2016年专升本辅导讲义

1、-备考 2016 年专升本专升本公共英语YY辅导讲义【2016 版】第十二讲 写作编著YY 客户端，听升本课程YY频道：55703559间：每周 2、4、6 晚上 7：009:00上2016 年参加专升本的同学发送 【所在学校】到添加飞信免费获取最及时的专升本信息加输入：资料获取免费资料第十二讲 写作第一部分 写作课堂讲义一、专升本写作类型1.二、写作2001 年Hobby（字数要求 100-120）1.人人都有自己不同的2 我最喜欢的3给我带来的2002 年Staying healthy要求：用到以下单词,第一句话已经给出1. need , care , in good health, ri

2、ght food, enough sleep, exercise regularly2. proper nutrition, avoid, high protein foods, vegetable, fruits3. finally, exercise, improve, heart andgs, prevent, gain weightStaying HealthyGood health is the most valuablesesrson can have.2003 年My View on Examination. （不少于 100 单词）Outline: 1的必要性2的弊端3你对的看

3、法2004 年（不少于 100 单词）SmokingIt is almost known to allt smoking is bad for peoples health.Still, many people find it difficult to stop smoking. Measures have been taken to help keep away from the harm of smoking. 2005 年 A letter to the” （至少 100 个单词）正反观点型2.利弊说明型3.问题解决型4.图画类5.永恒话题型 6.应用文写作目前大学生使用的现象很普遍，在

4、一定程度上影响了课堂教学的秩序。人们褒贬不一。假如你是，请你给校长写，就这一现象谈谈你的看法。请注意信的格式。2006 年Money（不少于 120 单词）Outline: 1. 有人认为金钱万能。2. 也有人认为金钱是万恶之源。（the source of all crimes）3. 我对金钱的看法。2007 年Why I attended college?Outline: 1. 你为什么会选择上大学？2.你认为上大学是否值得？2008 年1车越来越多，污染问题，交通问题随之产生。2人们出行时其实有多种交通方式可以选择。3从健康和环保节能出发， 我认为最好的交通方式是2009 年Gettin

5、g to Know the Society1.大学生了解社会的必要性。2.了解社会的途径（大众、社会实践活动等）3.我在这方面时怎样做的。2010 年An Application Letter请以北方大学的名义，给世博会相关写一封申请函，申请做一名世博会的。写信日期：2010 年 3月 2 日申请函内容包括：1个人信息（、及外语能力等）2简明申请工作的理由3Words for reference:北方大学 BeiUniversityvoteer世博会 the Shanghai Expo2011 年Movement of Population（至少 120 单词）Outline :1.城乡互流现

6、象2.城乡互流的利与弊3.自己的观点2012 年（至少 120 单词）Popularity of MicroblogOutline :1.现代社会利用进行交流越来越普遍。2.流行的原因。3.自己的看法。2013 年（至少 120 单词）“People who wears the shoes is the onlyho knows if they are suitable.”2014 年（至少 120 单词）三、各种类型作文的写作套路一）.正反观点类的写作套路第一步：布局：第一段话1.争议焦点 2.写正方观点及理由（3）第二段话写反方观点及理由（3）第三段话个人的观点及理由（变换说法）第二步：段

7、与段连接：句子与句子的连接第三步：每个句子：1.句式结构的选择 2.词句的选择 3.闪光点检查：病句，拼写错误。示范一SolPractice 社会实践提纲（1）有人对社会实践持肯定的态度（2）而有部分人大学生社会实践 （3）你的观点正方理由：1 把学到的理论知识进行实践检验2 增长见识 提高能力 锻炼自我3 为社会做贡献反方理由：1 浪费时间 2 误入歧途、容易受骗3 出现人身安全事件When it comes to sol practice , answers to this question vary grey. Some people firmly bevetsol practice d

8、oes good to our life.On the one hand, what we have learned can be puto practice in ourlater Job career. On the other hand, it can enlarge our horizon, improve our ability and enriyself. Whats more,it is with sol practicet we can contribute to our society, which is also benefil to us.However, others

9、may not agree with them. Quite a few people arguet sol practice does grearm toour life. For one thing，it is widely bevedt it is a waste of time. For another，it issible for us to go astrayby improper sol practice. Above all, the incident may happent the will lose their health even theirlife.As far as

10、 I am concerned, sol practice plays a very important role in our life. However ,we should paymuch attention to ite effect. Onlyhis way can we derive the greatest benefit from it .示范二Cus Love校园恋爱(1).有人在学校谈恋爱 (2).有人坦然接受 (3).观点 My view反方理由：1浪费时间 金钱2 影响学习 3正方理由：1互相激励不影响学习 2 远离家乡 父母 3 毕业后难找到真爱When it com

11、es to Cus Love, answers to this question vary grey. Some people firmly bevet it does harm to our life.On the one hand, students should give up love during learning in collegebecause it is a waste of time. On the other hand, is an bad effect on study. Whats more, Cuswill happen among the students who

12、 have experienced failure in lover.However, others may not agree with them. Quite a few people arguet cus love does great good toour life. For one thing，those who fall in love can encourage each other and will make greatrogress.For another，It is hard to find an ideal/right one /pure love after gradu

13、ation. Above all, far from parentsand hometown, seeking a boyirl friend can have a comfort of soul.As far as I am concerned, cus love plays a very important role in our life. We should pay muchattention to ite effect. Onlyhis way can we derive the greatest benefit from it .或者As far as I am concerned

14、, every coin has two sides/love is a two-edged sword. When you get it, youwill be happy；when you lose it, you will feel painful. Therefore, we should lay great emphasis on learningdespite the popularity of cus love.示范三Reading selectively or extensively?应该是有选择的读书还是博览群书？提纲 1、有人认为读书应当选择 2、有人认为应当博览群书 3、

15、看法正方理由 1 读不完所有的书 2 有好书和坏书 3 有目的的读书而不是追求数量反方理由 1 获取的知识 2 一种书只能获取一方面的知识 3 更容易成功When it comes to reading, answers to this question vary grey. Some people firmly bevetreading selectively is a good way/ reading selectively does good to our life. On the one hand, it is imsiblefor us to read all the books

16、in our life long time since there are so many books. On the other hand, as isknown to us, good books are as many as bad books. It is those good bookst can give us pleasure andknowledge. Whats more, it is not how much one reads but what he readst really counts.However, others may not agree with them.

17、 Quite a few people arguet reading extensively doesgrearm to our life./ reading extensively is better. For one thing，it is through reading extensivelyt weobtain as mucowledge as we can . For another，one kind of books can only give us one aspect ofknowledge. Above all, todays society is not what it u

18、sed to be. If one man has many kinds of knowledgehave more chanto succeed.As far as I am concerned, reading plays a very important role in our life. However, we should paymuch attention to ite effect. Onlyhis way can we derive the greatest benefit from it .或者y opinion, we should choose good books to

19、 read and read good books as many assible. Inthis way , we can derive the greatest benefit from reading.示范四Spring Festival Gala on CCTV 春节联欢提纲：1.许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节2.但有些人提出取消春节3.看法正方理由: 1 传统 2 满足不同阶段的需求 3 给家人创造团聚的氛围反方理由：1 浪费时间和金钱 2. 缺乏创新 3. 违背初衷 可以找其他的活动When it comes to1, answers to this question vary grey

20、. Some people firmly bevet2.Ontheonehand,3.Ontheotherhand,4Whats more, 5.However, others may not agree with them. Quite a few people arguet6. Foronething ， 7.Foranother ， 8.Aboveall,9.As far as I am concerned, 10plays a very important role in our life. However, we should paymuch attention to ite eff

21、ect. Onlyhis way can we derive the greatest benefit from it .或者y opinion, every coin has two sides. On the one hand, it is the galat can still entertainmost of people although what people want is increasing. On the other hand, the problem mentioned aboveis arising. If we canceled it, most people cou

22、ldnt find pleasure in seeing it. Thus, I hope it will continue toappear after improving the gala itself.Key：1 spring festival gala on CCTV,2 most of people are in favor of the program.3 the gala has been of tradition to us since hold last century.4 there are so many superstars appearing in the progr

23、amt the audience with different age canenjoy seeing their performance.5 atmosphere is created during the festival eve for the whole family to unite/get together.6 the gala should be called off/ canceled.7 it is waste of time and money programming it.8 the quality of the gala has been dropstep by ste

24、p because of its lacking innovation.9 Nowt the gala itself goes against its original goal of entertaining the mass, people can enjoythemselves by all kinds of other activities, such as setting of crackers, surfingernet and playing Poker.10 spring festival gala on CCTV,二）.利弊类的写作套路Owing a private car示

25、例一车提纲：1、拥有汽车的好处 2、拥有汽车的坏处 3、你的观点利: 1 便利 2 舒服 3 事业成功的标志弊: 2 占据空间 2 交通事故 3 污染空气With the improvement of the peoples living standard./With the development of modern society, carsare entering ordinary famis. There are some advantages of owning a car. To begin with, cars providepeople with the most conven

26、ient form of transporion.Then, its comfortable for people to travel in,espellyhe changeable (variable) weather. Finally, owning a car can showrsoncs in hiscareer.However, there are some disadvantages of owning a car. On the one hand, cars take up (occupy) toomuch space. On the other hand, a driver s

27、hould be careful (cautious) while driving a car,or (otherwise)traffic accidents are likely to happen. Whats more, cars give off poisonous gases which pollute theenvironment seriously.Despite all the disadvantages mentioned above, I still think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.As for the pro

28、blem, Im sure they will be settled by scientistshe future.示例二Keng Pets 养宠物提纲:1 养宠物的好处 2.养宠物的坏处 3.观点利： 1 缓解压力 2 消除孤独 3 不仅是还可以是一项生意弊： 1 浪费时间，钱 2疾病 污染环境 3 危及人身安全With the improvement of living standard, pets are entering ordinary famis. There are someadvantages of keng pets. To begin with, people can re

29、lease prere imed on them working day andnight. Then, As for the young, pleasure can be got; As for the old and disabled, loneliness is far from them.Finally, keng pets is no moren a hobby and it can be a profitabusiness.However, there are some disadvantages of having pets. On the one hand, it is was

30、te of time and money,espelly for the young. On the other hand, it issible tomunicate disease and polluteenvironment. Whats more, people maybe be hurt accidentally, which will have an long life effect on them.Despite all the disadvantages mentioned above, I still think the advantages outweigh the dis

31、advantages.As for the problem, People can solve it by all meanshe future.示例三Exercise锻炼提纲:1 锻炼的好处2.锻炼的坏处 3.观点利： 1缓解压力2 消除疲劳 3不仅是强身健体 还可以结交朋友弊： 1浪费时间，钱 2污染环境 3 危及人身安全疾病With the improvement of living standard, 1 are entering ordinary famis. There aresomeadvantagesof2.Tobeginwith,3.Then,4. Finally,5.How

32、ever,therearesomedisadvantagesof6.Ontheonehand,7.Ontheotherhand,8.Whatsmore,9.Despite all the disadvantages mentioned above, I still think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.As for the problem, People can solve it by all meanshe future.Key：123456789示例四ernet A Two-edged Sword互联网双刃剑提纲：1.联网给生活带来

33、的便利 2 互联网的消极3.看法利：弊：With the development of science and technology, 1_ are entering ordinary famis. Therearesomeadvantagesof2.Tobeginwith,3.Then,4. Finally,5.However,therearesomedisadvantagesof6.Ontheonehand,7.Ontheonehand,8.Whatsmore,9.Despite all the disadvantages mentioned above, I still think th

34、e advantages outweigh the disadvantages.As for the problem, People can solve it by all meanshe future.Key：123456789示例五 Part-Time Job做提纲：1.大学生做的益处 2 大学生做的弊端3.看法利：弊：With the development of science and technology, 1_ are entering ordinary famis. Therearesomeadvantagesof2.Tobeginwith,3.Then,4. Finally,5

35、.However,therearesomedisadvantagesof6.Ontheonehand,7.Ontheonehand,8.Whatsmore,9.Despite all the disadvantages mentioned above, I still think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.As for the problem, People can solve it by all meanshe future.Key：123456789三）、问题解决类的写作套路问题解决类又称社会问题或社会现象型，一般涉及的是当前或相当

36、长一段时间内大众关注的热点问题第一步：布局：第一段话 描述现象或社会问题第二段话 分析问题或现象的产生原因，如果原因不好分析就说明造成危害第三段话 给出解决对策并该问题的趋势第二步：段与段连接：句子与句子的连接第三步：每个句子：1.句式结构的选择 2.词句的选择 3.闪光点检查：病句，拼写错误。Global Shortage of Fresh Water 全球淡水短缺示例一提纲： 1.人们以为淡水是取之不尽的 (提示：雨水、河水、井水)2.实际上淡水是非常紧缺的 (提示：增加，工业用水增加，污染)3.应该怎么办增加，工业用水增加，污染.原因：对策：法律 教育 科技It is widely th

37、ought and acceptedt the worldpply of fresh water will never be run out of (usedup)because it comes from such a variety of souras rain ,river, well. Such an opinion leads to a shocking wasteof water.。However (As a matter oct), the earth is short of fresh water. There are many causes for the shortage

38、ofit., the words population is growing raly. Second, The demand for water is rising. Whats more, oursurroundings haffered serious pollution. All of the reasons mentioned resulthe urgent need of fresh water,espelly in some big cities.Therefore, measures should be taken to deal with the problem. To be

39、gin with, strict laws should be passed tocontrol any waste of water. Second, the sense of saving water should be educated among people. Above all,scientists must work even harder to purify the sea water and polluted water.示例二My View on Fake Commodities提纲：1伪劣商品的危害；2怎样杜绝伪劣商品。危害：1 浪费资源2 名誉3 危及健康以及生命对策：

40、 法律识别真假不要买便宜的商品Nowadays Fake commodities can be found, now and then,he market, which has aroused a lot of publicattention. It is reportedt these commodities range from food, clothes to radios, and TV sets and even medicines.Fake commodities are harmfulany ways. To begin with , it is a waste of resou

41、rce, espelly in ourcountry. Second, is bad effect on the repuion of the real manufacturers. Above all, peoples healnd livesare severely threatened if someone buys some fake medicines.Measures should be take to deal with the problem. On the one hand , strict laws should bepassed/enforced to punish th

42、e producers and the sellers. On the other hand, consumers should be told todistinguish tuine goods from the false ones. At the same time, there should be a popular bef amongpeoplet cher goods shouldnt be bought. I firmly beve this problem will be solved in the nearfuture.food safety 食品安全示例三提纲：1 由于是食

43、品安全时间不断发生所以近年来越来越受到关注2 它造成乐巨大的危害3该如何做？危害：1 浪费资源 2 对是打击，产生道德3 严重危害群众的健康和生命对策：1 法律 2 识别 3 加强Nowadays，unsafe foods can be found, now and then,he market, which has aroused a lot of publicattention. It is reportedt these foodstuff ranges from substandard milkder, taed/dyeded buns topork with lean meatder

44、.Fake commodities are harmfulany ways. To begin with, it is a waste of resource, espelly in ourcountry. Second, is bad effect on the repuion of the real manufacturers and brings about moral Crisis. Aboveall, allt matters is food.peoples healnd lives are severely threatened if someone buys some unsaf

45、efoodstuff.Measures should be take to deal with the problem. On the one hand , strict laws should be passed topunish the producers and the sellers. On the other hand, consumers should be told to distinguish thegenuine goods from the false ones. At the same time, theernment should strengthen the supe

46、rvi ofall aspects of food. I firmly beve this problem will be solvedhe near future.示例四Reducing Waste on Cus减少校园浪费现象提纲：1近年来，校园浪费现象严重。2 减少浪费，从我做起危害：1造成污染2 资源紧缺3 养成坏Nowadays, more and more waste appears on cus in some university. Lights are still on whilethere is no onehe classroom. Prs scatter here an

47、d there. The food left is full of the rubbish box.The harmfulness caused by waste is great. To begin with, it caused the severe pollution, which affectstudents study and life. Second, the urgent need of resource will be increased as the result of waste. Aboveall, a habit will be acquiredt will have

48、a bad effect on their life.Reducing waste, start with me. On the one hand , I should have a sense of saving, for exle, puttingoff the lights before leaving and recycling the used prs. On the other hand, I will influence others bywhat I do,t is to say, setting an exle for others to follow, Most impor

49、tant of all, all kinds of activitiesshould be hold among the students to educate the saving atmosphere and to praise those who do better onthe matter.问题解决型作文模板Wimazing development of society/modern science and technology/ businesses and industries, there is nodenying the factt has been a hotly debat

50、ed topic in China.Why does this phenomenon take place? People tend to focus on three fundamental reasons.heplace,.he second place, .helast place, .( 表示原因的段落)In view of the seriousness of this problem, it is essentialt laws and regulations be worked out to ban thisbhenomenon. At the same time, people

51、 should be educated to improve themselves.With proper laws andert public, it will only be a matter of time before ite things of the past.Wimazing development of society/modern science and technology/ businesses and industries, there is nodenying the factt has been a hotly debated topic in China.Theh

52、armfulnesscausedbywasteisgreat.Tobeginwith,.Second,. Above all,.（表示危害的段落）In view of the seriousness of this problem, it is essentialt laws and regulations be worked out to ban thisbhenomenon. At the same time, people should be educated to improve themselves .With proper laws and analert public, it w

53、ill only be a matter of time before ite things of the past.四）、图画类作文写作套路图画作文通常是一幅漫画,要求考生仔细观察、分析图画的内容，根据其所隐含的信息写一篇短文。一般来说，图画反映某种社会现实或现象，或讽刺，或针砭时弊，或呼吁以引起公众的注意。由于的内容和信息是以图画方式出现，所以这就对考生的归纳整理信息和分析总结信息的能力提出了较高的要求。因此，在平时的训练中，考生一定要多加注意。下面对图画作文的写作技巧加以简单说明：一、图画作文的写作技巧(1)仔细审题。这是任何写作的关键步骤。要求考生认真阅读短文题，分析图画的内容以及猜测

54、出题者的意图。(2)确定写作的重点和范围。根据分析的结果编排段落，确定每一段落的写作重点。按照题目要求把与相关的信息进行筛选、归纳和分类。(3)拟定提纲，拟定提纲实际上就是按照命题和提示的具体要求确定文章的结构。常见的结构是：陈述事实分析原因得出结论或提出建议或做出评论。第一段：总体描述图表，指明时间段，突出变化或不同常用句型或短语：As is clearly shownhe char/ table/graph, According to the figures givenhe table/chart/graph, 五）、谚语和永恒话题类的写作套路示例一Where there is a wil

55、l there is a Way 有志者 事竟成Where there is a will, there is a way. This proverb meanst if you are really determined to dosomething, however difficult it might be, you will eventually find a way tot well. The important poist you musve the will to achieve sucs.Ninety percent of the failurest occur are due

56、 to the factt there is no strong will involved. Manypeople simply sayt they want something, but they do not make any attempt to achieve it. So, instead ofgetting it, they use the feeblest excuse to explahe situation away.It can be seen from the table/chart/graph, . The figureshe table/chart reflectt

57、 .espelly, （突出变化）第二段：（分析原因）There are several factors leading to this change / difference .There are several reasons for(引出原因)To begin with, (原因一)In addition, （原因二 0 For exle,（举例说明）Last but not the least,（原因三）To sum up（简要总结）第三段：自己的观点As for me, On the one hand, on the other, In brief，.On many occas, p

58、eople tend to exaggerate every minute obstacle, making the objective imsibleto attain. In reality, if they have the will to succeed, they can get rid of the obstacles and achieve their goals.Only those win undaunted will and spirit can fight their way to final victory. Many a famous manhas the same

59、experience. They have attained their sus because they have had the will toeapparently insuperable obstacles. Many artists, sesmen, writers and inventors have managed to succeedbecause theysess a fierce will, which has helped them to achieve sucs.Happiness示例二What is happiness? To this question, diffe

60、rent people give different answersChildren usually think ithappy to eat something delicious or play witheresting toys , while parents consider it joyful to see their sonsand daughtercceedFor a stcollector，a rare stbrings more delightn delicaciesFor an inventor，a sucsful design moren anything else gi