读后续写练习写作指导 讲义-2023届高三英语二轮复习写作专项

读后续写试题原题阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。WhenmyhusbandRandydiedinlatefall,decidingwhattodowithhisgardenwaswaydownonthelistofnecessarytasks.Duringthefirstfewmonths,Icriedwithourdaughters,plannedamemorial,criedwithmyfamily,celebratedaquietThanksgiving,andpanickedovernothavingboughtChristmaspresents.Asthecalendarturnedtoanewyear,theoftenrainydaysandlongnightsdeepenedmysorrow.IfoundmyselfexhaustedattheendofFebruary,bothphysicallyandmentally.Thenthedaffodilsbloomed（开花）inthegarden.Yearsbefore,Randyhadplanteddozensoftheselemon-yellowflowers.Tohim,theyservedasareminderofhope,apromisethatlightandwarmthwouldsoonreplacecoldanddark.Lookingatthosedaffodils,IthoughtabouthowRandyhadconsideredourgardenalivingworkofart,carefullychoosingplantssowe/dseenewbloomseverymonth.ThenInoticedalltheweedsthathadtakenrootandspreadeverywhere.Theneglect（疏于打理）showed,forRandy'sillnesshadlastedacoupleofyears,atimewhenhedidn'thaveenergyforyardworkthewayhehadbefore.Facedwiththeneglectedgarden,Ifeltoverwhelmedinthebeginning.MydaughterssuggestedIhireaservicetocleaneverythingup.Ididn'trespond.EverytimeIsatinthegardenalone,thememoriesofthelivelygardencameflooding,likethenumerousscenesinanunforgettablefilm.ManydaysRandycamehomefromwork,changedintooldclothes,andheadedoutthedoortomoworprune（修剪）.Orangedragonfliesfollowedhimaroundtheyardasheworked.Honeybeesbuzzedamongtheflowers,birdssangbeautifulsongs,andgentlebreezescarriedthesweetsmellofdirt.Nomatterhowcoldorwetitwas,thefreshairandphysicalactivitymadehimenergizedandrefreshed.ForRandy,theworkwasquietandcomforting,whichwasarelief,aswellasapleasure.注意：.续写词数应为150左右;.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。Thedaysgrewwarmerandlighter,andIstartedtheworkmyself.Weekslater,mydaughtersreturnedtovisitme.试题分析.人物：I:失去了挚爱的丈夫，一直处于悲伤当中。daughters：没有太多的描述，但作为"纽带”见证着我的心情的改变。MydaughterssuggestedIhireaservicetocleaneverythingup.Ididn'trespond.Weekslater,mydaughtersreturnedtovisitme.家husband：Yearsbefore,Randyhadplanteddozensoftheselemon-yellowflowers.Tohim,theyservedasareminderofhope,apromisethatlightandwarmthwouldsoonreplacecoldanddark.ForRandy,theworkwasquietandcomforting,whichwasarelief,aswellasapleasure..前文情节:失去了挚爱的丈夫后，我一直处于悲伤当中，从前一年的秋末、感恩节、圣诞节，到来年二月，身心已经疲惫至极。终于，有一天，我回忆起了当时Randy还在时候他收拾花园的一幕幕。于是，决定抽点时间把花园整理起来。女儿们的建议是雇人打理一下，而我却一直想着自己把这个花园还原它应有的生机。于是，在天气逐渐转暖的时候，我准备自己动手…….重要句：整篇文章围绕"WhenmyhusbandRandydiedinlatefall,decidingwhattodowithhisgardenwaswaydownonthelistofnecessarytasks.〃来写。.主题：表达对丈夫的爱与思念5,续写线:a一条围绕〃garden的变化〃来写：生机勃勃一一荒芜一一重回生机a一条围绕〃我的心情的变化〃来写：悲伤一一借助美好的回忆一一全新的开始.续写情节安排：V第一段：Thedaysgrewwarmerandlighter,andIstartedtheworkmyself.①从来没去打理过花园，怎么做呢？（与开头句衔接）②回忆起Randy曾经在怎样打理的，我也试着去做了③然后就开始等待荒芜的花园重回生机（与下文开头句衔接）▼第二段：Weekslater,mydaughtersreturnedtovisitme.①逐渐恢复生机的花园和我的精神状态让女儿们深感欣喜（与开头句衔接）②重回生机后花园的状态③我从中收获了〃接纳〃和〃调整〃（主题升华）下水文Thedaysgrewwarmerandlighter,andIstartedtheworkmyself.Areallyhardtaskforme!NeverdidIshouldertheresponsibilityoftendingthebeautifulgarden.WhatRandyleftmetodowasjustappreciateit.Sweetmemoriescamebacktome.FollowingwhatRandyoncedid,Iworkedhardtoturnoverthesoilandridtheweeds,makingsoftandcomfortablebedsfordaffodilsandotherflowersandplants.Then,Ispreadthefertilizerandseedsinthem.Nothingwasbetterthanwaitingforthegardentoberefreshedwiththosevividscenes.（86words）Weekslater,mydaughtersreturnedtovisitme.WhatamazedthemgreatlywerethelivelygardenandmygradualrecoveryfromlosingbelovedRandy."You'vemadeit,ourgreatMum!〃Ishowedthemaroundtheonceneglectedgarden,whichnowturnedonanewlookwiththedaffodilsandotherflowersblooming.Anddragonflies,honeybeesandbirdscameback,dancingandsingingcheerfully.Thegardenbroughtpresentsandhopestousagain,fromwhichIharvestedasenseofreliefandpleasure.NeverwouldIbeoverwhelmed,thinkingRandywaswithusforever.（85words）范文Thedaysgrewwarmerandlighter,andIstartedtheworkmyself.WhatIfocusedonfirstwasclearingawaytheinvasivespeciesthathadtakenrootandspread.Followingthat,Itendedallthelivelyplantscarefullyoneverysingleday.Attimes,Iworriedthatmyeffortscouldneverbegoodenough.Butasmylistofurgentgardenchoresgotshorter,Istartedtofeelrelieved.Workingintheyardkeptmyhandsbusyandmymindfocusedonthetaskinfrontofme,graduallyofferingmeabeautifulgardenaswellasasenseofachievement.(89words)Weekslater,mydaughtersreturnedtovisitme.Onenteringthedoor,theyweredeeplyattractedbythelivelygardenfulloffragrantblooms,withhoneybeesbuzzingbusilyandbirdssingingcheerfully.Theyturnedtome,confusionmappedontheirfaces.Sensingthat,IexplainedthatIgraduallyenjoyedworkinginthegarde