通过高考英语作文分析指导写作 人教

通过高考英语作文分析指导写作编辑ppt教学目的(aim)通过本节课的教学,使学生掌握英语书面表达的一般技巧及方法。教学重点(focus)书面表达五个步骤书面表达注意事项教学难点(points)编辑pptI.1990—2003高考书面表达题样回顾1.从内容和体裁上分(Contentandstyle)’2003体裁内容历年书面表达应用文书信（便条）对话(dialogue)通知（口头书面）请柬(invitation)记叙文说明文介绍人物事件日记(diary)故事或经历场景(scenes)事物(objects)’95,’99,’01,02,’03’94’91,’962000’92,’98’97编辑ppt2.从提示形式上分(Tips)提示形式文字ChineseEnglish历年书面表达charts’90,’91,’94’96,’01,’02’92,’93,’95,’97,’98,’99,’00,’03pictures

结论从上面两表看出：高考书面表达最常见的是应用文和记叙文，所写内容都与日常生活密切相关。编辑pptII.书面表达的五个步骤(Fivesteps)仔细审题，找出主题(Readthedirectionscarefully,lookthroughallthewordsorpicturesgiventoyouinordertofindthemainidea.)（以2001年高考题为例）假设你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友Dick听说中国的中小学正在减轻学生的学习负担，来信询问有关情况。请根据下表提供的信息，写一封回信，谈一谈减负给你的学习和生活带来的变化。编辑pptchangechange周末活动(减负前)周末活动（减负后）白天：上课、做作业白天：参观博物馆、学习电脑、绘画等注意：1、词数100左右；2、开头已为你写好。生词：减轻学习负担—reducelearningload******************************************DearDick,

Hownicetohearfromyouagain.Themainideachange晚上：做作业晚上：看新闻、读书、看报就寝时间：11:30就寝时间：10:30编辑ppt（再以2000年高考题为例）假设你是李华，在美国探亲。2000年2月8日清晨，你目击一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料，报告当时所见情况。请根据下列图画写出报告。注意：1、目击者应该准确报告事实； 2、词数100左右； 3、结尾已为你写好。Themainidea？Atrafficaccident编辑ppt2.认真阅读所给提示或图画，抓住所有细节，找出每幅图画或每个句子的中心词。

（以93年高考题为例）为了配合国际动物周活动，一家英文杂志邀请各国学生提供有关动物的故事。请根据下列六幅图画，用英语为该杂志写一篇故事。bark:vi.&n.吠叫注意：1、故事必须包括所有图画的内容，可以适当增加细节，使故事连贯。2、词数100左右。编辑pptPicture1:Picture2：Picture3:Picture4：Picture5:Picture6：gotowork;takemysisterandAhFuFindoutthekeyswordsineachpicture：beworking;playbytheriverpickaflower;fallintotheriverbark;jumpintotheriverruntotheriver;swim;takemysisterpraise3.把中心词或词组扩展成句子。(Extendthewordsandphrasestosentences.)①OnedaymyparentswenttoworkinthefieldstakingmylittlesisterandAhFualong.②Whiletheywereworking,mysisterwalkedtoarivernearby.编辑ppt③Shewastryingtopickupaflowerwhenshefellintotheriver.④AhFubarkedandjumpedintotheriverimmediately.⑤WhenmyparentsheardAhFubarkingtheyrantotheriver.TheysawAhFuswimmingtowardsthebankcarryingmylittlesister.⑥MyparentspraisedAhFuwarmly.4.把以上句子编排成一个段落，在必要的地方加入一些连接词或句子。(Arrangethesesentencesinorder,gettinginsomelinkingwordswherenecessary.)编辑pptMyparentsliveinthecountry.TheykeepadogcalledAhFu.OnedaymyparentswenttoworkinthefieldstakingmylittlesisterandAhFualong.Whiletheywereworking,mysisterwalkedtoarivernearby.AhFufollowedthere.Shewastryingtopickaflowerwhenshefellintotheriver.AhFubarkedandjumpedintothewaterimmediately.WhenmyparentsheardAhFubarking,theyrantotheriver.TheysawAhFuswimmingtowardsthebankcarryingmylittlesister.MyparentspraisedAhFuwarmly.ItwasourbraveAhFuwhosavedmylittlesister.编辑ppt5.通读全文，仔细检查。(Readthroughthewholepassagetomakesurethatnomistakesaremade.)III.书面表达注意事项适当运用结构词、从句和关联词:and,but,so,however,therefore,them,thus,afterawhile,suddenly,atlast,asaresult,infact等,使句子更为流畅。1)Youmaystayatschool.Youmaycometospendtheholidaywithus.Youmay______stayatschool______cometospendtheholidaywithus.eitheror编辑ppt2)Itisnottoocoldinspring.Itisnottoohot,either.3)Theteacherpointedoutthemistakes.Thestudentshadnotcorrectedthem.Itis_______toocold_____toohotinspring.Theteacherpointedoutthemistakes_______thestudentshadnotcorrected.neithernorwhich(that)4)YoumustspeakEnglishinclass.YoumustspeakEnglishoutofclass.5)Shefinishedherlessons.Thenshewenttobed.YoumustspeakEnglishbothinclassandoutofclass.Havingfinishedherlessons,shewenttobed.编辑ppt避免使用对其拼法、意义和用法没有把握、不熟悉

的词汇和句型，避免可以避免的错误.喜欢like,befondof,carefor,enjoy,...1）两天后他就要过生日了。①Hisbirthdayistwodaysaway.②Hisbirthdayisintwodays.③Hisbirthdayisintwodays’time.④Itwillbetwodaysbeforehecelebrateshisbirthday.2）我碰巧遇见他的叔叔。①Ihappenedtomeethisuncle.②Ichancedtoseehisuncle.

编辑ppt③Imetwithhisuncle.④Icameacrosshisuncle.⑤Iranacrosshisuncle.⑥It(so)happenedthatIsawhisuncle.⑦ItchancedthatImethisuncle.（再以93年高考书面表达为例）编辑pptMyparentsliveinthecountry.TheykeepadogcalledAhFu.OnedaymyparentswenttoworkinthefieldstakingmylittlesisterandAhFualong.Whiletheywereworking,mysisterwalkedtoarivernearby.AhFufollowedthere.Shewastryingtopickaflowerwhenshefellintotheriver.AhFubarkedandjumpedintothewaterimmediately.WhenmyparentsheardAhFubarking,theyrantotheriver.TheysawAhFuswimmingtowardsthebankcarryingmylittlesister.MyparentspraisedAhFuwarmly.ItwasourbraveAhFuwhosavedmylittlesister.①②③④⑤编辑ppt①TheykeepadogcalledAhFu.TheyhaveadogwiththenameAhFu.Theyraiseadogthat/whichiscalled/namedAhFu.c.TheykeepadogwhosenameisAhFu.d.TheyhaveadogwhoisnamedAhFu.②OnedaymyparentswenttoworkinthefieldstakingmylittlesisterandAhFualong.OnedaymyparentswenttoworkinthefieldswithmylittlesisterandAhFu.b.OnedaymyparentswenttoworkinthefieldsandAhFufollowedthem.编辑ppt③WhenmyparentsheardAhFubarking,theyrantotheriver.④TheysawAhFuswimmingtowardsthebankcarryingmylittlesister.HearingAhFubarking,myparentswenttotheriverinahurry.b.HavingheardAhFubarking,myparentsrushedtotheriver.c.HavingheardAhFubarking,myparentswereworriedandhurriedtotheriver.TheysawAhFucarryingmylittleintherivertowardsthebank.b.TheysawmylittlesistercarriedbyAhFutothebank.编辑ppt⑤MyparentspraisedAhFuwarmly.MyparentspattedAhFuontheheadandpraisedhimforhisbravery.b.MyparentsweresogladthattheypattedAhFuontheheadandpraisedhim.3.留心汉英表达差异,避免中式英语(AvoidingChinlish)1)父母对我们期望很高。Thehopeofourparentsisveryhigh.×××Ourparentsexpecttoomuchfromus.2)高考highexam?collegeentranceexamination编辑ppt3)他的右眼瞎了。

a.Herrighteyeisblind.4)他健壮如牛。

a.Heisstronglikeacow.5)汤姆的父亲打了他一个耳光。

a.Tom’sfatherbeathiminhisface.

b.Sheisblindintherighteye.b.Heisstronglikeahorse(asstrongasahorse).b.Tom’sfatherbeathimintheface.4.书写必须工整,确保不犯拼写错误(Avoidingmistakes)。parents&peasant&presentsun&sonattack&attractblood&floodflood&floor......编辑pptIV.Homework5月3日,你参观了一个农场，请根据下列图画用英语写一篇日记。注意：1、日记必须包括所有图画的内容，可以适当增减细节，使日记连贯；2、词数100左右。编辑pptOnepossibleversion:May3SundayFineTodaywevisitedafarm.Earlyinthemorningwemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogether.Thefarmworkersgaveusawarmwelcome.Thentheheadofthefarmshowedusaround.Howgladweweretoseethecropsandvegetablesgrowingwell.Atnoonwehadapicniclunchinthesunshine.Afterashortrest,wehadgreatfunsinginganddancing,tellingjokesorstories.Twoofusevenplayedagameofchess.Thetimepassedquickly.Beforeweknewit,wehadtosaygoodbyetotheworkers.编辑ppt编辑ppt编辑ppt9、静夜四无邻，荒居旧业贫。。2023/1/72023/1/7Saturday,January7,202310、雨中黄叶树，灯下白头人。。2023/1/72023/1/72023/1/71/7/20236:40:02PM11、以我独沈久，愧君相见频。。2023/1/72023/1/72023/1/7Jan-2307-Jan-2312、故人江海别，几度隔山川。。2023/1/72023/1/72023/1/7Saturday,January7,202313、乍见翻疑梦，相悲各问年。。2023/1/72023/1/72023/1/72023/1/71/7/202314、他乡生白发，旧国见青山。。07一月20232023/1/72023/1/72023/1/715、比不了得就不比，得不到的就不要。。。一月232023/1/72023/1/72023/1/71/7/202316、行动出成果，工作出财富。。2023/1/72023/1/707January202317、做前，能够环视四周；做时，你只能或者最好沿着以脚为起点的射线向前。。2023/1/72023/1/72023/1/72023/1/79、没有失败，只有暂时停止成功！。2023/1/72023/1/7Saturday,January7,202310、很多事情努力了未必有结果，但是不努力却什么改变也没有。。2023/1/72023/1/72023/1/71/7/20236:40:02PM11、成功就是日复一日那一点点小小努力的积累。。2023/1/72023/1/72023/1/7Jan-2307-Jan-2312、世间成事，不求其绝对圆满，留一份不足，可得无限完美。。2023/1/72023/1/72023/1/7Saturday,January7,202313、不知香积寺，数里入云峰。。2023/1/72023/1/72023/1/72023/1/71/7/202314、意志坚强的人能把世界放在手中像泥块一样任意揉捏。07一月