英语一轮复习 循序写作 每周一卷步步登高 第三周 考场作文常见的3类错误及防范措施 新人教版

第三周考场作文常见的3类错误及防范措施一、考场作文常见的3类错误考场作文常见的错误主要分为三类：词汇类错误、语法类错误和汉语式英语。(一)词汇类错误考试时，我们很容易出现单词拼写错误和词形变化错误；而词性不清和词汇用法方面的错误主要还是受汉语的影响。其应对措施是在备考时要多注意容易拼错或容易出现词形变化的单词，真正用心去体会英语词汇的词性和运用，对一些固定习语更不能想当然地改动。1单词拼写错误误：Our English teacher is friendly but very strick with us students.正：Our English teacher is friendly but very strict with us students.2词形变化错误误：People throwed cans, paper, bags and so on into the river water.正：People threw cans, paper, bags and so on into the river water.3词性不清错误误：Doing a parttime job always effects study.正：Doing a parttime job always affects study.4词汇用法错误误：He opened the light after he entered the room.正：He turned on the light after he entered the room.5擅自改动习语误：We lost the game, but we didnt lose our heart.正：We lost the game, but we didnt lose heart.即时演练改正下列句子中的错误1We must try our best to prevent the enviroment from being polluted.enviromentenvironment2There is no doubt that keeping an English diary helps you a lot with writen English.writenwritten3During my summer vacation, I spent half a month in the country and played very happy.happyhappily4We must notice our pronunciation when we speak English.noticepay_attention_to5Just in the front of our house stands a tall tree with a history of 1,000 years.in_the_front_ofin_front_of_(二)语法类错误一个正确的句子除了用词得当外，语法也应该准确无误。如果语法不正确，再好的构思也难以正确地表达，语法错误的多少会直接影响作文的档次。英语写作中语法类错误主要表现在：时态、语态错误、非谓语动词使用错误、主谓一致错误、比较级使用错误、多余的词以及平行错误等。1时态、语态错误误：Children who raise in poor families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years.正：Children who are raised in poor families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years.2非谓语动词使用错误误：Comparing with other countries, the country pays little attention to the pollution.正：Compared with other countries, the country pays little attention to the pollution.3主谓一致错误误：My hobby is widespread, which include drawing, collecting stamps and so on.正：My hobby is widespread, which includes drawing, collecting stamps and so on.4比较级使用错误误：With the development of transportation, the world seems to be getting more and more smaller.正：With the development of transportation, the world seems to be getting smaller and smaller.5多余的词误：On one day, he went to the cinema.正：One day, he went to the cinema.6平行错误误：Then I put my book under my desk, opening it and started looking for the answer.正：Then I put my book under my desk, opened it and started looking for the answer.即时演练改正下列句子中的错误1In the morning, we had bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees.去掉had2Not only Tom but also I are tired of one examination after another.aream3They think students should have their own time to study and it is more quieter at home._moremuch或去掉more_4There have been more and more road accidents happened in recent years.happenedhappening5More and more people entered into the hall, so it became crowded.去掉into(三)汉语式英语一般来说，英汉两种语言既有许多相似之处，又有许多不同之处。在写作时如果想当然地去写，会出现许多汉语式英语，其中主要包括：纯汉语式思维和汉语式语序、句子成分残缺、句子粘连以及搭配不当等。1纯汉语式思维和汉语式语序误：At this school studying, I really very happy.正：Studying at this school, I am really very happy.2句子成分残缺误：There are many students dont support the project.正：There are many students who dont support the project.3句子粘连误：On the other hand, dogs are our best friends, bring us a lot of fun.正：On the other hand, dogs are our best friends, which/and bring us a lot of fun.4搭配不当误：We walked a far way before planting trees.正：We walked a long way before planting trees.误：Under the help of the teacher, I have made great progress in my English.正：With the help of the teacher, I have made great progress in my English.即时演练改正下列句子中的错误1We are impossible to finish the work in such a short time.We_are_impossibleIt_is_impossible_for_us2Its known that the cost in big cities is very expensive.expensivehigh3He has greatly improved his spoken English by this way.byin或waymeans4I havent heard from your letter for a long time and I miss you very much.your_letteryou5He has three sons, all of them work in Beijing.在逗号后加and或themwhom二、防范出现错误的2个措施写对句子是作文得高分的关键和保证，考场上要避免上述低级错误，可采取以下两个措施。(一)确定主语英语句子无论多长都有自己的主语(祈使句省略了主语you)。动手写句子首先要确定主语，其次要特别注意汉语与英语的区别。例如：北京八月多雨。误：Beijing rains much in August.正：It rains much in Beijing in August.写得很匆忙，我们发现书中满是错误。误：Written in a hurry, we found the book full of mistakes.正：Written in a hurry, the book was found full of mistakes (by us)(二)确定谓语动词英语中没有动词就构不成句子，但动词千变万化，稍不注意就会写错句子。在写句子时应特别注意以下几个方面：1注意及物与不及物动词的正确运用。误：The living standard of the people has raised in the past twenty years.正：The living standard of the people has risen/has been raised in the past twenty years.2注意延续性与非延续性动词的正确运用。误：He has left his hometown for twenty years.正：He has been away from his hometown for twenty years.3注意一些不可用于被动语态的动词。误：Many stars are appeared in the sky at night.正：Many stars appear in the sky at night.综合演练提能.以下句子含有考生常犯的错误，请改正1Dr. Smith, together with his wife, are to arrive on the evening flight.areis2The car hitted the old man and drived away.hittedhit;_driveddrove3It is high time we do something to reduce traffic accidents.dodid或在do前加should4There are many students are planting trees on the hill.去掉第二个are或在students后加who5Eat at school is very convenient for students.句子改为：It_is_very_convenient_for_students_to_eat_at_school.6It was Sunday, they all went for a picnic in the woods.在逗号后加so或wasbeing7Would you please meet my uncle at the airport because this is the first time visit to the US？去掉time8While having our dinner, the doorbell rang.在having_前加we_are或the_doorbell_rangwe_heard_the_doorbell_ringing9Recently our village has taken place great changes.句子改为：Recently_great_changes_have_taken_place_in_our_village.10Fishing is his favorite hobby, and he also likes collecting coins.he_also_likes_collecting_coinscollecting_coins_also_gives_him_pleasure.下面的考生作文中含有10处错误，请改正(2020南昌市第三次模拟)生活中，朋友间免不了会有冲突和误会，解决方法之一就是及时道歉。假如你是李华，Henry是你最要好的朋友，你们约好昨晚7点半在新华书店门口见面。可是由于妈妈在医院看病，回家晚了，你得在家照顾妹妹。又因忘带手机而没能及时联系到Henry而失约了。请给Henry写一封道歉信以化解误会。内容包括：1表示歉意；2.解释失约的原因；3.请求原谅。注意：1.不得在文中出现作者的真实姓名；2语句连贯，词数100左右。作文的标题、开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。A Letter of ApologyDear Henry，I am really sorry _I wont let things like that happen again.Yours，Li Hua求诊病文A Letter of ApologyDear Henry，I am really sorry that I can not meet you at 7：30 last night. I do hope you didnt wait too long outside Xinhua Bookstore.On yesterday afternoon, I had to look after my younger sister until my mother returned back home. She was ill and stayed at the doctors so that she arrived at home very late. I ran all the way to the bus stop only finding the last bus had already left. I had to call a taxi,