高中英语作文--建议信

1、建议信(1)-阐释原因；提出建议类请你代表你班同学给校长写一封信，反映一下你校食堂的几点问题，以引起学校重视，并针对问题提出两条合理建议。问题包括：1. 菜价昂贵，菜市单一；2.排队时间长，浪费午休时间；3.味道不佳，浪费现 象严重。注意：1.词数不少于120；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：食堂can tee nDear Prin cipal,Rece ntly, many stude nts are discuss ing the problems of the can tee n.I sin cerely hope you can adop

2、t my suggestio ns. Thank you!Yours,Li Hua作文范文：Dear Prin cipal,Recen tly, many stude nts are discuss ing the problems of the can tee n. The problems are as follows.Some students think the prices of the dishes are too high and that the choices are too limited. Another concern is that the time spent in

3、 waiting is so long that we have less time to have a rest. Meanwhile, some students think that the taste of the food is awful, which leads to a lot of waste.As far as I 'm concern ed, measures are supposed to be take n to improve the con diti ons of the can tee n. First of all, it ' suggeste

4、d that the prices be more reason able and the choices of dishes be more various. In addition , it ' better to open more service windows to reduce waiting time.I sincerely hope you can adopt my suggestio ns. Thank you!需注意的词汇、表达：1. delicious waitingtasten.味道tasty adj.可口的cook n.厨师cooker n.炊具price价格

5、2. lower /bri ng dow n the price 降低价格3. at a lower/reas on able price 以较低的价格4. varieties of dishes种类多样的菜品5. For one thi ng, For another,6. make sb n otdo sth7. wait /stand in line / in a queue for a long time8. The kinds of food are few.表达食堂出现的问题：9. The prices of dishes are so high that many of us c

6、an 'afford them.10. There are so few dishes to choose from , which is far from satisfactory. / which can 'satisfy our n eeds.11. It takes us so much time to stand in line, which decreases our time of rest at noon.12. The food in the can tee n does n'taste good./ nice .The taste of food i

7、n the can tee n isn ' good.13. The food in the can tee n tastes so bad that a lot of food is left and wasted14. It' a waste of time to stand in line for a long time.15. The food in the can tee n tastes so bad, which leads to a severe phe nomenon of wasti ng food.16. In the long run, it '

8、bad for our health and study.17. It goes without say ing that it will in flue nee our sleep in the afternoon.表达提出的建议：18. Improving the taste of the food is also a good solution to the problems.19. I think it 'necessary to provide more kinds of food.20. It' high time that we took measures to

9、solve the problems.So it 'high time for us to take measures21. To solve the problems, I think the can tee n should set up a new figure 形象and improve the present condition to satisfy the students ' needs.22. We hope the can tee n can provide us with dishes of a high quality at a reas on able

10、price.23. The can tee n should ope n more win dows so that we n eed n 'wait so long.24. As far as I'm concern ed, the can tee n should attach importa nce to the quality. What 'more, differe nt kinds of food should be provided.25. Measures are supposed to be take n to improve the con diti

11、 ons of the can tee n.建议模板：Dear .,I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to .弓丨出话题 .Here are a fewsuggestio ns. First of all, it is importa nt to do sth. Then, it also helps to do sth. Besides, it should be a good idea to do sth.建议句型积累：1. Many ways can con tribute to solvi n

12、g the problem, but I thi nk the followi ng may be the most effective on es.2. I ' like to make some suggestions on 3. It' of great importa nee for sb to do sth.It' n ecessary for sb to do sth4. It would be a good idea for sb to do sth. / It would be a better idea if 5. It con tributes /h

13、elps a lot if 6. I suggest that ./ My suggestion is that It' suggested / advised / recomme nded that7. You ' better do sth./ We ' better do sthIt' better to do sth8. Measures are supposed to be take n to do sthWe are supposed to take effective measures to do sth9. It' high time t

14、hat sb djd. sth. / It' high time for sb to do sth建议信(2)-阐释原因；提出建议类假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫Sad Mother的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，用英语给这位家长回复。I ' m the mother of a fourteeiyear-old. Recently I have found that my daughter told lies to me. The other day she told me that she did well in the final ex

15、am. However I found out she failed in math and En glish. What should I do?写作要点：1.说明了解她的问题；2.帮她分析孩子撒谎的原因；3.提出至少两条建议要求：1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。2.短文词数不少于100 (不含已写好的局部)。3.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。4.书写需清晰、工整。Hi, Sad Mother,I have lear ned that作文范文：Hi,Sad Mother,I have learned that your daughter told lies to you.As a peer

16、of your daughter, I think the reas ons are as follows.To begin with, maybe the reason why your daughter told a lie is that you are too strict with her and she is afraid you will punish her if she tells you the truth. Besides, nowadays, parents put too much pressure on their kids. In order not to let

17、 you down, she has no choice but to lie .Here are some suggestions for you. First of all , you'd be卄er have a heart-to -heart talk with her, making her know being honest is more important than scores. In addition, don't be too strict. It's suggested that _you should allow her to make som

18、e minor 微小的mistakes.I sincerely hope you can adopt my suggestions.需要注意积累的词汇、短语、和句子:主格宾格形容性物主代词名词性物主代词反身代词第一人称Imemymi nemyselfweusouroursourselves第二人称youyouyouryoursyourselfyouyouyouryoursyourselves第三人称hehimhishishimselfsheherherhersherselfitititsitsitselftheythemtheirtheirsthemselves2. Don 'sad.

19、3. You should give her more en courage.4. She may afraid that if she fails in the exam, you will punish her.5. If she has difficulty in lear ning, you should in spire she and help she out.6. She does n'twa nt you an gry.7. Please not to be so worried.8. One of the reason is that she isn 'dar

20、e to tell you the truth.9. Because she afraid pare nts.10. So she don 'wa nt to men tio n it.11. You should apology to her.12. You'd better to en courage her to be a hon est people.13. You'd better be care about her health and study.14. I 'm very un dersta nd your con diti on.15. She

21、 may does n't want you to be an gry.daughter 女丿儿expectation 期望 be worried / concerned about 担忧、calm down冷静下来at a loss迷惑不解keep in touch with 保持联系be strict with sb in sth 在某方面对某人要求严格heart-to-heart推心置腹的idea注意想法test测试text文本cheat欺骗 want sb to do sth想让某人做某事1. It was because she did n'twa nt to let

22、 you dow n that she prete nded to achieve high scores.2. She isn 'aware that the lies have hurt both you and herself.3. Being a teenager, she needs to be encouraged. And it'syou who can do this.4. It is probably your high expectati ons to her that makes her decide to lie.5. You should figure

23、 out the reas on why she lied to you before solv ing the problem.6. It goes without say ing that l ying is bad behavior.7. The reason why she didn 'tell you the truth may be that she didn 'twant to let you down.8. It is suggested that you should have a face-to-face talk with her so that she

24、might ope n her heart to you.9. To avoid the lies, you should encourage her rather than blame her when she fails in exams10. The reas on that leads to the problem may be various.11. Confronted with 面对these problems, you should take a series of effective measures to help you daughter.12. As far as I

25、' concern ed, it' better to com muni cate with her in a frien dly way to let her know it ' wrong to tell lies.13. It 'suggested that you should attach more importa nce to physical and men tal health. Moreover,it' better to en courage her to do what she wan ts.改错：1. There are some

26、 advice.建议信3为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART 专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie,收到一封署名为 Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容 易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1表示理解并给予抚慰；2. 提出建议并说明理由。your trouble.4. Carried by two, burdens are lighter.5. It 'high time that you should relieve your pressure.6. Measures are

27、supposed to be taken to control your temper.7. There is no denying that every one will lose his temper whe n someth ing un expected happe ns.8. Instead of being angry, what is important for you is to learn to control your temper from now on.9. It's com mon for tee nagers like you to lose your te

28、mper, which of course will have a bad effect on your normal study and life.1词数120左右；2. 信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；3. 信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：temper n.脾气，情绪Hi Worried ,I' m sorry to know that you ' re having such a had time at the moment.Yours,JamieHi Worried,I'm sorry to know that you're havi n

29、g such a bad time at the mome nt. The truth is that every one will have one of those periods whe n things seem to be going wron g, I quite un dersta nd how you are feeli ng now and there is no n eed to worry about it so much. The importa nt thi ng is to lear n to con trol your temper so that you may

30、 not do or say anything you 'lregret. Here are three useful tips.First of all, talk to some one you trust about the trouble you 're faced with, which is a good way of lett ing your an ger out without hurt ing others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as ph

31、ysical exercise is an effective way to get rid of an ger. Last but not least, rema in optimistic about your future. Having a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.I hope you'll soon become calmer and better.Yours,JamieHighlights:1. First, you are supposed to figur

32、e out what makes you upset,and then keep away from it.2. What' more, you are supposed to take an active part in outdoor activities to relax.3. To solve the problem as soon as possible, you can open your heart to a good friend, talking about建议信高二下期已经过去半学期，高三已经在向同学们招手。随着学习和心理压力日益加大，一些同学的正常生活受到影响，如

33、睡眠不好，身体也开始亮起了红灯。请你根据以下要点，给学校的英语刊物写一篇稿子，向同学们提出建议，并简述理由或举例 说明：1、劳逸结合；2、健康饮食；3、适当锻炼；4、保持乐观心态。 注意：1、短文必须包括所列内容；2、词数120左右；3、文章开头已给出；4写成一篇完整的短文，不要逐条列举。作文范文：With the approach of Senior 3, students are under increasingly great pressure, which has affected some students, preVfenting them sleeping well and ca

34、using problems with their health. Inorder to improve the condition, I ' like to offer some advice.First, Comb ine work with rest . Keep in mind that all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy Second, it is important to keep a healthy and balaneed diet . Staying away from junk food and eating hea

35、lthy food like vegetables and fish will ben efit you . Third, go outdoors and take regular exercise, as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of pressure. Last but not least, good health means being both physically and men tally healthy. Keep ing an optimistic state of mind willcon tribut

36、e to a goodphysical state.I sincerely hope that the suggestions above will be of great help to you.句型及短语积累：1. My advice is as follows.2. The followi ng is my advice.3. Fin ally, rema in optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lift ing your spirits.4. The

37、n it also helps to take proper exercise. Not only can it stre ngthe n your health, but also it can make you feel relaxed.5. Go outdoors and play team games with your friends as it is an effective way to keep healthy.6. Second, you may as well take some exercise, which is a good way to keep healthy.7

38、. Third, go outdoors and take exercise. Not only can it help stude nts keep healthy, but also it is a good way to reduce pressure.8. First of all, I think it is a good idea to combine study and a good rest, which can help us keep en ergetic and active.9. Second, you are supposed to eat healthy food

39、as it will offer stude nts eno ugh en ergy.10. In addition, you must eat healthy food so as to keep fit, which is of great importance to your study.11. As an old saying goes, All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy .12. Gone are the days when we were at senior 2 and the senior 3 is saying hello to us.13. Go out to breathe fresh air and rel