书面表达-如何扩充句子课件

1、英语书面表达指导 短话长说英语书面表达指导 短话长说高考评分标准第五档（21-25） ： 完全完成试题规定的任务，完全达到了预期的写作目的，覆盖所有的内容要点，用了丰富的语法结构，语法与高级词汇有少些错误，全篇流畅，连词使用较好。第四档（16-20） ： 完全完成试题规定的任务，达到了预期的写作目的，写漏了一两个要点，语法和词汇基本正确，有少些错误，主要是想使用高级词汇与复杂句子所致。高考评分标准第五档（21-25） ： 完全完成试题规定的任务第二档 （6-10） ： 未适当完成试题规定的任务，有要点，但表达不清晰，只有一些句子可读。第一档 （1-5） ：未完成试题规定的任务，只是一些字词的堆

2、积，不成句，让读者根本不明白写什么。0分：空白，或者抄写一些无关的东西。第三档（11-15） ： 大错（时态、句子结构等）超过五六处，不能及格，写漏了一些内容，但覆盖了主要要点，基本上让人能够看懂，基本达到了预期目的。第二档 （6-10） ： 未适当完成试题规定的任务，有要点，高考作文评分原则形式上胜人一筹，也就是文章结构，谴词造句内容要点，发挥想象，适当拓展高考作文评分原则一、利用文章总体模板1. 文章开头的总体交待 引出主题A. Recently, we had a discussion about B. we carried out a survey of C. When it come

3、s to the topic whether 2. 呈现不同的观点 陈述观点 A. Some of them are in favor of the idea that However, others hold a completely opposite opinion. B. Some people firmly believe that. Others argue that 呈现论据时常用的连接词inthefirstplace,_(原因一). inthesecondplace, furthermore, _(原因二). Soitgoeswithoutsaying that_(观点一).So

4、me people holdtheideathat_ (观点二).Intheirpointofview, ontheonehand，_(原因一).Ontheotherhand, _ (原因二).Therefore, there isno doubt that_(观点二). 3. 结尾部分表达个人观点和总结的用语 总结观点As far as Im concerned,/ From my point of view, / To sum up, 如何从形式上胜人一筹？一、利用文章总体模板1. 文章开头的总体交待 引出主二，句式多样，文章增“靓”二，句式多样，文章增“靓”Rewrite the sen

5、tences 1. They arrived at the school. They felt the happy atmosphere. 2. I will be given another chance. I will succeed.3. He wants to improve his English. He studies hard. 方法1. 使用从句或非谓语动词使句子高档When they arrived at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere. Arriving at the school, they felt the happ

6、y atmosphere.If I am given another chance, I will succeed.Given another chance, I will succeed. In order to improve his English, he studies hard.Rewrite the sentences 1. They 方法2. 巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力1. He didnt realize his foolishness until he returned home. Not until2.We can save the earth by changing t

7、he way we live. Only 3.He is clever but he does not work hard. as/though4. The clock tower stands on the other side of the street. On the other side of the streetComplete the sentences he returned home did he realize his foolishness.by changing the way we live can we save the earth.Clever he is, he

8、does not work hard.stands the clock tower.方法2. 巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力1. He didn方法3. 尝试多样化表达方式 In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast.All these make peoples lives convenient, pleasant and colorful._ which_With the development of _ _so _ that_In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fas

9、t, makes peoples lives convenient, pleasant Beijing, peoples lives are becoming more and more convenient, pleasant and colorful. Nowadays, Beijing is developing fast peoples lives are getting more convenient, pleasant and colorful.方法3. 尝试多样化表达方式 In recent years句式多样文章增“靓”1. 使用从句或非谓语动词使句子高档2. 巧用倒装增强句子

10、表现力3. 尝试多样化表达方式句式多样1. 使用从句或非谓语动词使句子高档2.三. 善用高级词汇Which is better? 1 周末我们会有很多作业要做.A .We have endless homework to do at the weekend. B. We have a lot of homework to do at the weekend . 2 在我所有的老师里,毛老师给我留下了很深的印象.A. Of all my teachers, I still remember Mr Moore.B. Of all my teachers, Mr Moore gave me the

11、deepest impression.三. 善用高级词汇Which is better? 1 周末3 高级培训班结束后回到家，他的妻子感到精疲力尽。A. His wife came back home after the advanced training class, feeling very tired.B. His wife came back home after the advanced training class, feeling very exhausted. 4. 他没听我课上讲的东西。AHe turned a deaf ear to what I said in the c

12、lass. B He didnt listen to what I said in the class. 3 高级培训班结束后回到家，他的妻子感到精疲力尽。4. 他没如何从形式上胜人一筹？一、利用文章总体模板二，句式多样，文章增“靓”三. 善用高级词汇如何从形式上胜人一筹？一、利用文章总体模板如何在内容上言之有物？如何在内容上言之有物？方法添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容、附加成分作解释说明例一：这样更方便照顾父母。拓展：因为父母越来越年迈。 原因 as they are getting older and older. 例二：因广告过多， 影片放映晚点 。拓展：这导致观众不耐烦

13、甚至恼火 。后果 which made audience impatient and some of them even annoyed.making audience impatient and some of them even annoyed.It will be much more convenient to look after your parentsThere were so many advertisements that they delayed the time of showing the film, 方法添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容、附、附加成分作解释

14、说明条件 例三：安全出口（exit）标志不明， 存在安全隐患(potential hazard）。 拓展：万一遇到危险， 观众难以逃脱。 In case of danger, it is difficult for the audience to escape. The exit is not clear, so there will be potential hazard.、附加成分作解释说明条件 例三：安全出口（exit）标志不、附加成分作解释说明(1)表达不同原因的概括语There are several reasons for this.The reasons are as follo

15、ws.The reason foris thatThe reason why is that(2)表示无需说明的事实的概括语：It goes without saying thatIts needless to say thatNeedless to say, Its obvious that、附加成分作解释说明(1)表达不同原因的概括语加谚语(Proverb)我们应该集中注意力于学习We should focus our mind on our studies.As the saying goes, “ .” We should focus our mind on our studies.怎

16、么添加谚语？方法添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容No pains,no gains加谚语(Proverb)我们应该集中注意力于学习We s.加谚语(Proverb)锻炼对学生有好处 It is good for us students to take exercise.As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” It is good for us students to take exercise.2. 添加谚语.加谚语(Proverb)锻炼对学生有好处 It is g常用谚语(Proverb

17、)Strike the iron while it is hot.趁热打铁。Think twice before you do.三思而后行。Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。A bird in the hand is worth two in the bush.一鸟在手胜过双鸟在林。When in Roman,do as the Romans do.入乡随俗。 Do it now.机不可失，时不再来。Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母。 It is no use crying over spilt milk.覆水难收。 An

18、apple a day keeps the doctor away.一天一个苹果， 医生远离我。All roads lead to Rome.条条大路通罗马。 常用谚语(Proverb)Strike the iron w青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. For example, we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags, refuse to use single-use p

19、roducts, plant more trees and save water and energy. 举例说明青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球We teenagers 人口密集地区遭受许多自然灾害（举例说明）Many populated areas suffer from many natural disasters such as 人口密集地区遭受许多自然灾害（举例说明）Many popul珍惜每一滴水Therefore, we should no longer be indifferent about this. To protect our valuable water resou

20、rces, we should call on people to cherish every drop of water. Otherwise, maybe the last drops of water will be our tears. As middle school students, we also have a part to play. Do remember: we are not saving water , we are saving our own life. With everyone doing his bit, we can make a difference.

21、 结尾提出倡议或号召珍惜每一滴水Therefore, we should no As students, we should start from ourselves . Here Id like to remind my friend to take the lead in protecting the environment. With everyone doing his bit, we can change the present situation. 参加俱乐部或活动Dont hesitate. It will be great fun!Dont wait. Join us now!

22、Since it has so many benefits, what are you waiting for?Start to join us now!保护环境As students, we should start f“短话长说”方法：如何在内容上言之有物？. 附加成分作解释说明 . 加谚语(Proverb). 举例说明 . 结尾提出倡议或号召 “短话长说”方法：如何在内容上言之有物？. 附加成分作解释写作任务 现在，青少年肥胖越来越严重， 很让父母担心。请你根据以下提示写一篇文章 参考词汇：肥胖：obesity 垃圾食品：junk food要求：1. 字数150左右 2. 对所有要点要适

23、当发挥， 不要简单翻译。 3. 开头已给出， 不计入总数Recently, the phenomenon of teen obesity has made a lot of parents concerned._ 原因缺少运动饮食结构不合理建议多参加体育锻炼多吃健康食品， 远离垃圾食品写作任务原因缺少运动建议多参加体育锻炼 要点分析利用模板1，引出主题When it comes to the phenomenon of teen obesity , our parents are in great concern. Why are so many kids getting fatter and

24、 fatter?2，原因Reasons: 3，建议Suggestions: inthe firstplace, besides, last but not least, 利用模板1，引出主题When it comes to tBecause of the popularity of TV and computers, and because students have so much homework to do, they are getting less exercise than before.1. 缺少运动 Because of the popularity of TV and com

25、puters, and students are burdened with so much homework,Because of the popularity of TBecause peoples quality of life has gotten better and better, families can afford to buy many foods, such as meat, chocolate and other sweet or oily snacks, which might make the kids overweight.2. 饮食结构不合理 Because p

26、eoples quality of liIn order to lose weight and stay healthy, teens should avoid spending too much time in front of the TV or the computer and do more exercise.建议1. 多参加体育锻炼 In order to lose weight and stAs the saying goes, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” They should also eat a more balanced

27、diet such as fruits and vegetables, and less fast food and junk food.2. 多吃健康食品， 远离垃圾食品As the saying goes, “An apple Last but not least, they should make a proper time schedule so that they can balance their exercise and studies.3.制定合理的计划， 时间表Last but not least, they shoul合成文章 Recently, the phenomenon of teen obesity has made a lot of parents concerned. Why are teens getting fatter and fatter? In my opinion, there are two remarkable reasons for this probl