高考英语写作训练 2021年广州二模续写 讲义

高考英语写作训练2021年广州二模续写AramandRossi’sBakeryWalkingalongthenarrowbricksidewalk,Aramtookadeepbreath.Theairsmelledoflemonsandbakedbreadandcoffee,comingfromRossi’sItalianBakery.Hewasalmostthere.Aramstillcouldn’tbelievehisluck.Allhisfriendswereworkingboringsummerjobs—waitingtablesandbabysitting.Andherehewas,abouttostartasanactualbaker’sassistant,doingwhatheloved.ItwasallthankstohisAuntRita.SheknewMrs.Rossiandhadarrangedeverything.Itwastheperfectexperienceforhisfuturecareer.Rossi’sBakery,hewassure,wouldonedaybeknownastheplacewherehegothisstart.Ah,herehewas—thebakery.Afadedwoodensignoverthedoorread“Rossi’sBakery.”Aramstraightenedhisshouldersandentered.Mrs.Rossiwassittingatthecounter,lookingoldandwise.Aramgreetedherandstuckouthishand.Mrs.Rossilookedatitforasecondbeforeturningaroundandwavinghiminside.“I’mreadytolearneverything,”Aramsaid.“Great.Let’sstartwiththecashregister,”Mrs.Rossisaid,“becausethat’swhatyou’llbedoing.”Sheshowedhimhowtousethecashregister.Itwasn’thard.Thepastrytrayswereallmarkedbyprice,andthereweren’tthatmanychoicesanyway.“That’sit?”Aramsaid,hisheartsinking.“Butwhendowebake?”“Bake?Iorderwholesalenow.Nomorebaking.I’mtooold.”ThenMrs.Rossisilentlyheldupherhands.Aramtookinherknotted,swollenfingers,andheunderstood.Awaveofdisappointmentstruckhim.Sadnessoverwhelmedhimsosuddenlythathecouldn’tthinkofawordtosay.Hesighed,andMrs.Rossisighed,too.“Iusedtobakeitall.Breadandcakes.Andnoonediditbetterthanme.Butthatwaswhenthesethingsworked,”saidMrs.Rossiholdingupherhandsoncemoreandglancingacrosstheshelvesfilledwithemptybottleslabelledwithnamesofthevariousingredients(配料)sheonceused.Suddenlyshecamealive,wavingherarthritic(关节炎的)hands.“Peopleusedtolineuparoundthecorner.Everyonewantedmybakedbread.”Aram来实习的年轻人未来职业憧憬失望Mrs.Rossi店主老女人高超烘焙技巧被迫放弃ThenathoughtoccurredtoAramthathecouldaskMrs.Rossitoteachhim.Aram请求教“DearMrs.Rossi,”hiseyesshonelikethestarsinthenightsky,“Ilovebakeryfrommychildhoodandit’smydreamtoprovidedeliciousbreadandcakesforothers.Whenpeopleareinabadmood,Ibelievetastyfoodcanbringthemhappiness,andIwanttobecomethatpersonwhospreadjoythroughmyownefforts!Pleaseteachme!”过去梦想—现在观点—未来期许：提出要求Mrs.Rossiraisedhereyebrowsandcarefullymeasuredtheyoungman,whostoodnervouslywaitingforheranswer.过程——说服提出教 — 同意？（不合理）不同意？—反复请求—心理变化 （对话、原因、复杂） 沉默Mrs.Rossifinallysaid,“Let’sbuytheingredientsfirst.”Rossi同意教配料买齐开始烘焙学习提升焕发生机顾客归来ForAram,itwasaweightoffhismind.心理回应Inthefollowingdays,Aramorderedallthenecessaryingredientsonlineandtheemptybottlesontheshelveswererefilled.具体动作+结果WithMrs.Rossi’sguidance,Aram’sbakingskillsimproveddaybyday.情节发展动作Oldcustomersstartedtocomeback,andthefadedbakeryseemedtoregainitslife.结果SometimesMrs.Rossiwouldsitinanarmchairoutsideandgreetedpeopleunderthenewwoodensign,whichnowread“AramandRossi’sBakery”.平凡结尾—日常—扣题全文呈现ThenathoughtoccurredtoAramthathecouldaskMrs.Rossitoteachhim.“DearMrs.Rossi,”hiseyesshonelikethestarsinthenightsky,“Ilovebakeryfrommychildhoodandit’smydreamtoprovidedeliciousbreadandcakesforothers.Whenpeopleareinabadmood,Ibelievetastyfoodcanbringthemhappiness,andIwanttobecomethatpersonwhospreadjoythroughmyownefforts!Pleaseteachme!”Mrs.Rossiraisedhereyebrowsandcarefullymeasuredtheyoungman,whostoodnervouslywaitingforheranswer.Mrs.Rossifinallysaid,“Let’sbuytheingredientsfirst.”ForAram,itwasaweightoffhismind.Inthefollowingdays,Aramorderedallthenecessaryingredientsonlineandtheemptybottlesontheshelveswererefilled.WithMrs.Rossi’sguidance,Aram’sbakingskillsimproveddaybyday.Oldcusto