英语写作复习课

1、初中英语书面表达初中英语书面表达写作技巧训练写作技巧训练中考作文评分标准中考作文评分标准第一档（第一档（11-12分）分）信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。第二档（第二档（9-10分）分）信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表达。达。第三档（第三档（7-9分）分）能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。 第四档（第四档（4-6分）分）只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少

2、量句子可读。只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。 第五档（第五档（1-3分）分）只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。 认真认真审题审题，找出文章要表达的中心。找出文章要表达的中心。写作第一步健康很重要。在学习和健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你次的调查结果。根据你所得的

3、信息，请为国际所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告调查报告, ,并提倡大家并提倡大家进行假日休闲。进行假日休闲。审审travelstay at homevisit friends or parentswork 用简单的句子或短语用简单的句子或短语列出列出文章要文章要点。点。列列写作第二步 根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点子列出文章的要点 如何度假如何度假 调查报告调查报告 倡议假日休闲倡议假日休闲stay at homeworkvisit friends or parentstravel A lot of people

4、 travel . Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Enjoy your vacation.列列加加 加首尾加首尾，使结构完整。 可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。写作第三步：A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.How do peo

5、ple spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report.Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.a nice heada nice taila nice body连连 恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。写作第四步：1.表示并列或递进表示并列或递进: and, as well as, bothand, not onlybut also, neithernor;2.表示选择表示选择: or, eithero

6、r;3.表示转折表示转折: but, however, although, though, after all, 4.表示因果表示因果: because, so, therefore5.表示条件表示条件: if , unless6.表示对比表示对比: instead, notbut, on the one handon the other hand;7.表示解释表示解释: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words;8.表示顺序表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of

7、 all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end;9.表示强调表示强调: also, besides, whats more, actually, in fact, 10.表示结论表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking, How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. According to

8、 it, most people travel. And some people stay at home. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.连连 _ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight. He didnt go to movies, he went to the concert _. We like

9、 doing kinds of sports _ swimming, running and hiking. _, he stood up. Then he got out. _, he went back. _, he smiled.美美 选好词句，美化美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。写作第五步： We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our survey report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get

10、 away from the busy world during the holidays . Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.美

11、美 Express in different waysOur parents really wish us to work hard.Our parents really wish us to put our heart into study.The teenagers like the computers.The teenagers are fond of the computers. We shouldnt eat junk food. We should stay away from the junk food. When he spoke, he got more excited. T

12、he more he spoke, the more excited he got. We should learn English grammar. Its important to learn English grammar.书面表达写作技巧书面表达写作技巧列列加加连连美美 以以 “I have a dream”为题写一篇不少于为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，个词的短文， 标点符号不占格。标点符号不占格。 Sentence patterns for reference(以下句型以下句型供参考）供参考） My dream is to be/to do/to go I enjoy /like/

13、prefer To make my dream come true, I If my dream comes true I have a dreamHave you ever watched a bike racing? The riders are cool! Yeah, its my dream to be a professional bike rider.I fell in love with bike rider for the first time I rode. Since that, Ive been riding for 5 years. Some people think

14、its dangerous, I dont think so. During a bike riding, you will be in a high speed and feel the wind rushes quickly. Exciting? That is!To make my dream come true, Ill practice more after middle school. Also, Ill watch more bike racing to learn from the riders. I hope my dream will come true, if so, I

15、 can enjoy the life I like best.Passage One I have a dreamAnybody has a dream. But different people have different dreams.Most people always dream to be popular or rich. But my dream is very special, I just want to be a bird. Why I have such a dream? Just because I admire theyre free, they can do ev

16、erything they want.When theyre flying in the sky, they look beautiful, even theyre the most beautiful animals. I really want to enjoy the feeling of flying in the sky. However, I know it wont be achieved any more.Its just a dream, in my heart.Passage TwoPassage Three I have a dreamMy dream is to be

17、a basketball player. I like it because I think it very interesting. It can make me become very happy and healthy. To make me dream come true. I need try to do it. And I need take some time to do it. I need practice every day. If my dream come true, I will more try to do it. 自教育部提倡初中生每天长跑自教育部提倡初中生每天长跑1500米后，校园里课间可以看到很多米后，校园里课间可以看到很多学生跑步的身影。对于这样的倡议，你在学校做了一个调查，有些学学生跑步的身影。对于这样的倡议，你在学校做了一个调查，有些学生觉的好，有些学生觉的不好。请你把调查的结果用英语写成短文，生觉的好，有些学生觉的不好。