高中英语必修二 Unit 5 Period Five　Writing-A speech

1、Unit 5Music技法点拨写作训练Period FiveWritingA speechPART 1技法点拨文体分析 把握写作动脉本单元的写作任务是写演讲稿。英语演讲稿实际上是属于一种特殊的说明文或议论文，其基本组成部分是：1.开头称呼语。最常用的是Ladies and gentlemen，也可以根据不同的情况，选用Fellow students，Distinguished guests，Mr chairman，Honorable judges(评委)等等。2.开门见山，提出论题。3.进行论证，讲清道理。常见的论证方法有举例法、因果法、对比法等等。4.简明扼要，做出结论。5.结尾。 最普通的

2、结尾就是：Thank you very much for your attention.写作指导注意事项：1.要注意演讲的对象，选用合适的称呼语。2.提出论题，观点要鲜明。3.结构要清晰，注意层次、节奏和衔接。4.结束语结论言简意赅，简洁有力。1.Ladies and gentlemen(Dear teachers and schoolmates)，Im Li Ming.Im greatly honored to speak here on behalf of my school.Im going to talk about.2.Good morning/afternoon/evening e

3、verybody.Thank you for being on time/making the effort to come today.3.Today we are here to talk about.4.Im going to talk about something that is vitally important to all of us.5.We are ought to be aware of the following points.常用表达6.I hope I have made myself understood.7.I believe the future of.is

4、promising through the efforts of us all.8.Just as the saying goes，“Individuals together can make quite a difference”，Im greatly convinced that the world will be a more harmonious one through the joint efforts of all of us.9.Thats all.Thank you for your attention.PART 2写作训练弄清文络 写作妙笔生花你所在的学校将要举办一次主题为“

5、What Can We Do for Our School”的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇英语演讲稿，要求从以下四方面任选一至两个方面进行阐述，并举例加以说明。1.关心他人；2.爱护学校设施；3.美化校园；4.营造良好的学习氛围。注意：1.词数80左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：关爱 love and care；校园campus；设施 facility审题1.确定文体：这是一篇演讲稿，论题已给出，选取两个方面进行要点构思。2.主体时态：文章应以一般现在时为主。3.主体人称：以第一人称复数为主。谋篇第一段：选用合适的称呼语，提出论题我们能为我们的学校做什么。第二段：要点构思：1.

6、爱护学校设施。举例说明：关灯、关好门窗、节约水电等；2.美化校园。举例说明：植树、不随便丢垃圾；3.号召大家为学校做贡献。第三段：总结全文，言简意赅。审题谋篇1.保护_2.到处扔垃圾_3.养成好习惯_4.尽自己的本分_5.呈现新面貌_核心词汇遣词造句protectlitteraboutdevelopagoodhabitdoonesbittakeonanewlook连词成句1.我们能做的第一件事是保护学校设施。(定语从句；不定式作表语)_2.当我们离开教室时，不要忘记关灯或锁门。(时间状语从句)_3.如果没有必要，我们不能让自来水一直开着。(leave.doing；if)_Thefirstthi

7、ngwecandoistoprotectthefacilitiesinourschool.Whenweleavetheclassroom，weshouldneverforgettoturnoffthelightorclosethedoor.We should not leave the tap water running if it is not necessary.4.每个人都要为学校尽自己的本分。(主谓宾结构)_5.我相信我们学校将会呈现新面貌。(宾语从句)_6.我们学校将会成为更好的学习和生活的地方。(不定式作定语)_Ibelieveourschoolwillsoontakeonanew

8、look.Everyonedoeshisbitforourschool.Ourschoolwillbecomeabetterplacetostudyandlivein.句式升级1.用not only.but also连接句2和句3，not only 放到句首。_2.用if，and将句4，句5和句6合成一个复合句。_Notonlyshouldweneverforgettoturnoffthelightorclosethedoorwhenweleavetheclassroom，butalsoweshouldnotleavethetapwaterrunningifitisnotnecessary.I

9、feveryonedoeshisbitforourschool，Ibelieveourschoolwillsoontakeonanewlookandbecomeabetterplacetostudyandlivein.用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。组句成篇Hello，everyone.Itsnicetospeakaboutwhatwecandoforourschool，andIthinkeachofuscandosomething.The first thing that we can do is to protect the facilit

10、ies in our school.Not only should we never forget to turn off the light or close the door when we leave the classroom，but also we should not leave the tap water running if it is not necessary.The second thing we can do is to make our campus more beautiful by planting trees and developing a good habit of not littering about.If ever