读后续写-高考英语作文新题型优秀课件1-

1、Decide to Love1Decide to Love1Interpretation of the Text 文本解读A storyhowwherewhenwhywhowhat2Interpretation of the Text 文本解Interpretation of the Text 文本解读 (Who)“I”FriendStrangersA manReading for the relationship of the characters3Interpretation of the Text 文本解Interpretation of the Text文本解读Reading for

2、the plot developments.Life-changing experience4Interpretation of the Text文本解读Interpretation of the Text文本解读Reading for the plot developments.Witnessing the family loveTip: Pay more attention to the use of v.s, adj.s & adv. s. to describe love.5Interpretation of the Text文本解读Reading the underlined wor

3、ds for creationTip: 将10个下划线词当成下棋的棋子，将它们摆一摆，看看他们在续写故事中的几种情节发展的可能性。 10 underlined words: I; a friend; the man; his family; hug; softly; gaze; love; satisfiedCharactersI; a friend; the man; his familyActions smile; gaze; hugFeelingssoftly; satisfied; passionate6Reading the underlined words f2. Interpre

4、tation of underlined words下划线词解读：I; a friend; the man; his family; hug; softly; gaze; love; satisfiedCharactersActionsFeelingsI; a friend; the man; his familysmile; gaze; hugsoftly; satisfied; passionate Interpretation of underlined words and given information划线词和续写首句解读72. Interpretation of underlin

5、eTip 2: Using the GN stratedyReading the first sentences of the two continued paragraphs for creation.Para. 1 For an instant they reminded me of newly-married couples, but I knew by the age of their kids that they couldnt possibly be. Para. 2 The man suddenly stopped smiling and looked me straight i

6、n the eye. With forcefulness that burned right into my soul, he told me something that left me a different person. Tip 1: Use reverse thinking (逆向思维) skillPara. 1 For an instant they reminded me of newly-married couples, but I knew by the age of their kids that they couldnt possibly be. Para. 2 The

7、man suddenly stopped smiling and looked me straight in the eye. With forcefulness that burned right into my soul, he told me something that left me a different person. 读后续写-高考英语作文新题型PPT优秀课件1【完美版】读后续写-高考英语作文新题型PPT优秀课件1【完美版】8Tip 2: Using the GN stratedyRInterpretation of underlined words and given inf

8、ormation划线词和续写首句解读 (G-N策略） 1. Interpretation of given information首句解读：Para. 1 For an instant they reminded me of newly-married couples, but I knew by the age of their kids that they couldnt possibly be. Given InformationFirst he waved to his youngest son (maybe about six years old) as he laid down h

9、is bags. (Para. 3)2. The man said, “Hi, baby girl!” as he gently took the child from her mother.(Para. 5)读后续写-高考英语作文新题型PPT优秀课件1【完美版】读后续写-高考英语作文新题型PPT优秀课件1【完美版】9Interpretation of underlined wInterpretation of underlined words and given information划线词和续写首句解读（G-N策略）New Information How long have you bee

10、n married and how long have you been away from your home? What was “my” reaction to the mans answers? How long had “I” expected the man had been away from his home? What did “I” react to the mans answer and do afterwards?1. Interpretation of given information首句解读：Para. 1 For an instant they reminded

11、 me of newly-married couples, but I knew by the age of their kids that they couldnt possibly be. 读后续写-高考英语作文新题型PPT优秀课件1【完美版】读后续写-高考英语作文新题型PPT优秀课件1【完美版】10Interpretation of underlined wInterpretation of underlined words and given information划线词和续写首句解读（G-N策略）1. Interpretation of given information首句解读：P

12、ara. 2 The man suddenly stopped smiling and looked me straight in the eye. With forcefulness that burned right into my soul, he told me something that left me a different person. I had one of those life-changing experiences. It occurred merely two feet away from me. (para 1)Given Information读后续写-高考英

13、语作文新题型PPT优秀课件1【完美版】读后续写-高考英语作文新题型PPT优秀课件1【完美版】11Interpretation of underlined wInterpretation of underlined words and given information划线词和续写首句解读（G-N策略）1. Interpretation of given information首句解读：Para. 2 The man suddenly stopped smiling and looked me straight in the eye. With forcefulness that burned

14、right into my soul, he told me something that left me a different person. New InformationWhat did the man do and say to “me”?Whats “my” reaction?What did “I” plan to do?What about “my” friends reaction?读后续写-高考英语作文新题型PPT优秀课件1【完美版】读后续写-高考英语作文新题型PPT优秀课件1【完美版】12Interpretation of underlined w“I”FriendThe

15、 newly-married couplewas astonished flashed me his wonderful smile again, shook my hand Came upInterpretation of writing ideas 写作思路解读Idea 1:读后续写-高考英语作文新题型PPT优秀课件1【完美版】读后续写-高考英语作文新题型PPT优秀课件1【完美版】13“I”FriendThe newly-married cou“I”FriendThe newly-married couplecouldnt help sighing reflecting on my ins

16、ipid marriageCame upInterpretation of writing ideas 写作思路解读Idea 2:读后续写-高考英语作文新题型PPT优秀课件1【完美版】读后续写-高考英语作文新题型PPT优秀课件1【完美版】14“I”FriendThe newly-married couThe Micro-skills Training in writing 表达微技能：之动作神态：肢体语言篇Para.4: Then the man stood up, gazed in the eyes of his oldest son (maybe nine or ten) and whil

17、e cupping his sons face in his hands戏剧中，肢体语言成为了演员塑造人物形象、表达角色思想情感的一个非常重要的途径。演员能够通过一系列肢体语言的合理运用,使肢体表现和内心情感有机的结合,从而塑造出完整的、鲜明的、具有独特性格魅力的人物形象。文学创作中，作家通过对人物肢体语言等描写，使作品中的人物血肉丰满，厚实感人，增强叙述的画面感。我们高考读后续写的评分原则之一是“内容的丰富性”。所谓“内容的丰富性”，就是要求续写部分详细、生动地描述情景、态度和感情等。上面这一段文字情节完整，但是存在着信息量不够，表达干瘪的缺点，无法准确传达故事类文章的情感因素。读后续写-高

18、考英语作文新题型PPT优秀课件1【完美版】读后续写-高考英语作文新题型PPT优秀课件1【完美版】15The Micro-skills Training in wThe Micro-skills Training in writing 表达微技能：之动作神态：肢体语言篇词的积累：名词：hug, kiss, smile动词：wave, miss, hug, squirm, kiss, mouth, beam形容词：long, loving, tender, satisfied, passionate副词：shyly, softly, excitedly, gently, instantly, si

19、mply, silently我们可以通过架构小说人物的信息，通过细节描写，展现人物年龄、性别、状态、动作、表情等的特点，让人物更形象，文章更有血有肉，厚实感人。比如第一段中女人的哭，不仅有为生活艰难而情绪宣泄的痛哭，更有感动和感激的哭。不同年龄的人、不同性别的人和处于不同情境中的人都会有不一样的哭。在描写时，加上哭的声音、表情或动作就可以让人物更有区分度。那么，如何描绘一个长期压抑沮丧突然得以宣泄的中年女人的哭呢？让我们一起来学习哭的各种表达。读后续写-高考英语作文新题型PPT优秀课件1【完美版】读后续写-高考英语作文新题型PPT优秀课件1【完美版】16The Micro-skills Tra

20、ining in wII.词块和句的积累1. gave a long, loving hug; smile somewhat shyly; reply softly; gaze in the eyes of; cup ones face in ones hands; hug a most loving; tender hug; squirm(扭动) excitedly in ones arms; never taking her little eyes off the wonderful sight of ; 2. They gave each other a long, loving hug

21、.3. His son smiled somewhat shyly, and replied softly, “Me, too, Dad!”4. Then the man stood up, gazed in the eyes of his oldest son and while cupping his sons face in his hands said, “”5. A baby girl was squirming(扭动) excitedly in her mothers arms, never once taking her little eyes off the wonderful

22、 sight of her returning father.读后续写-高考英语作文新题型PPT优秀课件1【完美版】读后续写-高考英语作文新题型PPT优秀课件1【完美版】17II.词块和句的积累1. gave a long, l6. He quickly kissed her face all over and then held her close to her chest while rocking her from side to side.7. The little girl instantly relaxed and simply laid her head on his shoul

23、der, satisfied.8. While waiting to pick up a friend at , I had one of those life-changing experiences.9. With forcefulness that burned right into my soul, he told me something that left me a different person.10. Without hesitation, and with a curious sense of certainty, I replied softly, “My future!

24、”。读后续写-高考英语作文新题型PPT优秀课件1【完美版】读后续写-高考英语作文新题型PPT优秀课件1【完美版】186. He quickly kissed her face 2. Bruce紧紧地抱着他，眼里充满着感激的泪水。 Bruce hugged him tightly, _.(运用并列句句型) Bruce hugged him tightly, _. (运用独立主格结构) Have a try 牛刀小试：句子翻译与句型转换1. 他勇敢地走上前，给她献上一束红玫瑰。 He bravely went over to her _. (运用连动句句型) He bravely went ove

25、r to her,_.(运用非谓语动词结构) and handed her a bunch of red rosesand tears of gratitudewelled up in my eyeshanding her a bunch of red rosestears of gratitudewelling up in my eyes读后续写-高考英语作文新题型PPT优秀课件1【完美版】读后续写-高考英语作文新题型PPT优秀课件1【完美版】192. Bruce紧紧地抱着他，眼里充满着感激的泪水。Have他轻轻地抱起那位被惊吓的孩子，并把它抱到安全的地方。_, he picked up t

26、he _ boy and carried him to the safety. (用副词作状语，形容词作定语)3. 格林先生收到了期待已久的邀请函, 用激动而颤抖的双手把它打开。Mr. Green received the long-anticipated/long-expected invitation _. (运用连动句) Gentlyand opened it excitedly with his trembling hands5. 让人难以忘怀的是她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光，嘴唇保持着微笑。_ her eyes that _ and lips held in a steady smil

27、e. (运用倒装和比喻修辞)Unforgettable werefrightenedshone like diamonds读后续写-高考英语作文新题型PPT优秀课件1【完美版】读后续写-高考英语作文新题型PPT优秀课件1【完美版】20他轻轻地抱起那位被惊吓的孩子，并把它抱到安全的地方。3. 格6. Lindas heart beat wildly and her legs trembled. Lindas heart beat wildly _. (用“with + n. + 非谓语动词”改写句子) Lindas heart beat wildly, _. (用独立主格结构改写句子)her l

28、egs tremblingwith her legs trembling7. 我们惊奇地张大了嘴。Our mouths_. dropped openin surprise8. 她将头靠在他丈夫的肩膀上。She_ her husbands shoulder. rested her headon9. 那小女孩的脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。A bright smile_. appeared on/ spread across/ crossed the little girls face10. 小高斯站在房间外竖起(strain)耳朵听父母在房间里说什么。Little Gause stood outside

29、 the room,_ _what his parents were saying. his ears strainingto hear/ straining his ears to hear读后续写-高考英语作文新题型PPT优秀课件1【完美版】读后续写-高考英语作文新题型PPT优秀课件1【完美版】216. Lindas heart beat wildly aPossible version 1 For an instant they reminded me of newly-married couples, but I knew by the age of their kids that t

30、hey couldnt possibly be. Full of admiration, I asked, “Wow! How long have you two been married?” “Being together for fourteen years total, married twelve of those.” He replied, without breaking his gaze from his lovely wifes face. “Well, then, how long have you been away?” I asked. “Two whole days!”

31、 “Two days?” I was astonished. By the intensity (热烈) of the greeting, I had thought hed been gone for at least several weeks - if not months. I knew my expression betrayed me, so I turned away my eyes and said quietly, “I hope my marriage is still that passionate after so long!” 读后续写-高考英语作文新题型PPT优秀课

32、件1【完美版】读后续写-高考英语作文新题型PPT优秀课件1【完美版】22Possible version 1 For an Possible version 1 The man suddenly stopped smiling and looked me straight in the eye. With forcefulness that burned right into my soul, he told me something that left me a different person. “Dont hope, frienddecide!” Then he flashed me h

33、is wonderful smile again, shook my hand and said, “God bless!” With that, he and his family turned and walked away together. I was still watching that man and his special family walk just out of sight when my friend came up to me and asked, “What are you looking at?” Without hesitation, and with a c

34、urious sense of certainty, I replied softly, “My future!”读后续写-高考英语作文新题型PPT优秀课件1【完美版】读后续写-高考英语作文新题型PPT优秀课件1【完美版】23Possible version 1 The man suPossible version 2 For an instant they reminded me of newly-married couples, but I knew by the age of their kids that they couldnt possibly be. Full of admira

35、tion, I asked, “Wow! How long have you two been married?” “Twelve years.” He replied, without breaking his gaze from his lovely wifes face. “Well, then, how long have you been away?” I asked. “Two whole days!” “Two days?” I was astonished. By the intensity (热烈) of the greeting, I had thought hed bee

36、n gone for at least several weeks - if not months. Reflecting on my insipid(平淡的，无趣的) marriage, I couldnt help sighing. I got lost in the thought of my own marriage. I knew my astonished and enviable expression betrayed me, so I turned away my eyes and said quietly, “I hope my marriage is still that

37、passionate like his!” 读后续写-高考英语作文新题型PPT优秀课件1【完美版】读后续写-高考英语作文新题型PPT优秀课件1【完美版】24Possible version 2 For anPossible version 2 The man suddenly stopped smiling and looked me straight in the eye. With forcefulness that burned right into my soul, he told me something that left me a different person. “Dont hope, friend decide!” Then he flashed me his wonderful smile again, shook my hand and said, “God bless!” With that, he and his family turned and walked away together. I was still watching that ma