初中英语 沪教牛津版 9A U3 Writing 课件

1、2021深圳市初中英语空中课堂九年级上册 Unit 3授课教师：卓柔君 June南山实验教育集团园丁学校WritingLearning ObjectivesTo master some useful expressions about family life;01To know about a Five-star writing process;02To write a short article about your own family life following the Five-star writing process.03CONTENTS1234Lead-inPre-writing

2、While-writingPost-writing01Lead-in1Lead-inEmilys and Jerrys family lifeFamily membersPossessionsHouseworkFamily activitiesRulesLikes most about the familyWrite a short article about your family life.1Lead-inTask02Pre-Writing2Pre-WritingKey informationTopic-related expressionsDraftingEditingBeautiful

3、 handwriting03While-Writing3While-WritingKey informationFamily membersPossessionsHouseworkFamily activitiesRulesLikes most about the familyStep 1 Think about your own family life and fill in the mind map.My family lifeMy mum, my dad, my sister, brother and meA mobile phone, a laptop, etc.3While-Writ

4、ingFamily membersPossessionsHouseworkFamily activitiesRulesLikes most about the familyStep 2 Find out useful expressions from the text on P35 and add them to your mind map.My family lifeMy mum, my dad, my brother, sister and meA mobile phone, a laptop, etc.Topic-related expressionscrowded, dont mind

5、The expressions you find are based on your own situation. You can also use good expressions that you have learnt before.3While-WritingFamily membersPossessionsHouseworkFamily activitiesRulesLikes most about the familyStep 3 Make a rough draft (草稿) based on your own mind map.My family lifeMy mum, my

6、dad, my brother, sister and meA mobile phone, a laptop, etc.crowded, dont mindDraftingWe are a large family. There are five people in my family. They are my mum, my dad, my sister, my brother and me. Although its a bit crowded in our little flat, we dont mind.Also decide on how to put them into prop

7、er paragraphs.3While-WritingStep 4 Improve your writing following the self-editing checklist below.Editing项目问题类型常见错误单词拼写一些易混词（如housework与homework）语法谓语是否准确（时态、语态、人称、数）主谓不一致 （如My parents is ）通篇一般现在时词组搭配介词等用错名词单复数可数名词单数形式标点符号一“逗”到底结构分段通篇一段语篇连贯性无连词或连词混用3While-WritingStep 5 Write down your article beauti

8、fully.Beautifulhandwriting04Post-Writing4Post-WritingTask 1 Finish the flow chart below to review the Five-star writing process.Summary & Self-assessmentKey informationTopic-related expressionsDraftingEditingBeautiful handwritingTask 2 Add your own notes to the writing process.HomeworkWrite an article about anoth