中考英语作文专题复习指导

Writing,中考作文指导,Learningaims:,学会作文审题，根据所给要点构建文章结构。,2.能够根据要求列出关键词，学会连词成句。,3.通过添加主题句、适当的连接成分等学会组句成篇。,中考英语写作评分标准,一档文,写出全部内容要点，层次清楚，语言流畅，有句式变化，有复杂结构，至少2-3个，基本无语法错误，只有1-2个，或有少量由于使用复杂结构而引起的语法或拼写错误，但不影响意义理解。,Howcanwewriteagoodcomposition(作文)?,第一步：都要认真审题，明确写作体裁、要求和提示要点,Howcanwewriteagoodcomposition?(Haveadiscussion!),具体做法：用笔勾画,假如你是王林。你所在学校的“爱心俱乐部(HelpingHandsClub)”将吸收新会员。你想加入该俱乐部，请根据下面表格和图片的内容，用英语写一封自荐信。,1.,要求：1.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯；2.要点须包括表格和四幅图片中的信息，但不得使用真实姓名和校名等；3.表格中“加入目的”一栏内容由考生自拟；4.词数：70左右。,第二步：列出写作提纲（Outline）。,具体做法：根据段落整理写作要点,不要遗漏要点！,WriteanOutline,Introduction,Mainbody,Conclusion,Iwanttojoin,本人特点,“爱心”表现,加入目的,看表格,看表格,看图,自拟,Ihopeyouwillagreewithme.,可以用英文或中文,姓名/性别,易漏掉的要点！,自荐信,Whatwillyouwrite？,王林,Whoareyouinthisletter?,人称:I,Whatsyourpurpose?,加入该俱乐部,时态：一般现在时为主,Thinking:,DearChairperson,IamaboystudentfromClass1Grade9.IdliketojointheHelpingHandsClub.Iamhealthy.Iworkhardatmylessons.Ilikehelpingothers.Igetonwellwithmyclassmates.IfIjointheclub,Iwillbeabletomakemorefriends.AndIcanalsodomoreforothers.,扣分原因一词数不够！,DearChairperson,IamaboystudentfromClass1Grade9.IdliketojointheHelpingHandsClub.Iamhealthy.Iworkhardatmylessons.Ilikehelpingothers.Igetonwellwithmyclassmates.IfIjointheclub,Iwillbeabletomakemorefriends.AndIcanalsodomoreforothers.,Introduction,本人特点,加入目的,扣分原因二遗漏要点！,WriteanOutline,Introduction,Mainbody,Conclusion,Iamaboy,Idliketojoin,本人特点,“爱心”表现,加入目的,Ihopeyouwillagreewithme.,无法拿满分！,DearChairperson,IamaboystudentfromClass1Grade9.IdliketobeamemberoftheHelpingHandsClub.Iamhealthy.Iworkhardatmylessons.Ilikehelpingothers.IgetonwellwithmyclassmatesIfIjointheclub,Iwillbeabletomakemorefriends.Besides,Icandomoreforothers.YoursWangLin,少了两个重要部分，扣5-6分，只得9-10分！,缺少“爱心”表现,也缺少Conclusion,“爱心”表现(examples),Picture1,helpwith,helpclassmateswithlessons,我的,Ioftenhelpclassmateswithlessons.,看图,Picture2,helpcross,“爱心”表现(examples),看图,helpoldpeoplecrosstheroad,Ihelpoldpeoplecrosstheroadonmywayhome.,Picture3,“爱心”表现(examples),看图,givemyseatto,givemyseattopeopleinneed,Ioftengivemyseattopeopleinneedonabus.,“爱心”表现(examples),看图,Picture4,cleanupthepark,helpcleanupthepark,Ioftenhelpcleanupthepark.,“爱心”表现(examples),1.Ioftenhelpclassmateswithlessons.,2.Ihelpoldpeoplecrosstheroadonmywayhome.,3.Ioftengivemyseattopeopleinneedonabus.,4.Ioftenhelpcleanupthepark.,Conclusion,IllbegladifIcanjointheclub.Ihopeyouwillagreewithme.,DearChairperson,IamaboystudentfromClass1Grade9.IdliketobeamemberoftheHelpingHandsClub.Iamhealthy.Iworkhardatmylessons.IlikehelpingothersIgetonwellwithmyclassmates.IfIjointheclub,Iwillbeabletomakemorefriends.Besides,Icandomoreforothers.YoursWangLin,IllbegladifIcanjointheclub.Ihopeyouwillagreewithme.,andoftenhelpclassmateswiththeirlessons.Onmywayhome,Ioftenhelpoldpeoplecrosstheroad.Onabus,Ialwaysgivemyseattopeopleinneed.Sometimes,Ihelptocleanupthepark.,不但要点完整了，词数也够了。,作文中应避免的几种常见语言错误：时态错误（扣分多，一个时态错误扣分在1分左右）。中国式的英语（不正确的英文表达会让整句不得分）。单词拼写错误及大小写（单词拼写一定要过关）。介词,代词，非谓语动词或形容词副词的不正确使用（对单词的词性要熟悉）。名词单复数（细心就可以避免的错）。,写作：第一步就是要认真审题，明确写作体裁、要求和提示要点第二步就是要列出写作提纲，根据段落整理写作要点。,写作前：,确定人称、时态,写作后：,检查,另外作文中书写不规范，卷面不整洁也是要失分的（中考中有12分的卷面整洁分，这两分不能丢！）。,解决方法：平时认真规范书写，少用或不用胶带或修正液，尽量减少涂改。,写作注意的几个问题：,尽量使用简单句，如果复合句用不好就不要用，文章算不上完美，但很实用。要牢记“避繁就简”原则。当然长句短句交叉使用最好。把握要点，避免遗漏，注意发挥适度既不要多写也不要少写。,注意句子与句子、段与段之间过渡自然，行文连贯，注意适当使用连词，例如：and,so,or,but,become,Whatsmore;Whatworse,notonlybutalso,neithernor等等。再有学生语文水平的滑坡，使得英语老师不得不带领学生完成写作内容的挖掘。,写作注意的几个问题：,选词：普通的叙述文或短文，应该选择简洁、朴实、准确的大众化词语，避免使用矫饰、复杂、故弄玄虚的词，并尽可能挑选积极的动词。,写作注意的几个问题：,措辞：能写出树的具体名称anappletree,就不要使用tree;能说清具体数字时，就不要使用some;知道是某种专门的活动，就不要使用do去描述，词意越具体，越能给读者鲜明的印象。,写作注意的几个问题：,你如何写开头,1.开头常用词语：asfarasweknow据我们所知aseverybodyknows众所周知atpresent目前firstofall首先Totellthetruth老实说,1.结尾常用词语：afterall毕竟atlast最后inaword总而言之finally,最后wehopethat我们希望Inshort简言之clearly显然,你如何写结尾,如何添加过度句、连接词,补充说明forexample,besides，Inaddition(此外），Whatsworse!Whatsmore!Worstofall.转折however,yet,but原因thanksto,becauseof结果asresultof,so，sothat,好人好事,假如你叫小明。下面的图画讲述了你和一位男孩在上周一发生的事情。请根据图画写出一篇日记。日记的开头已经给出,Gotoschool,Sawfalloff,Carryto,Visitwith,Befinethank,看图作文,Whowaslyingontheground?Whathappenedtotheboy?Whendidithappen?Wheredidithappen?Whydidithappen?Howwastheboy?,范文1,MondayJune2,2003FineLastMonday,Iwenttoschoolinthemorning.WhenIwasattheschoolgate,Isawaboyfelloffhisbikeandlieontheroad.Hewasbadlyhurtandcouldntmove,soIcarriedhimtothehospital.Whenhewasinhospital,Ivisitedhimwithsomeflowersandhewasveryhappy.Afterhewasfine,hecametotheschoolandsaidtome,Thankyouverymuch,XiaoMing.Isaid,Notatall.IjustdidsomethingthatIshoulddo.,Letspractice!,你将代表学校参加扬州市中学生英语演讲比赛，演讲的题目是Learningtogetalongwithourparents.请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，内容要点如下。要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2）必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；3）词数：100词左右（演讲稿的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数）4）不得使用真实姓名和校名等。,Letsenjoyourowncompositions!,Samplewriting,Goodmorning,ladiesandgentlemen.Todaymytopicislearningtogetalongwithourparents.Thesedays,mostofusfeelitishardtogetalongwithourparents.Weeasilygetangryfornoreasonandevendonttalktothemfordays.Ithinkthecausesareasfollows.First,ourparentsonlycareaboutourmarksanditmakesusstressed.Second,weareunwillingtocommunicatewiththem.Itstimeforustochange.First，wecancommunicatewiththem,bysharingourjoysandworrieswiththem.Then,wecanhelpdosomehouseworktoshowourloveforthem.Finally,weshouldachieveabalancebetweenourschoolworkan