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1、 Step 3: Prediction STEPS:STEPS: 4. 4. 在解读首句时，可以采用在解读首句时，可以采用Given-NewGiven-New策略。策略。 Then one by one, they went to see Mr. Plumbean, late at night. one by one + late at night - cant wait to make. change his mind see Why did they go there? What did they see/do there? Whats the turning point? effect

2、Step 3: Prediction STEPS:STEPS: 4. 4. 在解读首句时，可以采用在解读首句时，可以采用Given-NewGiven-New策略。策略。 The street began to attract a lot of attention. attract - focus of attention attention Whose attention? Focus on what? Whats the turning point? effect /result /ending Step 3: Prediction 5.5.Polish the style. 1.与所给短文

3、及段落开头语的衔接程度与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度 (内容内容+逻辑逻辑） 4.上下文的连贯性。上下文的连贯性。 Then one by one, they went to see Mr. Plumbean, late at night. The next day, different people made their house different. For example, The street began to attract a lot of attention. Driven by curiosity many journalists came and asked “What

4、have you done to your houses” The street began to attract a lot of attention. Driven by curiosity, many journalists came and asked, “What have you done to your houses?” Step 3: Prediction 5.5.Polish the style. 1.与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度 4.上下文的连贯性。上下文的连贯性。 Which one do you favor? - therefore,

5、 besides/plus/additionally/furthermore, however, on the contrary, - Luckily/fortunately, unexpectedly, surprisingly, happily for him, Inspired by, Out of curiosity/ Driven by curiosity, Step 3: Prediction 5.5.Polish the style. 2.内容的丰富性和对所给关键词语的覆盖情况；内容的丰富性和对所给关键词语的覆盖情况； 丰富性：关注故事情节的跌宕起伏丰富性：关注故事情节的跌宕起伏

6、 The street began to attract a lot of attention. Whenever a stranger came to the street, he would say, “This is not a neat street.” They felt puzzled about what the people had done to their houses. Then all the people would say, “Our street is us and we are it. Our street is where we like to be, and

7、 it looks like all our dreams.” up down- up Step 3: Prediction 5.5.Polish the style. 3.应用应用语法结构语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；和词汇的丰富性和准确性； They would sit under the palm trees and drink lemonade and talk about their dreams all night long and whenever anybody visited his house, the very next day that person would se

8、t about changing his own house to fit his dreams. It seemed that all of them wanted to own an impressive and colorful house. Several months later, everybodys house on the street became a unique work of art. Sitting under the palm trees, they drink lemonade and talk about their dreams all night long

9、. And anyone who had visited the house set about changing his own house to fit his dreams the next day. Obviously, all the people wanted to own an impressive and colorful house. Sitting under the palm trees, they drank lemonade and talked about their dreams all night long . And anyone who had visite

10、d the house set about changing his own house to fit his dreams the next day. Obviously, all the people wanted to own an impressive and colorful house. Several months later, everybodys house on the street became a unique work of art. Step 3: Prediction 5.5.Polish the style. 3.应用语法结构和应用语法结构和词汇词汇的丰富性和准

11、确性；的丰富性和准确性； They would sit under the palm trees and drink lemonade and talk about their dreams all night long and whenever anybody visited his house, the very next day that person would set about changing his own house to fit his dreams. It seemed that all of them wanted to own an impressive and co

12、lorful house. Several months later, everybodys house on the street became a unique work of art. Sitting under the palm trees, they were treated to lemonade and shared their long- lost dreams all night long. The next day, Inspired by Mr. Plumbean, anyone who had visited the house changed his mind and

13、 started to paint his own house, based on his dream. Obviously, all the people wanted to own an impressive and colorful house and let their dreams fly. Several months later, with so many amazing houses lining the street, it took on a new look, as if by magic. Step 3: Prediction They would sit under

14、the palm trees and drink lemonade and talk about their dreams all night long and whenever anybody visited his house, the very next day that person would set about changing his own house to fit his dreams. It seemed that all of them wanted to own an impressive and colorful house. Several months later

15、, everybodys house on the street became a unique work of art. Sitting under the palm trees, they were treated to lemonade and shared their long- lost dreams all night long . The next day, Inspired by Mr. Plumbean, anyone who had visited the house changed his mind and started to paint his own house,

16、based on his dream. Obviously, all the people wanted to own an impressive and colorful house and let their dreams fly. Several months later, with so many amazing houses lining the street, the street took on a new look, as if by magic. (83words) no wonder the street became a 长短句交错长短句交错 Step 3: Predic

17、tion 5.5.Polish the style. 3.应用应用语法结构语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；和词汇的丰富性和准确性； very good - amazingly good badly ill- critically ill work hard at - apply oneself to Step 3: Prediction 5.5.Polish the style. 3. 两段相对平衡两段相对平衡 4. 不可滥用直接引语不可滥用直接引语 5.字数严格控制字数严格控制 110-150 Step 3: Prediction Then one by one, they went to

18、see Mr. Plumbean, late at night. They would sit under the palm trees and drink lemonade and talk about their dreams all night long and whenever anybody visited his house, the very next day would set about changing his own house to fit his dreams. It seemed that all of them wanted to own an impressiv

19、e and colorful house. Several months later, everybodys house on the street became a unique work of art. Step 3: Prediction The street began to attract a lot of attention. Whenever a stranger came to the street, he would say, “This is not a neat street.” They felt puzzled about what the people had do

20、ne to their houses. Then all the people would say, “Our street is us and we are it. Our street is where we like to be, and it looks like all our dreams.” All of them felt proud of their street and they led a happy life. Step 3: Prediction 确定主旨大意，明确前文作者态度和关键信息的前提下，在大脑思维中确定主旨大意，明确前文作者态度和关键信息的前提下，在大脑思维

21、中 建立一个对前文的理解框架和概括，在此基础上，继续建立顺序思维，建立一个对前文的理解框架和概括，在此基础上，继续建立顺序思维， 确定接下来在理解前文的基础上如何安排下面继续可能或者应该出现确定接下来在理解前文的基础上如何安排下面继续可能或者应该出现 的内容，续写部分内容不仅要求词汇和语言框架的准确使用，语言的的内容，续写部分内容不仅要求词汇和语言框架的准确使用，语言的 润色等，更重要的是，你要明白你应该如何调理续写内容，以使得其润色等，更重要的是，你要明白你应该如何调理续写内容，以使得其 和前文形成统一连贯的能够表述完整信息的表达内容。续写是读和写和前文形成统一连贯的能够表述完整信息的表达内容。续写是读和写 的统一，之间穿插了对阅读