2020届高考英语二轮复习 第三部分 写作知识配套作业

第三部分 写作 英语知识运用 1写作训练 1 一、短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。In China, people and giant pandas had been living together for thousands of years. But Chinas human population has been great growing. More population means more land is needed for farming. It also mean more forests are cut for wood to build and heat houses. Loss of habitat in lowland areas has forced pandas live only in the mountains. The most damaged result of development has been that it has divided the pandas habitat into little islands of forest. Today, many panda are isolated in these small sections of forest, because of they will cross into areas which people live. The result is that the giant pandas can connect with one another to mate and have babies.Besides, to our relief, there is still some good news that people are trying to help the giant pandas by creating protected areas.【试题分析】1第一句hadhave。一个动作表示持续到现在，还会持续下去用现在完成进行时。2第二句greatgreatly。副词修饰动词。3第四句meanmeans。主语是单数，现在时态中谓语动词也用单数。4第五句live 前加to。迫使某人或某物做某事，force somebody或something to do。5第六句damageddamaging。形容词修饰名词，“有害的” 是damaging 。6第七句pandapandas。很多熊猫，名词用复数形式。7第七句把of划掉。because后面加句子，而because of后面加名词。8第七句whichwhere / in which/ live后加in。定语从句中缺少地点状语，which只能做主语或宾语，或live后面加介词用which。9第八句cancant /cannot。根据语境，大熊猫不能交配产仔，用否定形式。10第九句BesidesHowever然而，令我们庆幸的是，人们在帮助大熊猫创造保护区。前后表示转折。二、书面表达请阅读下面图画，按要求用英语写一篇词数为120左右的短文。内容要求：1描述画面；2概述其含义；3谈谈个人感想。注意：1.短文开头已给出，不计入总数；2可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、行文连续；3文中不能出现考生的具体信息。参考词汇：凿，钻 boreIn the picture_【参考范文】In_the_picture，we can see a boy in worn clothes，sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.This is s wellknown story from an ancient Chinese idiom.The boy，being poor，couldnt afford even a candle，so her bored a hole in the wall to“steal”light from his neighbors house to read at night.The moral of the story is：spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.Of course，things are totally different today.It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.Hard work pays off.We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future.写作训练 2 一、短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Dear mum and dad，I still cannot believe that I am taking up this prize I won last year. I have to remind yourself constantly that I am real in AD 3008. Worrying about the journey，I was unsettled for the first a few days. As a result, I suffer from “time lag”. This is similar with the “jet lag” you get from flying, but it seems that you keep getting flashbacks from your previous time period. So I was very nervous and uncertain at first. However, Wang Ping, my friend and guide, were very understanding but gave me some green tablet which helped a lot. Wellknown for their expertise，his parents company transported me safely into the future in a time capsule.Yours，Li Qiang【试题分析】1文中第二句，yourselfmyself。根据句意：我不得不一直提醒自己我真的在3008年。根据句意，我提醒的是自己而非他人，故选用反身代词myself。2文中第二句，realreally。本句句意见上一题分析。考查副词担当状语。通过对句子的分析可知，real在此句中担当状语，应用其副词形式。3文中第三句，worryingworried。考查形容词用法。现在分词转换的形容词，通常用来形容事物。而此句句意为：对于这次旅行很担心，我在最开始的几天里很不安。是对句子主语I的情况进行的说明，故用worried。worried是由过去分词转换的形容词，通常用来修饰人，或者与人有关的事物。把Worrying改成Worried，注意首字母大写。4文中第三句，去掉a。句意见上一题分析。在最初的几天，用短语：for the first few days。不需要再使用冠词。故去掉a即可。5文中第四句，suffersuffered。根据上一句I was unsettled可知，这里的时态应该确定为一般过去时。故把suffer改成suffered。6文中第五句，withto。考查固定短语：be similar to，意为：和相似。句意为：这和你坐飞机时的时间差是很相似的。故把with改成to。7文中第七句，werewas。本句考查主谓一致。一定要确定好主语，本句主语是Wang Ping，其后的my friend and guide是同位语，故谓语动词和Wang Ping保持一致即可。所以本句把were改成was。8文中第七句，butand。考查连词的用法。前一分句意为：我的朋友和向导王平非常杰出；后一分句意为：给了我一些绿色的药片起了不少作用。两个分句之间并没有转折关系，而是并列关系，故把原句中的but改成and。9文中第七句，tablettablets。考查名词。名词tablet是可数名词，当前文有some修饰时，需要用其复数形式，故把tablet改成tablets。10文中最后一句，parentsparents。考查所有格。主语his parents和company之间存在所有关系，故用his parents，表示他父母的公司。二、书面表达(2020湖北卷)请根据以下提示，并结合具体事例，用英语写一篇短文。Questioning is a bridge to learning.When you begin to doubt something and search for an answer，you will learn.注意：1.无须写标题；2除诗歌外，文体不限；3内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例；4文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；5词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。_【参考范文】Questioning can lead to searching for an answer.If we are in the habit of raising doubts as to whether what we are told is true，we can find the correct answer and learn more.Two years ago，our teacher offered us an answer to a difficult math problem in class.Although the answer seemed a little strange，nobody but I doubted it.Thinking that his solution might be wrong.I carefully analyzed the problem and tried to work it out in a different way.Half an hour later，I managed to find the correct answer.When I showed my answer to him，the teacher praised me for my independent thinking.From this experience I have learnt that questioning can serve as a bridge that helps us to seek the truth.写作训练 3 一、短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。I am good at all the subjects, and always ready help others.At school I get along well with my classmates.Therefore, I have a problem that troubles myself all the time.Its the relationship among my desk mate and me.He is a hardworking student, who keeps school rule well.But hes a person with few words.Whats more, he got angry easily.I dont know what to deal with him.Maybe thats why weve seldom sat down to exchange our feelings and thoughts.I value our friendship.I hope we can know more about with each other and understand each other better.I do hope we will be close to each other than before.【试题分析】1文中第一句，ready后加to。考查固定短语：be ready to do sth.，意为：乐于做某事。本句中缺少to，故加上to.句意为：我每门功课都不错，而且乐于助人。2文中第三句，ThereforeHowever。前一句意为：在学校，我和同学们相处得很好。后一句意为：我有一个一直困扰我的问题。两句话之间存在转折关系，故不可使用Therefore，意为所以，而应该使用带有否定意义的副词。3文中第三句，myselfme。此句句意为：然而，我有一个一直困扰我的问题。这里不需要使用反身代词myself，只需要使用代词的宾格形式作宾语，故把myself改成me。4文中第四句，amongbetween。此句考查among和between之间的区别。Among指三者及三者以上的之间，而between指两者之间。此句指同桌和我之间的关系，故把among改成between。5文中第五句，rulerules。本句考查名词rule的用法。rule作规章制度讲时是可数名词，如前面没有a等修饰时，常用其复数形式，泛指规章制度。此句句意为：他是一个刻苦的学生，非常遵守学校的规章制度。故用复数形式，把rule改成rules。6文中第七句，gotget。本句考查时态。通过阅读上下文可知，本篇文章是以一般现在时为主，陈述目前的情况，而本句突然出现了一般过去时，而且没有讲述过去发生的事情，所以需要把一般过去时改成一般现在时。主要主语为he，故用gets。7文中第八句，whathow。本句考查短语deal with的用法。此处deal with表示交往的意思，这个句子的句意为：我不知道该如何与他交往。故使用how表如何，而不用what。8文中第九句，whybecause。根据后面的weve seldom sat down to exchange our feelings and thoughts可知，这里说明的是两个人关系有问题的原因，所以不用why而用because，构成句型：thats because，表示那是因为。9文中倒数第二句，去掉with。about为介词，其后之间用代词each other作宾语即可，不需要再使用介词with，故去掉with即可。句意为：我希望我们能多了解彼此，多理解彼此。10文中最后一句，closecloser。通过than before，可知此句话为比较级，故把close改成closer。句意为：我真希望我们能比以前更亲密。二、书面表达(2020上海卷)Guided WritingDirections：Write an English composition in 120150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.学校即将举办“读书节”，目前正广泛征集“读书节”宣传册图片。假设你是该校学生潘阳，你已找到以下三幅图片，决定给读书节组委会写一封信，推荐其中一幅，你的信须包括以下内容：1简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片；2阐述你用这幅图片宣传“读书节”的理由。_【参考答案】Dear Sir/ Madam，Since the Reading Festival is around the corner, Im writing to recommend a picture which can be used in the brochure to remind the students of the pleasure of reading.In the picture, three students are sitting at the table, discussing heatedly what they have just read. It seems that they have had a lot of fun through the discussion. Though it is admitted that reading is mostly a personal activity which needs quietness and concentration.As far as Im concerned, it can also be a sharing experience when the same book is being appreciated. Just imagine that you have read a terrific detective story with fascinating and intricate plots. You are so amazed by the genius of the writer and you cant help sharing it with your classmates or best friends, who turn out to have been deeply impressed as well. The moment you mention the book, the passion and enthusiasm about the story will explode which can never be gained on your own. My ideal atmosphere of reading is just like that, through which you can not only appreciate the content by yourself, but also have the pleasure of sharing the plots or opinions with your peers, which will ultimately enhance your understanding of the book. To sum up, the reason of my recommendation is quite simple and apparent that reading, instead of being dull and isolating, can be full of participation and common interest. I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestion into consideration and Im looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely，Pan Yang写作训练 4一、短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。There are lots of experience in our life. The most unforgettable one for me is the speech competition holding last year. Im interested in English. When my English teacher told me that I had chosen to take part in the speech competition, I devoted me to the preparation. I was determined to win the first prize. I was such nervous when I stood on the stage that I forgot everything. Not until I caught a sight of my teacher did I calm down. Finally，I do a good job. When I heard I got the first prize，my heart was filled in joy and tears rolled down. Through this speech competition，I understand that it is confident that makes people successfully.【试题分析】1experienceexperiences名词误用。根据谓语动词are，可知此处主语应是复数形式。2holdingheld 非谓语误用。competition和hold之间是被动关系，所以应用过去分词。3beenchosen 语态误用。主语I和chose之间为被动关系。had been chosen被选中。4memyself 代词误用。devote oneself to sth.致力于。5suchso 形容词副词误用。such后加名词，so 后加形容词或副词。根据nervous，可知用so修饰。6a去掉 冠词误用。catch sight of看见，不用冠词。7dodid 时态误用。本文讲的是去年的事情，所以此处应用一般过去时。8inwith介词误用。be filled with冲满。9confidentconfidence形容词误用。根据结构可知，此处强调的是句子的主语，所以应用名词。10successfullysuccessful/succeed副词误用。Make sb. do sth.或make sb.adj.是固定结。二、书面表达(2020湖南卷)Section C (25 marks)Directions：Write an English composition according to the instructions given below._请以老师当众表扬你为话题，用下面所给的句子开头，续写一篇英语短文。As a student, I can tell you that there is nothing better than being praised by my teacher before my classmates.注意：1. 将所有句子写在答题卡上；2. 续写词数不少于120个；3. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。_【参考范文】One possible version：As_a_student,_I_can_tell_you_that_there_is_nothing_better_than_being_praised_by_my_teacher_before_my_classmates.Yesterday afternoon, Li Ming and I went home together after school. Suddenly we saw an old lady knocked down by a car. The driver ran away in his car. Li Ming and I ran over to find that the old ladys head was bleeding. She had already lost consciousness. Immediately I took out my handkerchief and covered the wound with it. Li Ming stopped a taxi quickly. Together we put the old lady into the taxi and drove her to the nearest hospital. The old lady was saved and we also felt very pleased. Whats more, I remembered the number of the car, and the traffic police caught the driver later.写作训练 5 一、短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。One cold evening during the holiday season, a little boy about six or seven was standing out in the front of a store window. The little child has no shoes and his clothes were just rags. A young woman passes by saw the little boy and could read the desire in his pale blue eyes. She took the child by the hand and led her into the store. There she bought him some new shoes and a complete suit of warm clothing. They walked back outside into the street, so the woman told the child to come home and have a happy holiday. The little boy looked her and asked how she was God. She smiled and replied that she was just one of His child.【试题分析】1第一句去掉front前的the。在商店窗户外面的前方站着，用 in front of，而in the front of表示内部的前边，去掉the。2第二句hashad。通篇是过去时态。3第三句passespassing。现在分词作定语，表示主动关系。4第四句herhim。文中讲述一个小男孩，代词性别用错。5第五句warmwarmly副词修饰动词，而形容词修饰名词，clothing是名词。6第六句soand前后句是并列关系。7. 第六句comego。“回家”go home。8第七句looked 后面加at。“看着某人”look at somebody。9第七句howif /whether。问那个女士是否是上帝。10. 第八句childchildren。one of复数名词。二、书面表达(2020浙江卷)在班级活动中，当你的想法与大多数同学不一致时，你是坚持自己的观点并说服别人，还是尊重大多数同学的意见？请你以“When I Have a Different Opinion”为题，用英文写一篇100120个词短文。要求如下：1从以上两种做法中选择一种；2以具体事例阐述你选择的理由。注意：短文中，不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、同学姓名等真实信息。否则，按考试作弊行为认定。When I Have a Different Opinion_【参考答案】When_I_Have_a_Different_OpinionWe may have different opinions in organizing class activities. We may have various ways to deal with such a situation. When I have a better idea, I would choose to stick to it . By doing so, I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express myself clearly.Once we were discussing where to go for an outing. Most of my classmates wanted to go to a park while I had an idea of going to a nicer peace. I managed to persuade my classmates into accepting my idea. We did have a good time that day . Good opinions are worth sticking to because they can benefit us all.写作训练 6 一、短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. May I have your attention, please?I have something important to tell you. Our plan to visit the countryside has to put off till tomorrow because the rain. Now I will introduce their plan for today. We would go to visit a middle school by bus on this morning. A school has a history of 85 years. Then well go to an exhibition of some new invention. I think it will be interested. The bus will wait at the gate of the hotel. Well set out at 8：30. Taking everything necessary with you and please get on the bus on time. You are welcome to ask me unless you still have any questions. Thank you for listening.【试题分析】1文中第二段第二句。has to后面加be考查被动语态的用法。本句句意为：我们去乡村参观的计划由于下雨不得不推迟到明天。计划和推迟之间存在被动关系，故需要使用被动语态。不定式的被动语态在其后加上be就可以了，故在to之后加上be。2文中第二段第二句。because后面加of考查because和because of之间的区别。虽然两者都可以表示“因为”，但是用法却不同。because之后加上表原因的分句而because of之后加上表原因的名词或动名词。此句中表原因的是名词the rain，故需要使用的是because of，所以加上of。3文中第二段第三句。theirour通过上一句可知，此处讲的是our plan，故把their改成our。句意为：现在我介绍一下我们今天的计划。4文中第二段第四句。wouldwill通过上文Now I will introduce their plan for today.可知介绍的是即将发生的事情，故用现在将来时而不是过去将来时。所以把would改成will。5文中第二段第四句。去掉on本句考查时间状语的用法。句意为：今天早晨我们将坐公共汽车去参观一所学校。今天早晨作时间状语不需要加介词，故去掉on。6文中第二段第五句。school前的a改成the此处所指的学校是上文提到的学校。在英语中，表上文刚刚提到的可数名词单数，需要用定冠词the，故把a改成the，注意首字