池国祥英文地质论文写作中常见的问题PPT学习教案

1、会计学1池国祥英文地质论文写作中常见的问题池国祥英文地质论文写作中常见的问题Importance of Publication- Scientific records- Communication with international community- Contribution to scientific advancement- Social-economic impacts- Career development-写作过程也是科研的一部分：激发思维写作过程也是科研的一部分：激发思维，推敲研究结果的意义。，推敲研究结果的意义。-审稿和修改过程对科研有促进作用。审稿和修改过程对科研有促进作

2、用。第1页/共55页英文地质论文写作的常见问题英文地质论文写作的常见问题结构及格式问题结构及格式问题语法和用词问题语法和用词问题其它问题其它问题投稿注意问题投稿注意问题第2页/共55页科技论文写作的主要问题是论文结构及格式问科技论文写作的主要问题是论文结构及格式问题，而不是英文问题。题，而不是英文问题。结构好而英文不好的论文很容易修改，而结构结构好而英文不好的论文很容易修改，而结构不好的论文则很难改。不好的论文则很难改。第3页/共55页Highlight 只说做了什么，没说发现什么只说做了什么，没说发现什么-Detailed petrographic work carried out-Impo

3、rtant constraint on U mineralization recognized-Xenotime coeval with uraninite in Athabasca Basin-Onset of U mineralization related to volcanism and brine formation第4页/共55页引言的核心是引言的核心是 What Why How不要把研究结果在前言里讲出来第5页/共55页没有分清目的没有分清目的 (purposes) 和目标和目标 (objectives)This paper aims to carry out detailed

4、field, petrographic, stable isotope and fluid inclusion studies of the Poplar Mountain gold deposit.This paper aims to understand the mineralization conditions and processes of the Poplar Mountain gold deposit, through detailed field, petrographic, stable isotope and fluid inclusion studies.第6页/共55页

5、空洞的文献总结空洞的文献总结Empty Review: The sedimentary and stratigraphy of the Viking Formation have been studied by Smith (1978) and Walker et al. (1990). Little work has been done on diagenesis, except a stable isotope study by Lee (1998). The petroleum system has been evaluated by Cook (1989), .Informative

6、Review: The Viking Formation has been interpreted to have formed in a wave-dominated shoreface and transitional zones (Smith, 1978; Walker et al., 1990). A diagenetic study of calcite cements by Lee (1998) yielded d18O of -18 to -15%o (PDB), which were interpreted to indicate第7页/共55页参考文献的引用不恰当参考文献的引

7、用不恰当有些地区前人已做了大量工作。但这不意味这有些地区前人已做了大量工作。但这不意味这你要引用所有工作。引用什么和不引用什么要你要引用所有工作。引用什么和不引用什么要得当。得当。引用要放在恰当的地方。引用某文（或图）等引用要放在恰当的地方。引用某文（或图）等于告诉读者于告诉读者“请看请看”。要把要把 Credit 给该给的人。给该给的人。第8页/共55页Cite references in chronological orderThere are a number of previous studies in this field (Smith, 1999; Andes et al., 20

8、01; Sun et al., 1988).There are a number of previous studies in this field (Andes et al., 2001; Smith, 1999; Sun et al., 1988).There are a number of previous studies in this field (Sun et al., 1988; Smith, 1999; Andes et al., 2001).第9页/共55页For first author of the the same name, the order of listing

9、references is single-author first, two-author second, and multi-author last (in chronological order)Li, S., 2011, Li, S., Anderson, K. and Wang, L., 2000, .Li, S. and Baker, A., 2003, .Li, S., Wang, N. and Zhu, C., 1989, .Li, S., 2011, Li, S. and Baker, A., 2003, .Li, S., Wang, N. and Zhu, C., 1989,

10、 .Li, S., Anderson, K. and Wang, L., 2000, .第10页/共55页区域地质背景没有根据本文的内容进行取舍区域地质背景没有根据本文的内容进行取舍区域地质背景的介绍是很有讲究的。不能千篇区域地质背景的介绍是很有讲究的。不能千篇一律地描述所有的地质背景，要根据本文的重一律地描述所有的地质背景，要根据本文的重点有所侧重。点有所侧重。第11页/共55页现象或数据的描述与解释混杂在一起现象或数据的描述与解释混杂在一起We have detected high concentrations of CO2 in the fluid, which is most like

11、ly derived from the mantle. However, some crustal CO2 has also been detected, as reflected by its carbon isotope composition. The ores are characterized by laminated structures, which are likely of syngenetic origin The syngenetic structures are commonly found in all the deposits in the study area,

12、suggesting that these deposits are probably of SEDEX type. 第12页/共55页缺乏详细的地质描述缺乏详细的地质描述第13页/共55页缺乏详细的岩相学描述缺乏详细的岩相学描述Marine calciteReplacement dolomitePore-filling dolomiteStyloliteSphaleriteGalenaCalcite (CL zoned)Calcite (CL dull)Authigenic quartzFluoriteBaritePre-oreSyn-orePost-oreCa. 300 MaCa. 348

13、 Ma第14页/共55页把前人或自己已发表的数据列在结果部把前人或自己已发表的数据列在结果部分分Data sourcesLiang et al. 2008Liang et al. 2008Zhu et al. 2011This studyThis studyThis studyThis study第15页/共55页展示数据的图表出现在讨论部分展示数据的图表出现在讨论部分第16页/共55页展示数据的图表出现在讨论部分展示数据的图表出现在讨论部分第17页/共55页5. Discussion5.1. Ages of mineralization5.2. Sources of ore-forming

14、components5.3. Ore precipitation mechanisms5.4. Ore genesis矿床类型不等于矿床成因矿床类型不等于矿床成因:Ore genesis: Based on the geological and geochemical characteristics, this mineral deposit is considered to be a MVT deposit. 把矿床成因和矿床类型混肴把矿床成因和矿床类型混肴第18页/共55页讨论部分没有与引言呼应，没有以事实为依据讨论部分没有与引言呼应，没有以事实为依据Introduction: This

15、paper aims to understand the mineralization conditions and processes of the Poplar Mountain gold deposit, through detailed field, petrographic, stable isotope and fluid inclusions studies.Discussion: In this section we will focus on the origins of gold deposits in southwestern New Brunswick, especia

16、lly on the role that crustal evolution may have played in mineralization.第19页/共55页讨论部分把在引言部分说过的话又说一讨论部分把在引言部分说过的话又说一遍遍Introduction: The origin of the Poplar Mountain gold deposit has not been well understood. Some researchers believe it formed from magmatic fluids, whereas others thought .Discussion

17、: The origin of the Poplar Mountain gold deposit has not been well understood. Some researchers believe it formed from magmatic fluids, whereas others thought .第20页/共55页讨论部分与结果部分小标题重复讨论部分与结果部分小标题重复2. Results2.1 Oxygen isotopes2.2 Carbon isotopes2.3 Fluid inclusions3. Discussion3.1 Oxygen isotopes3.2

18、 Carbon isotopes3.3 Fluid inclusions3. Discussion3.1 Sources of mineralizing fluids3.2 Ore precipitation mechanisms第21页/共55页图例说明没有直接标在图例旁图例说明没有直接标在图例旁边边第22页/共55页参考文献格式没按要求参考文献格式没按要求-作者没列全-错字太多-名字缩写不统一-期刊名称缩写或不缩写不统一-卷号及页码格式不统一-多余的空格第23页/共55页英文地质论文写作的常见问题英文地质论文写作的常见问题结构及格式问题结构及格式问题语法和用词问题语法和用词问题其它问题其它

19、问题投稿注意问题投稿注意问题第24页/共55页“The” 的用与不用的用与不用Jinding deposit is a large Zn-Pb deposit. There are many Sn deposits in the southern Hunan. The Jinding deposit is a large Zn-Pb deposit. There are many Sn deposits in southern Hunan. There are many Sn deposits in the southern Hunan area. 第25页/共55页“the”, “a” 及复

20、数的使用及复数的使用-要根据上下文而定要根据上下文而定-“The” 含有含有“那个那个”或或“那些那些”的意思的意思第26页/共55页没有必要的副词没有必要的副词VeryDefinitelyObviouslyExtremely Strongly第27页/共55页放在句子前面，可有可无的的副词放在句子前面，可有可无的的副词Basically, Actually, If fact, 第28页/共55页不客观的肯定语气不客观的肯定语气The deposit must have been formed from fluid mixing. The deposit may have been forme

21、d from fluid mixing. The deposit was likely formed from fluid mixing. 第29页/共55页不可数名词不能用复数不可数名词不能用复数This conclusion is supported by many evidences. This conclusion is supported by several lines of evidence. Researches, equipments, 第30页/共55页Zircon and zirconsWater and watersWork and works有些词可当可数名词或不可数

22、名词，但意思不同有些词可当可数名词或不可数名词，但意思不同第31页/共55页“-” 与与“ ”的区别的区别-Fault-controlled-cm-sized-Regional-scale-Ice-melting-1020 cm-quartzpyrite assemblage-NESW trending-Figs. ac 第32页/共55页-The Huanglong Formation-The Huanglong and Qiziqiao formationsFormation 还是 formation？-The Huanglong formation-The Huanglong and Q

23、iziqiao Formations第33页/共55页有些中文专业词汇可译为多个含义不同的英文词汇有些中文专业词汇可译为多个含义不同的英文词汇成矿：成矿：Metallogeny; Mineralization测试：测试：Test; Analysis指示：指示：Indicate; Suggest根据：根据：According to; Based on包含：包含：Contain; Include勘探：勘探：Prospecting; Exploration区：区： District; Area带：带： Belt; Zone矿体：矿体：Ore body; Orebody特征：特征：Features;

24、Characteristics第34页/共55页不要用不同的名词描写同一个东西或地方不要用不同的名词描写同一个东西或地方The Shizishan orefield is located in the Lower Yangtze metallogenic belt. There are numerious Mesozoic granitic intrusions in the Shizishan district. Different types of mineralization occur in the Shizishan area . The Shizishan deposit is i

25、nterpreted to have formed from . 第35页/共55页“between and ” 和和 “from to ” 的区别的区别25333644555677888990The Th values are between 25o and 90oC.The Th values range from 25o to 90oC.第36页/共55页空间副词和时间副词空间副词和时间副词Often, frequently, sometimes, occasionally 等表示时间概念的词不能用来描述地质现象出现的普遍性或偶然性。正确的用词应该是 commonly, generall

26、y, locally, in places, 等等。Gold often occurs in fractures in quartz, but sometimes it occurs as inclusions in pyrite.Gold commonly occurs in fractures in quartz, but locally it occurs as inclusions in pyrite.第37页/共55页避免过长或过短的句子避免过长或过短的句子-过长的句子容易造成误解。-过短的句子给人感觉信息量太少，效率太低。-长句短句相结合读起来比较舒服第38页/共55页避免主动句和

27、被动句反复交叉使用避免主动句和被动句反复交叉使用A number of mineral deposits have been discovered in the study area. Many researchers have studied the mineralogy and geochemistry of the deposits. However, the origin of the deposits has not been well understood.A number of mineral deposits have been discovered in the study

28、area. Many of them have been studied for mineralogy and geochemistry. However, their origin has not been well understood.第39页/共55页两个句子之间不能用逗号分开两个句子之间不能用逗号分开The Red Lake gold deposit is located in northwestern Ontario, it is well known for its high grade and large tonnage. The Red Lake gold deposit i

29、s located in northwestern Ontario; it is well known for its high grade and large tonnage. The Red Lake gold deposit is located in northwestern Ontario, and it is well known for its high grade and large tonnage. 第40页/共55页美式英语与英式英语不可混用美式英语与英式英语不可混用Colour vs colorMetre vs meterCentre vs centerVapour vs

30、 vapor第41页/共55页英文地质论文写作的常见问题英文地质论文写作的常见问题结构及格式问题结构及格式问题语法和用词问题语法和用词问题其它问题其它问题投稿注意问题投稿注意问题第42页/共55页不要用阿拉伯数字开始一个句子不要用阿拉伯数字开始一个句子145 fluid inclusions were measured for homogenization temperatures, of which 98 were also measured for ice-melting temperature.One hundred and forty-five (145) fluid inclusio

31、ns were measured for homogenization temperatures, of which 98 were also measured for ice-melting temperature.第43页/共55页数据的小数点用的不对数据的小数点用的不对ooC, and the salinities range from 27.88 to 35.69 wt.% NaCl equivalent.The homogenization temperatures of the fluid inclusions range from 100 to 191oC, and the sa

32、linities range from 27.9 to 35.7 wt.% NaCl equivalent.第44页/共55页不要用不要用 1010-6-6 做单位做单位The concentrations of Cu and Zn in the porphyry are 33.8 10-6 and 45.6 10-6, respectively.The concentrations of Cu and Zn in the porphyry are 33.8 ppm and 45.6 ppm, respectively.第45页/共55页英文地质论文写作的常见问题英文地质论文写作的常见问题结构及格式问题结构及格式问题语法和用词问题语法和用词问题其它问题其它问题投稿注意问题投稿注意问题第46页/共55页Submission for Publication- Editor: Why should I publish your paper?- Always have the readers in mind.- Do your homework; do not leave things for