高考英语二轮复习读后续写深度解读(七)

1、2021届高考英语二轮复习读后续写深度解读（七）2021届高考英语读后续写深度解读（七）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。The spot of red was what first caught Randy Heiss s attention 。 He was hiking the remote expanse of land behind his ranch （ 大牧场）in Patagonia , Arizona, a town near the U.S 。 -Mexico border, and covered the grass was a balloon-

2、or at least the remains of one. Heiss walked toward it with his dog , Feliz, thinking he should pick up the latex（孚L胶）pieces and throw them away.That s when he noticed the balloon s string was attached to a piece of paper 。all in Spanish. My SpanishDayami, it read on one side , in a child s writing

3、。 A hand-drawn bow accompanied the word。Heiss turned the paper over quickly. It was a numbered list isnt very good, but I could see it was a Christmas list, “ he said 。Heiss was charmed. He thought that a child had tried to send Santa Claus a Christmas wish list by balloon , something he used to do

4、himself when he was a kid. Nobody had ever returned the lettersHeiss had sent into the air , but he wondered whether he couldn t find the child who had sentthis one 。It would be difficult, but Heiss knew about 20 miles to the southwest , just across the border , was the city of Nogales, Mexico, with

5、 a population of about a quarter million。”Based on theprevailing wind （盛行风）,I was pretty sure that s where it came from, “ he said 。Heiss brought the note home to his wife, who is fluent in Spanish and helped him translate the list 。They determined that Dayami, probably a girl, had asked for a doll,

6、 a dollhouse , clothes, and art supplies among other things.Heiss then posted about his request on the Internet , attaching photos, hoping some of his friends in Nogales might know the girls family. A few days passed with no leads; Heiss worried that time was running out before ChristmasTherefore ,

7、he decided to send a private message to Radio XENY an AMradio station based in Nogales if they could help.续写要求：1 。所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2。至少使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:To his surprise , someone from the station called him back right away.Paragraph 2:Th

8、ey bought just about everything on Dayamis list【思路点拨】1 .文本细解读，确定续写结局本文是一篇记叙文，讲述了 Heiss在徒步旅行途中发现了附在气上的“圣诞礼物清单”，后来在懂西班牙语的妻子的帮助下，他们希望通过网络寻找这位用气球送愿望清单的女孩Dayami,并决定帮她实现梦想.但是在数天没有结果后，他们决定在圣诞节之前通过当地的无线广播寻找她。续写部分应为故事的结局，即Heiss夫妇是否找到 Dayami且帮助她实现圣诞梦想。根据文章内容可知， Heiss夫妇热情、富有爱心，明确了 Dayami的所在之地且通过各种方式找寻Dayami,因此

9、续写结局可设置为他们找到了 Dayami一家并送了圣诞节礼物给她 .2 .段首句解读，确定续写方向续写第一段首句写道“让他惊讶的是，很快就有人从电台给他打电话了”；第二段首句写道“他们买了Dayami的清单上的全部礼物”。由此可知第一段内容应着重描写他们得到了电台的帮助.他们通过电台扩散寻找Dayami的消息，最终找到了 Dayami;这与第二段段首他们买了Dayami的清单上的全部礼物形成巧妙衔接。续写第二段内容应着重描写他们前往电台办公室见Dayami,以及一些简单的交流.3 .划线词解读，规划续写细节1）分类划线词人物Heiss, Dayami , wife环境Radio XENY, f

10、amily事物ballon , Christmas list , note , Internet动作-find2）构思具体情节第一段具体情节：Heiss的妻子（wife）帮助他跟电台（Radio XENY）解释这一切一最终电台方同意 帮助他们寻找（find ）小女孩（Dayami） 一第二天早上，电台就给他们回复说找到小女孩一家（ family ） 了 一 Heiss希望能和小女孩一家见个面；第二段具体情节：Heiss夫妇买了要送给 Dayami的礼物一他们开车去了电台，终于见到了 Dayami一家人一寒暄中了解到了挂着愿望清单的气球的故事【范文欣赏】Paragraph 1:To his su

11、rprise , someone from the station called him back right away. Heiss s wife helped explain the situation to Radio XENY host, who talked on the air about the quest to find Dayami and posted it on the station s website. The next morning , Heiss awoke to another message from Radio XENY They had located

12、Dayami, an eight year-oldgirl , and her family , who indeed livedin Nogales. Would they be willing to arrange a get-together at the radio station?Paragraph 2:They bought just about everything on Dayami s list . They also bought a few other toys for good measureo Then the Heisses drove for 45 minutes

13、 , crossing the border into Nogales. They arrived at the Radio XENY offices with presents and finally met her. Her parents explained to the Heisses that Dayami had been writing a letter containing her Christmas list to Santa and sending it by2021届高考英语二轮复习读后续写深度解读(七)balloon for years, but this was th

14、e first time anyone had found the note.“It was a beautiful,beautiful experience, “ Heiss said. He paused 。”Quite healing for us, he added.亮点积累1 .词汇locate v.找到；get-together 聚会；contain v 包含，包括2 .短语on the air在广播中；be willing to愿意做某事;for good measure 另外，附力口3 .提分句式Her parents explained to the Heisses that

15、 Dayami had been writing a letter containing her Christmas list to Santa and sending it by balloon for years, but this was the first time anyone had found the note 。分析1该句使用了 explain to sb 。 that。.的宾语从句结构，意为“对某人解释说某事”。宾语的后置定语;but连接了两个分句，后一分句套用句型“it was从句中，containing 为现在分词，作letterthe first time (that)

16、 sb 。 had done sth 。”结构，意为“这是某人第一次做某事”译文她的爸妈向Heiss 一家解释了这个奇妙的故事：Dayami近几年来每年都写一封包含她圣诞愿望清单的信并通过气球将它们送出去，但这是第一次有人发现了这封信。课后练习阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。2021届高考英语二轮复习读后续写深度解读（七）It was 11 p.m. The storm had moved directly over his two-story wood home in the rural town.Then he heard the smoke alarm bee

17、ping. Lubeck quickly walked down the stairs barefoot to investigate ; he opened the door to the basement , and flames exploded out 。Lubeck fled back upstairs to call 911 from his bedroom, but the phone didn t work. And when he tried to go down the exterior stairway, he was stopped by a wall of flame

18、s. I startedpanicking, he says.Lubeck realized he was trapped. His daughter and young granddaughters, who lived with him, were away for the night 。 His house was three miles off the main road and so well hidden by pines （松树）that Lubeck knew calling for help would be fruitless.“I could hear the fire

19、moving through the house boom, crash, bang, boom and you know itscoming for you , “ Lubeck says. The thing that got me was to die alone 。 Not to say goodbye to _ _ _ someone.Up a hill about a third of a mile away lived Lubecks closest neighbors, Jeremie Wentworth and his wife 。 Wentworth had been ly

20、ing down listening to crickets chirping （蟋蟀鸣叫）when itoccurred to him that the sound was more like a smoke detector。 He jumped out of bed , grabbeda phone and a flashlight , and headed down the hillside toward the noise. That s when he saw the roiling mountain of black smoke 。He dialed （拨号）911 , then

21、 called out, “Is anyone there ? as he approached the house.Wentworth knew that Lubeck lived in the house.Then he heard ,“Help me! I m trapped ! ” coming from the balcony off Lubeck s bedroom.On the phone , the 911 official warned Wentworth not to enter the house 。 But there was no wayI was going to

22、listen to Don scream and die in that fire, he says. I told him,Im sorry,but I m going in.Inside the house, windows broke into pieces all around him。”I was yelling ,Don, whereare you ? Then I had to run outside to catch my breath 。”续写要求：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .至少使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为

23、你写好；4 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1The wind parted the black smoke just enough for him to glimpse Lubeck on the secondfloorbalcony。【范文欣赏】Paragraph 1:The wind parted the black smoke just enough for him to glimpse Lubeck on the second-floor balcony。 But there was no way to get to him.I shined the flashlight into the woods next toan old shed and no