初中英语作文专题讲解-作文18-各地中考作文真题解析及满分作文赏析-学生版

1、精选优质文档-倾情为你奉上Introduction中考英语写作类型指导一、回信类作文：1. 仔细阅读来信，确定回信中需要写的要点。 方法一：看来信人写的什么，模仿他的写，但要注意不能和来信人写的一样，即使内容相似，也要换词或句式来表达。 方法二：看来信中有无问句，有问句的必须给予回答。 看来信人有无愿望，有愿望的给予祝福。2. 书信格式 注意落款是不能出现真实姓名。二、正反观点类作文：类型一：介绍正反两方面观点并陈述自己的想法。 1. 先介绍正面观点(advantages),一般写两到三点即可。 First,；Second,.; ThirdBesidesWhats more,. 2. 正反观点

2、中间要有过渡。 用连词或词组过渡：however; on the other hand 用谚语过渡：Every coin has two sides. 3. 介绍反面观点（disadvantages）,方法同上。 4. 陈述自己的观点 In my opinion, I think.类型二：选择一方观点进行陈述，并说明理由。 1. 开门见山明确自己的观点，是赞同还是不赞同。I think.I dont think 2. 阐述理由，两到三点即可。 First,; Second,; BesidesWhats moreFinally三、图表类作文：1. 认真读图。2. 描述图表中的信息，可能用到分数、

3、百分数，注意要加of3. 对图表中的信息进行评论。 建议：描述完一个信息，紧跟着评论，然后再进行第二个信息的描述和评论。4. 最后陈述自己的观点。4、 Mind-map类作文：1.看懂mind-map,通常来讲mind-map会告诉你作文的要点或提纲。2. 根据作文的要求，将mind-map中的要点拓展开来写。5、 命题、半命题作文1. 审准题目文章的中心要对题目的分析来确定，一定要弄清主题的内涵,确立与文章联系的主题思想，表达不能游离于主题,否则即使内容再精彩，也是"跑题"作文,得分将会大打折扣。因此，写命题作文最重要的是先审清题目,确立要表现的中心。2. 构思结构开放思

4、路，启动联想，构想表现形式，勾勒出文章的结构层次，依次写出引言段，主题句,发展段和结尾句，努力使之新颖，别致。3. 选择材料围绕想表现的中心去选择组织材料，所选的材料必须典型精要。4. 语言表达用最确切明了的语言贯穿材料，表达自己的思想，力争用符合英语语法规则。英语表达习惯，最顺畅自然的词、句、段去表达中心思想。与表现中心无关的话即使再生动形象也不要去写。作文总的要求：1. 审题，不能跑题。2. 要点齐全，所给提示词要用上。要点表达要一目了然，不要拐弯抹角。3. 条理清晰，语句流畅。开头和结尾一定要写好。3. 时态、人称、单词拼写、语法、标点符号要准确。4. 思想要积极向上。5. 书写要美观大

5、方。6. 写完自己读两遍，确保语言流畅，语法正确。专心-专注-专业Presentation各地中考英语作文真题解析及满分作文赏析Ø 上海中考作文真题Write at least 60 words about the topic “Im Proud of Myself”（以“我为自己自豪”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不计入总词数。）Use the following points as a reference（以下内容仅供参考）l What kind of person are you?l What makes you proud of yourself? (Give an

6、 example / examples)l Why are you proud of yourself?考题分析² 满分作文赏析Im Proud of MyselfI am a boy of less confidence. I always hate running. But as we all know, the student of Grade Nine have to take part in the sports exam. At that moment, I just wanted to give up, but my parents encouraged me, “Im

7、possible is nothing. You could challenge yourself!” So with the encouragement of them, I tried my best to run and insisted on running. When I got to the finishing line, I felt proud of myself. Though I didnt get the good mark, I knew I won. I created a miracle for myself and I was so proud of myself

8、! 准确用词体育测验：终点：好成绩：扩展词汇challenge：insist (on)：miracle：活学活用众所周知：参加：尽全力：在那时：放弃：好词好句“Impossible is nothing.”So with the encouragement of them, I tried my best to run and insisted on running. 整体点评Ø 湖北中考作文真题一份调查报告显示，现在有相当一部分中学生很少甚至从来不吃早餐（调查情况见表一），这一现象表明许多中学生生活中不注意保持身体健康。请根据表一和表二提供的信息，写一篇短文，简单表述中学生不吃早餐

9、的主要原因，并给出保持身体健康的一些建议。要求：1、可适当发挥，但必须包含表格所提供的信息； 2、词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，且不计入总词数）参考词汇：appetite食欲；harm伤害表二三要三不要多吃水果和蔬菜不要吃脂肪太多的食品睡眠时间不少于8小时工作不要太劳累多运动不要吸烟According to a survey, quite a few middle school students seldom or even never have breakfast before they go to school. _考题分析² 满分作文赏析According to a su

10、rvey, quite a few middle school students seldom or even never have breakfast before they go to school. 56% of the students say they dont eat breakfast because they have no time. 26% of the students dont want to have breakfast because they have no appetite. 18% of the students never eat breakfast bec

11、ause they want to keep slim. I think, on the one hand, we should eat more fruit and vegetables. We are supposed to sleep at least 8 hours and do more exercise because exercising can keep us healthy. On the other hand, we had better not eat food that has too much fat. It will also do good for us not

12、to work too hard. Besides, we shouldnt smoke because smoking is harmful to our health.扩展词汇on the one handon the other hand：be supposed to：活学活用最好做：对有害：近义替换of the students say they dont eat breakfast.of the students dont want to have breakfast.of the students never eat breakfast. 整体点评Ø 黑龙江中考作文真题幸

13、福是什么？幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家，幸福是老师望向你的赞许的目光，幸福是孤独时朋友送来的一杯奶茶，幸福是请以“My happiness”为话题，写一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事情。要求：条理清晰，语言流畅，字迹工整，80-100词。考题分析² 满分作文赏析My happinessHappiness is important in our life. In fact, youll find happiness easily as soon as you put yourt heart into it.Last Friday, I caught a cold, which was

14、not serious. So I went to school as usual. But I coughed all the time in class. At that time, my math teacher, Mr Sun was not angry, and he decided to take me to the hospital at once. On our way to the hospital, he looked after and encouraged me. He asked me whether I was a bit comfortable or not. I

15、t took us about half an hour to get to the hospital. At the moment I was moved.My teachers love makes me happy. I have made up my mind to study harder. Only in this way can I make a return for his kindness.准确用词像平时一样：一点点：活学活用得感冒：照顾：带某人去医院/看病：做某事花了某人时间：去的路上：好词好句下定决心：回报：Youll find happiness easily as s

16、oon as you put yourt heart into it. I caught a cold, which was not serious. He asked me whether I was a bit comfortable or not. Only in this way can I make a return for his kindness.整体点评Ø 江西中考作文真题假设你是Emma，你的笔友Josh给你写了一封电子邮件，向你倾诉他在家里的一些烦恼。请根据来信和提示，给Josh回一封电子邮件。先说说你的看法，再给他建议，并适当发挥。To:EmmaSubject:

17、 Ask for helpDear Emma,I have a problem and I need your help. My parents are really strict and never let me do anything! For example, when I go out with my friends, my mom always asks, “where are you going? Who are you going with?” My parents want to control everything I do. I try to talk to them, b

18、ut they dont listen. They say,” This is our house and these are our rules.”Why is it so hard for them to understand me? Josh要求：1.内容要点：（1）看法：在父母看来，我们仍是孩子；父母这样做是为了保护我们； （2）建议：给父母写信谈谈你的想法；主动帮助你父母做些力所能及的事情。 2.回信应包括以上所有提示的信息，做到行文连贯，不要逐字翻译； 3.词数：不少于80字。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。Dear Josh, Thanks for your e-mail. I

19、 have had the same experience. I even had a fight with my parents. But now, I understand them._ I hope this helps! Emma考题分析² 满分作文赏析Dear Josh, Thanks for your e-mail. I have had the same experience. I even had a fight with my parents. But now, I understand them. They love us so much that they wi

20、ll do whatever they could to protect us from being hurt. So they are usually strict with us.But it is not difficult to solve this problem if you understand what your parents did for. First, you can write a letter to your parents. You can tell them what you are thinking about and share your ideas wit

21、h them. Second, youd better help them with some housework in your free time. What more, you can often exchange your ideas with them and tell them more about you and your life. I hope this helps! Emma准确用词在空闲时间：家务活：扩展词汇be strict with sb：exchange：活学活用保护某人免受：解决问题：思考：此外：帮某人做：和某人分享：告诉某人：好词好句They love us s

22、o much that they will do whatever they could to protect us from being hurt.But it is not difficult to solve this problem if you understand what your parents did for.整体点评Focused practiceØ 浙江中考作文真题中学生学习时间长、压力大，专家建议学生每天课后应采取适当的方式放松自己。你代表班级在一次 "The Ways for Students to Relax"的学校座谈中与二(1)班的

23、Terry讨论了这一话题，请根据他的观点和你自己的观点，用英语给你的外籍教师Mr. Griffin写一篇有关这次讨论的汇报材料。1. Watching TV 1. 2. Playing computer games 2. 3. Hanging out with friends 3. 注意：1. 开头和结尾已经写好;2. 可以适当增加谈论话题时经常用到的话语,使内容连贯3. 所写内容必须包括上面表格中他的观点和你自己至少三个观点4. 词数：70字左右。Mr. Griffin,Recently I have had a discussion about The Ways for Students

24、to Relax with Terry, a student from Class One Grade Two. _TerryØ 浙江中考作文真题Ellen看到大家都对自己的未来充满期待，感到特别高兴。为了鼓励大家学好英语，他准备出一期英语学习经验交流专刊。请 根据以下问题和答案的提示并结合你的实际情况，以"My English Learning"为题写一篇80词左右的英文稿件，要求至少涉及其中的三个问题，并且不能出现你的真实姓名、校名和县名等。提示：When did you start learning English? (in /years ago)How d

25、o you learn English? (listen carefully, study with a group, read English every day)What is difficult to learn? (listening, grammar)What other helpful ways do you know to learn English well? (watch English movies, sing English songs)Ø 四川中考作文真题上周，你们班就初中生能否骑电动自行车上学进行了一次讨论。现在，请你根据下表用英语写一篇介绍讨论情况的短文。注意：1短文须包括写作提示和表格中所列的全部内容；2时态运用正确，书写工整规范；3词数80-100个左右。生词提示：  electric adj. 电动的