人教版九年级英语中考作文讲解课件

大家好大家好1（三）评分档次1.第一档（13-15分）信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。2.第二档（10-12分）信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量错误，但不影响意思表达。3.第三档（7-9分）能传递部分信息，表达不够流畅，但句子基本可读。4.第四档（4-6分）只能传递少量信息，表达不通顺，只有少量句子可读。5.第五档（1-3分）只能传递个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。（三）评分档次1.第一档（13-15分）2五、书面表达（15分）

阅读使人明智，阅读使人充实。某英文报为了了解中学生课外阅读情况，向广大中学生做调查，请根据下面图表信息写一篇短文，介绍课外阅读的益处、你的课外阅读情况及你的阅读计划。

提示：1.短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯；

2．短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；3．词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

五、书面表达（15分）

阅读使人明智，阅读使人充实。某英文报3评分意见：（一）总体原则考查学生综合运用语言的能力，注重语言表达的意义和流畅性。（二）内容要点1.benefit2.whatWhatkindofbooksdoyoulikereading?Why?3.habitDoyoureade-books?Whyorwhynot?Whendoyouusuallyread?Howlongdoyoureadadayoraweek?4.plan评分意见：（一）总体原则4ReadingOutsideClass

Asweallknow,Readinghasalotofbenefit.___________________________

ReadingOutsideClass

A5

Asweallknow,readinghasalotofbenefit.Itcanopenupoureyesbecausebooksarefullofknowledge,anditmakesuswiserandricherinlife.Ilikereadingnewspapersandmagazines,fromwhichIgetlotsoffunandlearnaboutwhat'sgoingonaroundtheworld.Ialsoreadstorybooksandnovelsinmysparetimewhichmakemerelaxedandhappy.Iseldomreade-booksbecausethey'rebadforeyes.Onweekends,Iusuallyspendawholeafternoonreadinginthelibrary.AndIalsoreadforabouthalfanhourbeforegoingtobedeverynight.Summervacationiscoming.Iplantodomorereading.IamgoingtoreadmoreclassicsandmoreEnglishbookstoimprovemylanguageskills.I'msurereadingcanmakeafifferencetomylife.ReadingOutsideClassAsweallknow,readin6

英文有句谚语“East,wast,home’sbest.”某英文报以此为标题，向广大中学生征文。请根据下面图表信息写一篇短文，介绍你家的情况。内容包括：你家的居室及居住环境、家庭成员及家庭成员之间的关系，并谈谈如何让你的家更美好。

提示：1.短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯；

2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；

3.词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。英文有句谚语“East,wast,home’sbe7评分意见：（一）总体原则考查学生综合运用语言的能力，注重语言表达的意义和流畅性。（二）内容要点1.居室2.居住环境3.家庭成员4.家庭成员之间的关系5.如何让你的家更美好评分意见：（一）总体原则8

Thereisanoldsaying,“East,west,hone’sbest.”Iliveinahouseinthecountryside.There’sabiglivingroom,threebedrooms,akitchenandawashroominit.There’resometreesandflowersaroundmyhouse.Theairisreallyclean.AndIoftenhearbirdssinging.There’refourpeopleinmyfamily.They’remyparents,mysisterandI.We’rehelpfulandfriendly.Andwealwaysgetonwellwitheachother.I’mhappyIhaveagoodfamily.IwilldowhatIcantohelpdomorehouseworkandfarmwork.I’llstudyhardersothatIcanmakemoremoneyinthefuture.Withoureffort,I’msuremyhomewillbebetterandbetter.East,wast,home’sbest

Thereisanoldsaying,9

Thereisanoldsaying,“East,west,home’sbest.”Iliveinanapartment.Thereisasittingroom,adiningroom,twobedrooms,awashroom,akitchenandastudyinit.Thankstomymother,myhomeisalwayscleanandtidy.Theflowersinthesittingroomlooklovely.Myapartmentisnotbig,becausethereareonlythreepeopleinmyfamily,myfather,mymotherandI.Sometimesmyparentsargue,butusuallytheygetonverywell.TheylovemeandIlovethem,too.Everyoneneedsagoodhome.I’lldomybesttomakemyhomebetter.I’llstudyhardertomakemyparentshappierandI’lldowhatIcantoimproveourlivingenvironment.East,west,hone’sbest

Thereisanoldsaying10六、书面表达（15分）书包伴我学习，伴我成长，某英文报以“MySchoolbag”为题，举办中学生征文活动。请根据下列图表信息，写一篇短文。内容包括：书包的外形特征、用途和书包背后的课业问题以及课余你期望做的事情。提示：1.短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明；2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；3.词数不少于80，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。六、书面表达（15分）书包伴我学习，伴我成长，某英文报11人教版九年级英语中考作文讲解课件12MySchoolbag

Ihaveaschoolbag.Itisusedforcarryingtheschoolthings,suchasbooks,pensandsoon.Itlookslikealuggagewhichalwaysaccompaniesmeintheworldofknowledge.Myschoolbagisalwaysbymyside.However,italsobringsusmanyproblems.Wehavetodosomuchhomeworkthatwecannotgetenoughsleep.Insteadofenjoyingthewonderfulweekends,weareforcedtohaveextraclasseswithit.Ifwehavemoresparetime,wecantakepartinsportsandactives.Besides,wecandevelophobbiesandinterestaswell.Asamiddleschoolstudent,Ihopemyschoolbagcansharemyjoyandhappinessratherthanbecomeaburden.luggage行旅箱accompany陪伴MySchoolbagluggage行旅箱accom13Example：ShoppingontheInternet网购利弊

随着互联网的发展和普及，网络购物在中国也变得越来越普遍了，甚至已经成了我们日常生活的一部分了;相信同学们身边一定有不少同学已经通过网络进行购物了，比如*****网，京东商城等;但是网络购物究竟有何利弊呢?请写一篇短文，谈谈网上购物的好处与坏处。提示词汇：网上购物shoppingontheInternet(onlineshopping)，京东商城360Example：ShoppingontheInte14Recently，wetalkaboutadvantagesanddisadvantagesofshoppingontheInternet.Somepeoplethinkthatitisveryeasyforustogoshoppingonline.TheshopsonInternet,forexample,360areopenforalmost24hoursaday,sowecanbuysomethingwewantatanytimeifwelike.What'smore,weneedn'ttowaitforalongtime.

However,othersbelievethatwecanonlyseethepicturesontheInternetandcannottouchorseethem,Itisdifficulttosaywhetheritisgoodorbad.Wewillhavemoreproblemswhenthethingsarenotgood.Besides,itisnotagoodnewsforsomegirlsbecausetheyenjoygoingshoppinginthemarketwiththeirfriends.Recently，wetalkaboutadvant15Howtolivealow-carbonlife(如何低碳生活)假定你是李华，最近你们班就“低碳”生活方式进行了讨论，你的美国朋友Jack来信向你询问讨论情况，请你用英语写封回信，简单参照作文地带介绍的以下讨论结果：1.节水节电;2.垃圾分类;3.少用纸巾，重拾手帕;4.步行，骑自行车或乘坐公交车。参考词汇：低碳lowcarbon，纸巾tissue，垃圾分类sortoutrubbishes，手帕handkerchief，电electricityHowtolivealow-carbonlife16DearJack,Thankyouforyourletteraskingaboutourdiscussiononlowcarbonlifestyle.Hereissomethingaboutit.Everyoneknowsthatwecandoalotofthingsinordertolivealow-carbonlife.Firstly,weshouldsavewaterandelectricity.Secondly,wehadbettersortoutrubbishes,whichincluderecyclableandnon-recyclablerubbishes.Thirdly,wecouldre-pickupourhandkerchiefs,andusetissuesaslittleaspossiblesowecanstopmoretressfromcuttingdown.Lastbutnotleast,pleasetrytowalkifyouhavemorefreetime,andridebikesortakebusesasoftenaspossible.Bestwishes,LiBingDearJack,172017年中考英语作文万能句子谚语Everycoinhastwosides.每个硬币都有两面，比喻事物的两面性。Thewinteriscomingandthespringisnotfar.冬天已经临近了，春天还会远吗？Failureisthemotherofsuccess.失败是成功之母。Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧。Actionsspeaklouderthanwords.事实胜于雄辩。Afallintoapit,againinyourwit.吃一堑，长一智。Agoodbeginningishalfdone.良好的开端是成功的一半。Don'tputofftilltomorrowwhatshouldbedonetoday.今日事，今日毕。Timeandtidewaitfornoman.时不我待。2017年中考英语作文万能句子谚语Everycoinha18大家好大家好19（三）评分档次1.第一档（13-15分）信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。2.第二档（10-12分）信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量错误，但不影响意思表达。3.第三档（7-9分）能传递部分信息，表达不够流畅，但句子基本可读。4.第四档（4-6分）只能传递少量信息，表达不通顺，只有少量句子可读。5.第五档（1-3分）只能传递个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。（三）评分档次1.第一档（13-15分）20五、书面表达（15分）

阅读使人明智，阅读使人充实。某英文报为了了解中学生课外阅读情况，向广大中学生做调查，请根据下面图表信息写一篇短文，介绍课外阅读的益处、你的课外阅读情况及你的阅读计划。

提示：1.短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯；

2．短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；3．词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

五、书面表达（15分）

阅读使人明智，阅读使人充实。某英文报21评分意见：（一）总体原则考查学生综合运用语言的能力，注重语言表达的意义和流畅性。（二）内容要点1.benefit2.whatWhatkindofbooksdoyoulikereading?Why?3.habitDoyoureade-books?Whyorwhynot?Whendoyouusuallyread?Howlongdoyoureadadayoraweek?4.plan评分意见：（一）总体原则22ReadingOutsideClass

Asweallknow,Readinghasalotofbenefit.___________________________

ReadingOutsideClass

A23

Asweallknow,readinghasalotofbenefit.Itcanopenupoureyesbecausebooksarefullofknowledge,anditmakesuswiserandricherinlife.Ilikereadingnewspapersandmagazines,fromwhichIgetlotsoffunandlearnaboutwhat'sgoingonaroundtheworld.Ialsoreadstorybooksandnovelsinmysparetimewhichmakemerelaxedandhappy.Iseldomreade-booksbecausethey'rebadforeyes.Onweekends,Iusuallyspendawholeafternoonreadinginthelibrary.AndIalsoreadforabouthalfanhourbeforegoingtobedeverynight.Summervacationiscoming.Iplantodomorereading.IamgoingtoreadmoreclassicsandmoreEnglishbookstoimprovemylanguageskills.I'msurereadingcanmakeafifferencetomylife.ReadingOutsideClassAsweallknow,readin24

英文有句谚语“East,wast,home’sbest.”某英文报以此为标题，向广大中学生征文。请根据下面图表信息写一篇短文，介绍你家的情况。内容包括：你家的居室及居住环境、家庭成员及家庭成员之间的关系，并谈谈如何让你的家更美好。

提示：1.短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯；

2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；

3.词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。英文有句谚语“East,wast,home’sbe25评分意见：（一）总体原则考查学生综合运用语言的能力，注重语言表达的意义和流畅性。（二）内容要点1.居室2.居住环境3.家庭成员4.家庭成员之间的关系5.如何让你的家更美好评分意见：（一）总体原则26

Thereisanoldsaying,“East,west,hone’sbest.”Iliveinahouseinthecountryside.There’sabiglivingroom,threebedrooms,akitchenandawashroominit.There’resometreesandflowersaroundmyhouse.Theairisreallyclean.AndIoftenhearbirdssinging.There’refourpeopleinmyfamily.They’remyparents,mysisterandI.We’rehelpfulandfriendly.Andwealwaysgetonwellwitheachother.I’mhappyIhaveagoodfamily.IwilldowhatIcantohelpdomorehouseworkandfarmwork.I’llstudyhardersothatIcanmakemoremoneyinthefuture.Withoureffort,I’msuremyhomewillbebetterandbetter.East,wast,home’sbest

Thereisanoldsaying,27

Thereisanoldsaying,“East,west,home’sbest.”Iliveinanapartment.Thereisasittingroom,adiningroom,twobedrooms,awashroom,akitchenandastudyinit.Thankstomymother,myhomeisalwayscleanandtidy.Theflowersinthesittingroomlooklovely.Myapartmentisnotbig,becausethereareonlythreepeopleinmyfamily,myfather,mymotherandI.Sometimesmyparentsargue,butusuallytheygetonverywell.TheylovemeandIlovethem,too.Everyoneneedsagoodhome.I’lldomybesttomakemyhomebetter.I’llstudyhardertomakemyparentshappierandI’lldowhatIcantoimproveourlivingenvironment.East,west,hone’sbest

Thereisanoldsaying28六、书面表达（15分）书包伴我学习，伴我成长，某英文报以“MySchoolbag”为题，举办中学生征文活动。请根据下列图表信息，写一篇短文。内容包括：书包的外形特征、用途和书包背后的课业问题以及课余你期望做的事情。提示：1.短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明；2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；3.词数不少于80，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。六、书面表达（15分）书包伴我学习，伴我成长，某英文报29人教版九年级英语中考作文讲解课件30MySchoolbag

Ihaveaschoolbag.Itisusedforcarryingtheschoolthings,suchasbooks,pensandsoon.Itlookslikealuggagewhichalwaysaccompaniesmeintheworldofknowledge.Myschoolbagisalwaysbymyside.However,italsobringsusmanyproblems.Wehavetodosomuchhomeworkthatwecannotgetenoughsleep.Insteadofenjoyingthewonderfulweekends,weareforcedtohaveextraclasseswithit.Ifwehavemoresparetime,wecantakepartinsportsandactives.Besides,wecandevelophobbiesandinterestaswell.Asamiddleschoolstudent,Ihopemyschoolbagcansharemyjoyandhappinessratherthanbecomeaburden.luggage行旅箱accompany陪伴MySchoolbagluggage行旅箱accom31Example：ShoppingontheInternet网购利弊

随着互联网的发展和普及，网络购物在中国也变得越来越普遍了，甚至已经成了我们日常生活的一部分了;相信同学们身边一定有不少同学已经通过网络进行购物了，比如*****网，京东商城等;但是网络购物究竟有何利弊呢?请写一篇短文，谈谈网上购物的好处与坏处。提示词汇：网上购物shoppingontheInternet(onlineshopping)，京东商城360Example：ShoppingontheInte32Recently，wetalkaboutadvantagesanddisadvantagesofshoppingontheInternet.Somepeoplethinkthatitisveryeasyforustogoshoppingonline.TheshopsonInternet,forexample,360areopenforalmost24hoursaday,sowecanbuysomethingwewantatanytimeifwelike.What'smore,weneedn'ttowaitforalongtime.

However,othersbelievethatwecanonlyseethepicturesontheInternetandcannottouchorseethem,Itisdifficulttosaywhetheritisgoodorbad.Wewillhavemoreproblemswhenthethingsarenotgood.Besides,itisnotagoodnewsforsomegirlsbecausetheyenjoygoingshoppinginthemarketwiththeirfriends.Recently，wetalkaboutadvant33Howtolivealow-carbonlife(如何低碳生活)假定你是李