专四写作讲座之 作文闪光点

1、高分作文标志1是否长短句交叉;2是否会使用插入语;3用词是否多样,准确,形象;4关键词是否换用,切勿老用重复词;5句型使用是否准确、地道。下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项:1. 适当用被动替换主动,这样能更客观的反映事实 , 句子开 头不要总是用 we / I (比如写结尾时不用 we should pay attention to而用 Attention should be paid to. 举个经典结尾: It is, therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service in

2、dustry like that. By doing so, its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2. 善于使用插入语,比如说把副词、连接词等,作插入语放 在中间,一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后,两边分别加上 逗号。如 however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中 间,一般放在动词,助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。比如说:Other individuals, however, take the attitude that 3. 一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的替换太宽泛的。 (考

3、试 中一般不要出现 good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等 比如上面例子 applicable 替换 proper, approaches 替换ways, implement替换 carry out, sharpen ones competitive edge替换 e nhance ones competitiveness(提高某物竞争力 以下是 30个最经典的替换词,各位同学可以参考一下。1.individuals,characters, folks替换 (people ,persons2: positive, favorable

4、, rosy (美好的 , promising (有希望的 , perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替换 good 3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的 替换 bad 如 果 bad 做表语,可以有 be less impressive替换eg. An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing

5、time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation, as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive. 4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many 。 。 。 , if not most替换 many.注:用 many, if not most 一定要小心, many 后一定要有词。 Eg. Many individuals, if not

6、most, harbor the idea that. 同理 用 most, if not all ,替换 most.5. a slice of, quiet a few , several替换 some6. harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that 替 think (因为是书面语,所以要加 that7. affair ,business ,matter 替换 thing8: sha

7、red 代 common9.reap huge fruits 替换 get many benefits10. for my part ,from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion 11. Increasing(ly,growing 替换 more and more( 注意没有 growingly 这种形式。 所以当修饰名词时用 increasing/growing.修饰形容词,副词用 increasingly.Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.Sth is increasingly popular with the

8、advancement of sth.12.little if anything, 或 little or nothing替换 hardly 13.beneficial, rewarding替换 helpful, 14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替换 customer 15.exceedingly, extremely, intensely 替换 very16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable . 替换 unnecessary, avoidable17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts

9、a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb take interest in / sb. be interested in18.capture one's attention替换 attract one's attention. 19.facet,demension,sphere 代 aspect20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换 cau

10、se.22. There are several reasons behind sth 替换 .reasons for sth 23.desire 替换 want.24.pour attention into 替换 pay attention to25.bear in mind that 替换 remember26. enjoy, possess 替换 have(注意 process 是过程的意思 27. interaction替换 communication28.frown on sth替换 be against , disagree with sth29.to name only a fe

11、w, as an example 替换 for example, for instance30. next to / virtually impossible,替换 nearly / almost impossible常用连接词To Add:and, again, and then, besides, equally important, finally, further, furthermore, nor, too, next, lastly, what's more, moreover, in addition, first (second, etc.,To Compare:whe

12、reas, but, yet, on the other hand, however, nevertheless, on the other hand, on the contrary, by comparison, where, compared to, up against, balanced against, but, although, conversely, meanwhile, after all, in contrast, although this may be trueTo Prove:because, for, since, for the same reason, obv

13、iously, evidently, furthermore, moreover, besides, indeed, in fact, in addition, in any case, that isTo Show Exception:yet, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, of course, once in a while, sometimesTo Show Time:immediately, thereafter, soon, after a few hours, finally, then, later, pr

14、eviously, formerly, first (second, etc., next, and thenTo Repeatin brief, as I have said, as I have noted, as has been noted,To Emphasize:definitely, extremely, obviously, in fact, indeed, in any case, absolutely, positively, naturally, surprisingly, always, forever, perennially, eternally, never, e

15、mphatically, unquestionably, without a doubt, certainly, undeniably, without reservationTo Show Sequence:first, second, third, and so forth. A, B, C, and so forth. next, then, following this, at this time, now, at thispoint, after, afterward, subsequently, finally, consequently, previously, before t

16、his, simultaneously, concurrently, thus, therefore, hence, next, and then, soonTo Give an Example: for example, for instance, in this case, in another case, on this occasion, in this situation, take the case of, to demonstrate, to illustrate, as an illustration,To Summarize or Conclude:in brief, on

17、the whole, summing up, to conclude, in conclusion, as I have shown, as I have said, hence, therefore, accordingly, thus, as a result, consequently, on the whole一、常用句型及单词A. 开头1、 There is an interesting and instructive picture which goes like this: _.2、 _ has become a hot topic among people, especiall

18、y among the young, and heated debates are right on their way.3、 Recently, _has been brought to such popular attention that _(e.g. Recently, the problem of global warming has been brought to such popular attention that governments at all levels place it on the top of the agenda.4、 One of our ancient

19、philosophers said, _. Chinese people have always been holding this idea to be one of their standards of morality.5. No one, regardless of race, religion or nationality, would deny that. 或:Everyone would agree that.B 结尾1 Only in this way/Only when /Only through , will/can we或:It is only if/when that

20、we will It is only if all sides of society take their roles fully that we will achieve the society we want.2 As long as we will be able to /the problem is bound toAs long as we persist in spreading scientific knowledge among the masses, all the superstitions are bound to go out of our life.3 With a

21、constant/steady improvement in (或 With the gradual worsening of sth. willWith a steady improvement in our legal system, thisproblem will sure be solved earlier or later.4 In a word there is every/little chance/probability/possibility that. in time to come.C. 中间1 . A great number of solutions are bei

22、ng offered. Some people suggest that _. Others argue that _.2 . But I don t think it is a very good way to solve _. For instance, _. Worst of all, _.3 . My suggestion to deal with/solve/relieve the problem are as follows. In the first place, . Secondly, . Finally4 . If we let the situation go as it

23、is, . By that time, . 如果让这种情况继续发展下去,那么到那个时候,。 5 If , will there be anything that can make me even happier? 如果 (我们怎么怎么做 , 那将没有比这令我更高兴 的了。2. It 结构1 It is advisable to exercise(拥有 patience in dealing with such complicated situations.2 It is necessary that young and old people should communicate more wi

24、th each other.3 It is certain that fresh air and exercises are more enjoyable and beneficial than medicine.4 It is well known that many of our problems are caused at least in part by failure to communicate.5 It seemed to me that the only thing that matters is to learn through failure.6 It pays in th

25、e long run (从长远的角度看 to introduce new technique.3. 动名词或分词结构1 Drinking , eating , and smoking excessively can do severe harm to even a young person's health.2 The art of communication requires learning the language and culture of the audience.4. 递进式结构1 Fresh vegetables are nutritious (有 营 养 的 ; fu

26、rthermore , they re cheaper than frozen ones.2 Helping others will not only bring joy into otherpeople's lives, but also added happiness into our own.5. 表示重要性或必要性1 It's important to set aside time for relaxation, hobbies , and entertainment as well.2 A harmonious atmosphere is essential (nec

27、essary / critical / indispensable to achieve success.3 Global warming can endanger our lives so much that we are obliged to make a careful study of the problem and try to find out a lasting solution to it.6. 表示目的1 The purpose of a test is to show what you have leaned about a subject.2 The intent is

28、not to catch everyone but rather to catch enough to spread the word.3 Competitive sports are recommended to young adults to prepare them for the competitive world of college and business.7. 表示结果1 Too much work and too little rest may lead to loss of health.2 If you try to learn too many things at a

29、time, you may get confused.3 By consistent hard work we will be able to achieved our objectives (目标 .8. 表示对比和比较1 Jobs and work do much more than most of us realize to provide happiness and contentment.2 Work is more than a necessity for most human beings; it is the focus of their lives , the source

30、of their identity and creativity.3 Rather than a punishment or a burden , work is the opportunity to realize one's potential.4 The more scientists find out, the more questions they are unable to answer.9. 表示条件或假设的结构1 Without the distraction of TV, they might sit around together after dinner.2 As

31、 long as the brain is given plenty of exercise it keeps its power.3 Were it left to me to decide whether we should _,I should not hesitate a moment to prefer the latter.4 Without a degree and with no vocational experience their chances of getting good jobs are slim.10. 表示举例1 Take_for example,2 An il

32、lustration(例证 may make the point clear.11. 表示采取措施1 The government should be taking effective(有效的 measures to overcome current difficulties.2 As college students, we are obliged to make every effort to help support the Olymic Games.3 The school authorities should invest more energy and money in impro

33、ving working and living conditions for the teachers.12. 表示让步关系1 While it may be more convenient to possess a car, it is also expensive and troublesome at times.2 Although I do not earn a great deal of money for this job , the pleasure I receive from the work makes it worthwhile.13. 表示因果或前提关系1 Becaus

34、e of(owing to the pressure (压 力 of examinations , many students are left with little or no free time. 2 Perhaps it's because few of us know how to accept compliments (赞扬 gracefully.3 That is why housework is considered as such a dreary grind (乏味的苦差事 。4 The reason for this is that14. 表示存在的问题1 One

35、 of the greatest problems facing the 21st century will be what to do with all the rubbish produced in the world.2 To travel abroad is a desire shared by many people, but few can afford to do it.3 Cheating is now considered to be a major problem in colleges and universities.4 Many people find it hard

36、er and harder to keep up with the radical changes that characterize our time.5 At first thought, the problem seems far too involved (复杂 , but it can certainly be solved when seriously dealtwith .15. There be结构1 There are other techniques that might help you with you studying.2 There is much that we

37、can learn from the Chinese classic works.3 There is no sense(道理 in leaving important decisions to inexperienced people.精彩废话万能句The rapid progress in science and technology has given a powerful shove-ahead to the productive forces of the world and the economic and social development of humanity. 科技的快速

38、 发展带给世界生产力和人类经济和社会的发展一个强劲的 推动力 can help one stand tall and aim far, broaden one's vision and give full play to one's intelligence and wisdom on the broad arena of the modernization drive. 站的高看的远 , 开扩自己的 视野 , 在现代化建设的大舞台上充分发挥个人才智Let s join hands and work together to contribute a greater part t

39、o the harmony of our society. 让我们携手共同奋斗, 为建 设和谐社会作出更大的贡献!Famous scientist Marie Curie once said,” Nothing in life is to be feared; it is only to be understood. ” In the same ways, once we understand the causes of this phenomenon, we can confidently believe that we will solve the problem with the fol

40、lowing means:精彩虚词1. admittedly 应当承认 : Admittedly, a few governments have taken timid measures.2. simply 简而言之 : The answer is simply money.3. surely 肯定地 : This is surely the most short-sighted policy you could imagine.4. increasingly 不 断增 长地 While money is eagerly collected in vast sums with one hand

41、, it is paid out in increasingly vaster sums with the other.下面举一篇某位同学写的优秀作文(14 分的例子，看看他是 如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写 作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。 Computer and I I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination o

42、n me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me. exceedingly 替换 very thrilling 替换 exciting sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be

43、interested in sth. google 替换 search an army of 替换 a lot of The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing numbers of individuals.

44、 It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure! The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么 事情； Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular Coincident with 非常地道的句型，表达“与一致”的意思，替换 With Advancement 替换 development Pour into ( flood into / swarm into 替换 enter into Current ( currently 替换 now Appeal to sb. 替换 sb. be interested in sth. Growing numbers of individuals 替换 more and more people It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型， 说某事是毫不夸张的 For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by littl