高中英语 复习书面表达作文课件 浙教

1、2021/8/11 星期三1高中英语复习书面表达作文课件City life or country life2021/8/11 星期三2人们经常讨论乡村生活和城市生活，一些人喜欢乡村生活而另一人则喜欢城市生活。请你以Living in the Country or the City为题，按照以下要点写一篇英语短文。乡村生活：空气清新、生活恬静。城市生活：交通便捷、购物方便。我喜欢的生活和理由。注意：词数100-120，文章的题目和开头已给出（不计词数）。Living in the Country or in the City People are forever talking about li

2、ving in the country and in the city. 文体与时态。抓要点规定内容开放内容审题2021/8/11 星期三3明晰结构（分段）,考虑连接(1)乡村生活：空气清新、生活恬静。(2) 城市生活：交通便捷、购物方便。(3)我喜欢的生活和理由(1.2.)。1.(To begin with) Moreover In addition Additionally Furthermore2.For one thing, For another 3. In the first place, In the second place4. First(ly) Second(ly) Fin

3、ally段落间连接过渡词On the contrary; however;段落间连接过渡词PersonallyTo be honestTo be frankAs far as I am concerned段落内连接规划2021/8/11 星期三4表达喜欢的用语-likeprefer to live inprefer living inenjoy living inbe willing towould ratherbe fond of be attracted bybe fascinated by避免单一 表达2021/8/11 星期三5表达观点的基本用语-Some thinkothers th

4、inkbelieve.feelclaimstatestress insistmaintain避免单一2021/8/11 星期三6表达规定内容-空气清新、生活恬静The air is fresh/clean.Life is quiet/peaceful. enjoy gentle way/pace of living交通便捷、购物方便Its easy to go around/here and there.People can go from one place to another without much difficulty.People can buy anything they wan

5、t.Shopping is convenient准确灵活2021/8/11 星期三7语义不充分不连贯Some people like to live in the country. The air is fresh and clean. Moreover, Life is quiet and peaceful. Others, however, prefer to live in the city. They can go from one place to another without much difficulty. In addition, shopping is much more

6、convenient.下面段落有什么问题？2021/8/11 星期三8要点适当拓展-添枝加叶1. The air is fresh.Obviously, the air there is much fresher than that in the city.They claim that the air there is fresher as there is less pollution.They think that the air there is fresher so that they can relax themselves both physically and mentally

7、.2. Life is quiet and peaceful.They insist that life is quiet and peaceful, which is beneficial for good health.2021/8/11 星期三9尝试适当拓展以下要点Its easy to go around.They feel its easy to go around as .They believe that its easy to go around so that They claim that its easy to go around, whichThey can buy a

8、nything they want.They think() they can buy anything they wantHave a try2021/8/11 星期三10表达开放部分-learn more social skills (getting along with different kinds of people)broaden our views ()make my life more colorful ()receive medical care more easily()get better education()brainstorm ideas富有思想精选能表达好且出彩的

9、两到三点2021/8/11 星期三11抄写字迹清楚，卷面零涂改。不用改正液、透明胶带。注意大小写，注意分段。不超边框，不随意换行。2021/8/11 星期三12课堂小结审题规划表达相同语义表达规定部分内容表达开放部分内容抄写抓要点段落和连接避免单一准确灵活，适当拓展富有思想，精选要点卷面整洁清楚2021/8/11 星期三13assignmentWrite the passage out and copy it down as neatly and clearly as possible.2021/8/11 星期三14段落组织1、写好主题句。Personally, I am fascinated by city life.2、围绕主题句展开2或3点。两点连接词