高中英语读后续写讲解及练习课件

1、读后续写基本流程Tips for writing:1. Thorough reading 2. Creative plotting（构思）3. Swift drafting4. Careful polishing5. Neat copying 1读后续写基本流程1续写合理流畅生动高级丰满整洁读后续写基本要求requirements2续写合理流畅生动高级丰满整洁读后续写基本要求requirem续写Writing Practice3续写Writing Practice3读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。 Our unpla

2、nned travels were pure joy until this day. It was day eight of a family trip to Germany for Oktoberfest, a two-week festival held in Munich, Germany, and Switzerland for Alps hiking. We wanted to book two rooms in Munich. Knowing none were available, we chose to try our luck and find a hotel along t

3、he freeway. At Freiburg (a German city 278 km west of Munich), we found the local hotel rooms were all booked for a festival. So we journeyed merrily down the road to find rooms. To our surprise, all the hotels we contacted were booked up. There was no room for us in Germany. So we went across the b

4、order into Switzerland to Basel. A large city in another country would provide two rooms for us, we thought. 4读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落 It was in Basel that our bad luck began. I drove while my wife and son burned up their phones in broken self-taught German looking for two rooms. I rolled up to a stop

5、 sign and the GPS said, Turn left. Looking at the road signs, I scratched my head (挠头) because something didnt seem right. But, of course, I followed the command of my GPS pilot. Quickly it was clear that we were no longer on a road, but train tracks. “Calm down,” I instructed my wife and son. “Ill

6、simply drive a bit until I can get off the tracks and back on a road.” This calm was short-lived as our teenage son, Mitch, noted, “Dad, there s a train behind us!” While we were processing this dilemma, another tram appeared in the distance.5 It was in Basel that our b Our car was not pressed flat

7、like a soda can. I eased it off the tram tracks onto a crowded pedestrian- only(行人专用的) square. Hundreds of people were enjoying their weekend outdoors. We were safe, but obviously not where cars were allowed. The best plan I could think of was to (丢弃) the rental car. What a stupid idea! 6 Our car wa

8、s not pressed fParagraph 1:About that time an elderly gentleman approached and knocked on the window of our car with his stick. _ Paragraph 2: We were freed from our painful experience, but still had no place to sleep for thenight! _7Paragraph 1:7写作过程Writing Process8写作过程Writing Process8体裁：记叙文时态：一般过去

9、时原文核心内容解读：一家人外出旅行去参加慕尼黑啤酒节，路途困难重重，很难预定到房间的故事。1. 解题思路9体裁：记叙文1. 解题思路9When：It was day eight of a family trip to Germany for Oktoberfest.Where：Munich(Germany) Freiburg(Germany) Basel (Switzerland )who：I /my wife/my son, Mitch/ an elderly gentleman2. 文章脉络10When：It was day eight of a fam2. 文章脉络What:We wan

10、t to book two rooms in Munich but none were available.At Freiburg, all the hotels were booked up and there was no room for us so we decided to head for Switzerland to Basel, hoping to find two rooms.It was in Basel that our bad luck began. Following the command of my GPS pilot, we were no longer on

11、a road but train tracks. Eventually, I drove my car off the tram tracks onto a crowded square where cars were not allowed.112. 文章脉络What:We want to book t两段首句定一框 根据续写的第一段首句与第二段首句确定第一段的框架。（我们找到了停车处）二框二首正能量第二段的框架，由第二段首句与正能量结尾来确定。（我们最终找到了住所） 3. 写作思路12两段首句定一框二框二首正能量 3. 写作思路12 词1）笼统词变具体词2）单词变短语3）词汇派生4. 高分

12、精炼13 词1）笼统词变具体词2）单词变短语3）词汇派生4. 高分精1）笼统词变具体词笼统词具体词beautifulhandsome (英俊的), attractive (吸引人的), graceful (优雅的), fine (精美的)gladexcited (兴奋的), pleasant (愉快的), joyful (欢喜的)importantvital (至关重要的), critical (决定性的), significant (意义重大的), primary (首要的), profound (深刻的)badmean (卑鄙的), evil (邪恶的), selfish (自私的), d

13、isgusting (令人厌恶的)goodexcellent (优秀的), awesome (令人惊叹的), outstanding (杰出的)poorPoorly-dressed(穿着破烂), be in rags(衣衫褴褛), needy (贫困的)veryterribly (极度地), extremely (极其), highly (非常), greatly (大大地)141）笼统词变具体词笼统词具体词beautifulhandso2）单词变短语单词短语likehave a passion forlookstare at/glare atbeginget down tostandStru

14、ggle/spring to ones feetraiseput forwarddesirelong forusemake use ofdecidemake up ones mind152）单词变短语单词短语likehave a passion 3）词的派生前缀示例un- 不；非unconsciously (无意识地), untruth (谬误)in- 不；非illogical (不合逻辑的), irrelevance (不相关)non- 无；没有nonsense (废话), non-stop (直达的；不停的)dis- 不；非；相反dishonest (不诚实的), disappear (消

15、失)re-又；再；重新reapply (再申请), reassuring (令人放心的)anti- 反对antifreeze (防冻剂), anticlimax (扫兴的结局)auto- 自己(的)，无人操作（的）autobiography (自传), automatic (自动的)163）词的派生前缀示例un- 不；非unconsciouslyTom is a boy. He is a student. He works hard. That makes his parents happy.Tom, a boy, who is a student, works hard, which mak

16、es his parents happy.Being a student, Tom, a boy, works hard, making his parents happy.Being a good student, Tom, a clever boy, works especially hard, making his beloved parents extremely happy.Being a marvelous learner, Tom, an intelligent teenager, works especially hard like a honeybee, making his

17、 beloved parents extremely happy.4. 高分精炼罗列合并简化美化丰满替换、文学句 For example:17Tom is a boy. He is a student.无灵主语1. My pen involuntarily hesitates. 我不知该从何处下笔。2. Anxiety tore the boy into pieces. 这个男孩焦虑不安，整个人都崩溃了。3. The thick carpet killed the sound of my footsteps. 我走在厚厚的地毯上，一点脚步声也没有。 4. All attempts to fin

18、d rooms failed. 寻找房间一切尝试都失败了。5. The astonishment robbed me of the power to say anything. 我震惊得说不出话来。4. 高分精炼18无灵主语1. My pen involuntarily he Paragraph 1: About that time an elderly gentleman approached and knocked on the window of our car with his stick. Hearing the knock, I rolled down the window wit

19、h my heart beating wildly, wondering what would happen to us. “Why did you park your car here without permission?” asked the gentleman, confused. Feeling embarrassed, I explained to5. 范文赏析 参考范文（一）19 Paragraph 1:5. 范文赏析 参考范文 5. 范文赏析him the dilemma we were faced with. Much to our surprise,not only did

20、 the gentleman guide us to a parking lot but also he showed us around the city, where we saw a large number of people dressed in festive costumes. It was then that we felt a sense of relief.20 5. 范文赏析him the dilemma wParagraph 2: We were freed from our painful experience, but still had no place to s

21、leep for the night! I scratched my head again, desperate and extremely exhausted. Having sensed our awkward situation, the gentleman politely asked, “I live alone, would you mind staying with me tonight?” “It is so kind of you to offer us accommodation! Sir!” I replied, 5. 范文赏析21Paragraph 2:5. 范文赏析2

22、1feeling excited and grateful. We had fun with each other and never before had we had such a wonderful night. As you can see, next time you are in great trouble, keep in mind that God will open a window for you when he closes the door!5. 范文赏析22feeling excited and grateful. About that time an elderly

23、 gentleman approached and knocked on the window of our car with his stick. Sheepishly I rolled down the window and heard these serious words, “Sir, you can t be here in that car.”Yes, I explained why we were there. Make your way slowly and carefully to that street, he said nicely, pointing his stick to an opening 100 yards and hundreds of people away. I thanke