Unit 1 应用文 Writing日记 课件-高中英语外研版必修第一册

1、应用文写作 日记I.文体指导 (1)日记的内容多是亲身经历和耳闻目睹的事情，所以要用_人称。(2)日记多是记述当天发生过的事情，因此常使用_时态，但使用时必须灵活掌握。(3)日记格式：日记通常由书端和正文两个部分组成。 日记的书端由日期、星期和天气构成。 左上角是日期(年、月、日)、星期。 右上角写上当天的天气情况如:Sunny，Fine，Rainy， Windy，Snowy， Cloudy的所见、所闻、所做或所想的事情。 日记的正文一般由三部分构成。第一一般过去式II.写作步骤第一部分：开门见山，介绍日记中要讲述的主要事情。1. How time flies! Its already a w

2、eek_(自我上高中的第一天以来).2. I had_(一次难忘的经历) in my new school this week.3. This afternoon I_(参加了一次有组织的活动) with the theme of “Human Activities and Wildlife Protection”in the science museum.4.We have just finished our military training. I have to admit that I _ (有那么多要表达)!5. Today，our science teacher_(教我们如何制作)

3、 paper lanterns.since my first day at senior highan unforgettable experiencetook part in an organized activityhave so much to expresstaught us how to make 第二部分:进一步描述事情发生的过程和人物的心理变化，指出印象深刻的地方。6. During the training period, I_(受了很大的苦) due to the hot weather and severe trainers.7. The foreign visitors

4、were very surprised_(看到我们说英语说得那么出色) and we talked a lot about the Great Walls history.8. I got up early and_(帮助我的父母做早饭). Then I washed the dishes and cleaned the room.9. Although we suffered several setbacks,_(我们谁都没有放弃).10. We watched the teacher attentively and then we started to_(亲自尝试).11. But, at

5、 first, I_(不敢尝试) because I was afraid that I couldnt make it. experienced/suffered great hardship to see that we speak English so excellentlyhelped my parents cook breakfastnone of us gave uphave a try ourselvesdared not have a try第三部分:总结人物的感受及收获，或者表达对未来的美好期待。12. It was_(不仅) an experience，_(而且) a he

6、lpful class!13. From the activity, I learn that at present the environment is being destroyed because of peoples harmful activities,_(这导致了野生生物的减少).14. All in all, I_(从中受益很多)todays activities.15. Now that the training is over, I have learned a lot which can_ (有益于我未来的生活).16._(虽然我们觉得累), we had a good t

7、ime in helping others.not onlybut alsowhich causes a decrease of wildlifebenefited a lot frombenefit my life in the futureAlthough we felt tiredIII.素材积累 【开头】1. It was a fine/nice day. 天气晴朗。2. Today is . 今天是.3. It is a week since Ientered the senior high. The new school leaves a deep impression on me

8、. 我升入高中已有一个星期了。新学校给我留下深刻的印象。【中间】1. What we learn in class covers more than that in the class of jouior high school. 我们在课堂上所学的比初中课堂上所学的还要多。2.We all take serious attitudes towards all the subjects. 我们对所有的学科都持认真的态度。3.Our teachers give us careful instructions in class. 我们的老师在课堂上给我们认真的指导。III.素材积累 【结尾】1.

9、I had a good time today./I enjoyed myself today. 我今天玩得很高兴。2. What a warm and meaningful day! 多么温暖而有意义的一天啊！3. I will never forget the memorable day! 我永远不会忘记这难忘的一天！4. Although everyone was very tired,we felt very happy because we had done a meaningful job. 虽然大家都很累，但我们很开心，因为我们做了一项有意义的工作。5. All in all,

10、I think that my first week at senior high is a very good experience. 总之，我认为我在高中的第一周是一段非常好的经历。.书面表达假定你是李华，今天是你上高中的第一天，请你根据以下提示写一篇英文日记，记录高中生活第一天的情况。 1.学校的总体情况；2.同学和老师的情况；3.你的感受。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Thursday 1 September Sunny Its Thursday today. Its my first day at senior high. My new school

11、 is_ (large) my previous one, and the classrooms are equipped with one computer in each. My classmates are all friendly and helpful. Whats more, I 2._(impress)my teachers different teaching methods. At the first lesson, I 3._(nervous), but I soon felt relaxed after our teacher asked us to 4._(introduce). I like my new school ve