英语四六级考试作文冲刺点拨

1、英语四六级考试作文冲刺点拨四六级考试越来越使模板无用武之地，阅卷老师在阅卷的过程中最多的是关注同学们的用词和句型的使用。高分作文标志1：四级120-150字；六级150180字；2、是否长短句交叉；3、用词是否恰当，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词；4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词；下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：1. 适当用被动代替主动，这样能更客观的反映事实,句子开头不要总是用we/I（比如写结尾时不用weshouldpayattentionto而用Attentionshouldbepaidto.）举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：Itis,therefore

2、,hightimethatsomeapplicableapproacheswereimplementedbytheserviceindustrylikethat.Thus，itscompetitiveedgewillbesharpenedeffectively.2. 善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。如however/therefore/forexample/Ibelieve做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。比如说：Otherindividuals,however,taketheattitude

3、that3. 一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的代替太宽泛的。（考试中一般不要出现good,bad,many,thing,think,people,opinion等等）比如上面例子中，applicable代替proper,approaches代替ways,implement代替carryout,sharpenone'scompetitive代替eenhanceone'scompetitivene提s高某物竞争力）下面举一篇我南京六级班上一位同学写的优秀作文（14分）的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高

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