八篇短文改错

1、2015高考英语：短文改错练习（201408）】第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分1 0分） 下面短文中共有10处语言错误，请在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写上修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不给分。It can be seen, more and more people own mobile phones in China now. At the end of 2002, ther

2、e were 20 millions mobile phone users. By 2005 a number reached up to 30 million. People have found mobile phones convenience. They can get in touch to each other whenever and wherever they like. Therere different functions to meeting different needs, such as surf the Internet. However, it may bring

3、 us some trouble. For an example, the radiation from the phone may do harm our health. In spite of this, the number of people having mobile phones are increasing steadily.【思路点拨】 注意固定句型的应用，名词的单数形式，固定搭配及主谓一致。【答案解析】1. ItAs 正如我们看见的，现在中国越来越多的人拥有手机。这里是非限制性定语从句，用As引导。2. millionsmillion  到2002年底，有2千万的手

4、机用户。数词后面加million3.athe到2005年，这个数字到了3千万。这里是特指“手机用户的数量”，athe4.convenienceconvenient人们发现手机很方便，使用find +宾语+形容词：convenienceconvenient5. to -with get in touch with sb ,与某人取得联系。6. meetingmeet有不同的功能满足不同的需求。这里是不定式做目的状语7. surfsurfing such as后面接动名词： surfsurfing8.去掉an For example“例如”：去掉an9.our前加to手机的辐射会对我们的健康造成伤

5、害。Do harm to“对造成伤害”，our前加to10.areis 拥有手机的人的数量还在稳定上升。主语是the number of，谓语是单数：areis第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）One day my uncle had been riding a horse in rain when he reached a small restaurant. Wet and coldly, and he wanted to warm himself very much. However, the restaurant was too crowded with p

6、eople that he could not get near the fire. “Taking some fish to my horse!” he called out to the waiter. “Sorry, sir. But a horse didnt eat fish!” the waiter answered. “Never mind, just do as I tell you,” my uncle said. The crowd of people felt surprising at the strange order. To see a horse eat fish

7、, all of whom ran out. Having the whole room to himself, my uncle sat down besides the fire and began warm himself. 【文章综述】讲述一个人骑马到了一个餐馆，又冷又湿，想一个办法让自己取暖的故事。 【答案解析】76. rain前加the 考查形容词。In the rain在雨中；77.coldly cold 考查形容词。句意：又冷又湿，他非常想温暖一下自己。Cold形容词做伴随状语。78.去掉and 考查句子结构。And应该连接两个句子，但wet and cold只是伴随状语，故去

8、年掉and.79. too so 考查固定结构。句意：然而这个餐馆如何拥挤以至于不能靠近火源。So that 如此以至于。80. Taking Take 考查祈使句。句意：给我的马一些鱼。81. didnt doesnt 考查动词的时态。句意：对不起，先生，马不会吃鱼。表示客观事实，故用一般现在时。82. surprising surprised考查形容词。句意：许多人对这个奇怪的菜单感到很吃惊。修饰人用surprised。83. whom them 考查代词。句意：为了看看马吃鱼，所有的人都跑出去了。Them代指的是人们。84. besides beside 考查介词。句意：屋子里只剩下他自

9、己，坐在火堆旁边开始暖和。85.warm前加to或warm warming考查动词的用法。Begin to do 或begin doing 开始做某事。短文改错I took part in a geography research study group in last term. Our 76 _topic was environmental pollution and protection. We took a variety 77 _of pictures showed the present pollution conditions of our city. To 78 _our su

10、rprised, there are still a lot of people doing silly things to our 79 _surroundings. Some people throw the rubbish anywhere they like, 80 _some cars give off harmful gases, and waste water is poured in 81 _rivers by some factories. Worse still, people sometimes had to make 82 _their ways through dus

11、ty winds as a result of pollution. Through 83 _our research, we come to know what everybody must pay attention 84 _to our environment and some measures should be taken to protect.85 _【参考答案】76. 去掉第二个in. 77. 正确. 78. showedshowing 或showed-which showed. 79. surprisedsurprise. 80. 去掉the 81. in-into 82. h

12、ad-have. 83. waysway 84. whatthat或去掉what. 85. protect后加it. 短文改错There is a teacher who I can never forget her in my life. That 76._was in my old days whenever I was in the middle school and I 77._once had lots of teachers who were very strict to us except 78._one female who was young, pretty as well

13、kind-hearted. 79._It is very hard of me to describe what she was like, but she had 80._her own personality that quickly conquered us all. She asked 81._us to elect our monitor. She let us to decide where to go for 82._an outing. She didnt get angry even if any of them was late for 83._school. It was

14、 not long until most of us behaved very well 84._because we did find her an elderly sister who we can rely on. 85._【参考答案】76. 去掉her 77. whenever when 78. to with 79. well as 80. of for 81. 82. 去掉第二个 to 83. them us84. until before 85. can could短文改错第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）I am worker at the tap water company

15、. I find that 76._people were becoming more and more careful about 77._health .If the tap water appear a little bit unclear 78._and muddy ,the telephone will ring again and again. 79._Fortunately, people do not pay equal attention to the 80._protection of water resources .For the sake of our 81._hea

16、lth ,we should take good care our water resources 82._and environment .There is a saying “whether we do 83._not careful protect our environment the last drops 84._of water we will see them will be our own tears.” 85._【参考答案】I am worker at the tap water company. I find that 76._a _people were becoming

17、 more and more careful about 77._are_health .If the tap water appear a little bit unclear 78._appears_and muddy ,the telephone will ring again and again. 79._or_Fortunately, people do not pay equal attention to the 80._Unfortunately_protection of water resources .For the sake of our 81._ _health ,we

18、 should take good care our water resources 82._of_and environment .There is a saying “whether we do 83._if_not careful protect our environment the last drops 84._careful_of water we will see them will be our own tears.” 85. them短文改错As students, we have classes from early morning till late afternoon.

19、 Therefore, take a ten-minute break 76. _between class is definitely important, even necessary. 77. _Otherwise we may feel both physically or mentally tired. 78. _During the ten-minute break we did something to get 79. _rid of tiredness. What we need is to have real rest, 80. _instead of getting eve

20、n tired. So dont do anything that 81. _will make you too excited. My ten-minute break is always pleased. 82. _I usually do some simple exercises. Sometime I have a free chat 83. _with my classmates or just take a walk during the break. 84. _When the new class begins, I feel freshly again.85. _【参考答案】

21、76. take-taking. 77.classclasses. 78.orand. 77. 79. diddo. 80. real-a real81. tiredmore tired. 82. pleasedpleasing. 83. SometimeSometimes. 84. 正确。 85. freshly-fresh. 【短文改错】Dear Anish, Here are the information about Manchester University 1._It is about 200 miles far away from London and it 2_has a ve

22、ry big schoolyard.You can live in the school 3_or near the school.They have all sorts of course.4_ _Im sure you will find one you like it.I know you 5_are particular interested in human rights.So I will 6_see that there is anything on their website 7_I will send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport 8_when you arrived.You met him a few year