高考英语二轮复习读后续写深度解读(九)

1、2021届高考英语二轮复习读后续写深度解读（九）2021高考英语读后续写深度解读（九）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。As the Christmas approached , I felt increasingly tired. Ads started the countdown （倒数）：six more , five more, four more shopping days. It was impossible that I would ever get the lastgift bought, the last meal cooked.Russ'

2、s sense of tension equalled mine。 Even Brad began to look stressed as he moved throughcountless festivities. Of us all, only Andrea, who plays the flute（长笛）in the school orchestra, and she seemed to avoid when Iremained relaxed. Unsurprising , I thought , since responsibility rested so lightly on he

3、rI was puzzled , though , by a sense of distance about her questioned why she came home late from school or left unusually early in the morningOnone of those last mornings , I baked and decorated cookies 。There were several interruptions, and I laid behind schedule 。 I set about tidying the kitchen.

4、 I opened the dishwasher,but it wasfull , and not of clean dishes. Andrea had loaded the machine after breakfast and forgotten to start it.Suddenly it all seemed too much : the dirty dishes , the too- tight schedule, Andrea ' s carelessness . The holiday season was overwhelming. It didn ' t

5、seem worth it.I rushed to do the dishes before picking up my daughter at school to drive her to her flutelesson 。 I pulled up outside at 3 p.m 。，still annoyed 。 I almost weakened at the sight of the funny, half skipping run of her 。 She jumped happily into the car , sharing with school news 。 But as

6、 she saw my face, her happiness gave way to curiosity。"What' s wrong?"I told her: she couldn ' t remember anything; she was untidy , inconsiderate. "I don ' t know what you're thinking, you go dreaming along.。"We had nearly reached the music school before I ran ou

7、t of things to say. Besides me , Andrea sat quietly 。 I didn't look at her. When I stopped the car, she got out and walked wordlessly away.Then I felt ashamed. I was labouring over every detail of the holiday, trying to make surenothing was forgotten. Yet something was missing。一、/注息：1. 所续写短文的词数应

8、为150左右；2。至少使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3。续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。schoolParagraph 1:That evening, we rushed through our dinner because it was the night of the highChristmas concert. "Andrea Hill ' sParagraph 2：Everything seemedfine until the music teacher announced the final s

9、ection , solo !”【思路点拨】1 .文本细解读，确定续写结局本文是一篇记叙文，讲述了当我们全家都在紧张地为圣诞节做准备的时候，Andrea却忙着她学校管弦乐队的事情，看起来对家里的忙碌也不管不顾。直到有次她开开心心地从学校出来看到我很烦躁时才发现了一些问题，后来我也很内疚，总觉得这个圣诞节缺了点什么。续写部分应为故事的结局，即我们一家人去 Andrea的学校听她所在的乐队表演，演出全程，我们都十分享受，沉浸在动听的圣诞乐曲中。终于轮到演奏会的最后一首曲目，没想到竟然是Andrea的独奏曲，我终于 明白了 Andrea这段时间“早出晚归”的原因。2 .段首句解读，确定续写方向续写第

10、一段首句写道“那天晚上我们匆忙吃完了晚饭，因为那天是高中的圣诞音乐晚会”；第二段首句写道“一切都很平静，直到音乐老师宣布了音乐会的终章，安德莉亚的独奏表演”。由此可知第一段内容应着重描写我们一家人看着管弦乐队表演时的情绪变化，可设想：听着管弦乐队的表演，圣诞节的氛围越发浓烈，疲惫感都消失了，感觉这段时间的一切都很值得.而第二段段首“一切都很平静直到音乐老师宣布了音乐会的终章，安德莉亚的独奏表演”说明应着重描写我们对安德莉亚的态度转变，可设想：当我们听到这个消息的时候很激动，也终于明白了她早出晚归，在家做事也心不在焉的原因。原来她一直在为我们准备这样一份圣诞礼物，而我也找到了那份缺少了的东西。3

11、 .划线词解读，规划续写细节1）分类划线词人物Andrea环境Christmas , orchestra , music school, quietly事物gift , flute情感-carelessness , worth, sense of tension2）构思具体情节第一段具体情节：我们到达报告厅就坐一我们看见安德莉亚（Andrea）穿着漂亮的裙子坐在了乐谱架旁一随着音乐响起，我们的紧张感（ sense of tension ）都消失了一一首首圣诞（ Christmas）音乐让我感觉最 近的一切都值了（ worth ）;第二段具体情节：我瞬间激动到流下眼泪一在安德莉亚拿起长笛（flu

12、te ）演奏前，她朝着我们看了看一我终于理解了她这段时间在音乐学校（music school ）的努力一原来这是她给我们准备的圣诞礼物（gift）。【范文欣赏】Paragraph 1:That evening , we rushed through our dinner because it wasthe night of the high-school Christmasconcert 。 Along with other families , Russ, Brad and I took our seats in the hall. I saw Andrea 、in her beautifu

13、l dress , sit down at her music stand 。 As the orchestra started , my sense of tension began to fade away. I listened , relaxed and moved by the special atmosphere that these young people created 。 Old and new songs about snow and deer took turns with Christmas music。Everything seems worth it.Paragr

14、aph 2:Everything seemedfine until the music teacher announced the final section ,“Andrea Hill ' ssolo! ” My tears burst out as Andrea rose and, to the applause of that hall, took her position on the stage 。 Just before she raised the flute to her lips, she looked at Russ, Brad and me, and gave u

15、s a wide smile. I remembered my daughter practising , the extra time spent at music school ；the details ignored , the little things undone。 With her love, she had presented mewith the musicand the meaning of the holidays。That was Andrea' s gift 。亮点积累1.词汇atmosphere n。氛围;present v。呈现2。短语fade away

16、消散；take turns轮流；take one ' s position找到某人的位置；burst out突然爆发3.提分句式My tears burst out as Andrea rose and, to the applause of that hall, took her position on thestage.分析 本句是一个主从复合句。主句主语是 my tears ,谓语动词是 burst ; as引导的时间状语 从句表示伴随，从句主语是Andrea,谓语动词是rose和took,to the applause of.。为插入语，指“随着的掌声”.译文当安德莉亚站了起来

17、并在全场的掌声中走上舞台上时，我的眼泪瞬间流了下来自主练习阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。The Last StopAfternoon was Mrs. Conroy ' s favorite time of day. After a hard day at work, her eyeswere tired and her feet hurt. She enjoyed the nice sleeping for a short period of time. She tookon the bus. Mrs. Conroy had made friends w

18、ith the bus driver. He always woke her up before herstop. But today was different 。 A small manin a wrinkled uniform sat in the driver ' s seat。 Mrs.Conroy didn ' t like this new driver 。 She decided not to sleep on the way home today. She didn ' t want to ask this driver to wake her. He

19、 didn't look l ike the type who' d want to do anyone a favor.Mrs. Conroy looked out of the window. It was a warm afternoon. Though she tried to keep hereyes open, within a few minutes her eyes closed 。 Her head dropped to her shoulders 。 Mrs 。 Conroy fell fast asleep 。 The next thing Mrs. Co

20、nroy knew was that a hand was on her shoulder and someone was shaking her awake.Mrs. Conroy opened her eyes. The bus driver looked down at her。”This is the end of the line ,lady. Time to get off the bus. " Mrs. Conroy peered out the window. "Where am I ? ” she asked 。“You' re at the la

21、st stop, lady. Come on, get off the bus. I have a schedule to keep to." Mrs。Conroy was having trouble waking up 。 She walked unsteadily to her feet. The bus driver took herarm and helped her down the passage o As she stepped off the bus, she felt a sense of panic 。"Butwhy can' t I ride

22、 back with you? ” she screamed and appealed 。”I have the fare !”“Sorry, lady , “ he said as he closed the door. "It ' s against the rules 。"Mrs. Conroy watched the bus disappear down the road 。 Suddenly the sun seemed awfully bright. “Are you ready ,Madam?"The voice came from behi

23、nd her。 Mrs. Conroy turned rapidly around, her heart beating rapidly 。A man in a blue suit stepped forward 。 His suit reminded her of the one that her father (who had died long before) always wore. What was the man doing so far out here in the country?续写要求：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .至少使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3 .续写分为两段，每段的开头已为你写好;4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语Paragraph 1:The man in the blue suit smiled 。Paragraph 2:The man stepped toward Mrs. Conroy and took her arm aga