高三英语一轮复习读后续写结尾方式导学案

姓名________________读后续写结尾概要Continuationwriting---结尾（1）结尾概要Learningaims：学会保证故事的完整性，必须要结尾掌握四大结尾类型实战演练四大结尾记住读后续写中有四大结尾方式，分别是：好人好结局好人坏结局（一般不采用）坏人好结局坏人坏结局（一般不采用）围绕故事主题进行合理的结局拓展好人好结局这里说的人，是广义上的“人”，也可以指事情。一般来说好人得到好结局，是理所应当的，这也是我们一直提倡的。好人坏结局好人一般没有坏结局，除非文章十分明确的暗示了这个人的结局是坏结局，但是一般来说不太可能有。坏人好结局坏人，在文章中一定是描写了做了哪些坏事，要想取得好结局，一定要在好结局前说明白是怎么转变的，做了什么思想转变，或者做了什么好事，必须要写出转变的内容，可以运用几大描写方法。坏人坏结局一般也不太常用，我们通常是“育人”的目的，是通过教育感化坏人为好人。当然，如果情节需要，也是可以写成坏结局的。比如小偷被抓到了，这个看似是个坏结局，实际上对文章的主人公来说是好结局。三、教师讲解四、给下面的话题的结局进行推导1.坏人好结局：一个小偷总是偷东西某天，去超市偷东西→_______________→____________________→_______________2.好人好结局：一个善于帮助别人的人某天,Mary在路上遇到堵车→_______________→____________________→_______________五、限时训练阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。WhenIwaselevenyearsold,Ihadabigaccident.IgetscaredevennowwhenIthinkaboutthattime.Iwentskatingnearmyhouse.Thereweremanypeople,andIsawsomeofthemfallingontheice.Itwasmyfirsttimetogoiceskating,soIwasnervous.Iwaswonderinghowtoskate.Iwentwithafriendwhowasveryskillful.Hespentsometimeteachingmehowtoskate,butIdidn’tlearnmuch.Heleftmeandskatedallaround.Assoonasheleft,Ifelldown.Ienviedtheotherpeoplebecausetheycouldskatewell.IwasboredbecauseIkeptfallingsoItookoffmyskatesandjustwalkedaroundontheiceinmyshoes.Itwascoldandmyhandswerefrozen.Suddenly,Isteppedonsomethingthatwasnothard.Whatwasit?Itwasaweakplaceintheice.WhenIsteppedthere,Isankundertheice.IthoughtthatIwasgoingtodie,butIdidmybesttograbsomethingtogetoutfromundertheice.Itriedtograbtheedgeoftheice,butitwasverydifficultforaneleven-year-old.Itseemedlikeaverylongtime,likeayear.Then,fortunately,someonehelpedme.Hegrabbedmyarmsandpulledmeup.So,IlivedandI’mstillalivetoday.Ithankedhim.Atthattime,myfriendcameback.Iwasannoyedathimbecausehewassupposedtotakecareofme,buthedidn’t.Hewasembarrassed.WhenItookataxihome,thetaxidriverwassurprisedandaskedwhathadhappened.Ididn’twanttosayanythingbecauseIwastiredandscared.Evennow,wheneverIthinkaboutthattime,Ifeeluncomfortable.Idon’twanttogoskatingagainevennow.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；Paragraph1:ItwaslongbeforeIwentskatingonceagain,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:However,eversincethenIhaven’tfoundanytimetogoskating,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________六、文章升格请根据老师的讲解，先在原文中修改后，在此处进行二次创作。Paragraph1:ItwaslongbeforeIwentskatingonceagain,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:However,eversincethenIhaven’tfoundanytimetogoskating,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________