describe a person 2如何描述人物

1、话题写作之二：话题写作之二：Describing a person Short hair, straight hair, black hairLong hair,Curly hair,Blond hairHow to describe appearanceHow to describe appearanceSection A RevisonHe has short,blond hair and lots of little wrinkles on his forehead.What does he look like?How to describe build(How to describe

2、build(体格体格) and height) and heightThe man has a medium build ,and he is one head taller than the woman.Yao Min is 2.26m tall and weighs 87 kilos.1. 全面性全面性(Comprehensiveness):要点全面要点全面. 2. 正确性正确性(Accuracy):语法正确并符合英语的表达语法正确并符合英语的表达习惯习惯。3. 多样性多样性(Variety):词汇短语丰富，结构多样，句词汇短语丰富，结构多样，句型复杂。型复杂。4. 连贯性连贯性(Logi

3、c):恰当使用承上启下的词语和连接恰当使用承上启下的词语和连接词，使全文流畅连贯，浑然一体。词，使全文流畅连贯，浑然一体。Section BSteps for Writing English Essays1、审题到位：内容（要点）体裁，人称、时态、审题到位：内容（要点）体裁，人称、时态2、要点成句、要点成句:(1)正确正确符合英语语法和英语表达习惯。符合英语语法和英语表达习惯。(2)优美优美丰富的词汇，丰富而高级的丰富的词汇，丰富而高级的结构句式结构句式. 3. 联句成文：巧用过渡语和连接词联句成文：巧用过渡语和连接词.4.检查修改检查修改:语法语法,拼写拼写,字母大小写字母大小写,标点符号标

4、点符号.注意：注意：(1) 开头的交代句与结尾的总结句开头的交代句与结尾的总结句,增强呼应增强呼应 .(2)牢记常识性套话的习惯表达牢记常识性套话的习惯表达.(3)谚语，成语谚语，成语四四 个个 步步 骤骤 1.General introduction: aged 23; born into a workers family in Beijing on Oct. 23, 1985; grow up in where he received his education; _,Lu Xun, was the father of Chinese modern literature.尽量用分词短语，使

5、文章简洁，通顺尽量用分词短语，使文章简洁，通顺Lu Xun,_, was born in Zhejiang Province .概概况况:age, sex, birth-place, background鲁迅鲁迅, 浙江绍兴人浙江绍兴人, 是中国现代文学之父。是中国现代文学之父。Section CBorn in Shaoxing, Zhejiang Provincethe father of Chinese modern literature同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺2.Appearance外表外表Medium build, fat, a bit overweig

6、ht, good-looking 我的语文老师是个温和的女人我的语文老师是个温和的女人,身材矮小，她长着两身材矮小，她长着两只大眼睛，带着一副眼镜。只大眼睛，带着一副眼镜。My Chinese teacher ， _， has two big eyes and wears a pair of glasses.My Chinese teacher，_, has two big eyes and wears a pair of glasses.My Chinese teacher is a gentle ,short woman _巧用同位语巧用同位语巧用定语从句巧用定语从句巧用巧用with介词短

7、语做后置定语介词短语做后置定语a gentle ,short womanwho is a gentle, short womanwith two big eyes and a pair of glasses.3. character 性格Absent-minded, bad-tempered, warm-hearted, patientMr Zhang,我们的物理老师我们的物理老师, 善良，而且负责又有耐心。善良，而且负责又有耐心。(一句一句多译多译)a. Mr Zhang,_ , is kind, responsible and patient.b. Mr Zhang,_ , is kind

8、, patient and responsible.c. Mr Zhang, our physics teacher ，is _ kind to us, _responsible and patient. d. Mr Zhang, our physics teacher, is a kind person_.our physics teacherwho is our physics teachernot onlybut alsowith great patience and responsibility4.特长爱好特长爱好Likes or dislikesBe delighted in doi

9、ng, be good at, long for sthlong to do在她的业余时间里她大都听音乐读小说在她的业余时间里她大都听音乐读小说.b. In her spare time she _much time _ music and _novels.a. She enjoys listening to music and reading novels a lot in her leisure time.spendslistening toreading 5. Education教育状况教育状况在清华大学主修自然科学，四年后毕业，在清华大学主修自然科学，四年后毕业，他继续到海外深造学习并

10、取得博士学位。他继续到海外深造学习并取得博士学位。_, he graduated from Qing Hua University and after 4 years, he went abroad for further studies and received a doctors degree.灵活运用多种结构灵活运用多种结构,如非谓语动词非谓语动词, 使使文章精炼文章精炼Majoring in nature Science 6. Health健康状况健康状况住了六周的院住了六周的院,现在她看上去很虚弱现在她看上去很虚弱._in hospital for six weeks, now sh

11、e looks very weak.Having been 7. 详细特色详细特色Something in detailHe was strict with everybody and in everything he did. One day, we were having classes whenHe was very forgetful. Once he came across an old friend of his in the street and . .Big events in his or her life time生平大事生平大事2004年8月27日，雅典奥运会男子110米

12、栏决赛上，刘翔以12秒91夺得了金牌，创造了亚洲人在短道项目上的奇迹和神话！ 多种结构增强句子表现力多种结构增强句子表现力On August 27, 2004 in the Athens Olympic Games man 110-meter hurdles Liu Xiang finally won the gold medal by 12 seconds 91 ,_!On August 27, 2004 in the Athens Olympic Games man 110-meter hurdles Liu Xiang finally won the gold medal by 12 s

13、econds 91, _creating the Asian miracle and myth!which created the Asian miracle and myth 9. Evaluation(评价）评价） think highly of him and all respect him; be recognized/ considered as one of the most influential figures in human history; make great contributions to; will always be remembered as; 1）丛飞为我们

14、树立了好榜样，人人都高度评价并尊敬他。）丛飞为我们树立了好榜样，人人都高度评价并尊敬他。2）袁隆平为农业作出了重大贡献。）袁隆平为农业作出了重大贡献。 注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组词组;适当运用关联词语适当运用关联词语Cong Fei set us a good example ,so all the people spoke highly of him and all respected him .Yuan Longping has made great contributions to agriculture. Summary: 怎样让你的文章更有亮

15、点怎样让你的文章更有亮点?一一.审题得当审题得当:不遗漏要点不遗漏要点,文体文体,人称人称,时态正确。时态正确。二二.句式表达灵活多变句式表达灵活多变,长短句兼而有之长短句兼而有之,但不卖弄但不卖弄.三三.巧用非谓语动词，介词短语，词组以增强文章巧用非谓语动词，介词短语，词组以增强文章 的表现力。的表现力。四四.适当运用适当运用过渡语过渡语使句子更美，上下文更加使句子更美，上下文更加 协调连贯协调连贯。请根据以下资料说明，使用请根据以下资料说明，使用5个规范句子写一篇介绍刘个规范句子写一篇介绍刘翔的文章，具体内容如下：翔的文章，具体内容如下：姓名姓名:刘翔刘翔 出生地出生地:上海上海 生日生日

16、:1983.7.13项目：田径项目：田径 身高：身高：188 cm 体重：体重：74 Kg 教练：孙海平教练：孙海平 2004年年8月月27日雅典日雅典奥运会男子奥运会男子110米栏决赛米栏决赛中以中以12秒秒91获得冠军，使获得冠军，使他成为世界瞩目的焦点。他成为世界瞩目的焦点。在在2008年北京奥运会的男年北京奥运会的男子子110米栏预赛中，刘翔米栏预赛中，刘翔由于脚伤，遗憾地在首轮由于脚伤，遗憾地在首轮就退出了比赛，再一次使就退出了比赛，再一次使他成为世人关注的焦点他成为世人关注的焦点。参考词汇：参考词汇：雅典雅典Athens 预赛预赛 the first heat 男子男子110米栏米

17、栏 man 110-meter hurdles 田径田径Track and Field 退出比赛退出比赛 quit from the competition fail to start Liu Xiang, born in Shanghai on July 13, 1983, is 188 centimeters tall and weighs 84kg . / His project is Track and Field and his coach is Sun Haiping. /On August 27, 2004 in the Athens Olympic Games man 110-meter hurdles he won the gold med