高中英语基础写作精品PPT教学课件.ppt

,1,BasicWriting,2,时间分配,基础写作的命题特点：考生按所给的内容及要求，用5个规范的英语句子描述所给信息的全部内容，并组成连贯的短文。简而言之，考查考生整理信息和组词造句成文的能力。,3,对于书面表达的要求：,1.Coverallthelanguagepointsandgiveninformation.覆盖所有的语言要点,Avoidgrammarmistakesandwrongspelling应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性,3.coherent,tight上下文的连贯性即有效地使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。,4.usethewordsproperly语言的得体性,5.Writeyourarticleclearly.,6.Mindthenumberofyoursentences.,4,Tomakethearticletight,gracefulandclear.,Toavoidusingrepetitivewordsorexpressions.表达时尽量用一些较高级的词汇，避免使用重复的词语，使语言不至于单纯和幼稚。也可以给文章增添亮点。,（2）Tousesometransitionalwords恰当选用过渡词，使文章紧凑，流畅。,(3)Tousemoresentencepatternssuchasinvertedorder,emphasis,acompoundsentenceoraparticipleadverbial适当使用多种句型，注意语言的丰富性，多样化，以变化多端的形式来表现丰富多彩的内容。,5,Basicwritingskills,Waysofwritinggoodsentences,6,方法一.一句多译,Assoonaswearrivedatthevillage,wewerewarmlywelcomedbythevillagers.,Onarrivingatthevillage，wewerewarmly.,Themomentwearrivedatthevillage,wewere,7,Wewerewarmlywelcomedbythevillagersimmediatelywearrivedatthevillage.,Nosoonerhadwearrivedatthevillagethanwe,Hardlyhadwearrivedatthevillagewhenwe.,8,Usedifferentwaystodescribethepicture,方法一.一句多译,一就受到欢迎,9,AssoonasLienChanandhiswifearrivedattheairport,theywerewarmlywelcomed.Onarrivingattheairport,LienChanandhiswifeLienChanandhiswifewerewarmlywelcomedthemoment/immediatelytheyarrivedattheairport.NosoonerhadLienChanandhiswifearrivedattheairportthantheywereHardlyhadLienChanandhiswifearrivedattheairportwhentheywere,方法一.一句多译,10,Practice一句多译这本书花了我300元。Ispent300yuanonthebook.Ipaid300yuanforthebook.Thepriceofthebookis300yuan.Itcostme300yuantobuythebook.Thebookcostme300yuan.,11,Practice一句多译,昨天下午他才来。Hecamehereyesterdayafternoon.Hedidntcomehereuntilyesterdayafternoon.Itwasyesterdayafternoonthathearrivedhere.Itwasnotuntilyesterdayafternoonthathecamehere.Notuntilyesterdayafternoondidhecomehere.,12,Rewritethesentences,方法二.使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档,（1）MostoftheartistswhohadbeeninvitedtothepartywerefromSouthAfrica.,MostoftheartistsinvitedtothepartywerefromSouthAfrica.,（2）Nowadaystheoldpeopleoftendomorningexercisesintheparkinorderthattheycouldkeephealthy.,Nowadaystheoldpeopleoftendomorningexercisesintheparktokeephealthy.,13,方法二.使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档,Completethesentenceswithnon-predicate(非谓语动词)听到这个消息,他们变的很激动._thenews,theygotexcited.2.尽管被告知许多遍,他仍然重复这个错._manytimes,hestillrepeatedthemistake.3.除非被邀请发言,你应该在会议上保持沉默.Unless_tospeak,youshouldkeepsilentatthemeeting.,Hearing,Havingbeentold,invited,14,Translatethefollowingsentencesbyusingnon-predicate(非谓语动词),1,面对困难时，他从不放弃。2，引入市场后，该产品大获成功。3，做完作业后，他回家了。,Facedwith/Facingdifficulties,henevergivesup.,Introducedtothemarket,theproductmadeagreatsuccess.,Havingfinishedhishomework,hereturnedhome.,15,方法三.丰富的句式,DescribethecharacterbyusingInvertedSentence(倒装句),Pooras/thoughhewas,hewashappy.,16,方法三.丰富的句式,SentencepatternsAreAlwaysUseful,Thedogjumpedintotheriverandpulledthegirltothebank.Itwasthedogthatjumpedintotheriverandpulledthegirltosafety.ThesquareisneartheGreatWallHotel.NeartheGreatWallHotelisthesquare.YouwillhavetoworkhardforyearstospeakgoodEnglish.ItwilltakeyearsofhardworktospeakgoodEnglish.,17,Ifailedintheexamagain.WhatdisappointedmemostwasthatIfailedintheexamagain.MissLiwillgiveusareportsoon.MissLi,whohasawideknowledgeofEnglish,willgiveusareportsoon.WealllikeJim.WealllikeJim,whoisalwaysreadytohelpothers.WealllikeJimbecauseofhishelpfulnessandkindness.,18,1.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.（使用名词性从句）2.ThoughImweak,Illmaketheeffort.(使用倒装句)3.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用强调句型)4.Ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhelp.(用虚拟语气）,Whatsurpriseshimisthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings.,Practice怎样使用较丰富的句式,WeakasIam,Illmaketheeffort.,Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.,Icouldnthavepassedthephysicsexambutforyourhelp.,19,5.Iwontbelievewhathesays.（使用状语从句）6.Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakerapidprogress.（用并列句）7HehadnosoonercomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.(使用倒装句),NosoonerhadhecomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.,Nomatterwhathesays,Iwontbelieve.,Studyhardandyoullmakerapidprogress.,20,Usedifferentwaystodescribeonesentence.Makesentencesbyusingnon-predicate.3.Sentencepatternsarealwaysuseful,Summaries:,21,Practice,此四幅画描述了爱鸟周活动中李明某一天所经历的事，由此写一篇文章。要求：1必须使用5个句子表达图画内容。2将5个句子组成连贯的短文。,22,步骤一审题,narration,pasttense,thethirdperson,timeorder,23,caughtabirdfixedastringtoit,agirllookformotherapolicecomforther,步骤二要点,24,sendherhomelostinthought,setthebirdfreefeelhappy,步骤二要点,25,步骤三.扩展成句，连句成篇,1.Oneday,LiMingcaughtabirdandfixedastringtoit.,2.Hesawagirlcrylookingforhermumandapolice-mancomforther.,3.ThepolicemansentthegirlhomeandLiMingwaslostinthought.,4.LiMingsetthebirdfreeandfeltveryhappy.,26,步骤四.仔细检查，认真修改,查是否遗漏要点，信息是否完整，尤其是：人物、地点、时间、发生什么事、如何发生、怎样进行等方面是否遗漏。查体裁格式是否正确。查句式使用是否科学得当。查叙述的顺序是否颠倒。查过渡词是否使用合理。查时态、语态是否一致正确。查书写和标点符号是否规范清晰。查字数是否符合要求。,27,Oneday,LiMingcaughtabirdandfixedastringtoit.Whenplayingwithit,hesawthegirlwhowascryingcouldntfindhermumandakindpolicemantriedtocomfortherandto