英语基础写作课件

1、Basic Writing- How to describe a person?DISCUSSION: What is a good writing？ Structure: * Good beginning and ending(好的开头和结尾)* Well organized and smoothly developed (结构合理,行文流畅) Language:* No Chinglish (避免中文式英文)* No Grammatical mistakes (没有语法错误)* With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence

2、patterns (词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化) Brief Introduction (topic)Body (supporting ideas)ConclusionThe outline of the writing:Conclusion paragraph: Introduction paragraph: Point 2BodyPoint 1supporting idea 1supporting idea 2supporting idea 1supporting idea 21.认真审题，明确要求。 1)确定短文的主题和格式。 2)确定短文的人称和时态。 3)短文必须包括全部信息内容

3、，不能遗漏任何一点。 4)写出的短文必须有不同的句式。2.划分信息块，列出写作要点，明确写作的先后次序。3.确定可能用到的短语、主要句型。4.扩展成句，连句成篇。基础写作基本步骤写作内容 人物介绍：(老师范例)1. 李莎,英语老师，女，22岁, 1.65米, 身材苗条, 装扮入时。2. 性格活泼，爱唱爱跳，爱开玩笑。3. 她的课生动活泼，我们常在课堂上做游戏。4. 与学生关系融洽，深受同学欢迎。写作要求1. 题目：My Favorite Teacher2. 必须使用4个句子介绍全部所给的内容.3. 将4个句子组织成连贯的短文. 步骤一：（1）审题构思 ： a、主题 ：My Favorite T

4、eacher b、人称 ：第三人称 c、时态 ：一般现在时（2）列出要点： 1) 李莎,英语老师, 女，22岁, 1.65米, 身材苗条, 装扮入时。 2) 性格活泼，爱唱爱跳，爱开玩笑。 3) 她的课生动活泼，我们常在课堂上做游戏。 4) 与学生关系融洽，深受同学欢迎。 2. activelikesplay jokes 3. be lively and interestingplay games4. get on well with,be popular with步骤二：句子所步需的词汇，短语和句型。李莎， 女，英语老师, 22岁，1.65米，身材苗条, 装扮入时。性格活泼， 爱唱爱跳， 爱

5、开玩笑。她的课生动活泼，我们常在课堂上做游戏。与学生关系融洽，深受同学欢迎；1. be slim and fashionable步骤三：连词成句。 (1)、Lisa is our English teacher. She is a young lady. She is 22 years old and she is 1.65 meters tall. She is slim and fashionable.(2)、She is active. she likes singing and dancing. She plays jokes with us.(3)、Her lessons are l

6、ively and interesting. We often play games in class.(4)、Miss Li gets on well with us and she is very popular. 学会连句成文(1). Lisa is our English teacher.(2). She is a young lady.(3). She is 22 years old.(4). She is 1.65 meters tall. (5). She is slim and fashionable. Lisa, our English teacher(同位语）, is a

7、fashionable and slim young lady, who is 22 years old, and1.65 meters tall（定语从句）.用一句话表达性格活泼，爱唱爱跳，爱开玩笑。学会连句成文第一步：拆分成几个简单句(1)She is active .(2)She likes singing and dancing .(3)She plays jokes with us.第二步：合并这几个简单句The active teacher likes singing, dancing and joking. ：My Favorite Teacher Lisa, our Engli

8、sh teacher, is a fashionable and slim young lady, who is 22 years old, and1.65 meters tall. The active teacher likes singing, dancing and she plays jokes with us. Besides, her lessons are interesting and lively, and we often play games in class. Miss Li gets on well with us and she is very popular. 范文:步骤四：连句成篇。步骤五: 检查1.时态2. 主谓一致3.名词单复数4.单词拼写5.动词的过去式, 过去分词6.句子是否完整语法词汇,句型 （高级）和多样化（较复杂） 1.覆盖了所有的要点 2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑要点全连接词Summary:如何算是一篇好文章？Homework:请根据下述内容,以“Our Monitor”为题,用英语写一篇短文. 在班里吴东个子最高,乐于助人,他是班长. 几个月前,我因病耽误了两周的课,他帮助我赶上了.他擅长数学和物理, 他也喜欢英语, 老师和同学们都认为他的发音最好.他爱踢足球,