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高考读后续写遇险类写作积累高考真题遇险类Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.

Withgreatrage,

thebearroaredandtriedtoteardownthe

fence

withallhismight（力量）.Igatheredupmycourageandtriedtosprayhimagain.Unfortunately,hemanagedtoescapeand

myheartfrozeinmychest.

Atthismoment,

Elli

cameupwithacrazyideaandthrewourgarlic

bread

atthebear.Tomygreatsurprise,thebear

stoppedandboweddowntoeatthebread.

Seeingthis,allofusletout

asighofrelief.Beforelong,however,thehungrybearfinishedeating

and

then

pushedthefenceagain.

Thefencewasabouttofalldown!Attheverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.

Shockedbythe

noises,thebearstoppedandturnedaround.

Seeingthepeopleequippedwithguns,heranawayanddisappearedinthewoodsasifheknewwhotheywere.

WefinallygotourbreathandElliandI

embracedtightlywithstillracingheart.Afterwecalmeddown,

thelocals

toldusthatthebearswerelosingtheirhomesandfoodbecauseofhumanactivitiesandclimatechanges.Onthewaybackhome,Icheckedthe

precious

picturesinthe

camera,

lostinthought.Thisexperiencewouldberemembered,

forever.

题目原文如下：重点是（词汇+套路讲解在下方）Onefall，mywife

Elli

andIhadasinglegoal:to

photograph

polarbears.Wewerestayingataresearchcampoutside“thepolarbearcapitaloftheworld”-thetownofChurchillinManitoba，Canada.Taking

pictures

ofpolarbearsisamazingbutalsodangerous.Polarbears-likeallwildanimals-shouldbephotographedfroma

safe

distance.WhenI'mfacetofacewithapolarbear，Ilikeittobethrougha

camera

withatelephotolens.Butsometimes，thatiseasiersaidthandone.Thiswasoneofthosetimes.AsElliandIcookeddinner，ayoungmalepolarbearwhowasplayinginanearbylakesniffed，andsmelledourgarlic

bread.Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp，whichwassurroundedbyahighwire

fence.Hepulledandbitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.Terrified，ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear，hitpotshard，andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair.Sometimesloud

noises

likethesewillscarebearsoff.Notthispolarbearthough-hejustkepttryingtoteardownthefencewithhismassivepaws(爪子).Iradioedthecampmanagerforhelp.Hetoldmeahelicopterwasonitsway，butitwouldbe30minutesbeforeitarrived.Makingthebestofthiscloseencounter(相遇)，Itooksomepicturesofthebear.ElliandIfearedthefencewouldn'tlastthrough30moreminutesofthebear'spunishment.ThecampmanagersuggestedIusepepper

spray.Thesprayburnsthebears'eyes，butdoesn'thurtthem.SoIapproachedouruninvitedguestslowlyand，throughthefence，sprayedhimintheface.Withanangryroar(吼叫)，thebear

ran

tothelaketowashhiseyes.优秀语块1.Withgreat

rage,

thebear

roared

andtriedto

teardown

the

fence

withallhismight：熊大发雷霆，咆哮着，试图用尽全力拆掉栅栏。2.myheartfrozeinmychest：我的心仿佛在胸腔里冻住了3.asighofrelief：松了一口气4.stopandbowdowntoeatthebread：停下脚步，弯下腰吃面包5.Seeingthepeople

equipped

withguns,heranawayanddisappearedinthewoodsasifhe6.knewwhotheywere.

看到那些装备有枪的人，他跑开了，消失在树林里，好像他知道他们是谁。7.embracetightly：紧紧的抱着8.lostinthought：陷入沉思9.aracingheart：不停跳动的心10.thelocals：当地人roar

v.吼叫，咆哮；（人群）用欢呼声激励，为......喝彩，为加油；哄笑，大笑；（尤指车辆）轰鸣着疾驶，呼啸而过；翻译：1.过往车辆的轰鸣声使我几乎什么也听不见。__________________________________Icouldbarelyhearabovethe

roar

oftraffic.2.他离开办公室后，大家哄堂大笑。__________________________________Afterhelefttheoffice,everyone

roared

withlaughter.3.突然传来一声咆哮，就像昨晚的暴风雨一样震耳欲聋。__________________________________Therewasasudden

roar,

a

roar

asterribleandloudaslastnight'sthunderstorm.4.水势迅猛异常。__________________________________Theflood

roared

on,swiftandviolent.teardown

v.扯下；诋毁；拆卸；逐条驳斥翻译：1.然后他撕掉墙上那张愤怒的小纸条。__________________________________He

tore

down

theangrynoticefromthewall.2.几年后，我们决定拆掉这个难看的房子，建一座带花园的漂亮房子。__________________________________Yearslater,wedecidedtoteardown

ouruglyhouseandbuildabeautifulonewithagarden.语填：Theyhavestruggledovertheyears

_____（

tear

）down

outdatedvaluesandprejudicialsystems.

totearequip

v.装备，配备；使有所准备，使能够胜任翻译：为了安全起见，高层建筑必须安装消防水龙头。__________________________________Forthesakeofsafety,alltallbuildingsmustbe

equipped

with

hoses.在这个科技时代，很少人没有电脑。__________________________________Inthisworldoftechnology,onlyaminorityofpeoplearenot

equippedwith

computers.历险类故事构造“三大套路”更详细内容，可点击预测：续写主题（生活类-亲情友情趣事类）+（脱险类-灾请迷路篇）

套路一：恶劣环境要烘托1.

So,

mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats，

gotonourhorses，

and

headedslowlytowardsthemountains（慢慢地向山走去）.

（17年11月浙江高考）2.

NeverhadIseensuchalovelycreatureinmylife,soI

followeditstrackwithoutthinkingtwice（不假思索地追随它的足迹）.（17年11月浙江高考）3.

Intheprocessofseekingforit,I

wastotallyimmersedinthecharmofnature（完全沉浸在大自然的魅力中）.

（17年11月浙江高考）4.What'sworse,hedidn'thaveanyfoodorwaterwithhim,

letalonehiscellphoneorothersupplies（更不要说他的手机和其他日用品）.

（江苏省如皋中学2021届高三第一学期教学质量调研试）5.

Wewereinthemiddleofnowhere,wearingonlyunderwear,

withoursuppliesburntintoashes（把我们的物品烧成灰烬）,includingourcellphones.

（湖北省宜昌市第二中学2021届高三起点考试英语试题）套路二：转折思维技巧好1.

Ultimately,wewereback,

safeandsound（安然无恙）.

（17年11月浙江高考）2.Wejumpedintothewarmvehicleandtheforester

droveustot