专题06读后续写(第01期)(解析版)2020-2021学年高二英语江苏百所名校好题速递分项解析汇编

1、2020年江苏高二百所名校好题速递分项汇编（1）之读后续写读后续写【江苏省苏州市2019-2020学年高二卜学期期中】67.阅读下而短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。I StePPed Off the bus and headed for the Pool With my friends. COnCentrating On What I needed to do to Win this SWimIning COInPCtition.I jumped in the Water. amid（中）SCreamS of,Oh InaIL it,s freezing*, and fou

2、nd it wasn't t 圖.IStartCd to Warm up. and noticed the Sky getting gray. ',It,s going to rain, ,my friend AShley Said behind me ”LCrS Pray for no thunder Or lightning, Hl replied. ,This meet can,t be CanCelCd. HThat WaS When I noticed his UneaSineSS HWhat,s WrOng?HI asked.HC IOOked OVer at th

3、e Other team and back at me. saying, HTheir 50m freestyle SWinIInen Jack, is talking SOmething bad about you. HC Said you*d be a good SWimmer if you didn*t SWim Iike a girl And he,s not Only Saying SOmething bad about you, but everyone Of us. nAshley gave me a lk Of encouragement and added, HTOn, yo

4、u,d better SWim as fast as POSSIble and beat him. ShOW him WhOS the boss!"My event WaS third. By that lime、all my friends had ShOwn UP and I WaS PreParing for my 50m freestyle SPrinM冲刺）。I Walked OVer to the blocks（起跑器）and began to PrePare myself.fcwYou tliHik you actually IIaVe a chance?"

5、Came an aggressive VolCe &om my side. I ned and IeCOglilZed the guy WhO AShley had POinted at. It WaS Jack, WhO added, "Don't even try. nLuckily, I WaS not alone My friends Were CIOSe by.fcfcMy friend is gomg to beat you, MAShley warned. JaCk replied. fcTliafs a good one. We,11 Settle t

6、lis In the VVater ,"Swimmeis up!” the OffiCiaI Called. I StePPed OntO the Starting block and PrePared for the raceThat WaS When all my friends Started to Cheer me on. I focused all Iny attention and followed IhC OffiCiarS OrdeE UTake your mark. I bent down into my Starting POSition, the ChCCl a

7、round me growing louder. 注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好：4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标岀你所使用的关键词语。ParagraPh 1:When the Starting gun fired, IjUmPed into thewater:ParagraPh 2:All I heard WaS Cheering【答案】 When the Starting gun fired IjIImPCd into the water. I began PUmPing my arms

8、 fast, fcfcFaster " I thought, "swim faster!' I WaS PUShmg myself to the IimlLl took a breath and Ileaded for the Wall Of the POOL C)In Of Ihe COrner Of Iny eye I SaW Ihe guy. Jack, neck and neck Witll me.八ThIS is close, ' I thought, I Came to the IaSt five meters and SPrintCd With

9、 all my Streiigtli. "Go, go. go, my brain yelled. I hit die WaIl and Iifted my head at almost the Same time as JaCkAlI I heard WaS ChCering I IookCd around and nearly every One including the Other team. WaS POinting at me in amazement. I had touched the Wall a SeCOnd before JaCk I IOokCd at the

10、 OffiCiaL and he SignalCd that I had won. I SCreamed in my head. AShIey and my OthCr friends Were JUmPlng WItllJoy. I did IIOt Celebrate; it WaSn,t my style. I glanced OVer at Jack, WhO had a IOOk Of CmbarraSSment. SeeiIIg that. I SaId SlnCerely to Jack. Hey a good swim."【解析】本文是一篇读后续写。本篇书而表达是读后

11、续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，作者和他的朋友们前往游泳池准备参加游泳比赛。在 准备期间，作者的朋友AShIey告诉他说对方有一个叫JaCk的人说他和队友们的坏话。并且希望作者能打败 他。最终在所有的人的加油之下，作者做好开赛准备要打败Jack.续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：发 令枪一响，我就跳入水中。所以这一段要详细描写写作者用尽全力游到终点以及在此过程的心理活动。 第二段开头是：我听到的都是欢呼声。本段应该写获得了比赛的胜利后，大家都祝贺我。但是我并没有太 骄傲，也鼓励了 Jack。续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当 的时候加以运用。

12、最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右：续写完成后，请用下划线标岀你所使用 的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。【点睛】文章思路淸晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次淸晰。使用了较为髙级的句式:泄语从句：IgIanCCdoVCr at Jack, WhO had a IOOk Of CmbarraSSment.非谓语动词 Seeing that. I Said SinCerely to Jack. fcfcHey a good SWim 等。 髙级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者髙水平的英语表达能力。【江苏省泰州中学2019-2020学年髙二卜学期期中】阅读下面短文，根据所给

13、情肖进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。AbOUt ten years ago. m WifC and I took a trip to the Grand CanyOn in AriZOna I didn,t Iike to Carry all my kcs in my POCket during a hike, SOI tk away the key to the Car and Ieft the rest in the car. When We Came back I PUt the key SOmeWhere in the Car WithOUt reattaching it to th

14、e key ring. Then We made a fire, COOked SOme food, and Went to SleeP in the back Of the SUV.The next morning, We Were Cleaning UP OUr CamPSilC When I SaW a bird inside my car. I Walked OVCn and it flew away When We got in the Car to go home, I couldn't find the key We SearChed and SCarehCd even

15、emptying OUt the Car completely, but it WaS gone.Then it hit Ine that the bird must have taken it. After all, those birds are known for Stealing Shiny things and decorating their nests With them. KeyS are shiny. The bird WaS the thief! It made PCrfeCt SenSe to me. SO I decided to find its nest.BUt t

16、here is a problem: AS everyone knows, the Grand CanyOn is a Iittle Iarge in area. SOI didn't Iike my ChanCeS Of actually finding a Certain nest belonging to a Certain bird in a Certain tree in all that SPaCe BUt What Other ChOiCe did I have?My Wife WaS not encouraging me. She said, fcfcAre VOU c

17、razy? You,ll never find it! The Grand CanyOn is the biggest hole On Earth!" I ddn,t answer and WaIked Steadlly fbvard Until her IaUghter died away.I StrIlggled to keep hope as I SearChed dozens Of trees and tracked every Singing bird. It WaS Iike SearChing a needle in the Sea But, OiL how great

18、 my ViCtOry WOUld be When I held the missing key from the bird's nest. 注意：1所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好：4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。ParagraPh I:After two hours Of searching, I finally gave UP and returned to the car.ParagraPh2:ThC next day, We StOPPed at a SerViCe C

19、entre for lunch.【答案】ParagraPh 1:AftCr two hours Of SearChing I finally gave UP and returned to IhC car. ThCn I found my Wife relaxing in aChair. drinking a CUP Of COffee She WaS really Smart. The next Challenge WaS to get a new 血.Luckily, another family CamC through the campsite. SO I asked them to

20、Send OUt a locksmith. ThCy PrOmiSCd they would. FiVe hours Iaten the IOCkSmith ShOWCd UP and he Charged Ine twice the normal amount for making a new key.ParagraPh 2:ThC next day, We StOPPCd at a SerViCe Centre for IUnCh I PUHed OUt the CUP holder and the IniSSing key WaSSitting right IhCre. Imagine

21、my embarrassment.lt WaS the Only PIaCe We didn't ik And guess WhO PUt it there? My wife! We actually both Inade mistakes because I had PUShCd the CUP holder back WithOut noticing the key I got OUt Of the Car IOOked UP at the Sky ad said. "Bird, I was Wrong about you. m SOrryr【解析】本篇书而表达是读后续写

22、。通过阅读文章可知，大约十年前，作者和妻子去亚利桑那州的大峡谷旅行，回 来的时候不知道把车钥匙放哪里了，并怀疑可能是被一只鸟偷疋了，于是开始寻找丢失的钥匙。续写第一段开头为：找了两个小时后，我终于放弃了，回到了车里后而应该写寻找别的办法，启动车 子。续写第二段开头为：第二天，我们在一家服务中心停下来吃午饭后而应该写我们却意外的找到车钥匙, 作者冤枉了那只鸟。续写要求至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语，所以，考生应熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候使用。 最后还要注总所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要 求完成写作任务。【点睛】文章主题部分选用的是一般

23、过去时，续写部分也用一般过去时，通篇时态把握准确；所给关键词使用的恰 当并且髙级，显示岀较高的英语能力；文章中还使用了复合句，现在分词作宾补等高级语法，为文章增加 色彩和髙级感，如 Then I found Iny Wife relaxing in a chair, drinking a CUP Of COffee .Wc actually both made mistakes because I had PUShed the CUP holder back WithOUt noticing the key.这里原因状语从句，显示高级的英 语水平，精准掌握了从句使用的要领：续写部分构思巧妙，衔

24、接自然，思路淸晰自然，表达完整，为一篇 优秀的作品。【江苏省徐州 IIJ 2019-2020 学年高二 F学期期中 IEVerJfOne in OUr neighborhood knew WhO Ugly was. UgIy WaS a Wild cat. UgIy IOVed three things in this world: fighting, eating garbage, and, Shall We say, IOVe Ail these things had their effect On Ugly. He had Only One eye and Where the Other

25、 ShOUld have been WaS a hole He WaS also missing his ear On the Same side, his Ieft foot broke at One time, making him IOOk Iike he WaS always turning the COmer EVery tme SOme One SaW Ugly there WaS die Same reaction, fcat,s One UGLY cat!、'All the ChiIdren Were Warned not to touch him, the adult

26、s threw rocks at him, ShOUtCd at him. WaterCd him When he tried to COme in their homes, Or ShUt his PaWS in the door When he WOUld not IeaVe Ugly always had the Same reaction. If you Watered him, he WOUId Stand there, getting Wet all OVer Until you gave UP and quit. If you threw things at him, he WO

27、Uld Iie down Crying for forgive ness WheneVer he SaW ChildrelL he WOUld COme running® meowing, and bump his head against their hands, begging for their IOVe .If you ever PiCked him UP he WOUld immediately SUCk （允吸）On your Shirtr hat, WhateVer he COUld findOne day Ugly Shared his IoVC With the n

28、eighbor's dogs They did not respond kindly, and Ugly WaS badly injured. FrOln Iny apartment I COUld hear his screams, and I tried to rush to his aid. By the time I got to Where he WaS lying, it WaS ObViOUS Ugly,s Iife WaS almost at an end Ugly Iay in a Wet CirCle. He WaS bleeding badly. AS I PiC

29、ked him UP in Iny amis and tried to CaiTy him home, I COUlel hear him Crying and COUId feel him StnIggling. It must be hurting terribly, I thought.Then I felt a familiar SUCking On my ear. Ugly, in SO much PailK SUffering and ObViOUSly dying, WaS trying to SUCk my car. I PUlled him ClOSer to me. and

30、 he bumped Iny hand With his head, then he turned his One golden eye towards me EVen in the greatest pain, that Ugly Cat WaS asking Only for a Iittle IOVe注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 应使用5个以上（含5个）短文中标有下划线的关键词语：3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好：4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标岀你所使用的关键词语。ParagraPh 1:At that moment I thought Ugly WaS

31、 the most beautiful, IOVing CreatUre I have ever seen.ParagraPh 2:Ugly died in my arms before I COUId get inside, but I Sat and held him for a IOng time afterwards.【答案】ParagraPh 1:At that moment I thought Ugly WaS the InOSt beautiful. IOVing CreatUrC I have ever SCen. NCvCr OnCe did he try to bite O

32、r SCratCh me. Or even try to get away from me, Or SlnJ屈C in any Way UgIy WaS kind to everyone he met but now he WaS dying in my 前ms. UgIyjUSt lked UP at me COmPIeteIy trusting me to relieve his Daim ParagraPh 2:UgIy died in my arms before I COUId get inside, but I Sat and held him for a IOng time af

33、terwards. I WaS thinking about how an UgIy-IOOking Cat COUld SO Change Iny OPiniOn about What it means to have true PUreneSS Of spirit, to IOVe SO totally and tly. UgIy taught me more about giving and IOVe than a thousand books. lectures, Or talk ShOW SPeCialS ever could, and for that I Will always

34、be thankful. He WaS UgIy OIltSide but nice inside .It WaS time for me to ICarn to IOVC tly and deeply, to give my total to those I Cared for. Many PCOPIe Want to be richer, more SUCCeSSfUL Well Iiked. beautiful, but for me. I Will always try to be Ugly.【解析】本篇书而表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，作者讲述了他住的地方里有一只叫UgIy的

35、流浪猫，UgIy虽然满身伤痕、11陋肮脏, 但它有爱，有一天作者发现Ugly受了重伤，作者去帮忙想把它带回家，UgIy想吮吸作者的耳朵请求一点爱。 续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：在那一刻，我认为Ugly是我见过的最美丽、最可爱的动物。本段应该 写为什么Ugly是最美丽、最可爱的动物，可从UgIy对作者和其他人有爱的行为上体现。第二段开头是： Ugly还没来得及进去就死在我怀里了，但后来我坐了好长时间抱着它。本段应该写UgIy的死亡带给作者的 反思，作者明白宜正纯洁的灵魂是内心善良且真诚地去爱，作者会努力变得和Ugly样。续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟

36、悉所给划线词语，恰当 的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用 的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和髙级句子。1: try to do sth., think about, care for等高级词汇：如限 制性宦语从句CVCryonehCmct, everyone先行词，后接怎语从句省略关系代词ihal°【江苏省昆山2019-2020学年高二下学期期中教学质虽调研测试】阅读下而短文，根据所给情节进行续写, 使之构成一个完整的故事。Many years ago, When I WaS fres

37、h OUt Of schl and WOrking in DenVeE I WaS ClriVing to my parents* home in MiSSOUri for ChriStmas. I StOPPed al a gas StatiOn about 50 miles away fromOklahOma City, Where I WaS Planning to StOP and ViSit a friend. While I WaS Standing in Iine at the CaSh register（攵银台）,1 Said hello to an OIdCr CouPIC

38、WhO Were also PaVing for gas.I took off, but had gone Only a few InileS When black SnlOke POUred from the back Of my Car. I StOPPCd and WOndCrCd What I ShOUld do. A Car PIllled UP behind me.Il WaS the COUPle I had SPOken to at the gas StatiOn. They Said they WOUld Iake me to Iny friend,s We Chatted

39、On （he WaY to the city, and I got OUt Of the car, the husband gave me his business CardI WrOte him and his Wife a （hankyou note for helping me SOOn afterwards, I received a ChriStmaS PreSent from them. TllCir note that CanlC With it Said helping me had made their holidays meaningful.YearS Iaten I dr

40、ove to a meeting in a nearby town in the morning In Iate afternoon I returned to my Car and found that d Ieft the IightS On all day, and the battery （电池）WaS dead. Then I noticed that the Friendly FOrd dealership-a ShOP SelIing CarS-WaS right next door. I Walked OVer and found two SaICSmCn in the sho

41、wroom. 注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好：4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标岀你所使用的关键词语。ParagraPh 1:I entered the shop、and One Of the SaleSmen Came to me.ParagraPh 2:After a while, they quickly drove a PiCkUP tck to my Car and StartCd it.【答案】ParagraPh 1：I entered the shop, and OnC Of t

42、he SaleSmen Came to Ine What SUrPriSed me InOSt WaS that the SalCSman WaS the husband from the OIdCr COuPIC WhO had ever helped me years ago. NeVer had I met them SinCe We Inet IaSt time, WhiCh Inade InC genuinely sorry. FoIllInaICIy, I Canle across them and knew the ShOP WaS run by them. I WaS in t

43、rouble again and needed Ihem to give me a hand OnCe again. I told them What WaS WrOng With my car.ParagraPh 2:AftCr a while, they quickly CirOVe a PiCkUP tck to my Car and Started it. They SOlVed my trouble OnCe again. but WhCn I tried to pay for it, they WOUld not accept my money. They told me Ihat

44、 When they ran the ShOP at first, no OnC had ever taken time to Wnte to them and Say Thank you, but now they received an increasing number Of thankou notes from PCoPle. WhiCh they WCre really happy about.【解析】这是一篇读后续写作文。通过阅读所给文章可知，文章主要讲述了“我”有一次开车时遇到了故障得到了一对 夫妇的帮助，“我“给他们写了一封感谢信。后来，我的车子再次遇到了故障，于是“我“走进了

45、一家汽车店。 续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：我进入汽车店，其中一位推销员来到我面前。后文可以描写“我“进入汽 车店后，发现这个推销员是几年前曾经帮助过“我"的那对夫妻中的丈夫，这家店竟然是由他们经营的。“我“ 又一次遇到了麻烦，需要他们的帮助。第二段开头是：过了一会儿，他们迅速将一辆皮卡车开到“我"的车前 并启动了。后文可以描写当“我“尝试付款时，他们并不接受“我”的钱。他们说刚开始经营这家店时，他们收 到了“我“的感谢信，后来他们收到了越来越多的人的感谢信，他们对此感到非常高兴。注意要使用5个以上 短文中标有下划线的关键词语。【点睛】续写内容详略得当，使用了固上短语和主

46、从复合句如：COme across> in trouble, give me a hand once, an increasing number Of 等I古I怎短语；NeVer had I Inet them SinCe We met IaSt Iime WhiCh Inade InC genuinely sorry. 该句使用了倒装结构和WhiCh引导的非限制性定语从句:They SOlVed Iny trouble OnCe again, but When I tried to Pay for it, they WOUld not accept Iny money.该句使用 了 W

47、hen 引导的时间状语从句。【江苏省如皋市2019-2020学年髙二下学期教学质吊调研（二）】阅读下而材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头 语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写词数应为150左右。A tradesman WaS Ieading a CaraVan （商队）to another COUntry to Sell his goods. AlOng the Way they Canle to the Cdge Of a hot-sand desert. They Iearnt that during the daytime the SIIn heated UP the fine Sand

48、 Until it WaS as hot as CharCOaI （木炭）,SO no One COUld Walk On it not even camels! Then the CaraVan Ieader hired a desert guide, One WhO COUld follow the stars, SO they COUld travel Only at night When the Sand COOled down. ThC guide Sat On the first Cart. And they began the dangerous night-time journ

49、ey across the desert. A COUPle Of nights later, after eating their evening meal and Waiting for the Sand to cool, they Started OUt again.Later that night, the desert guide, WhO WaS ClriVing the first cart, SaW from the StarS that they Were getting ClOSe to the Other SidC Of the desert. HC had been V

50、ery tired, SO When he relaxed, he fell asleep. Then the CamelS who, Of course, couldn't tell directions by Ieading the stars, gradually turned to the Side and Went in a big Wide CirCIe Until they ended UP at the Same PIaCe that they Started from! By then it WaS morning, and the PCOPle WOke UP an

51、d realized they Were back at the Same SPOt Where they Started They IOSt heart and began to Cry about their COnditiOn. SinCe the desert CrOSSing WaS SUPPOSed to be OVer by now, they had no more WateE and they Were WOrried about there WaS nothing to drink. and Were extremely afraid Ihey WOUld die Of t

52、hirst. They even began to blame the CaraVan Ieader and the desert guide. However, the Ieader Inniself didn't IOSe courage. He talked With die desert guide and then Ihey began wandering, trying to WOrk OUt a plan.ParagraPh 1Suddenly, the Ieader noticed a Snlall CIUnlP (ItI) Of grassParagraPh 2A S

53、Pring (泉源)was found at last.【答案】ParagraPh 1Suddenly, the Ieader notice a Small ClIlmP Of grass SO he WaS IOSt in thought: There InUSt be Water here If there WaSn,t water, the grass COUIdil t IiVe in the desert. Therefore, he asked his fellow travelers to dig IlP the ground On that VCry SPOt WhCre th

54、e grass WaS They dug and dug. and gradually they found a Iarge StOne The guide jumped into the hole, PUt his ear to the stone, and heard the SOUnd Of flowing WatenParagraPh 2A SPring （泉源）was found at last. All the PeOPle Were extremely cheerful. ThCy expressed IhCir thanks to the leader. And then th

55、ey hurried to drink WatCr and COOkCd their food With it. BefOre IhCy left, they raised a Iligh flag SO that Other travelers COUld See the new SPring in the hot-sand desert. Then Ihey COntinUed traveling SafeIy to the Cnd Of their journey.【解析】本篇书而表达是读后续写。要求考生根据所给内容续写两段。本篇书而表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，一个商人带领着商

56、队去另一个国家售卖商品。他们来 到一个沙漠的边缘，这个沙漠白天沙仃烫的像木炭一般，无法行走。于是他们找到一个懂得星象的导游， 晚上等沙子冷却下来再前行。有一天晚上，导游发现他们离沙漠的另一边非常近了，他非常疲惫，于是他 在放松的时候睡着了。骆驼不识方向，它们转向另一边，绕着大圈定，停在了他们出发的地方。第二天早 上人们发现他们在回到了原地，他们开始哭泣、担忧，甚至指责领队和导游。但是领队并没有灰心，开始 和导游一起想办法解决问题。续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：突然，领队注意到一小团草。于是接下来应该写：领队看到草，想到 草生长的附近一左是有水的。于是领队让大家在草所生长的地方挖丄，最后他们发

57、现了一个大石头，导游 靠近石头，听到了流动的水声。第二段开头是：最后他们找到了一个泉源。那么接下来就应该写：大家都 很髙兴，对领队表示了感谢。喝过水、吃完饭后，在启程之前，他们在此立了一面大旗，为了让英他的旅 行者看到这个沙漠中的泉源。然后他们继续旅程，最终安全地到达了终点。（注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。）【点睛】本文描写详略得当，情盯生动，内容完整，符合题目要求。范文中使用的一些词汇和句型值得我们学习。高级词汇 /短语,如：be IOSt in thought, dig up, express ones thanks to sb., hurr>f to do sth.等：高级句

58、型:虚 拟语气。时间状语从句和目的状语从句 BefOre they left, they raised a high flag SO that Other travelers COUld See the new SPring in the hot-sand desert.泄语从句，Thereforc, he asked his fellow travelers to dig IlP the ground On that Very SPOt Where the grass WaS.彰显了作者高水平的英语驾驭能力。【江苏省苏州第一中学2019-2020髙卜学期期中】阅读下面短文，根据所给情卉进行续

59、写，使之构成一个 完整的故事。BObby WaS getting COld Sitting OIlt in his backyard in the snow. BObby didn't Wear boots; or rather, he didn'tOWn any. The thin SneakerS he WOre had a few holes in them and they did a POOrjOb Of keeping OUt the cold. BObby had been in his backyard for about an hour already Try as he might, he COUld not COme UP With an idea for his mother's ChriStinaS gift He S