【课件】读后续写语料听写课件-2022届高三英语写作专项提升

1、丰富语言-听写1. 具体词替换一般词 say(替换单词/短语/句子)体态: smile/tug/begin/repeat问答: ask/answer/reply承认/招供: admit赞同: agree不赞同: disagree低语: whisper/murmur抱怨: complain心理: think/decide建议: advice/suggest/urge补充: add请求: beg/plead叫喊: shout/scream/call out/yell out哭诉: cry/weep/sob叹气: sigh1. 具体词替换一般词 say(替换单词/短语/句子)体态: 问答: 承认/招

2、供: 赞同: 不赞同: 低语: 抱怨: 心理: 建议: 补充: 请求: 叫喊: 哭诉: 叹气: 消极地/负面地:焦虑地生气地失望地绝望地粗鲁地讽刺地蔑视地2.添加副词(动作方式)(情感)negtively:anxiouslyangrily/furiouslydisappointedlyhopelessly/despairinglyimpolitely/rudelysarcasticallyscornfully积极地:开心地有决心地有激情地真诚地有希望地幽默地礼貌地Positivily:happily/delightedly/joyfullydeterminedlyenthusiasticall

3、ysincerely/faithfullyhopefullyhumorouslypolitely消极地/负面地:焦虑地生气地失望地绝望地粗鲁地讽刺地蔑视地2.添加副词(动作方式)(情感)积极地:开心地有决心地有激情地真诚地有希望地幽默地礼貌地3. 添加介词短语(动作方式)(情感)aftera lengthy silencea slient moment沉默了一会ina clear voice(clearly)a determined voice(determinedly)a furious voice(furiously/angrily)a exasperated/annoyed angry

4、voice(exasperetedly)despair(despairingly)清晰地有决心地生气地生气地绝望地3. 添加介词短语(动作方式)(情感)after 沉默了一会in清晰地有决心地生气地生气地绝望地withouthesitation没有犹豫thinking/a second thought不假思索witha sigh叹了一口气an intelligent nod of her head聪明地点了点头despitethe fact that.不考虑.的事实the potential danger不顾潜在的危险without没有犹豫不假思索with叹了一口气聪明地点了点头despite

5、不考虑.的事实不顾潜在的危险4.添加形容词短语(情感)satisfied withthe result of.满意.的结果the performance满意这个表现full ofhope/excitement/energy充满希望/激动/能量enthusiasm/passion充满激情surprise/astonishment充满惊讶fright/horror充满恐惧rage充满愤怒jealous ofthe attention嫉妒关注him嫉妒他his success嫉妒他的成功4.添加形容词短语(情感)satisfied with 满意.的结果 满意这个表现full of 充满希望/激动/

6、能量 充满激情 充满惊讶 充满恐惧 充满愤怒jealous of 嫉妒关注 嫉妒他 嫉妒他的成功delighted withherself对她自己满意her new home对她的新房子满意delighted with 对她自己满意 对她的新房子满意5.添加分词短语(现在分词/过去分词)(动作,解释)肢体marching towards him大步走向他turning around to do转过头drying her eyes擦干眼泪laying a hand on his arm把手放在他手臂上showing off sth炫耀着frowning皱眉scracthing his head挠

7、了挠头rubbing her hands搓了搓手5.添加分词短语(现在分词/过去分词)(动作,解释)肢体 大步走向他 转过头 擦干眼泪 把手放在他手臂上 炫耀着 皱眉 挠了挠头 搓了搓手添加分词(现在分词/过去分词)五官sounding confused听起来困惑地staring at sb盯着某人looking at sbanswering quickly快速地回答open-mouthed张大嘴巴地添加分词(现在分词/过去分词)五官 听起来困惑地 盯着某人 快速地回答 张大嘴巴地添加分词(现在分词/过去分词)心理acknowledging that.承认.confirming it确定ign

8、oring the fact that.忽视.的事实blushing scarlet脸色通红losing her patience already失去耐心添加分词(现在分词/过去分词)心理 承认. 确定 忽视.的事实 脸色通红 失去耐心6.添加并列句/并列成分(动作,解释)andshook her head并且摇了摇头slammed the door shut并且摔门butshe wasnt quite sure但是她并不确定she said this slowly但是她慢慢地说forshe was quite unsertain因为她并不确定6.添加并列句/并列成分(动作,解释)and 并且

9、摇了摇头 并且摔门but 但是她并不确定 但是她慢慢地说for 因为她并不确定7.添加从句(定语从句-限制性定语从句/状语从句)(补充,解释)定语从句,who always spoke of his father as if.总是说起他父亲就好像.,who was becoming friendlier and friendlier越来越友好,who was sitting at her dressing table坐在梳妆台边状语从句because.因为as if.好像the moment he saw.他一看到.就.every time he heard that.每次他听见.7.添加从句(定语从句-限制性定语从句/状语从句)(补充,解释)定语从句 总是说