初三英语作文教学

初三英语作文教学建议2/1/20231WhatIhavelearntfrommakingmistakesSuccessplaysanimportantroleinourdailylife.Butfailureisthemotherofsuccess.Asanordinarystudent,Ialwaysmakesomemistakesinmydailylife.Forexample,throwingthelitterhereandthere,makingmathsmistakes,brokingother’sglassandsoon.AfterIremindmymistakes,Iwillgetridofmistakesquickly.Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthatnevertoooldtoturn,nevertoolatetoturn.IfIknowI’mwrong,Iwillnevermakethesemistakesagain.Thereisnodenyingthatfailureandsuccessisallimportant.(104intotal)

WhatIhavelearntfrommakingmistakesSuccessplaysanimportantroleinourdailylife.Butfailureisthemotherofsuccess.Asanordinarystudent,Ialwaysmakesomemistakesinmydailylife.Forexample,throwingthelitterhereandthere,makingmathsmistakes,brokingother’sglassandsoon.AfterIremindmymistakes,Iwillgetridofmistakesquickly.Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthatnevertoooldtoturn,nevertoolatetoturn.IfIknowI’mwrong,Iwillnevermakethesemistakesagain.Thereisnodenyingthatfailureandsuccessisallimportant.

(104intotal)2016长宁一模Modelfromyou(I)Modelfromyou(II)MyLifestyleAsweallknow,everyonehashisownlifestyleandme,

too.Ioftenhavetwopiecesofbreadwhichcoveredwithblueberryjamandaglassofmilkforbreakfast.Forlunch,Ihavevegetables,meatandapples.“Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.”Andforsupper,Iusuallyhavefish,eggsandrice.Sweetsandcakesaremyfavouritesnakes.Inordertoprotectmyteeth,Ibrushthemtwiceaday.Isleepaboutsevenhoursonaverageaday.Generallyspeaking,Iusuallyrunninginthemorningandsometimesplaybasketballafterschool.WhenIhavesomesparetimeIwilllistentomusicandreadbooks.HowfantasticmyLifestyleis!

（2016黄浦一模120wordsintotal）Modelfromyou(III)ASpecialDayThoughitwasalongtime,itgavemeanunforgettablememory.ThedayisMother’sDay.IlovemymothersomuchthatI’vedonemanythingsforher.Aftersupper,Igavemymotherthecardwhatmadebymyselfandsaid,“HappyMother’sDay”toher.ThenItoldhertopayattentiontoherhealthandnottooverwork.Ialsopromisedtohelpdosomehomeworkfromtodayon.Motherwassosurprisedthatshecouldn’tbelieveit.Todayisameaningfulday.(模拟卷四98wordsintotal)Thereweren’tanygrammaticalmistakesinmycomposition.Whydidyougivemycompositionsuchalowmark?Howtoevaluateacompositionfromcontent?HowtograspthecontentofacompositionByShenYaqin(沈亚琴）Dongmen

JuniorHighSchoolLet'sFocuson指标采分点采分点满分情况描述满分值给分情况内容8分（content）

1）切题无偏离句，无废话4

2)完整、充实有开头、结尾；段落完整；内容充实

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语言8分（language）

1)语言正确，无中文式表达语法、句式、用词正确无错误不超过2处；无中文式表达4

2)语法现象丰富，使用恰当4

结构4分（structure）表达通畅、流畅；句际逻辑关系清晰思维连贯；无逻辑错误、连接词使用恰当、正确，4初中英语“五维度写作评分标准”（中考）动词形态正确、多样；句式富有变化

1.Accuracy(内容的准确性)4.Coherence(内容的连贯性)3.Integrity(内容的完整性)2.Richness（内容的丰富性）Fouraspectsofthecontent:Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“HowtoOvercomethePressureofExams”.提示：根据调查，每次考试时总有些同学出现头昏、乏力、睡眠不足和食欲不振等等紧张情绪。请你以“如何克服考试压力”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，介绍一下你是如何看待考试及如何克服考试压力的。Phrasesforreference(以下短语供参考):feelnervous;worryabout;haveacorrectattitude（态度）towards…;workhard;calmdown;doproperoutdoorexercise材料作文(in2012)EnlargethesentencesReadcarefullyFindkeywords1.Accuracy准确性What’syourattitudetowardsexams?

Why

doyouwanttoovercomeit

?

1.如何看待考试2.如何克服考试压力3.克服压力后的好处How

doyouovercomethepressureofexams?1.Accuracy内容的准确性

overcomethepressurelistentomusictakeawalkoutsidedosomesportstakeadeepbreathdrinkhotmilktakeahotshowertalkwith…readbooksgetfullypreparationfor……Enlargethesentences

BodypartWecan

listentosomelightmusicortakeawalkoutsidetorelaxourselves.It’shelpfulto

talkwithourteachersbecausetheywillgiveusgoodsuggestions.Thebestwayistogetfullypreparationbeforeexams.

ProcessWriting:2.Richness丰富性wecanlistentosomelightmusictorelaxourselves.It’shelpfultotakeawalkoutsideafterawholeday’shardwork.Doingsportsisalsoagoodwaytoreleasepressure.Enlargethesentences

BodypartBeginningpart(what)Endingpart(why)First,wecanlistentosomelightmusictorelaxourselves.Second,it’shelpfultotakeawalkoutsideafterawholeday’shardwork.Inaddition,doingsportsisalsoagoodwaytoreleasepressure.Bodypart(how)ProcessWriting:2.内容的丰富性3.内容的完整性Step1:(Beginning):writeatopicsentenceWeshouldgiveouropinionsclearlyandconcisely(简洁).Step2:(Body):writesupportingsentencesWeshouldwriteenoughsupportingsentencestosupportouropinions.Donotwriteunnecessarysentences.Step3:(Ending):makeaconclusionWeshouldwriteashortconclusiontoemphasize(强调)ouropinions.Trytousedifferentsentencestructures.3.内容的完整性Booksareourbestfriends,andtheycanofferusalotofknowledge.2.Readingbookscanmakeusfeelrelaxed.3.Agoodbookisagoodfriendtocomfortyouwhenyouareunhappy.4.Readingisagoodwaytohelpuskeepintouchwiththeoutsideworld.5.Everybookcanopenanewworldbeforeus.6.Readingisveryusefulforustowritearticles.×√√××√Readingisagoodwaytolearnabouttheworld.Task1:1.WecandoalotofthingseasilywiththehelpoftheInternet.2.TheInternethelpsuslearnaboutwhatishappeningaroundtheworld.3.TheInternetcanhelpussolvemanydifficultproblems.4.OntheInternet,wecancommunicatewithforeignersandlearnabouttheircultures.5.WecangetmuchinformationaboutothercountriesontheInternetwithinafewseconds.√√√××TheInternetisagoodwaytolearnabouttheworld.Task2:WhatIhavelearntfrommakingmistakesSuccessplaysanimportantroleinourdailylife.Butfailureisthemotherofsuccess.Asanordinarystudent,Ialwaysmakesomemistakesinmydailylife.Forexample,throwingthelitterhereandthere,makingmathsmistakes,brokingother’sglassandsoon.AfterIremindmymistakes,Iwillgetridofmistakesquickly.Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthatnevertoooldtoturn,nevertoolatetoturn.IfIknowI’mwrong,Iwillnevermakethesemistakesagain.Thereisnodenyingthatfailureandsuccessisallimportant.(104intotal)Modelfromyou(III)修改稿

I’veheardthatyouareupsetbecauseofacomingexam.Inmyview,havingapositiveattitudetowardstheexamisimportant.

Therefore,Iwanttogiveyousomeadvice.First,don’toftenthinkabouttheresultoftheexamforit’sexactlyuseless.Secondly,whenyoufeelnervous,listeningtosomelightmusicisagoodchoiceforyoutorelax.Lastbutnotleast,yououghttohaveagoodsleep.Asthesayinggoes,”Healthiswealth.”

Inbrief,themoreconfidentyouare,thebetterresultyou’llget.2012年中考满分作文(8+8+4)满分作文的特点内容充实结构完整词汇丰富句式多变衔接流畅Jimismygoodfriend.Hedoeswellinstudy.Healwayscarriesabigbag.Itisfullofbooks.Heoftenhelpsothers.Heisverybusy,butheoftendoesexercisetokeephealthy.Hesays,“Schoolworkisimportant.Andhealthisimportant,too.”Everyday,hedoeshishomeworkafterhegetshome.修改作文MyGoodFriend4.Coherence内容的连贯性1.Ihaveaclosefriend,Jim,who________________________.2.Nomatter_____hegoes,hecarriesabigbag_________________.

3.Hedoeshishomeworkas_________hegetshome.4.__________heisverybusy,hedoesexerciseas__________possibleto____________.5.Hesays,“Schoolworkisimportant.Andhealthisimportant,too.”Jimismygoodfriend.Hedoeswellinstudy.Healwayscarries

abigbag.Itisfullofbooks.Heoftenhelpsothers.Heisverybusy,

butheoftendoesexercisetokeephealthy.Hesays,“Schoolworkis

important.Andhealthisimportant,too.”Everyday,hedoeshis

homeworkafterhegetshome.Readthepassage,thencompletethesentences.Exercise1doeswellinstudywherethatisfullofbookssoonasThoughoftenaskeephealthyHesaysthathealthis________________schoolwork.asimportantas

Ihaveaclosefriend,Jim,whodoeswellinstudy.Nomatterwherehegoes,hecarriesabigbagthatisfullofbooks.Hedoeshishomeworkassoonashegetshome.Thoughheisverybusy,hedoesexerciseasoftenaspossibletokeephealthy.Hesaysthathealthisasimportantasschoolwork.Inconclusion,

Ilearnalotfrommygoodfriend.4.Coherence内容的连贯性writingsteps:一、认真审题，结构合理1、题目（写什么，参考问题）2、重点写什么（问题提示）3、时态（参考问题）二、理清思路，列出提纲主题句：支持句：结论句：三、连词成句，初步成形writingsteps:四、检查修改，内容无误。五、遣词造句，争取文采

加：短语，上下连贯。减：重复，可有可无的。合：逻辑关系上的上下简单句，状语从句替：考纲中常用词组、谚语Writingsteps:Assignment1.Finishrevisingyourcomposition"Howtoovercomethepressureoftheexams"2.

Modify

oneofthethreecompositions

3.ReleasethepressureinyourreallifejustasyouwriteThankYouforYourAttention

常用开头：Itisknowntoallthat...人人皆知Asweallknow...众所周知Thereisnodoubtthat...毋庸置疑...Itiscommonknowledgethat......是基本常识Totellthetruth说实话A