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1、如何描写人物描写人物时,要突出人物个性特点或根据要求有重点地写作,略加点评。以说明为主,通常以第三人称,一般现在时态为主进行写作。在介绍人物时,可以从外貌、爱好、性格特点以及学习、工作经历等方面进行说明,尤其注意以下几个方面的材料的搜集与表述,如What does he look like?What does he like?How does he behave in his studies/work?另外,尚需注意分清段落,以及恰当使用高级词汇和过渡词语等。1.He is.years old and lives./He was born in.on.2.He is short/tall wi

2、th long/short hair.3.He is a nurse/worker/doctor.4.He loves/enjoys/is fond of/His favourite is.5.He devotes his life/time to.6.He is getting along/on well with.7.He graduated from/got the masters degree in/won the gold medal in.8.People think highly of him and all respect him./He is considered as/to

3、 be a great writer.介绍人物的说明文通常为23段,其结构如下: 第一段:外貌及爱好; 第二段:主要学习或工作经历; 第三段:结尾(评价或提示中要求的其他内容,若提示没作要求,不必考虑此段)。某英文报社近期举办征文活动,要求写一位与你相关的人物,尤其是那些曾经关心和爱护你的人或给你留下深刻印象的人。请以“我的”为题(如“我的老师”,“我的妈妈”,“我的同桌”)写一篇人物介绍。内容必须包括:1.他/她的外貌;2.他/她的个人爱好;3.对他/她的情商评价并试举一例。注意:1.短文应包括以上主要内容,若牵扯到家长、同学或老师的姓名,请用李霞(Li Xia)代替;2.词数100左右。参

4、考范文:My DeskmateMy deskmate is called Li Xia.She is 17 years old.She is tall,a bit fat with two beautiful eyes which can express her enthusiasm and happiness.Being a girl of a literary type,she enjoys reading both Chinese and English novels and magazines.She also finds time to get online to listen to

5、 pop music,although she is quite busy with her studies.Li Xia is a girl with a high EQ because she can get on well with others and is ready to help those in need.I used to fail in my English exams.It was she who encouraged me to read more books and gave me practical suggestions on making notes.With her help,I am now a reporte