初中英语人教版八年级上册unit7 writing.ppt

Unit7willpeoplehaverobots？SectionB3a3cwriting,初中英语八年级上册,人教新课标2011版,授课教师：杨艳君中学一级教师,郑州市第七十三中学,Unit7,Willpeoplehaverobots?,SectionB3a-3c,YangYanjun,Learninggoals,1.通过头脑风暴和阅读范文，能说出有关未来生活的表达方式，并梳理出范文的写作结构。2.通过独立写作，能写出一篇80词左右文章来描述自己的未来生活。3.参照作文评分标准，通过自评、互评的方式，能评价、修改自己和同伴的文章。,Brainstorm,cities,traffic,buildings,environment,car/subway,crowded,moveto,pollution,areporter,3a,Jill,Where?Whatwillherlifebelikeinthefuture?,Pre-writing写作准备,reporter(Shanghai)meetlotsofinterestingpeople,anapartment(small)notgoodforpets(bird),duringtheweek:wearsmartclothesonweekends:looklesssmart,takeaholidayinHongKongAustralia,Mindmap,Jillsfuturelifein20years,whenpossible,Whatmakesyourpassagebetter?,language(语言)6分,structure(结构)2分,content(内容)5分,handwriting(书写)2分,allthedetails(细节),threeparts,spellingorgrammarmistakes,goodsentences,linkwords(连接词),cleanandtidy,Writingtips,While-writing写作阶段,Post-writing:revising修改阶段,1.Underlinegoodsentences2.givethepoints.3.Giveyouradvicetomakethepassagebetter.,example,Evaluationstandards(评价标准),优秀作文展示,1.请各小组推荐一篇优秀作文在班上进行展示,请大声朗读作文并与全班分享好词好句及评语。2.其他同学要认真听，并能在听完后记下优美词句。,Correctyourmistakesandmakeyouressaybetter.,Showtime,summary,summary,Lifeinthefuture,Thefuturebelongstothosewhobelieveinthebeautyoftheirdreams.,Homework,随着科技的发展，我们的生活发生了很大改变。很多以前不可能发生的事现在都成为了现实。因此，我们将来的生活也会多姿多彩。请以“Lifeinthefuture”为题写一篇文章描