高中英语短文改错专题课件

1、 短文改错（Correction）1 短文改错（Correction）11. 看不出句子有错，感觉越读越对。2. 看得出句子错误, 但无法改正。 Whats the main trouble when correcting a composition?21. 看不出句子有错，感觉越读越对。 Whats the 1“规范性”原则：要严格按照示范规定的符号改错。要记住“”、“”、“”分别表示错词纠正、缺词填补、多词删除。切忌用文字说明或用箭头表示。 2“四不改”原则：单词拼写不改；大小写不改；词序错误不改(应从错词或少词方面考虑)；标点符号不改。 3“五改动”原则：忠实于原文原则(不可改变原文的原

2、意)；一对一原则(一错一词)；错误以改动最少为原则；虚词以添加或者删除为原则；实词以改变形式为原则。31“规范性”原则：要严格按照示范规定的符号改错。要记住“应试原则改变形式以 “实词”居多添删以 “虚词”居多多“改正”少“添删”改后要保持原意不变小心局部通顺陷阱Dont forget!4应试原则改变形式以 “实词”居多Dont forget!Step1:Discussion (group work)短文改错宾语从句引导词不定代词谓语动词冠词名词单复数介词非谓语动词形容词、副词代词并列连词5Step1:Discussion (group work)短Step2: 短文改错题命题特点1. 短文内

3、容：与学生的学习或生活密切相关，以书信居多。2. 短文长度：约100个词，不少于95词，也不多于110词。3. 错误设置：每个句子最多有两处错误，即有的句子无错，有的句子只有一个错误，有的句子有两个错误。注意：一句不会出现三处错误。6Step2: 短文改错题命题特点1. 短文内容：与学生的学习4. 错误类型：1处多词；1处少词；8处错一个词，即多词、少词和错词的比例是1:1:8。 多一个词，要求考生删除的通常是：冠词、介词、连词、不定式符号、助动词。 少一个词，要求考生添加的通常是：冠词、介词、连词、不定式符号、物主代词。 错一个词，要求考生改正。74. 错误类型：1处多词；1处少词；8处错一

4、个词，即多词、少Step3：改错题解题原则及步骤总原则：改动以最少为原则; 虚词以添加或删除为原则; 实词以改变词形为原则；以保持句子原意为原则。步骤：通读全文，掌握大意;整句分析，逐行推敲;反复通读，复查验证。8Step3：改错题解题原则及步骤总原则：81.语意矛盾：andbut comego luckilyunluckily herethere unless-if；1. Unfortunately, the Twins Towers were destroyed on September 11th, 2001 and I would have the chance to see them

5、by myself. 2. More than 1000 paintings will be on show, but high school students and teachers from all the eight districts will come to the event. 3. I am here in Beijing, and I do wish you could go to visit China.4. This man might need the umbrella himself, and he preferred to give it to somebody e

6、lse.一、逻辑关系错误orandcomebut91.语意矛盾：andbut comego luc2.语意重复：becauseso; though-but; repeat-again; improve-better; Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. 1. 错误搭配：enter into; marry with; in last week; all what;

7、 the place where he lives in; the girl whom he works with her; 主系表+to do it. The teacher entered into the classroom, followed by some students.She married with a lawyer in last year. 二、习惯搭配错误102.语意重复：becauseso; though-bu2. 固定搭配：give up; stay up; give in; be filled with; tooto; so/suchthat; whetheror

8、 not;hardlywhen; no soonerthan；agree with；enjoyoneself等Immediately the homeless dog filled me of sympathy. They quarreled as they could not agree each other.It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expecting anything in return.We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake lis

9、tening music. withwithtoto112. 固定搭配：give up; stay up; give当堂导练一：1. I like dancing, my brother likes playing basketball.2. Last week, she visited the places where she lives in many years ago. 3. Unless you lose heart, youll fail. 4. He wrote to me immediately as soon as he got there.5. Though it was

10、cold, but he went out.6. Living in a dorm can increase friendship and cooperation among classmates, but of course it is safe. and/butIf12当堂导练一：and/butIf121. 名词单复数用错；可数与不可数名词的混用：They take him lots of good book and fresh fruit.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.2. 动词：时态和语态的错误；及物动词后无

11、宾语；不及物动词后多了宾语；需要接ing形式的接了to等：We must found ways to protect our environment.I had been looking forward to go there for a long time.There were lots of visitors stood in front of the ticket window. We waited for a long time and buy three tickets. booksfindair三、词法错误goingstandingbought131. 名词单复数用错；可数与不可数

12、名词的混用：booksfi3. 形容词副词：常出现需形容词的地方用了副词或相反；原级、比较级、最高级的错用：Lots of studies have shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. Unfortunate，I got separated from my parents.The fish has gone bad. It tastes terribly. He has a comfortable room，patiently nurses，and a great deal of time

13、 to read.This dancer is much more younger than that one.seriousUnfortunatelyterriblepatient143. 形容词副词：常出现需形容词的地方用了副词或相反；原级、4.介词：主要是介词的多余或缺失，错用(多为固定搭配)：Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted.Tony saw a toy on a shop window. With the help by our fathe

14、r, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes in our back garden. We have more time with after-school activities.withinoffor154.介词：主要是介词的多余或缺失，错用(多为固定搭配)：wi5.主谓一致性：第三人称单数漏掉s，或主语为复数，谓语动词用了单数；再就是就近原则对主语的影响。It is one of the modern city in the world.He is the only one of those students who have been t

15、o America.The old man along with his three children are fishing by the lake . citieshasis165.主谓一致性：第三人称单数漏掉s，或主语为复数，谓语动词用6. 冠词：定冠词the的多余或缺失，如季节，月份，星期，球类及三餐活动，称呼头衔前等不能加the; same等常和the一起使用；a， an不能混用，特别注意：hour， honest等虽然首字母不是元音字母，但其发音却是以元音素开头，故用an，而useful， university， European， onehour等虽然首字母是元音字母，但却以辅音

16、音素开头，故用a。1. He was admitted to an university last year. 2. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside.3. I felt really glad that we made difference to the environment.4. The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were wet through. atheaan176. 冠词：定冠

17、词the的多余或缺失，如季节，月份，星期，球7. 数词：主要是序数词与基数词的混用和错用，如分数的分子大于一时分母没有用复数等，基数词的复数形式如几百hundreds of，几千thousands of漏掉了s，或是当其前有具体数字或several时加了复数，如seven hundred，写作seven hundreds。Some people prefer hard seats to soft one.Hundred of students go to visit the place every year.Three thousands students went to study abro

18、ad this year.onesHundredsthousand187. 数词：主要是序数词与基数词的混用和错用，如分数的分子大8. 代词：1）代词的性、数、格的错用，2）形容词性、名词性物主代词；3）关系代词，“介词+关系代词”结构。The factory has been moved out of the city，and a sports center has been built in their place. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle，that was only one hundred yuan.The Smiths did his b

19、est to make me feel at home.itstheirwhich198. 代词：1）代词的性、数、格的错用，2）形容词性、名词性Step5: 当堂导练1.I am wondering how to do tomorrow. 2.He said that he is writing a new novel.3.Our task has finished so far. 4.Different people speak different language. 5.Tom book is on the desk. 6.What he needs are money. 7.What

20、he wants is three books. 8.It was the first time that Amy has seen such a beautiful painting.8.In a fact he has three sons. wasbeenlanguagesTomsisarewhathad20Step5: 当堂导练1.I am wondering ho动词形，名词数；冠介连代分清楚；还要注意形和副；非谓语动词细领悟；习惯用法要记住；句子成分多分析，逻辑错误须关注。21动词形，名词数；21短篇练习22短篇练习22 At Christmas Eve, Jim went wit

21、h his father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose a big one. It was almost as taller as the room! They put them in the corner of the sitting room. Jim was covered it with a lot of Christmas light. A sitting room looked really beautifully at the moment. There was a fire burning in the fire place, but the Christmas tree lights were shining brightl