英语中考英语书面表达专题

1、英语中考英语书面表达专题一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）.如今，很多城市出现了一种绿色出行方式共享单车（bike-sharing）,它因环保、便捷而备受青睐，但同时也引发了一些问题。请你根据提示以uBike-sharing为题写一篇英语短文，表达自己的看法和建议。 要点提示：AdvantagesBe convenient, less pollution, reduce the traffic pressure（减缓交通压力）Take exercise ProblemsThrow away, damage （毁损）,be stolen AdviceCivilized （文明的） ,foll

2、ow the rules, take good care of注意：.短文应包括以上要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名；.词数：80-100 （文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。Bike-sharingToday, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities.【答案】 Today,as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming mo

3、re and more popular in many cities. Its known that it has many advantages. So its enjoyed by lots of people. First of all, its very convenient for people to go somewhere. 【高分句型一】 Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bike-sharing. Besides, bikesharing

4、 helps people take more exercise.In this way, its helpful to peoples health. （优势） However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen.（难题）In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and foll

5、ow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better,and our environment will be more beautiful.【高分句型二】（建议）【解析】【详解】这篇短文内容丰富，表达了所有要点，语言表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在短文中使用了大量的复合句、固定句式、连词及固定短语，为文章增色不少，.如：Its known that ithas many advantages., First of all, its v

6、ery convenient for people to go somewhere. , Also, Besides, In this way, However, it also brings some problems. For example, In my opinion, 等。【点睛】本文要求以“Bikesharing为题，根据表格的内容提示，写一篇短文，表达自己对共享单车 的看法和建议。写作时，考生要紧密贴合表格中的三个要点：首先，阐述共享单车的优 点；其次，列举共享单车带来的问题；最后，根据问题给出个人建议。2.亲爱的同学们，初中生活即将结束，你们一定有很多的感触.假如彳是Tony名

7、城中学九（1）班的学生。请以 My junior high school life为题,写一篇80词左右的短文。提示：.个人基本情况介绍.校园（校园干净而美丽，活动非富多彩）；老师（传授知识，教会做人，经常鼓励）；同学（和睦相处，互相学习，共同进步）。.对学校、老师、同学表达感谢和祝福。 要求：.文章包含以上提示内容，适当发挥。.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。【答案】 My junior high school lifeMy name is Tony. I am studying in Grade 9.As time goes by, my colorful junior middle sch

8、ool life is coming to an end. I m glad to tell you something about my school life.Our campus is clean and beautiful, and there are all kinds of activities. Our teachers teach us rich knowledge and how to behave ourselves. They also encourage us to work hard. We all get on well with our classmates. B

9、esides, we learn from each other and make progress together.I thanks for my school, my teachers and my classmates. Wish them better.【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我的初中生活。【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意 主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：My name is ,T m glad to , Our campus is - Our teachers tea

10、ch us等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的个人情况，接下来介绍我们的校园，老师和同学，最后对学校、老师、同学表达感谢和祝福。此处 go by, come to an end, tell sb about sth, all kinds of, behave oneself, encourage sb to do sth, get on with, learn from, make progress 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。.你有没有因为没能好好管理时间而影响了学习的经历？请你写一篇文

11、章谈谈这件事及你的看法。内容包括：1.你没完成学习任务的经历（事情，原因及后果）；2.针对如何管理好时间给出几点建议。作文要求：1.短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。3.词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。Once, I couldnt make good use of time and it had a bad influence on mystudy.【答案】 Once, I couldnt make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my study.I had an exper

12、ience like this. Last weekend, my good friend, Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game. It was interesting. So I spent more time on it. I forgot to do my homework in the end. My teachers and parents were angry with me. I was also upset.How to make good use of our time? I think we should ma

13、ke a weekday plan. We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. It can help us to remember what we have to do next.【解析】 【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如 make good use of, last weekend ， how to do ， p

14、lay a game a kind of， spent more time on ， forget to do ， in the end, be angry with , be going to do , on the paper , put up 等。而特殊非谓语动词结构 Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game. 和 I think we should make a weekday plan. /We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadli

15、ne of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. /It can help us to remember what we have to do next.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习 中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性， 也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理 后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使

16、用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得 到较高的分数。最近一份学生体质健康调查结果显示，学生近视率仍维持在高位水平，且越来越低龄 化。请根据下表所提示的内容，用英语写一篇短文，并发表自己的观点。现状大约70%学生眼睛近视主要原因.睡眠不足.长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等预防方法.做眼睛保健操，多进行体育活动.养成正确的用眼习惯你的观点(至少一条)参考词汇：近视的 shortsighted要求：(1)词数：80100个。(2)开头已给出，不计入总词数。(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。The survey shows that many students ha

17、ve become shortsighted at a very young age. At present,【答案】 The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age.At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes.Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time re

18、ading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use computers for a long time.In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.I think all of

19、 us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.【解析】【详解】这是一篇图表作文。根据题干要求可知，本篇文章主要使用一般现在时写作，人称用第三 人称复数和第一人称。内容包括：学生近视原因：1.睡眠不足(not enough ) 2.长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等(for a long time )防止近视的方法：1.做眼睛保健操，多进行体育 活动(eye exercises) 2.养成正确的用眼习惯(have the good habit of)个人观点：如：我认为，

20、我们应该了解保护眼睛的重要性，尽最大努力保护我们的眼睛。( I think ?; try ones best to do sth.)。常用的重点句型和短语有：sb. spend some time doing sth. , in order to do sth. , try to dosth., the importance of 等。( B)根据要求完成大作文，词数:80-100体育运动是中学生的共同爱好.请根据下面提示写一篇题为What We Get from Sports的短文,应该包含以下要点：1,学生参加体育运动的兴趣不同，理由各异.多数学生学习疲倦时，通过运动来放松自己.男孩参加各

21、项体育运动，希望运动能使自己更强壮.女孩也喜欢运动，希望运动使自己减肥和保持健康，苗条.你对运动的观点.注意:文中不得出现自己的名字和学校的名字.短文开头已给出，不计入词数.参考词语:keep slim (保持苗条)What We Get from SportsStudents in our school have one thing in common an interest insports.【答案】 Students in our school have one thing in common an interest in sports. But different students h

22、ave different reasons for taking part in sports.Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such

23、 as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise.In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.【解析】【详解】本篇写作主要是谈论自己对运动的观点和看法，应该用一般现在时态，写作要点要包括：1.提出目前学生对运动的不同看法及原因。2.具体分析（多数学生的观点、男

24、生的观点、女生的观点）。3.提出自己对运动的观点。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好地完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习 惯，准确运用时态，主谓一致，在文中使用了时间状语从句，定语从句，特别使用一些亮 点词句，如 have fun , in order to , as for, in my opinion等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意 思连贯，句子通顺，行文连贯。.临近毕业，学校在学习小组内开展了初中阶段自评和组评活动，假设你是Moonlight小组的组长，请根据下面表格中的信息和提示，为你的组员Tommy进行综合素质的评价，写一份素质报告.NameTommyCharacteristic

25、s聪明、大方（各举一例）Hobbies喜欢看书，认为看书有很多好处（请列举2个好处）Honour他在家帮助做家务。在学校和同学相处融洽。上学途中遵守交通规则（举一例）。今年，学校授予了他优秀学生奖（Award for Best Student）Problems面临考试，遭受压力痛苦，他没有充足的睡眠.Your suggestions（根据实际情况提2点建议）要求：1、表达清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯； 2、要点必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当 发挥；3、词数：100词左右；4、不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.

26、【答案】 Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his friends.He likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a good effect on ch

27、ildrenwt h. Atghome, he can help his parents do some housework. At school,he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crosses the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year. However, Tommy is stressed whe

28、n the exam comes. And he doesn t have enough sleep.I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It s better for him to manage histime wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.【解析】这篇作文要求我们按照表格里的内容介绍一下Tommy的情况，为Tommy写一篇综合素质的评价报告。在表格中有非常详细的关于Tommy各方面的内容，我们需要用正确的英语把这些内容有条理的表达出来。表格中涉

29、及的内容较多，写作时要注意表达的条理性。这篇 作文应主要使用第三人称来写。在最后要给 Tommy提一些建议，这一部分应该用第一人 称。同时注意表达的准确性，尤其是表格中的第五项和第六项内容。【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的范文。这篇作文内容完整，包含了表格中的所有内容，没有遗漏要点。表达准确，注意了被动形式的使用，如 He was rewarded by our school this year.o写作时注意了条理性，使文章具有层次感，条理清楚。短文注意到了长短句的结 合，并恰当的使用了一些连词，使文章表达的连贯。如 He is always ready to help others. He n

30、ot only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news.、 He is good at running. He won the first place in our school sports meeting this year. 等。.书面表达共享单车(shared bikes)在苏州投入使用以来，给人们带来了诸多便利，受到人们的追捧，改变了人们的出行方式，但同时也遇到了一些挑战，是国民素质的照妖镜，请你根据表格中信息的提示，给21世纪英文报写一篇关于共享单车看法的稿件

31、。社会现状自从出现，饱受赞誉。诸多优势.随处可见，出行方便.启益健康，减少污染.费用小局，负担得起存在问题.未及时归还.占道挡路你的观点我认为(考生自拟，至少2点)注意事项：1.短文须包括表格中所有提示内容，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。.表格中 你的观点”一栏用23句话展开合理想象。作适当发挥。.词数在90个左右，文章的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。Shared bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.【答案】 Shared bikes are becoming more and more popular in our

32、daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared.Shared bikes have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that its easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. Whats more, using share

33、d bikes costs so little that we can afford it.But there are some problems too. Some people cant return shared bikes in time. Sometimes shared bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in our way.I think we should encourage more people to use shared bikes properly. After all, its a way of livin

34、g a green life.【解析】这篇作文要求我们给21世纪英文报投稿，谈一谈自己对共享单车的看法。题 目中利用表格的形式给我们列举了短文的主要内容，包括：共享单车的优势；存在的问题 以及你自己对这件事情的看法。前两个内容我们需要根据表格的提示用正确的英语表达， 而自己的观点则需要学生们自己发挥想象力，组织语言，并表达出来，要求至少两点。通 过审题可知，这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时态，第三人称来叙述，短文可以分成两段或 者三段，一个内容一段或前两个内容合到一段。写作时，应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不 同，不能逐词翻译，而应从句子的整体考虑，简单句、并列句和复合句交叉使用，改变文 章句式节奏，

35、使用不同的句式，避免单调。语句之间注意使用恰当的连接成分，使整篇文 章意思连贯、表达流畅。点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目要求的所有信息。短文分成 了四段，第一段引出话题共享单车；第二段讲述了共享单车的一些优点；第三段介绍了一 些问题；最后一段作者提出了自己的看法。分段叙述使文章的结构清晰，主题明确，有层 次性。其次短文中使用了恰当的时态和人称，文章以第三人称、一般现在时态为主，语法 规范，用词准确，句式富于变化。例如 They can be seen everywhere so that its easy for us to get around on shared b

36、ikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. Whats more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it. 这几个长 句；另外文章中还使用了恰当的连接成分，如 Also, What s more, But, sometimes, After a等 等。正确文章行文连贯、语句通顺、表达流畅。8.共享单车自从2016年在江阴投入使用以来，给人们带来了诸多便利，受到人们的追捧，改

37、变了人们的出行方式，但同时也遇到了一些挑战，是国民素质的焦妖镜”，请你根据表格中信息的提示，给 21世纪英文报写一篇关于共享单车看法的稿件。社会现状自从出现，饱受赞誉。诸多优势随处可见，出行方便 启益健康，减少污染 费用不高，负担得起存在问题未及时归还 占道挡路你的观点我认为参考词汇：公共自行车public bicycles注意事项：1.短文须包括表格中所有提示内容，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。.表格中 你的观点”一栏用2-3句话展开合理想象，做适当发挥。.词数在90个左右，文章的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。Public bicycles are becoming more and more p

38、opular in our daily life.【答案】 Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have wonhigh praise since they appeared. Public bicycles have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it ssetosyeo Bcound on public bicycles. Also, Riding bicycles not onl

39、y is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What s more, using public bicyclcosts so little that we can afford it. But there are some problems too. Some people cannpublic bicycles in time. Sometimes because public bicycles take up too much of the road, they are in our way. I think w

40、e should encourage more people to use public bicycles. After all, it living a green life.【解析】这是一篇材料作文，要求给英文报社写一篇投稿，介绍对共享单车看法。作文应 包才4个主要内容，一个是社会现状，第二个优点，第三是存在的问题，最后发表个人的 观点。动笔前要认真审题，深入挖掘题材内涵，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。要注意上下 文的连贯，将这些内容有机的连接起来，不要逐句翻译。使用一些好的句型和短语，注意 正确的时态和语态以及谓语动词的形式，还需要注意英语表达和汉语习惯的不同，让整篇 短文表达流畅。.自信赋

41、予人力量，带给人快乐。拥有自信，人生处处是舞台，生活越来越精彩。假如你是李华，请你为校刊英语园地自信助我成长”专栏写一篇短文，谈谈自信的重要性，分享一次使你更加自信的经历，并说说我们如何更加自信。提示词语： powerful , happy, believe in , keep doing 提示问题：Why is it important to be confident?What experience made you more confident?How can we become more confident?Its very important to be confident【答案】It

42、 s very important to be confidentSelf-confidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do. So it s valuable to us.When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of

43、 it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can t believe how happy I was when I recalled thespeech and finished it successfully.My teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have become more and more confident.To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.【解析】本文内容应包含表格中所提