11.5期杜世明写作课lesson

1、Task-1是否赞同的介绍段满足这些条件就能高分：1. 最好能用事实引出第一段；2. 改写题目中的观点；3. 表达你自己的意见；是否赞同的介绍段最单纯地换词改写1). Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?It is sometimes argued that tourists from overseas should be cha

2、rged more than local residents to visit important sites and monuments. I completely disagree with this idea.是否赞同的介绍段主动改被动来改写原题观点 2). Some people think that teenagers should participate in community services. 改写1:It is argued that teenagers should be encouraged to be involved in community services. I

3、 truly agree with this idea.改写2:It is argued that participation in community services should be encouraged among teenagers. I truly agree with this idea.是否赞同的介绍段换词性来改写原题3) Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or d

4、isagree with this opinion?It is sometimes argued that the increase in the price of fuels can be the best solution to problems related to traffic and environment. I completely disagree with this idea.是否赞同的介绍段把题目观点中的事实部分陈述出来4) Some people think that nuclear power is the best way to solve the problem o

5、f energy crisis. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?Some countries, like the US and France, rely heavily on the use of nuclear enery as a solution to the problem of energy crisis. There is no doubt that this is an effective solution but I do not agree that it is the best one.

6、是否赞同的介绍段把题目观点中的事实部分陈述出来5) Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. There is no doubt that traffic and pollution from vehicles have e huge problems, both in cities and on motorways elsewhere. Solving these problems is likely to need more than a s

7、imple rise in the price of petrol. 是否赞同的介绍段用In order to来引出话题6) Some people think that media violence should be banned to reduce crimes. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?In order to create a society with low crime rate, governments have been seeking various methods. Some peop

8、le suggest that banning violent media contents could be an effective way. I can hardly agree with them. 赞同类范文(完全赞同)Over time our access to electronic forms of entertainment has e easier and has increased in popularity. However there have been many debates as to whether this hampers inventiveness. It

9、 can be clearly argued that reading books encourages creativity while watching television potentially hampers both our imagination and inspiration.The beauty of reading books is that it encourages a reader to form their own opinions and internally visualize events that are described. When anything i

10、s described in a book, it helps stimulate the creativity of the reader to help paint a picture. This picture created is a unique and individual experience and this is something watching television cannot plish. Some argue that television allows for better communication through provided sound and vis

11、uals, however having this extra sensory information provided encourages the watcher to e imaginatively inactive, as all information is already available and seen in the same way by all viewers.Reading books also allows an author to describe internal workings and thought patterns of characters portra

12、yed, which paints a more profound picture of how a character thinks and feels. Other forms of media are unable to depict characters internal workings correctly and even Shakespearian plays had to communicate characters internal workings by using soliloquies, which are rarely utilised in modern media

13、. Modern television is yet to develop means to portray character development in the depth that books can. One may argue that this is portrayed through acting, however this may discourage a viewer from reflecting on what a characters future hopes and dreams may be. There have also been many scientifi

14、c studies on the topic of books verses television. Physiologically, reading books has been linked with improving the cognitive capacity of the brain and the capacity of creative thinking. It is therefore clear that reading is the superior choice.赞同类范文(Bryan版本)Nowadays, as the increasing consumption

15、of traditional energy brings about energy crisis, finding out an alternative energy has e an urgent mission worldwide. Some people suggest that developing nuclear energy should be the best solution. I basically agree with this viewpoint.Since the day it was developed and adapted, nuclear power has d

16、emonstrated a variety of advantages. The most impressive one is its high-efficiency, which cannot be compared by any other existing methods of energy production, like solar, water or fossil fuels. Energy generated with 1 kilogram of uranium can be thousands of times as much as that produced by hundr

17、eds of tons of fossil fuels.Another argument in favor of nuclear energy is related to environmental protection. Carbon-based fuels bring about huge amount of fume, smog or dirty water in their process of burning, which is detrimental to peoples health, but the process that turns nuclear power to ene

18、rgy generates little wastage. This advantage is critically important to countries having been severely polluted, such as China and Russia.Finally, as human history of exploiting nuclear resource is relatively short, there is still a large amount of nuclear resource that can be utilized, compared wit

19、h fossil fuels. Also, unlike energy resources of strong seasonality, such as water, nuclear power can be exploited and utilized at any time around a year, which provides human a stable and long- term energy source in the future.The argument against nuclear energy may be the concern on its potential

20、disastrous consequences, just like the accident happened in Fukushima city, Japan. However, the problems can be solved by choosing safe locations for the construction of nuclear power stations or by disposing used nuclear fuel rods in a more environmentally-friendly way.In conclusion, despite the li

21、ngering dispute on the use of nuclear power, it is undeniable that nuclear energy is an effective, environmental-friendly and stable sort of energy, which should be encouraged and well developed.不赞同类范文Subjectssuchasmathematicsandphilosophyaretoodifficultforstudentstostudyatschool,sotheyshouldbemadeo

22、ptionalratherthancompulsory.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?It is very common in todays education system that students have the discretion of choosing some electives according to their interests. It is argued that difficult subjects, such as maths and philosophy, should also be optimal. Personally,

23、 I totally disagree with this idea.People naturally connect words like dull, boring and useless with subjects requiring huge amount of mental work. Students struggle with numerous formulas and theories,none of which seems to have any connection with our mundane life. In addition, it is widely believ

24、ed that students ought to be assessed by what they are capable of, instead of things they are not good at. There will be counterproductive impact for students if they are compulsorily scrammed up with subjects that are either too hard to understand or of little interests.Nevertheless, counter argume

25、nts are abundant. First of all, the difficulty of each subject has been scientifically designed and reviewed to match with the intelligence level of different years in school. In many cases, It is too difficult! is no more than an excuse for many students to escape from hardworking and punishment of

26、 their terrible results. A truant would not e another Einstein even if every subject was optimal for him.In addition, those discussed subjects actually aim to cultivate our logical and critical thinking which is an essential and vital factor contributing to anyones future study and life. After all,

27、even an artist needs certain level of logical thinking in his works, not to mention the fact that many sculpture masters have expertise in geometry and anatomy.In conclusion, traditional compulsory subjects like maths are still of much importance in our education to cultivate the younger generation

28、with necessary logical thinking and numeracy skills.是否赞同的核心段(观点肤浅不赞同思路)有人认为不应该继续进行太空探索。1. 改写+不赞同这个观点2. 承认题目中的事实部分：It is undeniable that space projects have always been incredibly money-consuming. Launching of satellites, building of space ships and maintenance of facilities are conducted at a cost o

29、f billions of dollars each year. In the meantime, a certain proportion of people on the earth have been suffering hunger, plague and environmental pollution for decades. Given all these facts, the argument against space exploration seems plausible. 3. 反驳：However, I believe this view to be shortsight

30、ed. On the one hand, the benefits brought by exploring the universe are too valuable to be measured with money. (展开) On the other hand, exploring the universe and seeking solutions to earth problems are not mutually exclusive. (展开) 4. In conclusion, 我不赞同这个观点是否赞同的核心段(观点肤浅不赞同思路)有人认为应该禁止媒体暴力来减少犯罪。 1. 改

31、写+不赞同这个观点 2. 承认题目中的事实部分：The obvious argument against media violence is that excessive exposure to super hero movies or CSI TV dramas may lead viewers to believe that violence is a natural solution to various problems. In this sense, people against TV or movie violence think that this influence will

32、increase the incidence of violent crimes, like street fighting or armed robbery.3. 反驳段：However, I believe that this influence is just temporary and always exaggerated. On the one hand, when viewers turn off the TV or walk out of the cinema, they will be back to reality where rational thinking domina

33、tes. (展开) On the other hand, there is no proven evidence to show the connection between watching media violence and committing crimes. (展开) 4. In conclusion, 我不赞同这个观点是否赞同的核心段(观点肤浅不赞同思路)有人认为金钱是幸福的唯一来源。1. 改写+不赞同这个观点2. 承认题目中的事实部分：It is undeniable that there is such a strong connection between happiness

34、 and money. Being rich enough to afford whatever one desires must produce a great sense of satisfaction. Also, if one is financially able to help others out of trouble, he or she must be happy about what they can do to make this world a better place. 3. 反驳段：However, admitting importance of money is

35、not the same as assuming that it is the only factor contributing to being happy. As a matter of fact, the definition of happiness varies greatly from person to person. (展开) 4. In conclusion, 我不赞同这个观点是否赞同类型的结尾段类型一：万能的-虽然.但是In conclusion, although it costs huge amounts of money, I still believe that s

36、pace exploration is worth investing in. 多写一句来强调意义重大(.not only.but also.)。是否赞同类型的结尾段类型二：重复观点+提供建议来让话题得到完善In conclusion, I believe that violence should keep playing an important role in media industry. Authorities of each country ought to implement strict rating systems to protect young people from th

37、e adverse influence mentioned above. G 类 书信写作A 类 图表作文150词 + 大约20分钟 + 占到总分值1/3对于参加General Training(移民类)雅思考试的考生来说，Task1的写作任务是完成一封书信。题目中给出一个背景话题，然后要求考生完成题目中给出的三个要求。书信写作的高分关键在于：1. 编故事的能力要出色，能写出一个连贯合理的故事；2. 文字表达不需要过于学术，但是要偏向地道表达；3. 注意书信写作的时态，有可能在一篇文章里使用超过5种时态。书信内容介绍书信写作的内容包括很宽的范围：1. 道歉；2. 感谢；3. 投诉；4. 建议；

38、5. 申请；6. 邀请；7. 介绍；8. 寻求帮助书信格式介绍1). 最好是左边对齐，每段之间空一整行；2). 称呼Dear 名字/头衔/Sir or Madam；3). 结尾部分一定需要比较礼貌的收尾： kind regards-sincerely/faithfully-lots of love 1). 第一段通常简单开头I am writing this letter to 介绍写信的目的；2). 正文的分段没有固定要求一般来说题目会给出一件事的大概介绍，然后要求完成三个具体的任务。3). 结尾部分一般需要表示感谢或者提出要求I would be grateful if you could

39、 .My request is that I will be looking forward to your reply. Dear Jason, I am writing this letter to apologize for what have happened these days. I am really sorry about the noise from my dog. Last week, my sister sent her dog, Frank, to us asking me to be a puppy-sitter for two weeks. She went to

40、China for honeymoon. I was told that Frank had been doing well and barely made trouble for my sister. Unfortunately, it is clear that the dog does not like his temporary home possibly because it is the first time that he lives in a place that is unfamiliar to him. If the situation were reversed, I w

41、ould feel the same. I know that you must have been annoyed by the barking of the dog all day long, so I am going to fix it. Sending Frank to the pet house in the community may be a good solution. There, he can do whatever he wants while leaving others in peace. I would be grateful if you could under

42、stand my situation and accept my apology. Sincerely yours Jeremy LinDear Dave,I am writing to let you know that at last we have moved to a bigger house! We just couldnt go on living in the two-bedroom bungalow now that the twins are growing up and the new baby has arrived. So we started lookingand o

43、ne thing led to another and finally here we are in our new home.I am sure you will like it. We have three bedrooms now, and a very modern bathroom and kitchen. The kids are happy because there is much more space with the big living room and the garden outside. But Michel is the happiest of all becau

44、se he doesnt need to do much decorating.Why dont you come round this weekend and see what you think of our new place? We would all love to see you and if the weather is good we can have a barbecue in the garden.Our new address and phone number are below, so give us a call and let us know when to exp

45、ect you.Lots of loveFrancoise书信阅读清单描述邀请剑桥81702. 单纯介绍剑桥6-1703. 道歉剑桥5-1704. 投诉工地建设剑桥3-1695. 事故投诉剑桥4-1706. 物品服务投诉剑桥61697. 出售转让剑桥41728. 请假工作经历剑桥3-1679. 请假剑桥9-170对于参加A类考试的同学，你们被要求在Task1完成对一个图表的描述。Line graph 线图Bar chart 柱状图Pie chart 饼图Table 表格图Diagram 地图或者流程重要的事情说三遍请不要按照图形分类，因为图表之间是interchangeable的！1. 100

46、% 对比图-按照宏观 + 微观的方法来写；2. 80%变化图-主要描述每个元素的变化过程，可以用数据之间的对比来做引导和过渡；第一类: 对比句1In 2007, only 11% of Indian households had air-conditioning, compared with/to 86% in the US. -大小数据对比2Teachers salary was the largest cost of the school, while/whereas the amount of money spent on books was the smallest.特点的对比3. T

47、he cost of food accounted for the largest proportion of the family expenses (40%), followed by the cost of gasoline (25%) and the money spent on education and training (15%). 4. 标准比较句The proportion of people choosing rock music was considerably/slightly larger than that of people who were in favor o

48、f classical music, at respectively 60% and 17%. considerably-significantlyslightly-narrowly 5. 总分关系Singapore has a population of about 4 million people, with Chinese accounting for 3 quarters. 其中-切入点关键句The total sales of Coke reached 17.1 billion dollars in 2000, with North America having the larges

49、t proportion which was 34%, compared with only 7% in Africa and Middle East. 6. Similar的代替The difference between the spending on entertainment and sightseeing is barely noticeable. 差距非常小In Germany, the proportion of people buying pop and rock music varied slightly, constituting 20% and 27% respectiv

50、ely. 差别不大第二类：变化类基础变化1). 主语saw a形容词名词The proportion of elderly people saw a considerable increase during the 20-year period from 5% to 17%. Both the popularity of beef and lamb saw/showed an increasing trend. The UK saw a remarkable increase in terms of the number of tourists from overseas. 2). 动词+副词

51、The use of mobile phones increased dramatically, rising from 55% to 80%. Increased-rose-grewDecreased-fell-declined Dramatically-substantially-considerably-slightly-marginally-steadily 3). There was a 形容词+名词inThere was a dramatic increase in the use of mobile phones. 2. 特殊变化可遇而不可求1). The proportion

52、of elderly people aged over 65 almost doubled/tripled, rising from 9% in 2000 to 16% in 2005. 成倍增长2). The number of wild birds in the UK halved, declining from 5 million to 2.5 million. -减少一半3). Between 1995 and 2000, the amount of goods transported by road remained relatively stable, at approximate

53、ly 70 million tons. 3. 复杂变化句1). 先.再.The cost of books had increased to 23% by 1991 before decreasing to only 9% by the end of the period. 2). 总体来看，尽管In general, the share price saw a dramatic increase from 35 dollars in 1996 to 80 dollars in 1998, despite a noticeable decrease in 1997. 3). 起伏波动The n

54、umber of prisoners in the US fluctuated wildly, ranging between 80,000 in 1950 and 120,000 in 1980. 4). 突出特别明显部分The growth was particularly noticeable between 1995 and 2002, during which time the use of mobile phones almost tripled. Coke的全球销量达到了17.1 billion, 其中北美洲有最大的比率，是30.4%， 而非洲和中东地区只有7%。 在其他三个地区

55、中，拉丁美洲有相对较高的销售比率，达到15.7%， 然后是欧洲20.5%和亚洲16.4%。The total sales of Coke reached 17.1 billion dollars in 2000, with North America having the largest proportion which was 34%, compared with only 7% in Africa and Middle East. In the other three regions, Latin America had a relatively higher percentage(25.

56、7%), followed by Europe (20.5%) and Asia (16.4%).很明显，中国游客的钱主要花在了购物上，占到71.2%， 而食物的花费才只有1.2%。花在娱乐和观光方面的钱很相近，分别占到12.9%和11.6%。其他方面的花费占到3.1%。It is obvious that Chinese tourists spent most of their money on shopping accounting for as much as 71.2%, compared to only 1.2% on food. The amount spent on entert

57、ainment and sightseeing varied slightly, with 12.9% and 11.6% respectively. Spending on other items took up the rest 3.1%. 1. 这个table给出了信息关于5个国家消费者在三种商品上的花费。2. 显而易见，在所有国家中，花在FoodDrinksTobacco上的钱的比率都是最高的，其中Turkey有最大的数据，32.14%，紧跟着的是Ireland，28.91。剩下三个国家的数据范围差别不大，分别是Spain18.8%，Italy 16.36和Sweden15.77%。3

58、. 与之相反，花在LeisureEducation上的比率是最低的。Turkey的数据又是最大的，达到4.35%，而Spain的是最低的，只有1.98%。Italy和Sweden之间的差距几乎不可见，分别是3.2%和3.22%。4. 自己看着办5. Overall, 在所有国家，消费者更愿意花钱在必需品上。The table gives information regarding consumers spending in 5 countries in 2002. It is obvious that the amount of money spent on Food/Drinks/Tobac

59、co accounted for the highest proportion in all the countries, with Turkey having the largest data (32.14%), closely followed by Ireland (28.91%). Figures of the other three countries varied slightly ranging between 15.77% in Sweden and 18.8% in Spain. By contrast, the percentage of money paid for Le

60、isure/Education was the lowest of all countries, with Turkey again having the largest data at 4.3%, compared to only 1.9% in Spain. The difference between Italy and Sweden was barely noticeable, constituting 3.2% and 3.22% respectively. In all the listed countries, less than 10% of money was spent o