高三英语写作公开课课件

书面表达Howtomakeyourwritingmoreeffective？ByJanet12021书面表达ByJanet12021字数不够或未能传达读者任何信息。

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fluentEnglishtowriteGreatchanges

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hadtakenplaceinmyhometownbuildingswidenedItwillbewonderfulwhen

youcometoChinaifyouarefreeshowyouaroundIwillbegladto语言不地道;中文式思维;语言错误较多samplesofstudentwork42021readandwritefindithardAgoodcompositionContentstructurelanguage52021AgoodContentstructurelangua

Whatisagoodwriting？Content:coverthekeypoints(内容要完整)

everythingmustbetothepoint(切题)

Structure: *Goodbeginningandending(好的开头结尾) *Wellorganizedandsmoothlydeveloped(结构合理,行文流畅)

Language: *NoChinglish(避免中文式英文) *NoGrammaticalmistakes(没有语法错误) *appropriatevocabularyandexpressions(得体的词汇和表达)goodsentencepatterns（句式）

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OurschoolisatthefootofHuangyangMountain.2.Ourschoolisverygood.Ourschool

issituated/located

atthefootofHuangyangMountain.

Ourschoolis

well-equipped/

isequippedwithadvancedteachingfacilities.I.使用得体的词汇或短语3.Ourwintervacationiscoming.Ourwintervacationis

approaching/drawingnear.approach/drawnear720211.Ourschoolisatthefooto4.

Weare

veryhappyduringwinterholidays.Wehavealotoffunduringwinterholidays.5.Everyone

shoulddohishomework.Everyoneissupposedtodohishomework.6.Weall

thinkMissliuisagreatteacher.（评价很高）

Weallthinkhighlyofher.820214.

Weare

veryhappyduringwLet’sappreciatesomesentences.II.丰富的句式：92021Let’sappreciatesomesentenceOnlyinthiswaycanwelearnEnglishwell.2.Withthenoisegoingon,Icouldn’tgoonstudying.3.Locatedatthesouthwestcornerofourschool,thegardencoversanareaof1000squaremetres.4.Itwasnotuntilshetookoffherglassesthatherfatherrecognizeher.InChina,ourwinterholidayslastabout20days,duringwhichtimewecelebratethebiggestfestival---theSpringfestival.倒装句with复合结构非谓语动词短语强调句定语从句102021OnlyinthiswaycanwelearnLet’simitatethesentences.112021Let’simitatethesentences.11IrealizedJanetwasaniceteacheronlyafterIleftschool．Wecanliveinmorecomfortableandbeautifulsurroundingsonlyinthisway.

一、only倒装句Wecanexpectourhometowntakeonanewlookonlywithcombinedefforts.Onlywithcombinedefforts,canweexpect

ourhometowntakeonanewlook.OnlyafterIleftschooldidIrealizeJanetwasaniceteacher.Onlyinthiswaycanwelive

inmorecomfortableandbeautifulsurroundings.122021IrealizedJanetwasanicet二、强调句Itis/was+被强调部分+that/who+其他.Thelackofenvironmentalawarenesscausessuchbehavior.Itisthelackofenvironmentalawarenessthatcausessuchbehavior.Ididn’tknowWangkaiuntilIsawDisguiser.ItwasnotuntilIsawDisguiserthatIknewWangkai.132021二、强调句Itis/was+被强调部分+that/wThethiefwastakenawaybythepolice.Hishandsweretied.(with+宾语+分词）2.Thewomanisbeautifulandtearsarerunningonhercheeks.(with+宾语+分词）Thethiefwastakenawaybythepolice,

withhishandstied.Thewomanisbeautiful,withtearsrunningonhercheeks.三、with复合结构142021Thethiefwastakenawaybyth有这么多人支持你，你不用担心。

Withsomanypeoplehelpingyou,youneedn’tworry.随着高考的临近，很多学生选择撕书以缓解学习的压力。

Withthecollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear,somestudentschoosetoteartheirbooksintopiecesinordertoreducestressandpressurefromtheirlearning.由于我的耳机坏了，我不能做听力练习。

Withmyearphonebroken,Ican’tdothelisteningexercises.152021有这么多人支持你，你不用担心。152021Twopeoplearewalkingonthegrassandtotallyignorethenoticewhichsays,“keepoffthegrass”.Chenjialewalkedoutoftheclassroomandmanygirlsfollowedher.四、非谓语动词Twopeoplearewalkingonthegrasstotallyignoringthenoticewhichsays,“keepoffthegrass”.Chenjialewalkedoutoftheclassroom,followedbymanygirls.162021TwopeoplearewalkingontheThekidswereinvitedtothepartyandtheywereveryexcited.WhenIwalkedthroughthepark,Isawmanybeautifulflowers.Invitedtotheparty,thekidswereveryexcited.Walkingthroughthepark,Isawmanybeautifulflowers.172021Thekidswereinvitedtothep我的梦想是我能进入一所重点大学（akeyuniversity）。MydreamisthatIcanenterakeyuniversity.我能进入一所重点大学是我的梦想。ThatIcanenterakeyuniversityismydream.IhaveadreamthatIcanenterakeyuniversity.我有一个梦想我能进入一所重点大学。我总是梦想着我能进入一所重点大学。IalwaysdreamthatIcanenterakeyuniversity.五、名词性从句182021我的梦想是我能进入一所重点大学（akeyunivers2.他建议我努力学习。HesuggestedthatIshouldstudyhard.宾语从句2.ItissuggestedtomethatIshouldstudyhard.

主语从句3.HegavemeasuggestionthatIshouldstudyhard.

同位语从句4.WhathesuggestedtomeisthatIshouldstudyhard.主语从句+表语从句1920212.他建议我努力学习。192021Let’sconclude.InversionEmphaticsentenceNon-predicateverbWithcompositestructureNounclauses202021Let’sconclude.202021Asaresult;Inaddition;Tobeginwith;However

ⅢUseproperlinkingwordsDearEditor,Asastudentreader,IamwritingtotalkabouttheEnglishtextbookspublishedbyyourhouse.Thesebookshavemanyadvantages._________oneofthemisthatwecanfindavarietyoftopics,suchasscience,cultureandhistory.Thesetopics,Ithink,areverypopularwithusstudents.Tobeginwith212021Asaresult;Ina

Inmyopinion;Therefore;

However;what'smore_____________,alongwiththetextstherearemanybeautifulandcolorfulpictures,whichcanhelpusunderstandEnglishbetter.EventhestudentswhousedtodislikeEnglishhaveturnedouttobeinterestedinthesubject._________,someofthetextshavetoomanynewwordsandexpressionswhicharehardforus.__________,I'dliketosuggestchangingthemintoeasierones.what'smoreHoweverTherefore222021Inmyopinion;ThereforeGoodafternoon,everyone!

Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis“MyAttitudetoPursuitofFashioninSchool”.

Nowinourschoolthereisahotpursuitoffashion.Somestudentsliveaveryexpensivelife…_______._______,theyhopetolooksmartandspecial._______,theywanttowinothers’admirationandrespect.Inaddition,itmakesthemfeelcool._______,westudentsshouldholdtherightsenseofvalues.Weshouldpracticethriftinourdailylife._____,itisadvisableforustodonatesomepocketmoneytotheHopeProjectsothatthosepoorchildreninruralareascanreturntoschool.______,itistheinnerbeautyratherthanourappearancethatmakesusrespectable.Thankyouforlistening!thereasonswhytheydosoareasfollowsB.firstlyC.lastbutnot

leastD.what’smore

E.asfarasIamconcernedF.SecondlyABCDEF232021Goodafternoon,everyone!ther

技巧1.使用得体的词汇3.使用恰当的连接词词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。增强书面表达效果的技巧2.使用较丰富的句式242021技巧1.使用得体的词汇3.使用恰当的连接词Let’spolishthefollowingparagraph.252021Let’spolishthefollowingpar

LastSunday,abigfirebrokeoutinabuildingnearmyhome.Thepeoplewererescuedwhenthefiremenarrived.Thefiremendependedontheirprofessionalknowledgeandquicklypreventedthefirefromspreading.Finally,thefirewasputout,peoplewereallinrelief.262021LastSunday,abigfireb

ItwaslastSundaythatabigfirebrokeoutinabuildingnearmyhome.Onlywhenthefiremenarrivedwerethepeoplerescued.Dependingontheirprofessionalknowledge,thefiremenquicklypreventedthefirefromspreading.Finally,withthefireputout,peoplewereallinrelief.272021ItwaslastSundaythata

联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接待人员,请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况：1)大小：近100户人家，约500口人。2)变化：过去很穷，78年后变化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。3)教育：原来的学校很小，现已经过改建。新建的教学楼有4层，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。注意：1）要点齐全，前后连贯。

2）词数：100-120之间。PracticeLadiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool.Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.Ithaschangedalotsince1978.Peopleherearericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Theschoolherewasverysmall.Nowithasbeenrebuilt.Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.Thankyou.282021联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。Ladiesandgentlemen,

Welcometoourschool!Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!①Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.②Ithaschangedalotsince1978③.Peoplehere④arericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.①Thisvillageisasmallonewith/whichhasnearly100familiesandabout500people.

Itusedtobeverypoor.②

However,

ithaschangedalotsince1978③

andhasbeendevelopingveryfast.Peoplehere④liveamuchbetterlifethanbefore.书面表达：Nowitistakingonanewlook.292021Ladiesandgentlemen,Ladiesan

Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall⑤.⑥Nowithasbeenrebuilt.⑦Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys⑧.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.⑨Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.⑩Thankyou.

Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall⑤andmostchildrencouldn’taffordtogotoschool.⑥

Butnowithasbeenrebuilt⑦and⑧

whichhas4storeysisthemostbeautifuloneinthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.⑨

What’smore,

theyenjoyfreeeducation.⑩Mayyouenjoyyourstayherethenewlybuiltteachingbuilding/Mayyouhaveapleasanttimehere!Thankyou.

302021Inthepast,theschool书面表达Howtomakeyourwritingmoreeffective？ByJanet312021书面表达ByJanet12021字数不够或未能传达读者任何信息。

samplesofstudentwork322021字数不够或未能传达读者任何信息。字迹潦草难以辨认

332021字迹潦草难以辨认3202readandwritefindithard

fluentEnglishtowriteGreatchanges

roads

hadtakenplaceinmyhometownbuildingswidenedItwillbewonderfulwhen

youcometoChinaifyouarefreeshowyouaroundIwillbegladto语言不地道;中文式思维;语言错误较多samplesofstudentwork342021readandwritefindithardAgoodcompositionContentstructurelanguage352021AgoodContentstructurelangua

Whatisagoodwriting？Content:coverthekeypoints(内容要完整)

everythingmustbetothepoint(切题)

Structure: *Goodbeginningandending(好的开头结尾) *Wellorganizedandsmoothlydeveloped(结构合理,行文流畅)

Language: *NoChinglish(避免中文式英文) *NoGrammaticalmistakes(没有语法错误) *appropriatevocabularyandexpressions(得体的词汇和表达)goodsentencepatterns（句式）

362021620211.

OurschoolisatthefootofHuangyangMountain.2.Ourschoolisverygood.Ourschool

issituated/located

atthefootofHuangyangMountain.

Ourschoolis

well-equipped/

isequippedwithadvancedteachingfacilities.I.使用得体的词汇或短语3.Ourwintervacationiscoming.Ourwintervacationis

approaching/drawingnear.approach/drawnear3720211.Ourschoolisatthefooto4.

Weare

veryhappyduringwinterholidays.Wehavealotoffunduringwinterholidays.5.Everyone

shoulddohishomework.Everyoneissupposedtodohishomework.6.Weall

thinkMissliuisagreatteacher.（评价很高）

Weallthinkhighlyofher.3820214.

Weare

veryhappyduringwLet’sappreciatesomesentences.II.丰富的句式：392021Let’sappreciatesomesentenceOnlyinthiswaycanwelearnEnglishwell.2.Withthenoisegoingon,Icouldn’tgoonstudying.3.Locatedatthesouthwestcornerofourschool,thegardencoversanareaof1000squaremetres.4.Itwasnotuntilshetookoffherglassesthatherfatherrecognizeher.InChina,ourwinterholidayslastabout20days,duringwhichtimewecelebratethebiggestfestival---theSpringfestival.倒装句with复合结构非谓语动词短语强调句定语从句402021OnlyinthiswaycanwelearnLet’simitatethesentences.412021Let’simitatethesentences.11IrealizedJanetwasaniceteacheronlyafterIleftschool．Wecanliveinmorecomfortableandbeautifulsurroundingsonlyinthisway.

一、only倒装句Wecanexpectourhometowntakeonanewlookonlywithcombinedefforts.Onlywithcombinedefforts,canweexpect

ourhometowntakeonanewlook.OnlyafterIleftschooldidIrealizeJanetwasaniceteacher.Onlyinthiswaycanwelive

inmorecomfortableandbeautifulsurroundings.422021IrealizedJanetwasanicet二、强调句Itis/was+被强调部分+that/who+其他.Thelackofenvironmentalawarenesscausessuchbehavior.Itisthelackofenvironmentalawarenessthatcausessuchbehavior.Ididn’tknowWangkaiuntilIsawDisguiser.ItwasnotuntilIsawDisguiserthatIknewWangkai.432021二、强调句Itis/was+被强调部分+that/wThethiefwastakenawaybythepolice.Hishandsweretied.(with+宾语+分词）2.Thewomanisbeautifulandtearsarerunningonhercheeks.(with+宾语+分词）Thethiefwastakenawaybythepolice,

withhishandstied.Thewomanisbeautiful,withtearsrunningonhercheeks.三、with复合结构442021Thethiefwastakenawaybyth有这么多人支持你，你不用担心。

Withsomanypeoplehelpingyou,youneedn’tworry.随着高考的临近，很多学生选择撕书以缓解学习的压力。

Withthecollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear,somestudentschoosetoteartheirbooksintopiecesinordertoreducestressandpressurefromtheirlearning.由于我的耳机坏了，我不能做听力练习。

Withmyearphonebroken,Ican’tdothelisteningexercises.452021有这么多人支持你，你不用担心。152021Twopeoplearewalkingonthegrassandtotallyignorethenoticewhichsays,“keepoffthegrass”.Chenjialewalkedoutoftheclassroomandmanygirlsfollowedher.四、非谓语动词Twopeoplearewalkingonthegrasstotallyignoringthenoticewhichsays,“keepoffthegrass”.Chenjialewalkedoutoftheclassroom,followedbymanygirls.462021TwopeoplearewalkingontheThekidswereinvitedtothepartyandtheywereveryexcited.WhenIwalkedthroughthepark,Isawmanybeautifulflowers.Invitedtotheparty,thekidswereveryexcited.Walkingthroughthepark,Isawmanybeautifulflowers.472021Thekidswereinvitedtothep我的梦想是我能进入一所重点大学（akeyuniversity）。MydreamisthatIcanenterakeyuniversity.我能进入一所重点大学是我的梦想。ThatIcanenterakeyuniversityismydream.IhaveadreamthatIcanenterakeyuniversity.我有一个梦想我能进入一所重点大学。我总是梦想着我能进入一所重点大学。IalwaysdreamthatIcanenterakeyuniversity.五、名词性从句482021我的梦想是我能进入一所重点大学（akeyunivers2.他建议我努力学习。HesuggestedthatIshouldstudyhard.宾语从句2.ItissuggestedtomethatIshouldstudyhard.

主语从句3.HegavemeasuggestionthatIshouldstudyhard.

同位语从句4.WhathesuggestedtomeisthatIshouldstudyhard.主语从句+表语从句4920212.他建议我努力学习。192021Let’sconclude.InversionEmphaticsentenceNon-predicateverbWithcompositestructureNounclauses502021Let’sconclude.202021Asaresult;Inaddition;Tobeginwith;However

ⅢUseproperlinkingwordsDearEditor,Asastudentreader,IamwritingtotalkabouttheEnglishtextbookspublishedbyyourhouse.Thesebookshavemanyadvantages._________oneofthemisthatwecanfindavarietyoftopics,suchasscience,cultureandhistory.Thesetopics,Ithink,areverypopularwithusstudents.Tobeginwith512021Asaresult;Ina

Inmyopinion;Therefore;

However;what'smore_____________,alongwiththetextstherearemanybeautifulandcolorfulpictures,whichcanhelpusunderstandEnglishbetter.EventhestudentswhousedtodislikeEnglishhaveturnedouttobeinterestedinthesubject._________,someofthetextshavetoomanynewwordsandexpressionswhicharehardforus.__________,I'dliketosuggestchangingthemintoeasierones.what'smoreHoweverTherefore522021Inmyopinion;ThereforeGoodafternoon,everyone!

Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis“MyAttitudetoPursuitofFashioninSchool”.

Nowinourschoolthereisahotpursuitoffashion.Somestudentsliveaveryexpensivelife…_______._______,theyhopetolooksmartandspecial._______,theywanttowinothers’admirationandrespect.Inaddition,itmakesthemfeelcool._______,westudentsshouldholdtherightsenseofvalues.Weshouldpracticethriftinourdailylife._____,itisadvisableforustodonatesomepocketmoneytotheHopeProjectsothatthosepoorchildreninruralareascanreturntoschool.______,itistheinnerbeautyratherthanourappearancethatmakesusrespectable.Thankyouforlistening!thereasonswhytheydosoareasfollowsB.firstlyC.lastbutnot

leastD.what’smore

E.asfarasIamconcernedF.SecondlyABCDEF532021Goodafternoon,everyone!ther

技巧1.使用得体的词汇3.使用恰当的连接词词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。增强书面表达效果的技巧2.使用较丰富的句式542021技巧1.使用得体的词汇3.使用恰当的连接词Let’spolishthefollowingparagraph.552021Let’spolishthefollowingpar

LastSunday,abigfirebrokeoutinabuildingnearmyhome.Thepeoplewererescuedwhenthefiremenarrived.Thefiremendependedontheirprofessionalknowledgeandquicklypreventedthefirefromspreading.Finally,thefirewasputout,peoplewereallinrelief.562021LastSunday,abigfireb

ItwaslastSundaythatabigfirebrokeoutinabuildingnearmyhome.Onlywhenthefiremenarrivedwerethepeoplerescued.Dependingontheirprofessionalknowledge,thefiremenquicklypreventedthefirefromspreading.Finally,withthefireputout,peoplewereallinrelief.572021ItwaslastSundaythata

联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接待人员,请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况：1)大小：近1