安徽省巢湖市春晖中学2020届高考英语 考前冲刺精品讲义外教旁批写作外教旁批写作 (2)

安徽省巢湖市春晖中学2020届高考英语考前冲刺精品讲义外教旁批写作（三）典例中美学生交流项目安排一批美国中学生来华一周体验中国文化，在网上挑选寄宿家庭(homestay family)，假如你是新华中学的学生李华，愿意接受一位美国学生入住你家，请用英语给美方项目负责人David Smith写一封电子邮件，说明你的家庭和住宿条件，你本人的优势以及你帮助美国中学生体验中国文化的打算。注意：1.词数：150左右。2.可适当增加细节。【写作策略】1.仔细审题：(1)体裁：邮件。(2)时态：一般现在时。(3)人称：第一人称。2.确定结构：(1)Formal greeting可以用 Dear sir/ Madam/Dr Smith等。(2)Body language正文内容：a.家庭和住宿条件b.本人的优势c.帮助美国中学生体验中国文化的打算(3)Formal endingYours truly/sincerely等。3.筛选词汇：(kind ，in favor of ，communicate，look forward to等。)4.句型搜索：(I am writing to.等。)5.组句成篇：(常用whats more，等。)【范文赏析】Dear Sir，I am writing to request the valuable chance to be one of the homestay families for the American students.My parents，who are kind and easygoing in nature，are in favor of my idea that I host an American student.We live in a beautiful community.Luckily，we have an extra room for guests.I am a student of Xinhua Middle School，openminded and enthusiastic.Whats more，I am quite good at languages and we can communicate well in English.If an American student stays with us，I will be a good guide to some local places of interest and some typical towns and villages in our area.My parents and I will help her or him to make Chinese meals，such as jiaozi，noodles and other foods.We have the confidence to make the American student feel at home and have some sweet memories.Looking forward to your reply.Li Hua【名师点评】是写信或邮件的常用句式，首句表明自己目的。既使用了非限制性定语从句，有利于传递更丰富信息，又使用了同位语从句，句式亮点叠出。条件状语从句，简单而实用的句型。表达了作者的态度和热情。总体评价：本文内容要点完整，语言地道地表达文意；结构清晰，层次感强；情感真挚，体现了中国人友好、热情的待客之道。【写作指导】Elegance(优雅)(原文)Soso(普通)(1)I am writing to request the valuable chance to be one of the homestay families for the American students.I write to you to get the chance to be one of the homestay families for the American students.(2)My parents ，who are kind and easygoing in nature，are in favor of my idea that I host an American student.My parents are kind and easygoing and they think I had better host an American student.(3)I am a student of Xinhua Middle School，openminded and enthusiastic.I am a student of Xinhua Middle School and I am openminded and enthusiastic.(4)If an American student stays with us，I will be a good guide to some local places of interest and some typical towns and villages in our area.When an American student stays with us，I will show him or her some local places of interest and typical towns and villages in our area.(5)We have the confidence to make the American student feel at home and have some sweet memories.We are confident that the American student will feel at home and live happily.【临摹翻译】1.范文佳句：I am writing to request the valuable chance to be one of the homestay families for the American students.临摹翻译：我写信给你申请一个贵公司在广告中招聘的职务。I_am_writing_to_apply_for_the_position_advertised_by_your_company.2.范文佳句：My parents ，who are kind and easygoing in nature，are in favor of my idea that I host an American student.临摹翻译：校长接受了我们关于邀请一个交换生来学校演讲的建议。The_headmaster_accepted_our_suggestion_that_we_should_invite_an_exchange_student_to_give_a_speech_in_our_school.3.范文佳句：Whats more，I am quite good at languages and we can communicate well in English.临摹翻译：而且，举办一个 “交换生俱乐部” 将有助于国外学生过上更丰富多彩的生活。Whats_more,setting_up_an_Exchange_Students_club_will_help_those_foreign_students_enjoy_a_more_colorful_life.4.范文佳句：We have the confidence to make the American student feel at home and have some sweet memories.临摹翻译：那个年轻美国人尽力使我们理解他所说的话。The_young_American_tried_his_best_to_make_us_understand_what_he_said.5.范文佳句：If an American student stays with us，I will be a good guide to some local places of interest and some typical towns and villages in our area.临摹翻译：如果他能来这里，我们将进一步讨论中西文化差异。If_he_come