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1、大学英语四级写作Fang fang第1页四级作文类型 1现象分析、问题处理型 2观点对比型 3道理论证型 4图表文第2页On Excessive Packaging 1. 当前很多商品存在过分包装现象 2. 出现这一现象原因 3. 我对这一现象看法和提议第3页 No one in China has failed to notice that goods are wrapped（包装）in flaring（华美，花哨）boxes or bags. Taking a look around，we can find examples with ease：a small computer is pa

2、cked in a thick and heavy（又厚又重）carton，clothes are putted in a well-designed plastic bags（塑料袋）which printed various kinds of patterns and colors and so on.第4页 What are the causes of this problem? On the one hand, in order to earn more economic gains(经济收益), a considerable number of （很多）manufactures us

3、ually wrap their products with unnecessary but appealing(吸引人)materials aiming at attracting customers attention , arousing their curiosity and then stimulating their purchasing desire （吸引用户注意力，引发他们好奇心并刺激他们购置欲望）. 第5页On the other hand, quite a few customers believe that the more delicate the package s

4、eems，the superior the quality will be（包装越精美，产品质量就越好）,the notion has also encouraged the trend of excessive packaging.第6页 To change this situation, I think we should take the following measures. First, laws must be made and implemented to impose restriction on （实施限制）excessive packaging. Moreover, a p

5、ublic education campaign should be launched to arouse customers consciousness that packaging doesnt isnt equal to quality. Only in this way can we put an end to this trend.第7页问题（现象）、分析原因、给出提议1.No one in China has failed to notice thatTaking a look around，we can find examples with ease:2. What are th

6、e causes of this problem?On one hand, . On the other hand,etc.3. To change this situation, I think we should take the following measures. 第8页问题处理型作文模板开头段：1) Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that . (2)For example, 中间段：(3)These have caused much harm/ many problems. (4)First of all . (5) In

7、addition/ Furthermore, (6) Finally/Lastly/ Last but not least / What is more第9页 结尾段：(7)In a word. (7) Therefore, it is high time that we take steps to stop . (8)We should start from trifles around ourselves . (7)As far as I am concerned. (7) For one thing .For another,. (7) Therefore, I am sure.第10页

8、2.Online Shopping1.指出现象:现在网上购物已成为一个时尚 2.说明利弊：网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题 3.提出提议第11页 With the help of the rapid development of internet technology, online shopping is coming into fashion in most of cities. It is beyond doubt(毫无疑问)that Internet shopping enjoys(享受)a host of virtues(许多优点). From the perspective of

9、 (从角度看）consumer(消费者), it can save some time for people who dont have much spare time. Just click the mouse, they can get whatever they want while staying at home. 第12页For the retailers(零售商), it can cut some costs(降低一些成本) for those who dont have much circulating funds(流动资金). They dont have to rent a

10、house and spend money on employees(雇员) compared with the traditional trade mode(贸易方式). 第13页 Despite the various strengths (优点)of Internet-based shopping,the dark sides(阴暗面，不好一面) of it also exist,however.Take some concrete(详细) examples. First, lack of face to face deal(面对面交易) makes online shopping le

11、ss reliable and trustworthy. Second, people will lose the fun of bargaining(讨价还价).第14页 It is undeniable that（不可否定） shopping on the internet has become an irresistible（不可阻挡） trend in modern society. Its of great urgency that (.迫在眉睫)we need to regulate(要求) the relative laws accordance with(依据) the rap

12、id growth of online shopping. Only in this way can we enjoy the pleasure and convenience of online shopping without the concern of being cheated.第15页利弊问题总结段模板 From my own perspective, the benefits ofonline shopping outweigh(大于）its disadvantages. Simply put(简单地说), we are supposed to(应该) capitalize on

13、(利用)its merits(优点)to serve our purposes（满足我们需要） and do all in our power (尽我们力量) to minimize（降低） its adverse impacts（不利影响） on us meanwhile(同时）. 第16页年6月英语四级作文图画作文第17页图画作文写作思绪：描述图片、说明观点、给出提议第一段：描述图片第二段：说明观点第三段：总结观点，给出提议第18页第19页图画作文：大学生在校从商,创业,好不好?是学业主要,还是社会经历主要?第20页 Being faced with various and complic

14、ated requirements of employment market, some students begin to question the significance of learning basic knowledge and skills, just as what is exposed in the cartoon above. However, it is absolutely wrong to hold that idea. Owing to the fact that we are living in a competitive society, the develop

15、ment of our society demands that we arm ourselves with basic skills and up-to-date knowledge so as to keep up with the pace of our society. 第21页An investigation shows that millions of people spend time and energy grasping skills and technology so that they can keep a favorable position in job market

16、 or enhance their opportunities. While focusing on creativity, innovation, management and leadership skills, we should never forget the fundamental importance of the more basic, essential skills。 第22页It is universally known that opportunity is important, but you could do nothing with it if you are n

17、ot equipped with competitive forces, such basic reading and calculating skills, to seize it.第23页The Importance of Learning Basic SkillsWhat we can see fromthe cartoon is that the teacher is instructing the students some basicmathematic skills. However, some students are wondering that if it will beo

18、utdated in the future. The picture implicitly raises the question of theimportance of the fundamental skills us students learn in our classes。第24页It is worth mentioning that those seemingly basic and elementary skills we learned inschool actually play a significantly indispensable role in our future

19、 works.The pervasive undervaluation on elementary skills that we find among currentstudents and even some teachers can largely be attributed to their lack ofvision of future and thorough understanding on the knowledge.第25页After all, its an obvious truth that we could not build a magnificent mansion

20、without solid foundations; we could not enjoy a long travel unless we make asolid start at first. Those basic skills may look simple to learn, but without them it will not be simple at all to achieve further goals.第26页To sum up, we shouldthink highly of the importance of basic and fundamental skills

21、 that guaranteeour wonderful and brilliant future. Furthermore, we should make full use ofthose elementary skills, consciously applying them in our works and life. Basicskill will never be outdated。第27页第28页图画作文： 一屋不扫何以扫天下 1.We can see clearly from the cartoon there is a father talking with her son.

22、Having heard his sons words that “ Dad, I am a bit worried about disposing of nuclear weapon.” The father replies that “ If you can empty the dustbin here, you can do anything”.第29页1.Talking in the cartoon are two man, who are a boy and his father. The boy is worried about the expectable impacts（） t

23、he disposal of the nuclear waste may cause,（） while his father is telling him that（） what matters now should be emptying the dustbin in front of them.第30页2.It is the profound implication beneath the surface of this simple and sarcastic drawing that（） ought to be taken into account: one who can cope

24、with small tasks first can then undertake something big. （）Taking a look around, we can easily find some students（） dreaming of their brilliant future but unwilling to attend classes or to do homework, some netizens worrying about the fate of our nation but refusing to better themselves first, some

25、officials claiming their determinations in making our society a better place but being reluctant to give up parts of their own interests.第31页2.Such phenomena collectively reflect the fact that some modern citizens, especially a number of young people, lack the spirit of think big, down to earth. Thi

26、s can be chiefly due to the fact() that these people are so lazy and blind that they are only in want of a fruitful outcome but never make any efforts. As a famous saying goes, you reap what you sow. Those who wants to fly but forget the power of the gravity will be sure to fall down on the ground a

27、nd hurt badly as a result.第32页3. According, I suppose it is imperative for us young people to understand that() all that matters to us now should be to better ourselves. Not only are we supposed to learn knowledge and to enhance our abilities, we also need to take seriously the assignments confronti

28、ng us. I believe only after each of us manages to strengthen himself or herself will the problems ()worrying us now be settled in the days() to come.第33页第34页The Importance of Reading Literature As is humorously portrayed in the cartoon, a teacher is handing a classic literature book to astudent, ask

29、ing the student to “just read it as if youare reading a long text message.” Obviously, the symbolic meaning of this picture is to show us the importance of reading literature.第35页It should be generally acknowledged that classic literature plays a significant role not only in preserving the essence o

30、f great minds but also in enhancing the qualityof ones life. To begin with, literature as the collection of great minds will help us enormously broaden our horizons, experiencing things we wont have the chance to do as well as lives we wont be able to enjoy.第36页What is more, those fine stories selec

31、ted and conveyed by the great author, although happened in the past, still carry some useful information and implication for our daily lives.In addition, the beautiful words and sentences flowing in the pages of excellent literature can greatly ease our tiredness, making us feel easy and quiet.第37页T

32、herefore, we ought to fully realize the importance of reading literature. Just as the teacher in the picture puts, reading literature should be as easy and common as reading text messages. Facing the coming challenges in the days ahead, we need to equip us with not only science but also literature b

33、y which we can beautify our life and the world.第38页一、什么是图表作文 图表作文就是对统计表（tables）、曲线坐标图表（line graphs）、饼状图表（pie charts）和条状图表（bar graphs）等提供一组或几组数据用恰当、准确文字进行描述、转化为文字信息，因而体裁上属于说明文性质。第39页但从另外一个角度来讲，图表作文通常不但仅是单纯地说明图中表明事实，它还要求考生在对图表中相关数据进行仔细说明、分析、比较基础上，归纳出数据增减变量，从而总结出图表所反应主题、意向、趋势和潜在含义，继而从中推导出合乎逻辑结论和看法。只有这么

34、才能够说明观点、说明道理，为分析研究这一图表画上圆满句号。从这一点上看，图表作文不单是说明性质文章，而是说明文体和议论文体并存一个题型。第40页第41页图表作文普通可分为三个自然段：第一段说明该图表反应概况，选择能充分说明主题经典数据进行概述。第二段对数据进行仔细分析比较，归纳出增减速率，找出产生改变原因。第三段对数据改变进行评论或得出应有结论第42页表格分类与时态利用： 表格可分为两类，即有时间参考和没时间参考（with or without a time reference）表格。在描述没有时间参考表格时，惯用普通现在时； 有时间参考，假如参考时间在过去，要用普通过去时， 假如叙述是经常出

35、现情况，则要用普通现在时。第43页例1 1991年6月四级作文题 Changes in Peoples Diet.1.state the changes in peoples diet (饮食) in the past five years;2.give possible reasons for the changes3. draw your own conclusions.4. you should quote as few figures as possible.第44页Kind 1986 1987 1988 1989 1990 Grain 49% 47% 46.5% 45% 45% Mi

36、lk 10% 11% 11% 12% 13% Meat 17% 20% 22.5% 23% 21% Fruit and Vegetable 24% 22% 20% 20% 21% Total 100% 100% 100% 100% 100% 第45页Sample 1From the chart we can see that during the past five years there have been great changes in peoples diet. The greatest change occurs in grain consumption, which has dro

37、pped 4% from 49% in 1986 to 45% in 1990 in total food consumption. The second greatest change is in milk consumption, which increased from 10% in 1986 to 13% in 1990.第46页But on the other hand, two trends can be observed in the consumption of meat and fruit and vegetables. From 1986 to 1989, meat con

38、sumption increased from 17% to 23% while that of fruit and vegetables dropped from 24% to 20%. From 1989 to 1990, meat consumption dropped a little to 21%, while that of fruit and vegetables increased a little to 21%.第47页What has caused the great changes in peoples diet? The main reason, I think, li

39、es in the improvement in peoples income level. With the development of our society, people are becoming richer and richer, which enables them to purchase more nutritious food such as meat and milk. In the meantime, grain consumption in peoples diet consequently dropped.第48页So from the analysis, we c

40、an draw a conclusion that our society is progressing and people are living a better life than ever before. We are now able to purchase more delicious and nutritious food, resulting in an improvement.第49页Sample 2As can be seen in the table, there have been great changes in peoples diet in the past fi

41、ve years. Grain used to be the Chinese main food, but now it is playing a less important role in peoples diet, while the consumption of some high energy foods, such as milk and meat, has increased steadily.第50页What caused these changes? I think the reasons are as follows: First, the open policy brin

42、gs the people opportunities to earn a lot of money. Second, people nowadays pay more attention to the structure of their diet. They are seeking the most reasonable diet structure, which will do good to their health.第51页From the above, we can see that ,with the development of the country, the level o

43、f the Chinese peoples life has changed in the past five years. Im sure there will be greater changes in the future. 第52页注：soar to/ boom/ shoot up/ rocket/ jump 飞速上升 climb 上升很慢 shrink 下降，缩水第53页文章开头惯用词汇1.图表类型：table 表格; chart 图表; diagram图表或图解，示意图; graph图表, 曲线图; column/ bar chart柱状图; pie graph饼图 2. 描述：s

44、how; describe; illustrate; can be seen from; clear; appear; reveal 显示; represent表现, 描绘 3.内容：figure数字; statistics 用作复 统计数字资料；number; percentage; proportion (the of A to B)第54页表示数据 上升：increase, rise, ascend, soar, surge（激增）, go up, climb, mount, level up 下降: decrease, fall, drop, descend, decline, red

45、uce ,lessen, level down 平稳: stable, steady, remain steady/stable; /maintain/keep/be the same as/similar to ; little/hardly any /no change波动: fluctuate, fluctuation, rise and fall, up and down 第55页占: occupy， take up， account for 而: while, however, whereas , on the other hand 相比: by/in contrast, on th

46、e contrary, likewise, compared with 最高点: the highest, the top, the summit, the peak 最低点: bottom, least, rock bottom最低点例句：Prices have hit rock bottom. （价格已达最低水平。）第56页平均值: average 趋势: tendency, trend, inclination 预见: prediction one in three, 1/3 one out of every four， 1/4 有一个稳定过程: a stable period can

47、be seen 第57页惯用词和短语 significant changes 图中一些较大改变 noticeable trend 显著趋势 during the same period 在同一时期 distribute 分布，区分 unequally 不相等地 pronounced 显著,显著 corresponding adj. 对应 第58页 represent vt. 阐述，表现 overall 总体上讲 in the case of 在情况下 in/by contrast 相反，大不相同 in conclusion adv. 最终，总之 in comparison 相比之下 inver

48、sely/reversely adv. 相反地，倒转地 in general 通常，大致上，普通而言第59页range fromto 从到不等excessive adj. 过多，过分，额外 lower v.降低，跌落 elapse vi. （时间）过去，消逝 category n.种类 government policy 政府政策 market forces 市场规律 measure n.尺寸，方法，办法 v.估量，调整 forecast n.先见，预见 v. 预见第60页英语图表写作套句精选1.the table shows the changes in the number ofover

49、the period fromto该表格描述了在年之年间数量改变。2.the bar chart illustrates that该柱状图展示了3.the graph provides some interesting data regarding 该图为我们提供了相关有趣数据。4.from the diagram，we can see great changes have taken place in从图中能够看出，发生了巨大改变。第61页6.over the period fromtotheremained level.在至期间，基本不变。7. the graphs show a thre

50、efold increase in the number of该图表表明数目增加了三倍。第62页第63页第64页第65页惯用句型与例句句型1：As is shown by the graph/in the table（概述图表时用）例句：As is shown by the graph, there has been a rapid increase in the population of the country in the past five years. （正如曲线所表示，最近5年来该国人口飞速增加。）第66页句型2：It can be seen from the table that

51、 （从图表中能得出结论） 例句A：From the statistics given in the table it can be seen that the average personal income of the Chinese people increased (grew/rose) rapidly from 1985 to 1990. （从表中所给统计数字能够看出，从1985年到1990年中国人均收入快速提升。）例句B：It can be concluded from the graph that there has been a great decline in birth ra

52、tes in China in the past five years. （从曲线图能够得出结论，最近5年来中国人口出生率已经大大下降。第67页句型3： amount to （数量总计） add up to come to sum up to 例句：All the expenses (costs) amount to (= add up to) $ 200. （全部费用累计200美元。）第68页句型4： increase from to （数量增减） decrease ;rise ;fall ;drop 例句A. The number of color TV sets produced by

53、the factory increased (rose , grew , climbed) from 5000 in 1986 to 21000 in 1990. （这个工厂生产彩电已由1986年5000台增加到1990年21000台。）例句B. The number of participants grew up to 300000 persons.（参加者人数增加到30万。）例句C. The number of teaching staff members in this school has decreased to 700 persons. （这个学校教职员人数已降低到700人。）第6

54、9页句型5：（be）three times as + 形容词 + as 总产量 total output 年产量the annual output of 上升17 rise by 17percent 日产量 the daily output 造成产量下降 result in a diminished output 例句The grain production (= output)in our area now is three times as great as that of 1970. （ 现在我们地域粮食产量相当于1970年3倍。）第70页句型6：Compared with , 例句Co

55、mpared with that of last year, the output of 13 main products (= items) this year has increased to a great extent. （与去年相比，今年13项主要产品产量都有大幅度增加。）第71页句型7：There is (was) a rapid rise in be on the rise on the increase sudden decrease on the decline steady decline gradual fall slow drop slight 例句The cotton

56、 output in this area has increased rapidly in the past few years. 最近几年来这个地域棉花产量有了快速增加。第72页Homework Difference of Income Sources between Chinese and American Students第73页Income SourcesAmerican studentsChinese studentsParents50%90%Part-time job35%5%Scholarship15%5%第74页1. Describe the differences of th

57、e income sources between Chinese and American students.2. Analyze possible reasons for these differences.3. Predicate future tendency. 第75页Sample1Income sources of Chinese students are quite different from those of American students. In China, students get 90% of their money from their parents while

58、 in America, only 50% of students money is provided by parents. In addition, Chinese students earn only 5% of their money from part-time jobs and 5% from fellowship or scholarship while income from these two resources for American students takes up 35% and 15% respectively of their total income.第76页

59、 I think there are probably four reasons for such differences. To begin with, because of the influence of different social and family values, Chinese students have formed the habit of asking for money from their parents while American students have developed more sense of being financially independe

60、nt. 第77页 Secondly, most Chinese parents devote too much care to their children and they would rather save up to afford their childrens education rather than encourage them to take part-time jobs. But in America, many parents pay more attention to developing the students ability of self-reliance, so