读后续写喜悦快乐兴奋激动描写课件-高三英语写作专项

喜悦快乐兴奋激动必背好词名词／动词joy,happiness,delight(vt.&n.),pleasure,amusement,amuse(vt.),excitement,thrill(vt.&n.)形容词／副词happy,cheerful,delighted,pleased,amused,joyful,merry,overjoyed,excited,thrilled,happily,joyfully,merrily,excitedly满分短语①dance/jumpfor/withjoy雀跃/高兴地跳起来 ②giveajumpintheair高兴地蹦跶③lightup喜形于色④brightensb.＇sheart使某人心情愉快⑤bewildwithjoy/delight/happiness欣喜若狂⑥inagoodmood心情好⑦inhigh/cheerfulspirits兴高采烈 ⑧toone'sdelight/joy让某人开心的是⑨ontopoftheworld高兴坏了 ⑩beoverthemoon欣喜若狂 ⑪amixtureofexcitementandhappiness既兴奋又开心必背好句动作／语言描写十情感词汇1.Icouldhardlycontainmyjoy/happiness/delightanddancedintothehouse.我抑制不住内心的喜悦，蹦蹦跳跳地进了家门。2.Atthesightofsuchalovelyrabbit.Iwaswildwithdelight/joyandfolloweditstrack.一看到如此可爱的兔子，我欣喜若狂，跟着追了过去。3.Delightedandthrilled,Igaveajumpintheairandthenskippedintothesupermarketalongwithmysmilingmother.又高兴又激动，我蹦跶了一下，然后蹦蹦跳跳地跟着我微笑着的妈妈进了超市。4.Fullofhappiness/Pleasedbeyonddescription/Overjoyed,hejumpedupandranhappilyaroundtheyard.他高兴极了，跳起来，高兴地在院子里跑。5.Herhandsweretremblingwithexcitementassheopenedthebox.当她打开盒子时，她的手激动得发抖。6.“Aha!Icatchyou!”atraceofpleasure/joycanbenoticedinhisvoice.“啊哈！我抓住你了！”他的声音里带着一丝喜悦。神态描写十情感词汇1.Asmilelituphisfaceandhiseyeswereshining/twinkling/sparklingwithgreatjoy/excitement.他脸上露出笑容，双眸闪烁着喜悦／激动的光芒。2./Inoddedcheerfully/happily/joyfully,withabig/broad/brightsmileappearingon/spreadingacross/crossingmyface.我开心地点点头，脸上露出灿烂的笑容。3.Hecouldhardlywaittosharehistrip,eyesshining/twinklingandfaceglowingwithjoy/delight.他迫不及待地讲述起他的旅程，双眸闪闪发亮，脸上洋溢着喜悦。shefeltontopoftheworld/overthemnn,andeveryfreckleonhercheekswasdancingwithjoy.她高兴极了，脸上的每一个雀斑都雀跃起来。5)Tearsofjoy/hmppinesswelledupintheireyesastheyhuggedtightlytogether.他们喜极而泣，紧紧拥抱在一起。6.Shecameuptohim,withasmileshininglikeadiamond.Innotimehiseyeswerefilledwithwarmexcitedtears.她带着灿烂的笑容走到他面前。他立刻激动得热泪盈眶，借用修辞手法或用“无灵名词”作主语1.I'mingoodmoodatthemoment,justlikethewhitecloudsinthebluesky.（明喻）我此刻心情舒畅，就像蓝天白云那样自在。2.Shewasoverflowingwithhappiness,hummingandskippingintheforestlikeabird.（明喻）她开心得像小鸟一样在森林里哼唱跳跃。3.Starsappearedinthesky,twinklingtheireyesattheminhappiness／delight／joy.（拟人）天上繁星点点，高兴地向他们眨眼睛。4.AfterStevelearnedthissatisfactoryresult,asenseofjoyandhappinesssweptover/floodedoverhim.史蒂夫听到这个令人满意的结果后，一种喜悦和幸福的感觉涌上心头。5.Awildjoy/pleasureseized/overcame/tookholdof/cameover/sweptoverher,andawaveofjoy/pleasurealsowelledupinme.她快乐极了。我心中也涌起喜悦。6.Thencameahappyvoicefarfromwherewewere,bathingusinextremejoy.Everyonewasgrinningfromeartoear.这时，一个快乐的声音从远处传来，使我们沉浸在狂喜之中。大家都笑得合不拢嘴。7.Momtriedtocontainherexcitement,butthegliteringtearsfailedher.妈妈试图抑制自己的激动，却激动得落泪了。8.Theboystopped,hisheartpounding/thundering/leapingwithexcitement.男孩停下来，他的心激动得怦怦直跳。借景（自然环境／人物活动场景）抒情1.Theflowerswerewavinginthebreezeoftheearlyspring.Birdsweresinging,theairwasfilledwithlaughter,andeveryonewasinthebestofmoods.（综合场景）花儿在早春的微风中摇曳。鸟儿在歌唱，空气中满是欢声笑语，人人心情愉悦。2.Anairofdelightandexcitementsettledoverthecrowd.（气氛）人群既喜悦又激动。3.Andthenthemomentcame,whenthechildrencouldnotstayquiet.Therewaswildlaughingandshouting,andthedoorwasthrownopen.Aboyranout,atall,healthy,handsomeboy,straightintotheman'sarms.Mr.Cravenstaredintotheboy＇slaughingeyes.（《秘密花园》见面的场景）此时，孩子们吵闹得根本停不下来。他们正大声地笑着，吵着，还一把推开了门。一个高大帅气的健康男孩撞到克莱文先生的怀里。克莱文先生盯着那笑得很开心的男孩看。练能生巧I.根据素材佳句仿效写出以下各句，并背诵1.她抑制不住兴奋，蹦蹦跳跳的回家告诉母亲这个好消息。2.一想到即将到来的假期，大家都欣喜若狂。Atthethoughtofthecomingholiday,3.当妈妈亲吻小女孩的脸颊时，她的眼睛里荡漾着开心与甜蜜。Whenthemotherkissedthelittlegirlonthecheek,4.她高兴得双眸闪闪发亮，心里像蜜一样甜。1.Shecouldn'tcontainherexcitementanddanced/skippedhometotellhermotherthegoodnews.everybodywasoverjoyed/wildwithjoy/delight/ontopoftheworld/overthemoon.hereyesdancedwithjoyandsweetnessHereyestwinkled/sparkled/shonewithhappinesa/joy/delight,andherheartwasassweetashoney.5．他站在门边，脸上露出喜色。Hestoodbythedoor,___________________________________________________________________________________（并列句十神态描写）Hestoodbythedoor,________________________________________（独立主格）6．小女孩把礼物紧紧地抱在胸前，脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。Thelittlegirlheldthegiftclosetoherchest,and_____________________________________________________________________________.

7．老师的鼓励温暖着她的心。她感到一阵兴奋。Theteacher'sencouragementwarmedherheart._____________________________________________________________________________

8．人群开始高兴地跳舞，快乐和激动的气氛充满了广场。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （with复合结构）andhisfacebrightened/litup/waslitupwithjoy/delight;

hisfacebrightening/lightingup/litupwithjoy/delightabrigh/broad/bigsmileappearedon/spreadacross/crossedherfaceShefeltawaveofexcitementsweepover/comeover/wellupinher.Thecrowdstartedtodancehappily,withhappinessandexcitementfillingthesquare.II.按要求完成以下各题1．当主持人宣布她获奖时，她非常兴奋。（1）先尝试用概括描述，将意思表达清楚。___________________________________________________________________（2）在概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。①_________________________________________________________________（添加介词短语，无以言表）②____________________________________________________________________________________________________（神态描写十情感名词，热泪盈眶）③________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（神态描写＋情感名词，满脸喜色，双眸发亮）④____________________________________________________________________________________________________________（无灵主语句，心怦怦直跳）⑤________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（无灵主语句）Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,shewasveryexcited/thrilled.

Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,shewasexcited/thrilledbeyonddescription.

Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,hereyeswerefilledwithwarmexcitedtears.

Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,herfacelitup/brightenedandhereyesshone/twinkled/dancedwithexcitement.

Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,herheartwaspounding/thumpingwithwildexcitement.

Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,awildexcitementtookholdof/seized/cameover/sweptoverher.2．请用一句话续写，描写妈妈看到草莓时的高兴之情。Georgerantohismotherjoyfullyandofferedherallthewildstrawberries.①______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（非常开心）②________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（幸福洋溢）③___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（眼泪）④____________________________________________________________________________________________________（神态，眉开眼笑，笑容照亮房间）⑤______________________________________________________________________________________________________（神态，眼睛荡漾着喜悦和甜蜜）⑥____________________________________________________________________________________________________________（无灵主语句，极度开心）Whenshesawthestrawberries,shewasoverjoyed/wildwithjoy/ontopoftheworld/overthemoon.Whenshesawthestrawberries,shewasoverflowingwithhappiness/joy/pleasure/delight.Whenshesawthestrawberries,tearsofjoy/happinessfilledhereyes/floweddownhercheeks.Whenshesawthestrawberries,herfacebeamedandherbrightsmilelituptheroom.Whenshesawthestrawberries,hereyesdanced/twinkled/shone/sparkledwithjoyandsweetness.Whenshesawthestrawberries,agreatfeelingofhappinesscameover/sweptover/tookholdof/seizedher.II.续写微作文请根据所给情节，尝试续写一个等待和老友重逢及终于等到老友的情节。侧重人物高兴和激动的情感细节描写。（词数80左右）Shestoodbythewindow,joyfullyandpatientlywatching._____________________________________________________________________________________________