写好英语高考作文的几点建议.ppt

写好英语高考作文的几点建议,授课：南昌一中邹艳制作：南昌一中邹艳,AdviceonWritingGoodCompositions,2005年福建高考卷(NMET)目前，学校存在少数学生考试作弊现象。某英文杂志社拟对此现象向中学生征文，标题是“MyOpiniononCheatinginExaminations”请根据下列提示用英语写一篇征文稿。内容要点如下：,注意：1短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；2短文标题与开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；3词数：100左右。4参考词汇：作弊cheat（v.）MyOpiniononCheatinginExaminationsItisknowntousallthatsomestudentscheatinexaminationsatschool.,Tables(表格),2006年湖北高考卷(NMET)受某英文报的委托，你最近对高中生的英语阅读兴趣做了一次调查。请根据以下信息，用英语为该报写一篇100词左右的短文。短文的标题及首句已为你写好。调查内容：在新闻、故事、科普、学习方法四种英文文章中，学生最喜欢哪一种?调查范围：湖北省的10所中学调查对象：高中生调查人数：1200调查方式：访谈调查结果：（见下图）,ReadingInterestsofSeniorMiddleSchoolStudentsRecent,surveyhasbeendonetofindoutthereadinginterestsofseniormiddleschoolstudents,Charts（图表）,2004年湖南高考卷(NMET)假设你是一位生活在某城市的中学生暑假打算去乡村度假请根据下面两幅图提供的信息，写一篇短文简要说明城市生活环境的不足，重点说明你去乡村度假的原因,注意：1短文应包括图中所提供的主要信息，井做适当发挥，使短文内容连贯、完整；2词数：100左右,Pictures,2006年全国高考卷（III）假定你是李华,亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办,现在正在招募志愿者,你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信.内容应包括:个人情况：年龄、性别、学历个人条件：英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人、熟悉本地情况承诺：提供最佳服务注意：词数100左右，开头语已为你写好可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯生词：申请apply(v.),application(n.)；志愿者volunteerDearSirorMadam,MynameisLiHua.IwouldliketoworkasavolunteerfortheWinterAsianGames.,Outline(提纲),PatternsofwritingPictures图画作文Charts图表作文Tables表格作文Outline提纲作文,Divide,Topsentence(主题句),AdviceonwritinggoodcompositionsTopsentence（主题句）Coherence（连贯性）Ending（opinion）,Topsentence,Mainideaofthewholecomposition,Leadinacomposition,Functions,Ideasareclearlystated;well-organized,agoodcomposition,IprefermyEnglishclassestobetaughtinEnglishonly.Asweallknow,agoodlearningenvironmentisvitalifwewanttostudyEnglishwell.ClassestaughtinEnglishprovidestudentswithsuchanenvironment.WhenEnglishistheonlylanguageusedintheclassroom,studentswillhavemoreopportu-nitiestopractiselisteningandspeaking.Therefore,theywillbeabletolearnmorequickly.However,therearealsosomeproblemswiththisteachingmethod.AswehaventmasteredenoughEnglishwords,sometimeswemayfinditdifficulttofollowtheteacher.SlowlearnermayevenloseinterestinEnglish.Practicemakesperfect.TolearnEnglishwellrequiresalotofpractice.Therefore,IlikemyEnglishclassestobetaughtcompletelyinEnglish.,注意：1.词数100120，短文开头已给出（不计词数）2.参考词汇：atmosphere氛围,TopsentencePractice:findoutthetopsentenceofeachpart2.毕业前夕，你班决定给李老师送一份礼物，大家提出两条建议：(1)送影集(album)，里面有每个同学的照片；(2)送磁带，录有每个同学对老师的祝福。请以“AnAlbumoraTape”为题，用英语写一篇短文。首先简述以上两条建议，然后表明你同意其中哪一条并说明理由。a短文必须以第一人称书写。b词数：100词左右。,AnAlbumorAtapeHowtimeflies!Wellsoongraduateandsaygoodbyetoourdearteachersandclassmates.ToshowourthankstoMissLi,wehavemadeadecisiontosendherapresent.Willanalbumoratapedo?Someofuspreferanalbumwitheveryonesphotoinside.Aftergraduation,therewillbefewchancestomeetagain.WithanalbumMissLicanseeusatanytime.Whileothersthinkatapewillbemoremeaningful,onwhichourwishesarerecorded.EachtimeMissLiplaysthetape,ourvoiceswillremindherofthepleasantdayswehavehadtogether.Inmyopinion,analbumisthebestchoice.OnceMissLiopensthealbumandlooksatthephotosonebyone,thegoodolddaysaretoariseinhermind.Ontheotherhand,comparedwithatape,analbumwilllastlonger.,TopsentencePractice:writedownthetopsentenceofeachpart(answersmayvary),1.假设你是李华，加拿大一所学校将于今年暑假组织学生来你校访问。其间，AndySmith将借住你家。请你代表全家写信给Andy，欢迎他的到来，并告知有关事宜。信的要点如下：上午：学校活动下午：游览市区晚上：看电视，玩游戏，聊天注意：1)词数：100左右2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯3)参考词汇：安排arrange,DearAndy,_.Iknowtheschoolwillorganizealotofthingsforyoutodointhemorning,butintheafternoon,Illshowyouaroundandtakeyoutosomeplacesofinterest.WellmostlystayathomeintheeveningwatchingTV,playinggames,andmeetingpeople.Imsurewellhaveawonderfultimeandenjoyeachotherscompany._Yourssincerely,LiHua,TopsentencePractice:writedownthetopsentenceofeachpart(answersmayvary)2.根据以下图画，写一篇英语短文，描述今昔通讯方式的变化，以及这些变化给人们生活带来的影响。注意：1）词数：100左右2）生词：通讯：communicationn,_.Peoplecancommunicatewitheachotheralmostatanyplaceandatanytime.Whatsmore,peoplehaveeasyaccesstotheInternet,whichenablesthemtosendandreceivee-mailswhe-nevertheylike.Withthesechanges,peoplespaceoflifehasbeenquickenedandpeoplesworkhasbeenmademoreefficient.Itusedtotakeseveraldaystohearfromeachother,butnowittakesonlyseveralminutes,eveniftheyareintwodifferentcontinents._,_Asweknow,musiccanproducealivelyandhappyatmosphere.Besides,afterhardstudy,musiccanbringusrelaxation,whichreducesthetiredness.Thiscanhelpusmakefullpreparationsforthenextclass.Listeningtomusicalsomakesusfeelhappy._Intheiropinion,theycantgettheexpectedeffectfromplayingmusic,fortheclassbreaktimeistooshort.Whatisneededmostduringtheclassbreakispeaceinsteadofnoiseproducedbymusic._Inthiswaystudentscanenjoymusicaswellashaveagoodrest.Besides,Isuggestchoosingsomemusicthatissuitableformiddleschoolstudents.,TopsentencePractice:writedownthetopsentenceofeachpart(answersmayvary)3.随着科技的进步，多媒体已走进很多学校的课堂。课间休息时，有些学校利用它来播放音乐。你班就“课间是否要播放音乐”展开讨论。请你根据下表所提供的信息用英语写一篇短文，陈述讨论结果及你个人的看法、建议。（字数120词左右）,Coherence（连贯性）,conjunction(连词),goodvocabularyandsentences,Makingcompositionslookbetter(形式),Dividingandcombinationofcontents(段中内容的分层与组合),fluentexpression;goodmasteryofsentencestructure;coherent(连贯),agoodcomposition,Coherence（连贯性）一、过渡用语表示时间关系的过渡用语：first,inthebeginning,firstofall,next,second,then,soon,meanwhile,meantime,inthemeantime,now,earlier,later,afterthat,afterward,atthatmoment,bythattime,fromthenon,presently,eventually,atlast,finally,before.,after.,since.,when.,while.,assoonas.,once.,until.表示添加的过渡用语：and,also,too,again,besides,also,another,moreover,furthermore,inaddition,aswellas,whatismore表示比较的过渡用语：like,alike,incomparison,likewise,inthesameway,atthesametime,similarly,inlikemanner,as,aswellas,Coherence（连贯性）表示对照的过渡用语：but,yet,still,however,unlike,instead,whereas,inspiteof,despite,onthecontrary,incontrast,ontheotherhand,though,although,foronethingforanother表示原因的过渡用语because,for,since,as,becauseof,dueto,owingto,thanksto表示结果的过渡用语：so,thus,therefore,hence,sothat,asaresult,inthis/thatway表示例证的过渡用语：forexample,forinstance,suchas,thatis,namely,inparticular,specifically,asproofof表示总结的过渡用语：tosumup,toconclude,tosummarize,onthewhole,allinall,lastly,inshort,inbrief,inaword,inconclusion,inclosing,insummary,Coherence（连贯性）表示强调的过渡用语：surely,certainly,truly,undoubtedly,clearly,indeed,infact,afterall,aboveall,mostimportant,tobesure,withoutdoubt,withoutaquestion,asamatteroffact表示重述的过渡用语：inotherwords,thatistosay,insimplerterms,simplystated,toputitdifferently表示综述的过渡用语：generally,generallyspeaking,ingeneral,inaword,inshort,onthewhole,asarule,forthemostpart表示让步的过渡用语：anyhow,anyway,ofcourse,however,inanycase,atanyrate,Coherence（连贯性）二、启、承、转、合（1）启：用于引导主题句，或用于主题句的后面，引导第一个发展句。first(ly),atfirst,firstofall,inthebeginning,atpresent,tobeginwith,lately,foronething,now,recently,ingeneral,generallyspeaking,inmyopinion,obviously。（2）承：用于承接主题句或第一个（或前一个）发展句Second,third,besides,furthermore,inaddition,moreover,whatismore,whatisworse,forexample,forinstance（例如）,inotherwords,inpa-rticular,inthesameway,afterawhile,fromnowon,meanwhile,atthesametime,bythetime,ofcourse,forthepurpose,infact,inreality,nodoubt,certainly,surely,obviously.（3）转：用来表示不同或相反的情况Afterall,but,yet,however,although,though,inspiteof,onthecontrary,incontrast,ontheotherhand,infact,asamatteroffact,otherwise,orelse,instead（4）合：用于总结段落中上文的内容，引导一个发展句或结论句，或用于文章的最后一句Finally,inconclusion,inbrief,inshort,insummary,therefore,toconclude,aboveall,asaresult,atlast,ingeneral,inaword,onthewhole.,Findoutalltheconjunctionsinthepassage,Homework(1)2005年福建高考卷(NMET)目前，学校存在少数学生考试作弊现象。某英文杂志社拟对此现象向中学生征文，标题是“MyOpiniononCheatinginExaminations”请根据下列提示用英语写一篇征文稿。内容要点如下：,Coherence（连贯性）,注意：1短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；2短文标题与开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；3词数：100左右。4参考词汇：作弊cheat（v.）MyOpiniononCheatinginExaminationsItisknowntousallthatsomestudentscheatinexaminationsatschool.,1Whenhearrives,pleasegivemeane-mail.（使用V-ing形式）2.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.（使用名词性从句）3.ThoughImweak,Illmaketheeffort.(使用倒装句)4.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用强调句型)5.Asaresult,theplanwasafailure.,Onhisarriving,pleasegivemeane-mail.,Whatsurpriseshimisthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings.,Coherence（连贯性）Appreciatethefollowingsentences,WeakasIam,Illmaketheeffort.,Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.,Theplanturnedouttobeafailure.,Coherence（连贯性）rewritethefollowingsentences6.Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.(使用过去分词)7.Theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool.(使用V-ing形式)8.Iwontbelievewhathesays.（使用状语从句）9.Weallthinkheisagreatman.10.Inourschool,therearetwenty-sixclassrooms.,Ourschoolismadeupoftwentysixclassrooms.,Followedbymanystudents,shewalkedoutofthelab.,Singingandlaughing,theywentbacktoschool.,Nomatterwhathesays,Iwontbelieve.,Weallthinkhighlyofhim.,AdviceonwritinggoodcompositionsTopsentence（主题句）Coherence（连贯性）conjunction(连词)goodvocabularyandsentencesDividingandcombinationofcontents(段中内容的分层与组合)Ending（opinion）,英语高考评分标准,2001年春季高考作文给澳大利亚的朋友写一封信，谈谈减负给学生的学习和生活带来的变化。Iwilltellyouthechangesofmylife.Before,wehadmanyclasseseveryday.Ihadtodoalotofhomeworkafterschool.Iwenttobedat11:30intheevening.Ihadnotimetoplay.Iwasverytired.NowIcanvisitmuseums.Icanlearncomputeranddrawing.Intheevening,Icanreadbooksandnewspap-ersandwatchTV.Igotobedat10:00now.,17分,2001年春季高考作文给澳大利亚的朋友写一封信，谈谈减负给学生的学习和生活带来的变化。Imverypleasedtotellyouthechangesinmylifesinceourhomeworkhasreduced.Beforethat,le