英语人教版初中三年级课件 中考书面表达常见错误

,中考英语书面表达写作中常见的错误,语法和句型,初中写作中的常见错误,1、结构错误,TherehassomedifferentideasaboutTherearesomedifferentideasabout正：Therebe,2.误用句型结构,误：Whenamiddleschoolstudent,hisparentswereverystrictwithhim.正：Whenhewasamiddleschoolstudent,hisparentswereverystrictwithhim.,3.符号错误,Therearemanyboybandsaroundtheworld.SuchasSuperJuniorM,FeiLunHai,Flowerandsoon.正：Therearemanyboybandsaroundtheworld,suchas,SuperJuniorM,FeiLunHai,Flowerandsoon.,4.缺少动词,我累了。Imtired.误IhappyIcancometoBeijingZoo.正IamhappyIcancometoBeijingZoo.误Theapplescheap.Illtakesome.正Theapplesarecheap.Illtakesome.,5.缺少介词、冠词等,误Becauseheavyrainwecantholdthesportsmeeting.正Becauseoftheheavyrainwecantholdthesportsmeeting.,6.代词的误用,误ImotherandIwenttotheshoptobuyapresentforIfather.正MymotherandIwenttotheshoptobuyapresentformyfather.,7.句子不完整,误Manystudentshaveahardtimepassingalltheteststogetintocollege.Forexample,myfriendinhighschool.（这段文章的第二句话没有动词，他不能独立构成一个句子。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。）正Manystudentshaveahardtimepassingalltheteststogetintocollege,forexample,myfriendinhighschool.,8.前后不一致,所谓不一致，包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等。误Whenonehaveknowledge,hecandowhathewanttodo.（人一旦有了知识，他就能想干什么就干什么。）剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has;同理，want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致。正Whenonehasknowledge,hecandowhathewants（todo）,9.时态、人称和数的搭配错误,误WhenIgettothestationthetrainleave.正WhenIgottothestationthetrainhadleft.,10.词性误用,Weallknowthatfailisthemotherofsucceed.Weallknowthatfailureisthemotherofsuccess.,successsuccessfulsuccessfullysucceed,Hegotsuccess.Hewassuccessful.Hediditsuccessfully.Hesucceeded.,Makeourcitygreenerisimportant.Makingourcitygreenerisimportant.Itsimportanttomakeourcitygreener,人们可以通过因特网获得信息。PeoplecanbytheInternettogetinformation.PeoplecangetinformationthroughontheInternet.,11词语赘用,词语赘用就是在文章中使用了多余的字（uselesswords），或用了大词（bigwords），雅词（elegantwords），形成了废话（deadword），使文章组织不严密，内容模糊不清。,IPhoneisabrand-new,cool,modern,entertaining,smarthightech.2-3个形容词足矣！切记用and连接。,PeoplewhoareinBeijingareworkinghardforthe2008Olympics.PeopleinBeijingareworkinghardforthe2008Olympics.,12.文化差异,White-collarBlackteaBrownsugarGreenhouseBluemood,白领红茶红糖温室忧郁的情绪,具雷人版本,语雷版,IcallLioldbig.toyear25.Myhomefourmouthpeople:papa,mama,IandDD.Pleasecometoeatandsleepwithme.Fromseeyouoneeye,Iloveyou.Youreyesclose,Idie;Youreyesopen,Icomebackalive.,语雷版,Mymothercooksmealsformeeveryday.Mymotherisveryloveme.(超中文表达）,帮TA挑挑错！,1.Wehavecomputerclassoneweekatime.Ihavecomputerclassonceaweek.英语中表达频率次数时:一次once,两次twice从三次开始用threetimes.2.Gointomyschool,youcanseemanyflowers.Goingintomyschool,youcanseemanyflowers.这里使用动名词going做主语,go这个动作由后面的you发出.,3.Therehave100books.Thereare100books.表示某个地方有什么,一般使用Therebe的存在句型.4.Istudythereveryhappy.Istudythereveryhappily.Study是个动词,表示动作的程度要使用副词,不可以用形容词happy.,5.Iusuallyswimmingthere.Iusuallyswimthere.-ing结尾的动名词不可以单独做句子的谓语.6.Iforgetsaidthis,ourschoolwallbesidehasmanytrees.Bytheway,therearemanyflowersbesideourschoolwall.这个句子的表达和语法上都有问题.如果单从中文意思来看,大家都明白他在说什么,但是要是让外教来批改,估计他会无尽的苦恼了.所以我们在不失句子原意的基础上,使用正确的语法.该句子的表达应该为:,7.Severalhoursafter,hewassurprising.Severalhourslater,hewassurprised.使用after时,不能放在时间表达语的后面.形容人的用V-ed类的，形容事物的用V-ing类的。8.Hehadtoaskedtheotherone.Hehadtoasktheotherone.“Havetodosomething”是固定用法,不定式后用动词原形.,9.Hethoughthespeakwell.Hethoughthespokewell.这个句子属于语法时态的不一致.10.Mr.LiiscomefromBeijing.Mr.LiisfromBeijing.一个英语句子中不能有两个谓语动词.Theyarecooksomehealthyfoodtome.,11.Hewasveryhardly.HelikesstudyingChinese.Hestudiesveryhard.HelikesstudyingChinese.首先要区分hard和hardly.虽然两个都可以做副词,但在意思上有很大的区别.Heworksveryhard.他工作很努力Hehardlyworks.他几乎不工作.这个两个表达相差很大.其次,be动词后面不能使用副词.12.Thisfilmisverygood-looking.Thisfilmisveryinteresting.这是一个完全中文式的英语句子.good-looking一般用来形容人物的.,13.Itisverygoodtofamilylook.Itisfitforfamilytoenjoy.又是一个中文式的句子14.IthinkwecantliveInternet.IthinkwecantrelyonInternet.学生想要表达的是不要过分依赖因特网.,15.Peopleusethenettosendthemailshasthemostpeople.Mostpeopleusethenettosendthemails.这是一个要表达比例的英语句子.学生在这里做了一个中文句子的”强行”翻译.16.Ihaveafuturedream.Ihaveadreamaboutfuture.Future在这里不可以直接修饰dream.,17.Itcanhelpmetowalkonmyliferoad.Itcanhelpmetowalkonmylifesjourney.“人生路”中的“路”是抽象的含义，不可用“road”来表达。18.Ithinkeverythingmustbechangealot.Ithinkeverythingkeepsonchanging.不细心看这个句子,完全不了解他想表达什么.但从上下文来推测,