如何提高高考英语书面表达能力

英语书面表达评分标准概要

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内容要点②

语法结构及词汇运用③

语言表达④

文章的总体评价4）全文字数不足80或多于120者，从总得分中扣除2分。5）如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次（5分）。6）内容要点可用不同方式表达。7）对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。8）开头、结尾的内容须合乎逻辑，语言得体。

（二）需注意的问题1．书写规范，字迹清楚，书写不勾不划,卷面美观。2．表达要准确。（保证第一句话正确无误）3.文中不要出现汉语表达。

4．格式要正确。不同的书面表达形式有不同的格式，如书信、日记、便条、通知等各有其特殊的格式。5.

注意答题时间。

逻辑角度合适的过渡性词汇条件顺序aslongas,solongas,onconditionthat,if,unless让步顺序though,as,evenif/though,whether,who(what,when,where)ever递进顺序what’smore,besides,tomakemattersworse,what’sworse过渡性插入语Ithink,I’mafraid,youknow,Asweallknow如何使用恰当的连接词逻辑角度合适的过渡性词汇时间顺序

first,second,then,finally/atlast,soonimmediately,suddenly空间顺序here,there,ononeside…ontheotherside,

infrontof,atthebackof,nextto

对称顺序foronething,fortheotherthing,ononehand,ontheotherhand转折顺序but,however,while,though,otherwise因果顺序because,since,as,thanksto,asaresult(of)如何使用恰当的连接词二）

熟练变化句式1）尝试使用不同的句式结构造句

（在基本句型的基础上，用不同形式的句子构成主、谓、宾成分）2）加强句子组合练习e.g.Heisaboy.Heistwelveyearsold.改为：Heisatwelve-year-oldboy.Helefthome.Hedidn’ttakeanymoneywithhim.改为：Helefthomewithouttakinganymoneywithhim.Iboughtadictionarylastweek.ItwasrecommendedbymyEnglishteacher.改为：IboughtadictionarythatwasrecommendedbymyEnglishteacher.1.Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.2.Weallthinkheisagreatman.3.SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.4.Thestudentsthereneedn’tpayfortheirbooks.

5.Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.Theplanturnedouttobeafailure.Thankstothegoodweather,

ourjourneywascomfortable.一、怎样使用较高级的词汇Weallthinkhighlyofhim.Agoodideaoccurredtome./Agoodideasuddenlystruckme.Booksarefreeforthestudentsthere.6.Whensheheardhehaddied,shewentpalewithsorrow.7.ShewenttoAustriainordertostudymusic.8.Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.9.Inourschool,therearetwenty-sixclassrooms.10.Youcanfindmyhouseeasily.ShewenttoAustria

forthepurposeofstudyingmusic.Atthenewsofhisdeath,

shewentpalewithsorrow.Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhefelt.Ourschoolismadeupoftwenty–sixclassrooms.You’llhavenotroublefindingmyhouse.

1Whenhearrives,pleasegivemeane-mail.（使用V-ing形式）.2.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.（使用名词性从句）3.ThoughI’mweak,I’llmaketheeffort.(使用倒装句)4.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用强调句型)Onhisarriving,pleasegivemeane-mail.Whatsurpriseshimisthat

thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.二、怎样使用较丰富的句式WeakasIam,I’llmaketheeffort.

Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.

⑴书信格式示例：25TianshuiRoadLanzhou,ChinaJanuary3rd,2003208HopeRoadSydney,AustraliaDear_Laura,_____How_are_you_getting_on_now?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,ZhouLan掌握下面几种常用的英文文体的格式

Iwassopleasedtohearfromyouandamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyschool.Ihopeyoucomeandseeforyourselfsomeday,Hownicetohearfromyouagain.YouwanttoknowwhatisgoingoninschoolsinChina?I’msogladtolearnthatyou’recominginSeptember.Doyouthinkyou’dlikeit?Ifnot,Icantryandfindanotherplaceforyou.Justletmeknow.I’mgladtolearnthatyouarecomingtoChinaandwillstayatmyhome.I’mlookingforwardverymuchtomeetingyousoon.IamsosorrythatIwon’tbeabletoattendthelectureonAmericanhistorytomorrowafternoon.

I’mLiHuafromBeijingHongxingMiddleSchool.I’mveryhappytolearnthatyou’regoingtostaywithmyfamilywhileyou’reinBeijing.Ifyouhaveanyquestionsorrequests,pleaseletmeknow.We’lltryourbesttomakeyourstayinBeijingapleasantexperience.I’dliketotellyouthatourschoolhasworkedoutanewprogram.Welcometoourschoolifyouhaveanychance.

I’mverygladtohavereceivedyourletteryousentmetwoweeksago.I’vebeenthinkingaboutthequestionyouaskedme.Therefore,Ithinkit’sagoodideaforyoutoreturn.Sowhatareyouwaitingfor?I’mwritingformoreinformationaboutthedaytourtoLondon.经典语句汇编(常用的结束语)Bestwishes/regards!Goodlucktoyou!Wishingyousuccess/goodluck!Givemybestwishes/regardstoyouparents!Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply!Pleasegivemybestregardsto….⑵通知格式示例：①书面通知格式示例NOTICEInordertoarousethestudents’interestinlearningEnglish,theStudentUnionhasdecidedtosetupanEnglishClubwiththehelpoftheteachersofEnglish.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________StudentUnionNovember9,2004掌握下面几种常用的英文文体的格式

经典语句汇编(致辞)I’mverygladtowelcomeyoutoourschoollonbehalfofusstudents.Nowletmegiveyouabriefintroductionofourclass.It’sanhonorformetospeakformyclassmates.Firstofall….Ihopethatthefriendshipbetweenyouanduswillexistforever.WeallhopeyouwillkeepintouchwithusandwehopeyouwillcometoChinaagain.Nowlet’sexpressourheartfeltthankstohimandwishhimapleasantjourneyhomeandgoodhealth.以2009年高考英语试卷书面表达题为例：假设你是李华，正在英国牛津参加短期语言培训，计划星期天去伦敦旅游。互联网上的一则广告引起了你的注意，但是一些具体信息不明确（箭头所指内容）。请给该旅行社发一封电子邮件，询问有关情况。注意：1．词数100左右，信的格式已为你写好。2．可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3．参考词汇：牛津-Oxford费用-fee

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要求写一封电子邮件。l

写作的背景是：①你是李华，正在英国牛津参加短期语言培训；②计划星期天去伦敦旅；③你对互联网上的一则关于旅游广告引起你的注意，但是一些具体信息不明确，你想询问这些信息。写作的目的是询问关于一则广告的具体信息。文章的读者是旅行社工作人员，非熟人或朋友，因此写作的文体应该略显正式，语气应该礼貌，用词应较为正式。l

写作的内容是：（仔细阅读箭头所指问题，确定内容要点：5个）l

字数100字左右

2．写作阶段1）根据内容要点列出简要提纲，即内容要点。①

开头语（开头）②

询问是否有购物时间，学生票价③

费用是否含景点门票、午餐④

返回牛津的时间⑤

结尾（收尾）2）构思文章内容的布局，完成初稿。第一段：开头，开门见山，说明写信的目的：

IreadyouradvertisementabouttheDayTourinLondonandI’mwritingformoreinformationaboutit.第二、三段：正文，包括内容要点

AsastudentatOxfordUniversity,I’dliketoknowifyouhaveanyspecialpriceforstudents.Asforthemoneyyoucharge,doesitcovertheentrancefeesforvisitingtheplaceslisted?Whataboutlunch?Isitincluded?OrdoIneedtobringalongmyownfood?Howlongwillthetourlast?SinceIneedtopreparemylessonsforthenextday,I’dliketoknowthetimetoreturn,Besides,isthereanytimeforshopping?Ireallywantt