温州市中考英语作文六步法温州十四中 沈永铭欢迎光临永铭

1、温州市中考英语作文温州市中考英语作文“六步法六步法” -温州十四中温州十四中 沈永铭沈永铭欢迎光临永铭博客欢迎光临永铭博客:http:/ Step1 仔细审题（体裁、段仔细审题（体裁、段落、人称、主体时态）落、人称、主体时态）Step2. 理清要点（缺一不可）理清要点（缺一不可）Step3. 译写单句（句子结构）译写单句（句子结构）Step4. 连句成篇（注意段落）连句成篇（注意段落）Step5. 检查润色（连接词、检查润色（连接词、从句）从句）Step6. 定稿誊写（卷面整洁）定稿誊写（卷面整洁）英语作文英语作文“六步法六步法”教学教学范例范例1 1题目：题目：Mr. Smith and M

2、r. Green used to be neighbors for years. One morning Mr. Smith called at Mr. Greens. The following is their conversation. S: Good morning.G: Good morning.S: I havent seen your son Tom for a long time. Has he made great achievements?G: Oh, I dont know if he is successful, but I know that he has drawn

3、 the governments attention and the police are searching for him. 分析：题目不难，但要完成两件事分析：题目不难，但要完成两件事情：情： 一是要把要点表达清楚，要一是要把要点表达清楚，要传神、达意；传神、达意；二是要把直接引语转换成间接引语。二是要把直接引语转换成间接引语。 要求：要求：1、用间接引语描述如上、用间接引语描述如上 幽默幽默故故事事。人称：第三人称；时态：过。人称：第三人称；时态：过去时。去时。2、词数为、词数为80100。第一步：仔细审题第一步：仔细审题 情景提供的方式是对话，情景提供的方式是对话，题材是故事。内容是

4、两个邻居题材是故事。内容是两个邻居之间的一段幽默对话，涉及到之间的一段幽默对话，涉及到的词汇有：的词汇有：used to ，call on，hesitate，make achievements，etc, 涉及的句子有简单句、并涉及的句子有简单句、并列句、和复合句。词数为列句、和复合句。词数为80100。第二步：理清要点第二步：理清要点 本文是一篇记序文，发生的时间是一天下午，地点本文是一篇记序文，发生的时间是一天下午，地点是是Mr.Green家家,人物有人物有Mr.Smith和和Mr.Green，事件是谈，事件是谈论论Mr.Green的儿子，故事以的儿子，故事以Mr. Green一段幽默的话结

5、一段幽默的话结尾。所以，本文内容要点如下：尾。所以，本文内容要点如下： 1、Mr. Smith和和Mr.Green是曾是多年的邻居。是曾是多年的邻居。 2、一天上午，、一天上午，Mr.Smith去去Mr.Green家拜访。家拜访。 3、他们互致问候早上好。、他们互致问候早上好。 4、Mr. Smith说他已多年不见说他已多年不见Mr.Green的儿子的儿子Tom了，相知到他是否已取得了很大的成就。了，相知到他是否已取得了很大的成就。 5、Mr.Smith踌躇了一会儿，说不知道儿子是否取踌躇了一会儿，说不知道儿子是否取得成就，但政府很重视他，警察也在全国各地找他。得成就，但政府很重视他，警察也在

6、全国各地找他。.第三步：译写单句第三步：译写单句:基本句子结构基本句子结构1.Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for many years.2.One morning, Mr.Smith called on Mr.Green at his house.3.They said good morning to each other.4.Mr. Smith said that he had not seen Mr.Greens son, Tom for several years. He asked if he had made great

7、achievements.5.Mr.Green hesitated for a moment. He said he did not know if made any achievements. He said he knew that the government said that his son was very important. The police were after him everywhere in the country.第四步：连句成篇第四步：连句成篇 Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for many years

8、. One morning, Mr.Smith called on Mr.Green at his house.They said “good morning” to each other.Then Mr. Smith said that he had not seen Mr.Greens son, Tom for several years. He asked if Tom had made great achievements.Mr.Green hesitated for a moment. He said he did not know if Tom made any achieveme

9、nts. He said he only knew that the government said that his son was very important, for the police were after him everywhere in the country.第五步：检查润色Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for many years. One morning, Mr.Smith called on Mr.Green at his house. First, they greeted each other ( sai

10、d “good morning” to each other),then they talked about Mr.Greens son, Tom. Mr. Smith said that he had not seen Mr.Greens son, Tom for several years and wondered (. He asked) if he had made great achievements.Mr.Green hesitated for a moment. Then he said he did not know if Tom made any achievements,

11、but he said he only knew that the government thought (said) that his son was “very” important, for the police were after him everywhere in the country.第六步：定稿誊写 Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for many years. One morning, Mr.Smith called on Mr. Green at his house. First, they greeted eac

12、h other,then they talked about Mr.Greens son, Tom. Mr. Smith said that he had not seen Mr.Greens son, Tom for several years and wondered if he had made great achievements. Mr.Green hesitated for a moment. Then he said he did not know if Tom made any achievements, but he said he only knew that the go

13、vernment thought that his son was “very” important, for the police were after him everywhere in the country.第六步：定稿誊写 Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for many years. One morning, Mr.Smith called on Mr. Green many years. One morning, Mr.Smi

14、th called on Mr. Green at his house. First, they greeted each other,then they at his house. First, they greeted each other,then they talked about Mr.Greens son, Tom. Mr. Smith said talked about Mr.Greens son, Tom. Mr. Smith said that he had not seen Mr.Greens son, Tom for several that he had not see

15、n Mr.Greens son, Tom for several years and wondered if he had made great achievements. years and wondered if he had made great achievements. Mr.Green hesitated for a moment. Then he said he did Mr.Green hesitated for a moment. Then he said he did not know if Tom made any achievements, but he said he

16、 not know if Tom made any achievements, but he said he only knew that the government thoughtonly knew that the government thought that his son was that his son was “very” important, for the police were after him “very” important, for the police were after him everywhere in the country.everywhere in

17、the country.范例范例2 题目：根据以下提示，用英语题目：根据以下提示，用英语写一篇介绍香港的短文，字数写一篇介绍香港的短文，字数100字左右。字左右。 香港位于中国的东南部，面积香港位于中国的东南部，面积1045平方公里，人口平方公里，人口600多万，被多万，被称为称为“东方明珠东方明珠”。1842年鸦片年鸦片战争后，当时的中国政府被迫将战争后，当时的中国政府被迫将香港割让给英国。香港割让给英国。1997年她已回年她已回到祖国的怀抱，其前景会更美好。到祖国的怀抱，其前景会更美好。参考词汇：明珠参考词汇：明珠 pearl， 鸦片鸦片 opium。第一步：仔细审题第一步：仔细审题本文属

18、说明性文章。本文属说明性文章。第二步：理清要点第二步：理清要点1、香港的地理位置、面积和人口。、香港的地理位置、面积和人口。2、鸦片战争后香港的处境。、鸦片战争后香港的处境。3、1997年她回到祖国的怀抱。年她回到祖国的怀抱。4、其前景会更美好。、其前景会更美好。第三步：译写单句第三步：译写单句1. Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. Her area is 1,045k. Her population is more than 6 million.2. She was given up to Britain after the 1842 Opi

19、um War.3. In 1997, she returned to motherland.4. Her future is very beautiful.第四步：连句成篇第四步：连句成篇 Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. Her area is 1,045k and (. Her) population is more than 6 million. She was given up to Britain after the 1842 Opium War.In 1997, she returned to motherland and (. H

20、er) future is very beautiful.第五步：检查润色第五步：检查润色1 Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. she has an area of( Her area is)1,045k and (. Her) has a population of more than 6 million ( population is more than 6 million). She is well-known as “the Pearl of the East”. In 1842,She was given up to Britain

21、by the then Chinese government after the 1842 Opium War, and the people in Hong Kong lived a hard life . In 1997, she returned to motherland and the people of Hong Kong are and working hard to make her more beautiful. 第五步：检查润色第五步：检查润色1之后的文章之后的文章 Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. she has an a

22、rea of1,045k and has a population of more than 6 million. She is well-known as “the Pearl of the East”. In 1842,She was given up to Britain by the then Chinese government after the 1842 Opium War, and the people in Hong Kong lived a hard life . In 1997, she returned to motherland and the people of H

23、ong Kong are working hard to make her more and more beautiful.第五步：检查润色第五步：检查润色2 Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. she has an area of1,045k and has a population of more than 6 million and(. She) is well-known as “the Pearl of the East”. In 1842, the then Chinese government was forced to give

24、up Hong Kong to Britain ( She was given up to Britain by the then Chinese government) after the Opium War, and the people in Hong Kong suffered a lot ( lived a hard life) . After the return of Hong Kong to China in 1997 ( In 1997, she returned to motherland and the people of Hong Kong are and), the

25、people of Hong Kong are united more with the Chinese people in mainland China, and they will work hard ( will be working hard) to make her more beautiful. Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. she has an area of1,045k and has a population of more than 6 million and is well-known as “the Pearl of

26、 the East”. In 1842, the then Chinese government was forced to give up Hong Kong to Britain after the Opium War, and the people in Hong Kong suffered a lot . After the return of Hong Kong to China in 1997, the people of Hong Kong are united more with the Chinese people in mainland China, and they wi

27、ll work hard to make her more beautiful.第五步：检查润色第五步：检查润色2之后的文章之后的文章第六步：定稿誊写第六步：定稿誊写 Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. she has an area of1,045k and has a population of more than 6 million and is well-known as “the Pearl of the East”. In 1842, the then Chinese government was forced to give up

28、Hong Kong to Britain after the Opium War, and the people in Hong Kong suffered a lot . After the return of Hong Kong to China in 1997, the people of Hong Kong are united more with the Chinese people in mainland China, and they will work hard to make her more beautiful. .第六步：定稿誊写第六步：定稿誊写 Hong Kong li

29、es in the southeast of China. she has Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. she has an area of1,045kan area of1,045k and has a population of more than and has a population of more than 6 million and is well-known as “the Pearl of the 6 million and is well-known as “the Pearl of the East”.East”.

30、In 1842, the then Chinese government was forced to In 1842, the then Chinese government was forced to give up Hong Kong to Britain after the Opium War, give up Hong Kong to Britain after the Opium War, and the people in Hong Kong suffered a lot .and the people in Hong Kong suffered a lot . After the

31、 return of Hong Kong to China in 1997, After the return of Hong Kong to China in 1997, the people of Hong Kong are united more with the the people of Hong Kong are united more with the Chinese people in mainland China, and they will work Chinese people in mainland China, and they will work hard to m

32、ake her more beautifulhard to make her more beautiful. .Homework: 请以记者的身份请以记者的身份,根据案件登记卡所提供的根据案件登记卡所提供的情况，用英语写一篇新闻报导稿。字数：情况，用英语写一篇新闻报导稿。字数：100词左右。词左右。INFORMATION ABOUT THE CASETIME4:55 p.m. yesterday, just before the class time.PLACE bank in the Park StreetWEATHERraining hard ,little trafficHappens:

33、 Two young men with mask rushed in, threatened the clerk with gun,put the money in the bags,rushed out and droved away with about 20,000 dollars. Nobody was killed or wounded. The police are searching for the robbers.Possible version: Yesterday afternoon, a robbery happened in a bank in the Park Str

34、eet. According to the witnesses statements, it was five minutes to 5:00 pm, just before the closing time of the bank. And it was raining heavily, with little traffic on the road outside. Suddenly, two young men with masks rushed in and threatened the clerks with guns. Then they put the money in bags

35、,rushed out and droved away with about 20,000 dollars. All the things lasted for only a few minutes. fortunately, there was nobody killed or wounded in the robbery.The police are searching for the robbers, hoping whoever gets the connected information calls them up as soon as possible. Possible vers

36、ion: Yesterday afternoon, a robbery happened in a bank in the Park Street. According to the witnesses statements, it was five minutes to 5:00 pm, just before the closing time of the bank. And it was raining heavily, with little traffic on the road outside. Suddenly, two young men with masks rushed i

37、n and threatened the clerks with guns. Then they put the money in bags,rushed out and droved away with about 20,000 dollars. All the things lasted for only a few minutes. Fortunately, there was nobody killed or wounded in the robbery.The police are searching for the robbers, hoping whoever gets the

38、connected information calls them up as soon as possible. 温州市中考英语试题作文特点1、以书信为主（04、05、06年）；2、书信以第一人称（写信人）和第二人称（收信人）为主；3、书信原则上分三段来写：第一段：写信的目的（自我交代+写新的目的：Id like to tell you something about.)第二段：正文（按照内容点要求写）：First,Second,Third,At last第三段：联系方式、要求和问候By the way, youre welcome to .I live and my telephone nu

39、mber is. Please remember me to your Im waiting for your early reply./Im looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.2006年中考小作文Dear Ted, Please dont play computer games too late.Please go to bed and get up earlier.Please dont sleep in class. Yours, Mike2006年中考书面表达1、分三段写：想些什么（feel sorry）；

40、做些什么（改变三个坏习惯)；结果如何（become better）2、不能出现学校和姓名）3、用第一人称为主， 也可以兼用第二人称和第三人称。2006年中考书面表达范文Dear Mike, Thank you very much for your letter and advice. I felt very sorry for what I had done before. Now Ive decided to change myself. I wont play computer games so late and get up earlier so that I can get to sc

41、hool on time. I will listen to teachers carefully so as to learn my lessons well and I wont sleep in class. If so, Im sure that I will become a good boy and I will be loved by my parents, my teachers and classmates. Thanks again! Yours, Ted 2006年浙江省杭州市中考题年浙江省杭州市中考题八、书面表达八、书面表达 （共（共1题，计题，计15分）分） 假如你刚

42、去澳大利亚的一所高中读书，在上第一节课时，你假如你刚去澳大利亚的一所高中读书，在上第一节课时，你填（打勾）了一张表格（见听力测试第二大题）。第二天上课填（打勾）了一张表格（见听力测试第二大题）。第二天上课时，老师要求每个学生根据自己在表上打勾的情况做一个简单时，老师要求每个学生根据自己在表上打勾的情况做一个简单的自我介绍。现在，请你把所做的介绍写下来。的自我介绍。现在，请你把所做的介绍写下来。注意事项：注意事项：1、开头部分已写好，只需接着写；、开头部分已写好，只需接着写；2、不要逐条翻、不要逐条翻译，可适当增加谈论话题时经常用到的华语，使所写内容连贯；译，可适当增加谈论话题时经常用到的华语，使所写内容连贯；3、所写内容必须包括、所写内容必须包括QUESTIONNAIRE上的主要内容；上的主要内容；4、词数：、词数：80个左右。个左右。A. Do you come from China?* Yes No B. How old are you?* Fift