【课件】高中英语续写之情绪表达课件

AvividcontinuationWRITINGBrainstormheadfacecheekactionexpressionI'msurprised.I'mhappy.I'mangry.GUIDELINESforavividcontinuationwriting动作词汇核心力量心理描写增分添彩环境描写烘托气氛Read&Guess1.Laughterlingered

aroundtheroom.2.Asmileofpleasure

flashedacrosshisface.3.Hersmilelitupthewholeroom.4.She

wasoverflowingwithhappiness.5.Joywelledupinsideher.6.Hisreply

fueledtheofficer'sanger.7.Thewholeworldseemedtobeenvelopedinahugegreyquilt.露出萦绕照亮洋溢着涌出火上浇油笼罩Translate1.听到这个消息，Mary忍不住大笑起来。（burst,非谓语作状语）

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他们紧紧地拥抱彼此，幸福的眼泪顺着脸颊流下来。（streamdown,with）___________________________________________________________3.只要Thornton抚摸他，Buck都会欢喜得发狂。（gowild）__________________________________________________________4.

笑声在房间里萦绕，吹走了盘旋在她头上的阴云。(

gloomyclouds,hover,

非限制性定语从句)__________________________________________________________5.没有语言能够表达我的开心。（express+特殊疑问词引导宾语从句）___________________________________________________________Hearingthenews,Maryburstintolaughter.Theyhuggedeachothertightlywithtearsofjoystreamingdowntheircheeks.BuckwentwildwithhappinessaslongasThorntontouchedhim.

Laughterlingered

aroundtheroom,whichblewawaythegloomycloudshoveringoverherhead.

NowordscanexpresshowdelightedIam.Translate1.我抑制不住愤怒而发火了。（getthebestof）

____________________________________________________________2.她越想那个问题越生气。（the+比较级）___________________________________________________________3.

我拖着脚向前走，眼睛因愤怒而发红，拳头紧握。（shuffle,fists,clench,with结构

）__________________________________________________________4.我用冰冷的声音大喊，使得他们惊恐地盯着我。(非谓语作状语)__________________________________________________________5.Jim发现他妈妈正在拆开他的信件，他气得直跺脚。（非限制性定语从句）________________________________________________________________________Myangergotthebestofme.Themoreshethoughtaboutit,theangriershebecame.Ishuffledmyfeetforward,witheyesredandfistsclenched.

Ishoutedinacoldvoice,makingthemstareatmeinhorror.

Jimfoundhismotheropeninghisletter,whichdrovehimtostamphisfeet.Translate1.我感觉到他眼里的一丝惊讶。（aflashof）

____________________________________________________________2.Mary惊呆了，好像扎根在地上一样。（freeze,root,asif+虚拟语气）___________________________________________________________3.一看到她的新发型，Jim惊讶地张大了嘴巴。（atthesightof,wide）__________________________________________________________4.我惊讶地看到家乡发生了巨大的变化。(see+宾语+宾补)__________________________________________________________5.他惊讶到说不出话来。（so...that）_________________________________________________________________Isensedaflashofsurpriseinhiseyes.Maryfrozewithsurprise,asifshewererootedontheground.Jimwidenedhismouthatthesightofhernewhaircut.Iamsurprisedtoseegreatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometown.

Hewassoastonishedthathecouldn'tsayaword.氛围渲染(circumstances)自然环境具体身体感觉人文环境脸(expression)肢体(action)内心(mind)次要他人天气周围事物Amindmapforavividdescription

Oneday,hurryinghome,Jackpaidnoattentiontothebeggarlyingontheground.Heloweredhisheadasifheweresleeping.Suddenly,thebeggarstuckouthislegstrippingJackover,making

himveryannoyed.Realizingthebeggarwasadisabledperson,Jacksearchedforsomemoneyinhispockettogivehim.

Suddenly,the

$50billwasblownintotheairbythewind.AbeggarTrytowriteanendingofthejokewithin5vividsentences.Onepossibleversion

Suddenly,the$50billwasblownintotheairbythewind.

Thebeggarrosetohisfeetinstantly.

Hewasdeterminded

tocatch

the

shining

notewithhislegsandhandsdancingintheair.Seeingthis,

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