高三英语一轮复习求助信课件

求助信文体概述写求助信时，要清晰地陈述请求的内容，提出的问题数量不宜过多，要便于回答，内容简明扼要，语气委婉真诚。话题必备词组1帮助某人2寻求帮助3面临困难4遇到问题5做某事有困难6不知道该怎么办7急切渴望得到帮助dosbafavor/givesbahandseek/askforhelpbefacedwithdifficultyencountersomeproblemshavetroubleindoingsthhavenoideahowtodobeanxioustogethelp常用句式（做某事有困难）1.Ihavetroubleindoingsth.2.Ifinditextremelyhardformetodosth.3.Doingsthisanotherterribleheadacheforme.常见困难：【生活方面】与人相处getalongwellwithmyclassmates/thenewteacher/myparents.把握时间arrange/makegooduseofmyeverydaytimeforvaluablethings明确目标

knowthepurposeofmylifeandthedestinationofmyfuture常见困难：不懂语法havetroubleinmasteringtheadvancedgrammarrulesandputthemintouseinmyspeakingandwriting.进步太慢findmyselfmakingprogressnotasfastasbefore,whichhasbeenannoyingmeforalongtime.精力有限can’tbepassionateandenergeticalldaylongsoastomakeeverymomentmeaningfulandsplendid.【学习方面】HaveatryPara1写信的目的，请求得到帮助我写信想问您是否可以帮我个忙？I’mwritingtoaskwhetheryoucoulddomeafavor.2我写信希望您能给我帮助。I’mwritinginthehopethatyouwillbekindenoughtodomeafavor.3我写信希望你能帮我为即将到来的唱歌才能大赛做准备。I’mwritinginthehopeofyourassistanceinpreparingfortheapproachingsingingtalentshow.Para2陈述请求帮助的详细内容1我不擅长自行解决英语学习中的困难。I’mpoorinovercomingthedifficultiesintheEnglishstudyonmyown.2我在撰写有关美国人如何度过节假日的短文上遇到一些困难。

IhavesomedifficultiesinwritingthearticlesabouthowAmericansspendtheirholidaysandfestivals.3我英语课上没有激情不活跃，这样不能让每一分钟有意义和令人满意。Ican’tbepassionateandenergeticinEnglishclasssoasnottomakeeverymomentmeaningfulandsplendid.4.我在掌握高级语法方面有困难，而且不能运用到说和写中，这困扰了我好长时间。Ihavetroubleinmasteringtheadvancedgrammarrulesandputtingthemintouseinmyspeakingandwritingwhichhasbeenannoyingmeforalongtime.Para3希望得到帮助并表达感谢1.如果你能给我一些关于如何为大学生活做准备的建议，我将不胜感激Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldgivemeadviceonhowtopreparemyselfforcollegelife.2.如果您能帮我提一些关于英语演讲的建议，那将会是很大的帮助。

ItwouldbeofgreathelpifyoucanoffermesomevaluablesuggestionsonhowtomakeawonderfulEnglishspeech.3.如果您能帮我润色一下我的草稿，我将不胜感激。Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldhavemydraftpolishedatyourconvenience.Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucould…Dear________,Mynameis_______________(自我介绍).I’mwritingalettertoyoutoaskforsomehelp.Ihavesomedifficultyin_______________(求助内容).First,Ifind___________(困难1).Besides,________(困难2).What’smore,__________(困难3).

Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldgivemeadvice.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

Yours,LiHua刘晓

假如你是李华，暑假参加了某微信公众号（Wechatofficialaccount）举行的英语原版书阅活动，并写了一篇书评（abookreview）。现你用英语给外教Sam写一封信，希望他能帮你面批改书评，内容包括：简要介绍活动提出请求提议见面时间注意：词数80次左右可适当增加细节，使行文连贯文体人称(3)时态(4)要点求助信第一人称一般现在时一般将来时写信目的求助内容结束语1、仔细审题，明确写作要求originalEnglishbooksEnglishoriginals2017-9-15Dear…,…(Para1)…(Para2)

Yours(sincerely),LiHua2、列出提纲，构建框架结构请求帮助提出请求&约定时间感谢并期待答复说明困难写信目的介绍活动

要点罗列❶ask

youafavor❷signupforareadingactivityandwriteabookreview❸helpmecorrectit/makesomecorrections❹meetafterclassonFriday/sparemesometime❺thanksandexpectations3、依据提纲，扩展成文❶askyouafavorIamwritingtoaskyouafavor.IamLiHua,astudentfromourschool.Iamwritingtoaskyouafavor.

highlyrelatedlooselyrelated3、依据提纲，扩展成文

❷signupforareadingactivityandwriteabookreview

AsakeenloverofEnglishbooks,IsignedupforanEnglishorigialreadingactivityduringthesummervocation.IwroteabookreviewonmyfavoritebookJaneEyre.AsakeenloverofEnglishbooks,Isignedupforareadingactivityduringthesummervocation,whereIreadsomeEnglishoriginalsandwroteabookreview.Supporting+Keynon-restrictive

clause3、依据提纲，扩展成文

❸helpmecorrectit/makesomecorrectionsIamnotsurewhetherIhavegotmyideaacross,soIsincerelyhopeyoucanhelpmetocorrectitandgivemesomeadviceonwriting.Beingpoorinwriting,Iamworriedtheremightbesomemistakes.Wouldyoubesokindastohelpmemakesomecorrections?Supporting+KeyUsingaquestiontobepolite3、依据提纲，扩展成文❹meetafterclassonFriday/sparemesometimessionIfpossible,canImeetyouafterclassOnFriday?IfyouareavialableafterclassonFriday,pleasetellmeandIwillmeetyouinyouroffice.CanyousparemesometimeandtellmethetimesothatIcangotomeetyou?ConditionConditionResult3、依据提纲，扩展成文❺thanksandexpectationI’dbegratefulifyoucouldgivemeahand.Lookingforwardtoyourkindreply.

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假如你是李华。最近，你与