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1、L o g oL o g oDiagram WritingFive writing steps vStep 1 Analyze the diagramvStep 2 Work out the writing style, tense and personvStep 3 Work out the structure and main pointsvStep 4 Write the whole passage vStep 5 Proofread and copyL o g oL o g oAnalyze the diagram. 此图表表明了自此图表表明了自1978年以来，我国海外留学年以来，我国

2、海外留学生回国人数的变化情况。生回国人数的变化情况。(占全国回归人员占全国回归人员25%)1978 2007 2008 200937,00015,0007000L o g oL o g oWork out the writing style, tense and person.L o g oL o g o体裁体裁Writing styles 时态时态 The tenses 记叙文记叙文 Narrative writing议论文议论文 Argumentative writing说明文说明文 Expository writing应用文应用文 Practical writing A story:A

3、social phenomenon:the present tensethe present tensethe present tenseCommon styles and tenses used in writing the past tense the present tense; the present continuous tense if necessaryL o g oL o g oWork out the writing style, tense and personvStyle: Narrative + Argumentative WritingvTense: Present

4、TensevPerson: Third + First (plural form)L o g oL o g oWork out the structure.Describe the graphDescribe the graphState the reasonsState the reasons Express your opinionExpress your opinionL o g oL o g ov增加：增加： increase go up rise climb / jumpv减少：减少： decrease go down drop fall / decline v稳定：稳定： rema

5、in stable / steadyHow to describe the diagram?L o g oL o g oSome adverbs to describe the trendincreaseincreaseincrease / gradually/slightly / rapidly / sharply / dramatically steadily / stablyslowlyquicklyHow to describe the diagram?L o g oL o g oDescribe the diagram.The graph shows the changes in t

6、he number of _ over the period from _to _ .returnees in Shanghai19782009How many periods does this graph show us?1978200720082009 1978 2007 2008 200937,00015,0007000(占全国回归人员占全国回归人员25%)slowlystablysharplyHow to describe the diagram?L o g oL o g oDescribe the graph:Between 1978 and 2007, _ overseas Ch

7、inese returned to Shanghai after completing their studies abroad. It _ about 25% of all returnees nationwide. The year 2008 witnessed _. The number of returnees _ 15,000. By the end of 2009, the number of the returnees to Shanghai _. L o g oL o g oDescribe the graph:Between 1978 and 2007, _ overseas

8、 Chinese returned to Shanghai after completing their studies abroad. It _ about 25% of all returnees nationwide. about / approximately 7,000made up / accounted forThe year 2008 witnessed _. The number of returnees _ 15,000. a steady increasea stable risereachedHow to describe the diagram?L o g oL o

9、g oa sharp riseBy the end of 2009, the number of the returnees to Shanghai _. A further _ will have returned to this city.had rise sharply 22,000At the end of 2009, the number of the returnees to Shanghai _ 37,000. rose toHow to describe the diagram?suddenly / sharply / abruptly L o g oL o g oPracti

10、ce!L o g oL o g oHow to draw conclusion from the diagram?As time goes by, _ overseas Chinese have returned to Shanghai.an increasing number of The data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion thatAs time goes by, there _ an increasing number of overseas Chinese _to Shanghai.returningareL o g oL

11、 o g oState the reasons.境外游激增的原因：境外游激增的原因：1.苏州经济发展快，人们的经济能力增强，苏州经济发展快，人们的经济能力增强，可以负担得起出国游。可以负担得起出国游。2.人们的文化水平提高，迫切希望去国外人们的文化水平提高，迫切希望去国外拓宽视野。拓宽视野。3.（学生自拟）（学生自拟）L o g oL o g oSeveral factors contribute to this.There are several reasons for this. Firstly,; Secondly，;Thirdly, For one thing, ; for anoth

12、er,On the one hand,;on the other hand, State the reasons.L o g oL o g oDescribe the picture.vDescription: As is described in the picture,. It describes a social phenomenon that L o g oL o g oExpress your opinion.vPersonal opinion: As far as I am concerned, In my opinion, For my point of view, Its ti

13、me that took/should take measures / action / steps The government should We common people shouldL o g oL o g oRevise your own compositions!L o g oL o g oExample 自自1978年以来，我国海外留学生回国人数逐年上升年以来，我国海外留学生回国人数逐年上升请在请在Shanghai Daily上发表一篇文章，根据图表阐上发表一篇文章，根据图表阐述海外人员归国情况，分析回流原因，并希望更多述海外人员归国情况，分析回流原因，并希望更多的海外学者回国

14、创业。的海外学者回国创业。回归原因：回归原因：1. 国家重视，政策优惠；国家重视，政策优惠；上海还提供更国际化上海还提供更国际化的生活方式。的生活方式。2. 我国经济高速发展，我国经济高速发展，回国发展空间大。回国发展空间大。3. （请自拟）（请自拟）(占全国回归人员占全国回归人员25%)1978 2007 2008 200937,00015,0007000参考词汇：制定政策 work out policies 海归人员 returneeThere has been a reversal of the brain drain since 1978 across the country. L o

15、 g oL o g o1. Returnees want to make use of the experience and skills gained while living abroad to make more contributions to the city.2. The economy of Shanghai is developing steadily while many other countries are undergoing financial crisis. So they feel more secure at home. 3. Studying and livi

16、ng abroad, they always miss their relatives and friends in the hometown. So they cant wait to return.L o g oL o g oOne possible version:our government values overseas Chinese scholars highly, encourages them to return home to start their own careers and has worked out a series of preferential polici

17、es. In Shanghai, the famous international city, they can enjoy a modern lifestyle. Chinas economy has been developing at a high speed, which provides them with a vast space of development. Many returnees have achieved outstanding success in scientific research or in high-level management. They are playing a more and more important role. the current global financial crisis leav